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Week 12 现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 Monday 如何写好现象评论 ◆对接答案P229 个人观点类文章属于议论文范畴，是就某一话题或热点问 首段：点明自己的观点 题闸述白己的观点和看法的文章。在写作过程中，要先明确自 己的观点，态度鲜明，不能模棱两可：还要围绕论点多角度论证， 局谋 中段：多角度论证自己的观点 论据要确切、充分，最后进行总结，重申自己的观，点和立场。 ·尾段：重申自己的观点和立场 为节为”力为”为”为十十十十于十十十十十卡十中中中中可可行””””行行节节”节”””节 典题示例 (2024·湖南省岳阳市实验中学高二期末)假定你是李华，本月是你校的读书月，作为校报的记者，你 做了一项调查，发现很多学生忙于作业，没有时间进行课外阅读。请你就此用英文写一篇文章，阐述自己的 看法。内容包括：1.阅读的好处：2.呼吁大家多读好书。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 思路点拨 OStep One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 般现在时 主题 个人观点 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题：第二段：论证自己的观点：第三段：重申观点 Step Two 词汇运用 1.调查，了解 6.视野 2.进行，实施 7.灵感 3.课外的，工作之外的 8.鼓励 4.起着重要作用 9.阶梯 5.开阔 10.总之 O Step Three 句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我想了解学生的阅读情况。 (2)上周，我对我们学校的课外阅读进行了调查。 127 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (3)我们都知道，阅读在我们的学习和生活中起者重要的作用。 (4)首先，阅读可以开阔我们的视野。 (5)你可以从你所读的书中获得知识。 (6)你也可以得到灵感和鼓励。 (7)如果你读更多的书，你会发现阅读更有吸引力。 (8)更重要的是，著名作家高尔基曾经说过。 (9)书籍是人类进步的阶梯。 (10)总之，阅读是非常有用的。 (11)你每天可以抽出时间读一些好书。 (12)你会发现阅读给你的生活带来了不同。 2.句式升级 (1)用in order to作目的状语合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 (2)用it构成的形式主语升级句子(3)。 (3)用not only...but also句式合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)，并注意用倒装句式。 (4)用the more..,the more句式升级句子(7)。 (5)用s引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(8)和句子(9)。 (6)用“祈使句+and+并列句”合并上题中的句子(11)和句子(12)。 Step Four连句成篇 ® Week12现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 Tuesday 现象评论满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 look into周查（问题） survey n.周查 carry out实施 convey.表达，传递 phenomenon n.现象 from my perspective在我看来 in conclusion,总之 drowning n.溺水 alone adj独自，单独 companion n.同伴 permission n.同意，许可 opinion m.意见，看法 make full use of充分利用 take into consideration考虑 benefit n.好处，益处 essential adj.必不可少的，非常重要的 attach more importance to更加重视 precious adj.宝贵的，珍贵的 nevertheless adv.然而，不过 不仅能减轻我们的父母下班后的疲倦，而且能加 话题句式 强相互之间的关系，也有助于培养劳动意识。 引出话题先声夺人 7.With fewer and fewer people using cash,non-cash 1.When it comes to how to succeed,many people may payments are becoming increasingly popular, think of the proverb"Where there is a will,there is especially in China.随着使用现金的人越来越少， away.”当谈及如何成功时，很多人或许会想起谚 非现金支付变得越来越受欢迎，尤其是在中国。 语“有志者，事竞成。” 8.It happened not only to children but also to adults, 2.Although everyone wants to succeed in what he which is really heartbreaking..这种事不仅发生在孩 tries,sometimes failure can't be avoided.虽然每个 子身上，也发生在成年人身上，真是令人心碎。 人都想在他所尝试的事情中成功，但有时失败是 不可避免的。 首尾结合余音回味 3.Nevertheless,different people hold different opinions. 9.Personally,doing the chores is absolutely a necessity. 然而，不同的人持有不同的观点。 就我个人而言，做家务是绝对必要的」 4.Recently,there are many reports about drowning. 10.So I feel we all should learn to protect ourselves 近，有很多关于溺水的报道。 when in or around water.所以我觉得我们都应该 主题部分娓娓道来 学会在水里或水周围保护自己。 5.Not surprisingly,most high school students seldom 11.We should focus on learning knowledge rather than do housework for lack of time.不足为奇的是，大多 WeChat study groups.我们应该专注于学习知识， 数高中生很少做家务，因为时间不够。 而不是微信学习小组。 6.Not only can it relieve our parents'tiredness after 12.Life is precious.We must value our lives and keep work and strengthen the mutual ties,but also it away from drowning.生命是宝贵的。我们必须 contributes to cultivating the awareness of labor. 珍惜生命，避免溺水。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 A recent survey shows that most students are barely involved in doing 模板中黑体字部分是 housework at home.Here,I'm writing to convey my opinions about this 描写现象评论时可以通用 phenomenon. From my perspective,being busy with study largely accounts for students' 的部分，其他部分可以根 absence from housework.However,while it's essential that we students should 据写作要求灵活处理。 第一段往住是一般现 be devoted to our academic progress,we should also undertake some chores. 在时，第二、三段可以多用 Doing housework can equip us with necessary living skills.Besides,some hard 一般将来时。 housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise,strengthening our physical qualities. 文章人称以第三人称 为主，有时也可以用第 In conclusion,doing housework should be attached more importance to. Let's embrace the joy of doing chores. 人称。 肩航英雷I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Wednesday 现象评论写作跟踪训练 ◆对接答案P229 跟踪训练1◆现象评论 (2024·广西壮族自治区桂林市第一中学高二期末)假定你是李津，你在某英文网上论坛看到大家在 讨论人们使用非现金支付越来越普遍的现象，你打算在论坛里跟帖讨论。内容包括：1，非现金支付的好处： 2.非现金支付的弊端：3.你的观点。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 跟踪训练2◆现象评论 (2024·浙江省平湖中学高二月考)最近你在某英文报纸上读到一篇文章，文中说道，虽然现在的生活 条件越来越好，青少年的快乐却少了。请你就此话题写一篇短文，表达你的想法。内容包括：1.导致该现象 的原因：2.提出相应的建议。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Recently.I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers.which said that Week12现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能12 ◆对接答案P230 如何提高续写中的心理活动描述 一、开心 2She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face 平庸版：He was happy. burning.她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。 升阶例句 解读：①句中burned with embarrassment/shame ①The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她 和②中feel her face burning中bum用得很是巧妙， 脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 形象地表达了人物当时那种羞愧难当、无地自容的 ②Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照 窘境。 亮了整个房间。 五、愤怒 解读：①句中shone like a diamond和②中lit up 平庸版：He was angry. the whole room形象地表现了高兴的程度，用这种比 升阶例句 喻取得了良好的表达效果。 ①His face clouded with anger,他气得脸色阴沉。 二、伤心 ②He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的 平庸版：He was sad.. 目光怒视着我。 升阶例句 解读：①句中face clouded和②中burning eyes DHe stood silently,tears rolling down his 真正刻画了人物的生气程度和即将带来的后果，为 cheeks..他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。 下面的续写埋下了伏笔。 2Hearing the news,so desperate was he that he 六、绝望 drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地借 平庸版：He felt hopeless/,desperate. 酒消愁。 升阶例句 解读：①句中tears rolling down his cheeks和② DUpon hearing the bad news,he was suddenly 中drowned sadness in wine更加突出了那种伤心无 语和悲痛欲绝的心情。 thrown into a world of darkness and sank into 三、紧张 hopelessness.听到这个坏消息，他突然被投入黑暗世 界，陷入绝望。 平庸版：He was nervous. 升阶例句 2He felt left out and was getting desperate with DStanding in the classroom,I became increasingly loneliness..他感觉被遗弃了，孤独使他感到绝望。 nervous and could feel my heart beating wildly. 解读：①句中thrown into a world of darkness和 教室里，我越来越紧张，我能听见自己心跳加速的 ②中felt left out让读者一下就体会到了那种真正的 声音。 绝望，欲哭无泪，生无可恋。 2Before the competition,his palms were sweaty 七、感谢 and knees were soft.比赛前，他手心出汗，膝盖发软。 平庸版：I thanked my father. 解读：①句中feel my heart beating wildly和②中 升阶例句 knees were soft深刻地刻画了当时的紧张表现，有力 DI ran over to my father,reached out my hands 地突出了人物内心那种窒息的紧张不安。 and embraced him tightly.我跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧 四、尴尬/羞愧 抱住他。 平庸版：He was embarrassed/ashamed. 2With grateful tears hanging in his eyes,he kept 升阶例句 extending(表达)his gratitude,“Thank you so ①His face burned with embarrassment/shame.他 much!”他眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说：“非常 因尴尬而满脸通红。/他窘得脸都红了。 感谢！” 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 解读：①句中embraced him tightly和②中tears4.当妈妈亲吻他时，小婴儿开心极了。 hanging in his eyes这两个动作，形象地抓住了那种 When his mother kissed him on the cheek,the baby 用语言无法表达，而只能用肢体动作来体现的那种 was very happy. 来自内心的感激。 →①When his mother kissed him on the cheek. 跟踪练习 (小婴儿好像在世界之巅，非常开心) 把下列句子进行表达升级： -2When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek. 1.当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕 At the sight of the fierce wolf,I felt very scared. (他眉开眼笑，笑容照亮房间) →①At the sight of the fierce wolf,I -3When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, (嗓子 发紧，膝盖发软) he →②At the sight of the fierce wolf,I (欢欣雀跃) (吓呆 5.她感到非常羞愧。 了，不敢动弹) She felt ashamed. →③At the sight of the fierce wolf,I +①She felt (被深 .(如此羞愧，脸上滚烫) 深的恐惧感所控制，手心出汗) 2)So ashamed was she that she could 2.当主持人宜布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。 (感 When the host announced that she won the prize, 到血液涌上脸颊) she was very excited. 3So ashamed did she feel that →①When the host announced that she won the prize, (她快哭了) ·(她激动得两眼放光) 6.Sheldon感到非常生气 →②When the host announced that she won the Sheldon felt very angry. prize, +①Sheldon felt (她激动得心怦怦跳〉 (如此生气以至于他冲出 →③When the host announced that she won the 房间，狠狠摔门) prize, +② .(她兴奋不能自已)】 Sheldon shook his fist at me.(怒火 3.一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。 Upon hearing the bad news,she felt very sad. 中烧) →①Upon hearing the bad news, 3Filled with anger/fury,Sheldon was unable to (她心 痛，眼泪直流) (说不出话) →②Upon hearing the bad news,she, 7.Tony感到很绝望。 Tony felt hopeless/desperate. had trouble speaking..(悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口 →①As the result of an accident,Tony 说话) (被 →③Upon hearing the bad news, 投入黑暗之中，陷入绝望) (她被 +2Tony 股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣) 感觉被遗忘，忽视)》 Week12现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 Friday 读后续写示例指导12 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·河北省沧州市第二中学高二期末)The football season was almost over..Sally had been playing football all summer.She really enjoyed running around with the other players in her bright orange uniform, chasing the black and white ball across the grassy field.As much as she tried,though,Sally still had not scored one single goal. Before each game,they had a practice session.The coach showed Sally and her team how to pass the ball to each other and take shots at the goal.Sally was pretty good at passing the ball,but even during practices,she couldn't kick the ball past the goalkeeper.She wondered if she should quit football and join a different club. "Don't give up,"said the coach.But it was half-time,and Sally was feeling frustrated ()She was trying!Every time she got a chance to kick the ball,it would go in the wrong direction or a player from the other team would take control of it.She sipped at her cola and pouted () The break was over and the referee blew his whistle to start the game again.The two teams walked back onto the field,both determined to win.Sally bent,tied up her shoelace and heard her mother whisper in her ear. "Stay focused.Keep your eyes on the ball.Look for an opportunity to get the ball.You can do it." Sally stood up and took a deep breath.Even if she didn't get one goal all summer,she knew that she had tried her best.That was something to be proud of.So she smiled at her mother and headed to her position.The whistle blew,and the game continued. The score was tied with one goal each.The green team was pretty good,but Sally's orange team was fast. The girls'ponytails bounced as they ran,with many feet kicking frantically (at the ball when it came near them.It was a rather boring game and Sally's heart was no longer in it. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Sally started daydreaming about joining other school clubs. Recalling her mother's words,Sally was woken from her daydream. 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Sly是一名足球队队员，非常热爱足球，但是她一个球也没有进过。 教练鼓励她，母亲告诉她“保持专注。眼晴町着球。寻找机会得到球。你可以的。”但是在比赛的时候， Sally走神了。 「写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Sally,the coach and her mother. When:The football season was almost over. Where:On the football field. What:Sally had been playing football all summer.Much as she tried,though,Sally still had not scored one single goal. Why:It was a rather boring game and Sally's heart was no longer in it. (2)Details: DShe really enjoyed running around with the other players in her bright orange uniform,chasing the black and white ball across the grassy field. 她真的很喜欢穿着鲜艳的橙色制服和其他球员一起跑来跑去，在草地上追逐黑白相间的球。 本句为人物描写，运用了enjoy doing、现在分词作伴随状语来表达Sally真的很喜欢足球，也很敬业。 33 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 2Every time she got a chance to kick the ball,it would go in the wrong direction or a player from the other team would take control of it.She sipped at her cola and pouted () 每当她有机会踢球时，球就会飞向错误的方向，或者被对方队员控制住。她抿了一口可乐，撅着嘴 这两句为心理和动作描写，第一句中运用了Every time引导的时间状语从句，第二句通过动作呈现了 Sally的沮丧心情。 3Sally stood up and took a deep breath. Saly站起来，深吸了一口气。 本句为动作描写，运用了stood up和took a deep breath这两个动词表现Sally当时的无奈。 4The girls'ponytails bounced as they ran,with many feet kicking frantically (at the ball when it came near them. 女孩们跑着，马尾辫弹跳着，当球靠近她们时，许多脚疯狂地踢着球。 本句为背景和动作描写，运用了bounced,ran,kicking等一系列动作、as引导的时间状语从句，with复合 结构和when引导的时间状语从句表达了比赛当时的激烈程度。 2.找线索 (I)根据第二段中的“She wondered if she should quit football and join a different club..”和第四段中的 “Sally bent,tied up her shoelace and heard her mother whisper in her ear.‘Stay focused.'"可知，Sally正处 于迷茫之中，不想再踢足球了，准备加入其他俱乐部。而正当她准备要放弃的时候，她回想起妈妈叮嘱她 的话，这些线索都可以在续写的第一段中呈现出来。 (2)根据第一段中的“Much as she tried,though,Sally still had not scored one single goal.”第四段中的 “Sally bent,tied up her shoelace and heard her mother whisper in her ear,Stay focused.'"可知，尽管Sally 非常努力，但是一个球也没有踢进正当她要放弃的时候，她想起了妈妈的话，在续写的第二段中可呈现出 Slly振奋精神，终于进球了，帮助球队赢得了比赛。 3.定思路 (1)由续写第一段首句内容“Saly开始做参加其他学校俱乐部的白日梦。”及第二段首句内容“Say想起 母亲的话，从白日梦中醒来。”可知，第一段可描写S山y脑子里想象的内容，同时，她想起了母亲的话。 (2)由第二段首句内容“Sally想起母亲的话，从白日梦中醒来。”可知，第二段可描写Saly从白日梦中清 醒过来，专注踢球的过程，最后进球，帮助球队赢得了比赛。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 Sally started daydreaming about joining other school clubs.She could be a member of the hip hop club.which her best friend kept talking about.She imagined herself dancing on stage of a big auditorium with thousands of people cheering for her.she could also try a different sport.like jogging or cycling.Anyway,football would be her last choice.Just as her mind was wandering.she saw a familiar face in the crowd.It was her mother."Stay focused.You can do it." Recalling her mother's words,Sally was woken from her daydream.At that very moment,her teammate passed the ball to her. She took control of it and dribbled it between her feet,moving forward toward the net of the green team.She passed a few players and was soon positioned right in front of the net.Focused on the ball she kicked it as hard as she could.The referee blew her whistle."Goal!" Sallu's team won.Her mom was right.All she had to do was stau focused 34 Week12现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 ◆对接答案P230 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·安徽黄山市第二中学高二期末)The gym teacher blew the whistle(哨子)and four students dived into the swimming pool,racing to the other side.Then the next four were up,but only three stood on the diving board."Where is Ren?"the gym teacher asked in concern. Ren's face turned red,and he was unsteady.He looked at the pool and stepped back."You cannot make me do this！"he said.. Sadie patted him on the back gently."You can do it!I will help you if you need it."Ren stared into Sadie's eyes and he calmed down. "You can do it.You need to pass this class."The gym teacher said.Ren stepped on the diving board, putting his goggles (over his eyes,and the blue cap hid his red hair.The whistle blew and Ren stood there as the other three swam away.Then one boy ran and pushed Ren into the water. Sadie glared at the boy."Why would you do that?"A minute passed by and Ren still wasn't coming up. Sadie jumped in and pulled him out of the water.She gave him CPR(心肺复s苏)，and it took a while until water came out of his lungs.Then finally he spat out the water and sat up,feeling dizzy. Ren looked over at Sadie,who breathed a sigh of relief."Oh,thank goodness!Why didn't you use your arms or legs?"Ren stared away from Sadie,looking at the bottom of the blue pool,then looking up at the gym teacher who rolled his eyes."I can't swim.My parents never taught me as a kid.We are afraid of water." Sadie put her hand on his shoulder."Don't worry.I will teach you how to swim.The water is my favourite place to be in."Ren thought for a while,and nodded gently. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Ren and Sadie finished gym class and walked home together. The gym teacher blew the whistle and this time Ren dived bravely. 5 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 ◆对接答案P230 第一节◆应用文写作 (2024·辽宁省大连市育明中学高二期中)通过问卷调查发现.学校里有三分之一的同学有不良的饮 食习惯，如不吃早餐，爱吃垃圾食品等。请你针对这一现象，写一篇关于养成良好饮食习惯的短文。内容要 点如下：1.良好饮食习惯的重要性：2.注意平衡的饮食结构：3.保持规律的饮食。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·广东省珠海市珠海二中高二期末)Edward walked slowly past the school blacktop where his older brother,Leon,was playing basketball with his friends.Leon didn't notice Edward until he turned to shoot the ball.Leon really loved basketball and was good at it.But Edward was another story. Edward would beg to play with them but Leon's friends complained a lot.For some reason,in that last game,Edward's playing was worse than ever.He couldn't do anything right.He was completely unable to keep possession of the ball.He missed even the easy rebounds.His dribbling was useless,and none of his throws were anywhere near the basket.Leon had to turn his brother away. Edward was always a whiz at math.He was so advanced that he already knew how to solve long division problems before he was taught in school.Word problems,even the complicated ones with several steps,were no problem. One day,Leon's math teacher,pulled him aside."You need to do better,a lot better,or you're not going to pass this class.There's a big test coming up." 136答案全解全析 wouldn't have reached the stage now. Thank uou,:extracurricular reading in our school. It is well known mu guardian angel." that reading plaus an important part in our studu 一高分亮点 and life. ②gratituden.感激之 高分词汇:①indanger处于危险之中 First of all. reoding can brooden our vision. Not 情,感谢 ③ceremonyn.仪式,典礼 ④in response 作为回 only con you gain knowledge from the books ou 应 staffn.全体员工,全体雇员 read. but also uou can get inspiration and 高分句型:(句型I)Had it not been for people like Peter,all encourogement. The more ou read, the more of our police officers and firefighters, I couldn't be alive now. (运用了if虚拟条件句和倒装) attroctive uou mau find reoding is. What's more, as (句型 2)I simply did what I was trained to do, what I had to the famous writer Gorku once said. "Books are the do.(运用了what引导的宾语从句) ladder of human progress." (句型3) Thunderous applause erupted from the people ln conclusion, reading is veru useful. Spare our surrounding him and Aponte.(运用了非谓语动词) time to read some qood books everu dou,. and uou'l Week 12 现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 find reading makes o difference to our life. Wednesday 现象评论写作跟踪训练 [Monda 如何写好现象评论 跟踪训练1 。Step Two 词汇运用 [范文] 1. look into 2. carry out 3. extracurricular With fewer and fewer people using cash. non- 4. play an important part 5. broaden 6. vision 7. inspiratior cosh pauments are becoming increasingly popular 8. encouragement 9. ladder 10. in conclusion oStep Three 句式表达 especiallu in Ching 1.完成句子 Non-cash paument has manu advantages. First (1)I want to look into the students' reading situation. of all. we can pau for whatever we buu with onlu g (2) Last week, I carried out a survey about extracurricular smart phone. Second, it reduces the risk of losing reading in our school moneu. and it can prevent receiving counterfeit (3) Reading plays an important part in our study and life is moneu. However, non-cosh paument also has mang well known. disadvantages. The moneu can't arrive in time. It is (4) First of all, reading can broaden our vision not convenient for some elderlu people who do not (5) You can gain knowledge from the books you read (6) You can also get inspiration and encouragement. use mobile phones to use it. ln addition. it cannot (7) If you read more books. you will find reading more protect people's privacu. attractive As for me. I prefer non-cash paument. I think it (8) What's more, the famous writer Gorky once said is an indispensable part of modern life (9) Books are the ladder of human progress. 一高分亮点 (10) In conclusion, reading is very useful. 高分词汇:①increasinglyadv.越来越多地,不断增加地 (11) You may spare your time to read some good books every ②advantage n.有利条件,优势 ③counterfeit adi.伪造的 da 假冒的 ④however adv.然而,可是 as for至于 (12) You'll find reading makes a difference to your life. prefer v. 更喜爱,宁可indispensable adj.不可或缺的. 2.句式升级 必需的 (1) In order to look into the students' reading situation, last 高分句型:(句型1)First of all,we can pay for whatever we week, I carried out a survey about extracurricular reading in our school. buy with only a smart phone.(运用了whatever 引导的宾话 句) (2) It is well known that reading plays an important part in our (句型 2)It is not convenient for some elderly people who do study and life. not use mobile phones to use it.(运用了who引导的定语从 (3) Not only can you gain knowledge from the books you 句和it作形式主语) read, but also you can get inspiration and encouragement. 跟踪训练2 (4) The more you read, the more attractive you may find reading is. [范文] (5) What's more, as the famous writer Gorky once said. Recently. I have read an article about the mental state of "Books are the ladder of human progress." teenagers, which said that despite better living conditions (6) Spare your time to read some good books every day, and teenogers are becoming unhappier. you'll find reading makes a difference to your life. Why are teenagers unhappier? For one thing. oStep Four 连句成篇 teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with ln order to look into the students' reading others for lack of time, which makes them feel situation. last week, I carried out a survey aboutlonelu. For another. they suffer from too much 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 pressure of studu. making it easier for them to be 知 Sadie 害怕水的原因,以及Sadie教 Ren 游泳的过程。②由 depressed. Therefore, action must be taken to . 续写第二段首句内容“体育老师吹响了哨子,这次Ren勇敢地 improve it. To beain with. teenagers should be 跳入水中。”可知,第二段可以描写Ren经过努力练习后通过 了考试,老师和Sadie的表现以及通过这件事情所得到的 interpersonal relationship. Besides. parents need to [范文] listen to their children more, which con show respect Ren and Sadie finished gym class and walked home and promote understanding together. Sadie soid to Ren qentlu and sincerelu. "As I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the uour friend, I hope gou can tell me whu uou are situgtion will be graduallu improved afraid of water." Hesitating for o second, he shared 高分亮点 an experience that he was once narrowlu drowned 高分词汇:①despite prep.尽管,即使 ②have difficulty in in the river. "Let's face and overcome it together." doing sth.做某事有困难 ③depressedadj.抑郁的,沮丧的 Sadie said firmlu. From then on. Sadie tried all ④therefore adv.因此 harmonious adj.和睦的,融洽的 means to help Ren. Graduallu Ren overcame his fear intemersonalad,人际关系的,人际的 convince v.使 and he swam freelu in the pool. Sadie even 确信,使信服 高分句型:(句型1)Recently,I have read an article about the encouroged him to take port in the coming swimming mental state of teenagers, which said that despite better living race. When that dau came, Ren stepped on the conditions, teenagers are becoming unhappier.(运用了 which diving board and he kept calm and attentive. 引导的定语从句) The gym teacher blew the whistle and this time Ren dived (句型2)I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the bravely. He swom with incredible speed and technique situation will be gradually improved.(运用了 that 引导的宾 "incredible, Ren!" The gum teacher helped him out 语从句) of the water. shaking his hand excitedly and Tnusday 新作文基本功提高微技能12 cheerfully."Congratulations! You pass!" Ren held [跟踪练习] his fist tiaht and waved to Sadie qratefullu with tears 1. ①felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees in eues. Sometimes, it is the encourogement and felt weak support from uour loved ones that help uou step out ②froze with terror. too scared to move an inch of uour comfort zone and overcome yourself. to ③was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms develop the potential to the fullest were sweating 2. ①her eves twinkled with excitement 高分高点 高分词汇:①sincerelyad.由衷地,真诚地 ②her heart was thumping with excitement ②narrowly ③a wide excitement took hold of her av.几乎,勉强地 ③attentive adj.注意的,专心的,贴心的 3. ①her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks ④incredible adj.不可思议的,难以置信的 potential adj ②numb with grief 潜在的,可能的 ③she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help erying 高分句型:(句型1)Hesitating for a second,he shared an bitterly experience that he was once narrowly drowned in the river. 4. ①it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world (that引导的同位语从句及现在分词作状语) ②he beamed and his bright smile lit up the room (句型 2)Sometimes, it is the encouragement and support ③danced with joy and sweetness from your loved ones that help you step out of your comfort 5. ①so ashamed that she could feel her face burning zone and overcome yourself, to develop the potential to the ②feel the blood rush to her face fullest.(强调句句型) ③she was close to tears Suday 6. ①so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 door violently behind him 第一节 ②Boiling with rage [范文] ③utter a single word 7. ①was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into A recent surveu shows that some students hove hopelessness formed a varietu of unhealthu eating habits, such as ②felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness not having breakfast, eating too much junk food and Saturday 读后续写话题训练 so on. which will surelu do harm to their health As we all know, health is closelu connected with [语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了体育课的游泳 what we eot. Therefore, it's important for us to hove 考试中,不会游泳的Ren被其他同学推进水中,Sadie把Ren 救上来并准备教他游泳的故事。 a bolanced diet. To keep fit. we should have a [段落续写] ①由续写第一段首句内容“Ren 和 Sadie 上完 heglthy diet. We should not only have different kinds 体育课一起走回家。”可知,第一段可以描写回家途中Ren告 of food. like fish.meat.vegetables, fruit aswell as 答案全解全析 rice. noodles. but also have the food reaularlu and had improved. Theu had so much fun!" That was properlu. pretty good basketball for o math whiz." said Leon Persongly. I think it is important to keep oas he and Edward headed home. "Just like your healthu diet. which is beneficial to a strong bodu math grade! It was a pretty good grade for a -高分亮点 basketball all-star." 高分词汇:①a variety of 许多 ②junk food垃圾食品 一高分离点 ③do harm to对......有害 ④keep fit保持身体健康 高分词汇:①sweatyadi.出汗的,吃力的 ②dribble v.运球 beneficial adj.有益的,有利的 ③frustrated adj.懊恼的,沮丧的 ④steadily adv.逐渐地,稳 高分句型:(句型1)A recent survey shows that some students 步地 complicatedadj.复杂的,难处理的 6]eventually have formed a variety of unhealthy eating habits, such as not adv.最终,结果 having breakfast, eating too much junk food and so on, which 高分句型:(句型1)At first,Edward would get frustrated will surely do harm to their health.(运用了非限制性定语 because he couldn't remember all the steps. (because 引导的 从句) 原因状语从句) (句型2) Personally, I think it is important to keep a healthy (句型 2) Leon's friends were amazed by how much Edward diet, which is beneficial to a strong body.(运用了 which 引 had improved.(howmuch引导的宾语从句) 导的非限制性定语从句) 第二节 Week 13 演讲致辞&自然和谐类读后续写 [语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Edward是数学 Monday 小天才,但不擅长打篮球。每天晚上放学后看到哥哥与朋友 如何写好演讲致辞 们在篮球场挥汗淋漓,很是羡摹。Edward恳求与哥哥一起打 Step Two 词汇运用 篮球,但表现实在糟糕,运球,传球、投篮,样样都差,受到哥哥 1. honor 2. make a speech 3. title 4. benefit from 朋友们的嘲笑。Leon迫于朋友的压力,拒绝弟弟一起打篮 5. take advantage of 6. recommend 1 7. make sure 8. reliable 球。哥哥Leon虽然擅长篮球,但数学课最差。一天,Leon接 9. schedule 10. convince 到数学老师最后通媒,数学学习必须努力,在下次考试中必须 oStep Three 句式表达 过关,否则这学期数学课可能挂科。Leon沮丧之下,想到与 弟弟互帮互助。经过共同努力,两人分别在篮球和数学上得 1.完成句子 (1) It's a great honour for me to stand here and address my 到提高,实现了双赢;而且在这个过程中,兄弟情谊得以加深。 speech. [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“很快就到了篮球训 练的时间。”可知,第一段写Leon帮助Edward练习篮球。 (2)The speech's title is"Be smart online learners". ②由续写第二段首句内容“数学考试的那天早上对Leon来说 (3) We benefit a lot from the rapid pace of the Internet 来得太快了。”可知,第二段描写Leon的数学取得很大的进 development. 步,Edward的篮球技巧也提升很大。 (4) For example, we are taking advantage of various online [范文] programs for further study. Soon it was time for basketball practice. Edward held (5) However, for some students. without self-control and self-discipline can be difficult the boll with sweatu hands, standing on the court (6)Therefore, I would like to recommend tips to be smart nervouslu. "Stau cool and stau focused. Those rules online learners. work in basketball. too."Leon said."Let's start from (7) First. we should get organized and make sure we have the basics." With Leon's potient instructions. Edward materials on hand to take reliable notes. started to practice dribbling. At first. Edword would (8) Besides, making a schedule is a must. qet frustrated becouse he couldn't remember all the (9)I am fully convinced (10) With the tips above, we will become smart online learners. steps. But after attentive practice, his performance (11)Thanks for your attention! changed for the better. The next two weeks sow the 2. 句式升级 brothers inspiring each other and making WO (1) It is a great honor for me to stand here and address my progress steadilu. Edward learned how to shoot speech. whose title is "Be Smart online learners". pass and rebound: Leon was able to solve more and (2) However, it can be difficult for some students having no more complicated word problems self-control and self-discipline. The morning of the math test came all too soon for Leon. (3) First, get organized and make sure we have materials on "Stau cool and focused!" With Edward's encouraging hand to take reliable notes. (4)I am fully convinced that with the tips above we will words echoing in his mind, Leon calmed down and become smart online learners buried himself in the questions. Eventuglly. he o Step Four 连句成篇 finished the paper with fluing colors. The bell ringing. Be smart online learners Leon handed in the paper, darted out of the Good morning. everuone. classroom and went to Edward. He invited Edward lt's o great honour for me to stand here and to play bosketboll with him after school. At the court. . address mu speech, whose title is "Be smart online Leon's friends were amazed bu how much Edward learners".