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Week11人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 Monday 如何写好人物介绍 ◆对接答案P226 近几年高考写作第一节考查范围越来越广，写人叙事类呈现上升趋 总体描述引出人物 势。人物介绍主要涉及人物特征、突出的事迹，以及对个人或者社会的 影响。 局谋篇 描述人物的事迹 ·对人物的总结评价 典题示例 (2024·黑龙江省大庆市实验中学高二期末)你校正在开展“向民族英雄学习”的活动。请你给学校英 语报写一篇短文，谈谈你“心中的民族英雄”。内容包括：1.英雄人物简介：2.成为你心中英雄的原因：3.向 英雄学习。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The National Hero in My Heart 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 说明文 时态 一般过去时和一般现在时 主题 人物描写 人称 以第三人称为主 结构 第一段：基本信息：第二段：主要事迹：第三段：感想 Step Two 词汇运用 1.民族英雄 7.人类福祉 2.致力于 8.坚韧不拔 3.水稻产量 9.淡薄 4.遭受 10.个人名利 5.饥饿，挨饿 11.美德 6.奋斗，追求 OStep Three 句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我们都知道。 (2)大多数人心中都有一个或多个民族英雄。 115 启航演语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (3)对我来说，袁隆平就是我的民族英雄。 (4)袁博士致力于水稻产量的研究。 (5)他很年轻。 (6)随着新水稻的发展，这样的日子一去不复返了。 (7)在那些日子里，中国人遭受着可怕的饥饿。 (8)世界上更多的国家能够种植更多的大米。 (9)这些国家要养活不断增长的世界人口。 (10)我们应该学习他为人类的福祉而奋斗的精神。 (11)他的坚韧不拔，淡泊个人名利，对研究工作的投入和深刻的洞察力，也是伟大美德。 (12)我们应该效仿。 2.句式升级 (1)用s引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 (2)用sice引导的时间状语从句合并上题中的句子(4)和句子(5)。 (3)用when引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(6)和句子(7)。 (4)用动词不定式作目的状语合并上题中的句子(8)和句子(9)。 (5)用that引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(11)和句子(12)。 Step Four 连句成篇 116 Week11人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 Tuesday 人物介绍满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 warm-hearted adj.热心肠的 lovely adj.可爱的 easy-going adj.随和的 clever adj.聪明的 curious ad(.好奇的 be popular with受…欢迎 be full of energy精力充沛 take part in参加 acquire.获得，得到 tirelessly adv.不倦地 play a role in在…发挥作用 creative adj.富有创造性（力）的 independent ad.独立的 willing adj.乐意的，愿意的 enthusiastic adj.热心的 be ready to help others乐于助人 be satisfied/.content with对.…满意 communicate with与…交流 be very patient with对…非常耐心 play an important role起着一个重要的作用 have a great influence on sb.对某人有着巨大影响 determined adj.决心的，坚定的 7.He was strict with everybody and in everything he 话题句式 did;as a result,he is deeply loved and respected. 引出话题先声夺人 对所有人及自己所做的任何事情都严格要求，这 1.Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky..亚伯拉罕·林肯，一个贫穷家庭 让他深受人们的爱戴和尊敬 的儿子，出生在肯塔基州。 8.He gained popularity in local areas,which caught 2.Zhong Nanshan,a famous medical expert,was born attention of a famous Chinese singer..他在当地很有 on October20th,1936 in Nanjing..著名医学专家钟 名气，这引起了一名中国著名歌唱家的注意。 南山于1936年10月20日生于南京。 首尾结合余音回味 3.Born in Zhejiang,he has made great achievements in exploring space..他出生在浙江，在探索太空方面 9.Such is our teacher,respected and loved by everyone. 做出了巨大的贡献。 这就是我们的老师，受到大家的尊敬和爱戴。 4.When it comes to the one I'm grateful to,I will tell 10.Now he has another dream-to break world records you without hesitation that it is my father.说到我感激 again,and he is trying his best to realize it..现在他 的人，我会毫不犹豫地告诉你，那就是我的父亲。 又有了另一个梦想一再次打破世界纪录，他正 主题部分娓娓道来 在努力实现这个梦想。 5.In her spare time,she spends lots of time reading 11.Helen has set an excellent example to all of us. famous novels..在业余时间，她花了大量的时间阅 读名著。 伦给我们大家树立了一个很好的榜样。 6.He is considered as an inspiring leader and is more 12.It is because of his care and consideration that I and more popular with people.作为一个鼓舞人心 grow up happily and healthily,正是因为他的关心 的领导，他越来越受人欢迎。 和照顾，我才健康快乐地成长。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 The Person I'm Grateful to 模板中黑体字部分是人物描 When it comes to the one I'm grateful to,I will tell you 写时可以通用的部分，其他部分可 without hesitation that it is my father. No matter how busy he is,he will drive me to and from school, 以根据写作要求灵活处理。 rain or shine.When I am down or feel anxious about my grades,my 第一、三段往往是一般现在 时，第二段主体部分主要是一般过 father will take me to a park,or invite me to see a movie to help me relaxed.What's more,he has a positive attitude to life,which has an 去时。 文章人称以第三人称为主，如 everlasting effect on me. 果第三段有作者的感悟，要用第 It is because of his care and consideration that I grow up happily and healthily.My gratitude to him is beyond description. 人称。 肩航英雷I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Wednesday 人物介绍写作跟踪训练 ◆对接答案P227 跟踪训练1◆人物介绍 (2024·山西省大同市重点中学高二期未)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“我最喜欢的中国历史 人物”为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：1.该人物及其主要贡献简介：2.该人物对你的影响。 注意L.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 My favorite figure in Chinese history 跟踪训练2◆人物介绍 (2024·江苏省扬州市外国语学校高二期未)《21世纪英文报》正在组织以“你身边值得感恩的人”为 题的作文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：1.介绍你要感恩的人物：2.说明感恩理由。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The Person I'm Grateful to 118 Week11人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能 11 ◆对接答案P227 用好高级语言提升应用文写作表达 英语的书面表达题是高考的重要组成部分，是 【经典句型I】Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore is the 对英语学习综合运用能力进行考查的题目，在高考 one who impresses me most. 中占有相当大的比重，而许多学生，在此方面失分很 【经典句型2】It is reported that about100,000 多，以致影响了最后总分。高考英语书面表达要求 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2024 内容充实，句式丰富，用词准确，行文连贯，思路清 Olympic Games in Paris. 晰，过渡自然。要想达到这一日的，语言的正确运用 和表达是至关重要的。为此，我们可以从以下三个 【经典句型3】As we all know,we are what we eat.. 方面进行训练： Therefore,it's very important for us to form healthy 一、加强词汇学习，夯实英语基础 eating habits. 英语词汇是英语最基本的单位，离开了单词，学2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式 英语就成了无本之木，无源之水。词汇是写作的基 要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、 础，记忆和背诵是我们扩大词汇量最传统、最简单的 倒装句、省略句等。 方法。首先我们要背诵高考词汇表：其次，要在老师 (1)强调句 的帮助下将单词、词组归纳整理，进行比较，强化 The dog has saved my little sister bravely.It is the 记忆。 dog that has saved my little sister bravely. 二、从基本词汇的运用着手，强化基本句型的训练 在掌握了基本词汇的基础上，反复训练，熟悉并 (2)主从复合句 掌握五个基本句型。 【经典句型1】When you get inside,you will see 1.主语+系动词+表语：The farm looks like a large many shelves full of books on different subjects. beautiful garden. 处用一个状语从句显然要比两个并列句效果 2.主语+谓语（不及物）(+状语)：After visiting some 要好。 places,we were singing and dancing in an open 【经典句型2】Jiuzhaigou is well known for its area./Now great changes have taken place in our beautiful lakes,of which the water is clear and looks school. colorful. 3.主语+谓语（及物）+宾语(+其他)：I want to (3)分词短语、不定式短语、由with或without引 borrow some books from the library./I found that) the driver was a woman. 导的短语 4.主语+谓语（及物）+双宾语(+其他)：My English 【经典句型I】The next morning on his way home Li teacher offered me some books on English study. Ming saw some birds flying in the sky. Because Mother's Day is coming.I want to buy my 【经典句型2】Compared with letters and public mother a present. phones,mobile phones and the Internet are faster 5.主语+谓语（及物）+宾语+宾语补足语：The teacher and much more convenient. let me have a try./He asked me to support him up./ 【经典句型3】To keep fit,we should have various We made Li Ming our monitor./Who had the healthy diets windows broken？ 【经典句型4】With his help,we've learned how to 三、掌握几种表达优美的高级句式，优化句子结构 1.改变句子的开头方式，使句子开头多样化 analyze and settle problems. 句子不是一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾 (4)倒装句 语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或 【经典句型】Only in this way can we have enough 用分词作状语等。 energy to study better. 19 启航演语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (5)省略句 While you are crossing the street,you should be 跟踪练习 careful.-While crossing the street,you should be I.下面是一篇学生习作，通篇使用there be句式，让 careful. 人感到单调乏味，易产疲劳感。 3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力 There is a new classroom building on one side of 【经典句型I】Now you are telling Jim how you the road.There used to be a playground on the other side before.But there is a library now.There are all understand this piece of art and what makes you kinds of books,newspapers and magazines in the think so. library.There is a new playground in front of the 【经典句型2】Some of us often go to school without school.There are a lot of trees in and around the breakfast:some like to have snacks;some others are school. particular about food;and still some eat or drink too 请运用多样化句式试着修改： much. 4.注意连接词与句子的运用 在回信的开头我们可以这样用：Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.这句话起承 上启下的作用，使文章过渡自然。 5.使用过渡词语 写好了每个句子，并不一定就是一篇好文章，因为 作为一篇文章，还必须行文连贯。那么，如何使行 文连贯呢？这就要求我们在组成篇章时，要用好 过渡性词语。过渡性词语就像是我们组装机械时 Ⅱ.请仔细体会下面几组句子，试用高级句式改造句子 I.We had to stand there to catch the offender. 使用的润滑剂一样，起着润滑的作用。常用的过 渡词语主要有： 2.The meal was very nice.We all enjoyed it very 并列递进：and,also,as well as,besides,what's much. more,furthermore,moreover,etc. 转折：but,yet,however,although,nevertheless,in 3.We met at the school gate and went there together spite of,after all,etc. early in the morning. 因果：because,as,for,since,for this reason, because of,so,therefore,thus,as a result,etc. 4.I studied Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry 对比：or,otherwise,like,unlike,on the contrary and computer at school. while,on the other hand,instead of,etc. in all,in brief,on the whole,in short,in 5.We had a short rest.Then we began to play happily. general,in one word,etc. We sang and danced.Some told stories.Some 6.多用词组表达单个词义 played chess. The dog was killed in the accident.-The dog lost his life in the accident. 6.My brother was riding the bike and I sat on the seat behind him. 7.避免用相同词汇 My father likes reading and my mother likes 7.My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It had saved my cooking,but I like playing games. little sister bravely. -My father likes reading and my mother enjoys cooking,but I am fond of playing games. Week11人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 Friday读后续写示例指导1i 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Pansy Takes a Trip (2024·江西省伊春市第二中学高二期中)Very excited,Anika hugged her favorite doll tight as she followed her parents through the airport.It was going to be her first time on an airplane.When she walked down the narrow aisle(走廊、过道)of the plane to find her seat,.a tall flight attendant(服务人员)smiled at her and asked where they were going."Walt Disney World,"Anika said with a smile."We'll be there for a week." “Have a wonderful trip,"”replied the flight attendant,.pointing to her name tag(名签)，“I'm Leanne.You let me know if you and your pretty doll friend need anything." "Thanks.I'm Anika,and this is Pansy,"said Anika,holding the doll up to show her,"Do you fly to Disney World every day?" Leanne shook her head."I get to fly all over the world.It can be fun to explore new places." The flight was going to be a few hours.Anika read a book with Pansy and did some puzzles her mother had packed for the trip.Soon she was getting a little tired and asked Leanne for a pillow ()The flight attendant returned with a pillow,a blanket,and a sleep mask to cover her eyes.Anika tucked Pansy under the blanket with her and fell asleep quickly.In no time,it seemed,she was being woken up again because it was time to land. They had arrived! “Already?”yawned(打哈欠)Anika..She wasn't quite awake yet..Her parents were busily packing up their bags and jackets,ready to leave the plane.Leanne walked past them,collecting the pillows and blankets from passengers as she went. "Now you will have lots of energy to enjoy your visit to Disney World!"She smiled to Anika."I will see you next week on your return flight home. Anika was delighted to be in the new city.When her family got to the hotel,she couldn't wait to bring Pansy along to see all the amazing sights with her.She looked around,but she couldn't find her doll. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 She searched through the bags and jackets,but Pansy was nowhere to be found. Hugging Pansy tight again,Anika felt even more excited than she was on vacation last week. 121 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公Anik在一次坐飞机的旅途中丢失了自己心爱的洋娃娃，后来 在空乘Leanne的帮助下，成功地找到娃娃的故事。 写作步骤 1,读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Anika,her parents and Leanne. When:It was going to be her first time on an airplane. Where:The airport and the hotel. What:The journey of Anika and her parents. Why:Anika looked around,but she couldn't find her doll. (2)Details: DVery excited,Anika hugged her favorite doll tight as she followed her parents through the airport. Aika非常兴奋，紧紧地抱着她最喜欢的娃娃，跟着父母穿过机场。 本句为人物和背景描写，运用了s引导的时间状语从句、形容词短语作伴随状语来表达Anika的兴奋和 她对洋娃娃的喜爱。 ②When she walked down the narrow aisle(走廊、过道)of the plane to find her seat,a tall flight attendant (服务人员)smiled at her and asked where they were going. 当她走过狭窄的过道去找她的座位时，一个高个子的空乘对她笑了笑，问她要去哪里。 本句为人物描写，运用了when引导的时间状语从句，两个动作smile at,ask和where引导的宾语从句，这 些都呈现了这个空乘的细心和周到。 3Anika read a book with Pansy and did some puzzles her mother had packed for the trip. Anika和Pansy一起读了一本书，还做了一些妈妈为旅行准备的拼图。 本句为动作和心情描写，运用了read和did some puzzles这两个动作，还有定语从句“her mother had packed for the trip”,通过这些动作表现了Anika和洋娃娃在一起时快乐的心情。 4When her family got to the hotel,she couldn't wait to bring Pansy along to see all the amazing sights with her. 当她的家人到达酒店时，她迫不及待地带着Pnsy一起去看所有令人惊叹的景点。 本句为背景描写，运用了when引导的时间状语从句，动词短语couldn't wait to do表达了Anika迫切要和 她的洋娃娃对新地方进行探索的心情。 2.找线索 (I)根据第一段中的“Very excited,Anika hugged her favorite doll tight as she followed her parents through the airport..",第六段中的“Leanne walked past them,collecting the pillows and blankets from passengers as she went.."和第七段中的“She smiled to Anika..‘I will see you next week on your return flight home..'"可 知，Anika非常喜欢她的洋娃娃：Leanne从乘客那里收枕头和毯子时，说要和Anika下周在她回家的飞机 上会再次相见。这些线索都可以在第一段中呈现出来。 Week11人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 (2)根据第二段中的“I'm Leanne.You let me know if you and your pretty doll friend need anything.”和第 四段中的“Leanne shook her head.‘I get to fly all over the world..It can be fun to explore new places.'"可 知，空乘Leanne是一个很友善的人，随时都可以帮助Anika,同时会跟随飞机到处飞行，这些线索可以在 续写的第二段中呈现出来。 3.定思路 (1)由续写第一段开头语“She searched through the bags and jackets,but Pansy was nowhere to be found.” 及续写第二段开头语“Hugging Pansy tight again,Anika felt even more excited than she was on vacation last week.”可知，第一段续写可描写Anika找不到Pansy后的心理变化的经过，以及最后突然发现了她的洋 娃娃的过程。 (2)由续写第二段开头语“Hugging Pansy tight again,Anika felt even more excited than she was on vacation last week.”可知，第二段续写可描写洋娃娃是如何被找到的过程，Anika和空乘Leanne的对话及Anika 经过这次事情的内心感受。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 She searched through the bags and jackets,but Pansy was nowhere to be found.On thinking Pansy might have been left behind along the way.Anika burst into tears.Seeing this.her parents comforted that Pansy might turn up somewhere when they visited Disney World.There seemed to be no better choice after all.Anika went to disney World.enjoying all the fantastic views.but when she boarded the flight back a week later.she was missing Pansu in her deep heart.It is when she walked down the narrow aisle that she saw Leanne smiling.reaching a doll to her.That was Pansy! Hugging Pansy tight again,Anika felt even more excited than she was on vacation last week.Leanne told Anika she found Pansy in the blanket and took Pansy to fly around the world along with her."She visited many beautiful places and couldn't wait to tell you all that she saw."Leanne gently patted Anika's hair."but never leave her alone again.for she is missing you so much."Grateful and happy.Anika nodded."Thank you for giving Pansy such a good trip."and she thought to herself that she would take all her trips with Pansy in the future. 肩航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 ◆对接答案P227 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 What It Means to Serve (2024·河南省开封市开封一中高二期末)I didn't continue college after graduation.I moved out of my family.With little work experience,I served as a waitress.But during the five years'labor,I found myself burning calories running about only for a tip. I hadhad enough so I moved to a smaller town hoping to pursue a college degree.I promised I would never serve people again-at least not in such a way.It was time to serve myself.Luckily,I received a position as an afterschool program tutor at a local middle school,with the added benefit of completing English education degree.I had the opportunity to go big!The kid would need me-a role model and a trustworthy friend,I believed. But my first day was welcomed by the students'indifference ()The desks were messy and the whole room smelled of dirty gym socks.My excitement began to die down.I doubted whether the new job was a mistake.The playground activity was deafening while homework time was not much better.After my repeated persistence,they finally turned off the playground mode.But just a few minutes passed when I noticed two kids quarreling in the corner. I supposed it was another little incident but one kid named Jeremy bothered me.He shouted at me for coming at him.And when I asked them to return to their seats,he slammed his backpack and grew mad as I tried to urge him to take the right attitude."I don't like you,homework and this afterschool program! All you guys do is yell at me.I'm never coming back.he walked out of the classroom,slamming the door. Naturally,I was so frustrated ()I wondered why I am here.Most kids disrespected me!I paused to take a deep breath.Then suddenly I thought to myself,"You said you would never serve people again.but you don't understand what these kids really need."At that moment,I remembered my middle-school life.I always had a poor attitude,never did my schoolwork,repeatedly got into fights,and disrespected my elders. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Realizing I was not different.I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy. At that moment,my heart broke for this boy and his family life. 124高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 attended a lecture qiven bu an expert on rare happiness that he felt on top of the world. That was animals and their habitats. Next. we watched a short the beautu of companionship. And from the bright video about the endanaered animals. What attracted smile blooming on mu sister's face. I could tell that me most was the visit to the pando research center. she felt the same. Arm in arm. we walked inside as where I sow several newlu-born baby pandas. They darkness fell, waiting for father to come home were so cutel 一高分凛点 All of us found the activitu educational. inspiring 高分词汇:①uncontrollably adv.控制不住地 and hiqhlu rewarding ②dissatisfaction n.不满,不悦 ③accusation n.控告,指责 W/ith best regards ④sincerityn.真诚,真挚witnessn.目击,目睹,见证 离分亮点 eompanionshipn.情谊,友谊 高分句型:(句型1)Before I realized it, I was sobbing inmy 高分词汇:①be located in位于.... ②awareness n.认识. sister's room, with bullets of words firing through my mouth. 意识③habitatn.(动植物的)生活环境,栖息地 expressing my long-buried dissatisfaction towards her absence ④endangered adj.(动植物)危的 inspiring adj.鼓舞人 from my snow shoveling experiences.(before 引导的时间状 心的,有激励作用的 高分句型:(句型1)What attracted me most was the visit to 语从句,expressing现在分词作状语) (句型 2) However, deep inside me was a brother, who was the panda research center, where I saw several newly-born so overcome with happiness that he felt on top of the world. babypandas.(运用了what引导的主语从句,同时用where (who和that引导的定语从句) 引导了非限制性定语从句) (句型 2) All of us found the activity educational, inspiring Week11 人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 and highly rewarding.(运用了三个形容词educational, inspiring and highly rewarding 作found的宾语补足语) orday 如何写好人物介绍 第二节 oStep Two 词汇运用 [语篇解读] 文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者的爸爸不 1. national hero 2. devote oneself to 3. rice output 4. suffer 喜欢铲雪,于是作者自已担负起这项工作。每次下雪,他都会 from 5. starvation 6. strive for 7. well-being of mankind 主动为爸爸铲需。有一次下了很大的雪,他一个人不可能在 8. perseverance 9. indifference 10. personal fame and fortune 爸爸下班之前完成,于是寻求姐姐的帮助,但是被拒绝了。作 者不知疲倦地战斗着,却还没有完成一半,他感到很生气,也StepThree 句式表达 11.virtue 因为想到爸爸在工作了一天之后还要去铲雪感到失望。 1.完成句子 [段落续写] ①由续写第一段首句内容“我感到痛苦和绝 (1)We all know. 望,无法停止我的眼泪。”可知,第一段可描写作者因为难过去 (2) Most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts. 姐姐房间哭泣,表达自己对她不帮自己铲雪的不满的过程 (3) For me, Yuan Longping is actually my national hero. ②由续写第二段首句内容“我姐姐和我出去了。”可知,第二段 可描写姐弟俩携手铲雪的过程和作者内心的感受。 (4)Dr. Yuan devoted himself to doing research on the rice output: [范文] (5)He was very young. Feeling bitter and desperate, I couldn't stop my tears. Mu (6) With the development of new rice, gone are the days. inner anger wos like a growing monster, uncontrolloblu (7) Chinese people suffered from terrible starvation in those driving me to the edae of madness. Before I realized days. it. / was sobbing in mu sister's room. with bullets of (8)More countries of the world are able to grow more rice. words firing through mu mouth, expressing mu long (9)These countries will feed the growing world population. buried dissatisfaction towards her absence from mu (10) We should learn from him the spirit of striving for the well-being of mankind. snow shoveling experiences. The house seemed to (11) His perseverance, indifference to personal fame and be holding its breath when / stopped mu accusation. fortune, his devotion to research work and profound insight still weeping. " Please don't cru. Everu teardrop of are also great virtues. uours is a reminder of how selfish I was. /'m sorru. (12)We should follow! Would ou give me another chance to go shoveling 2.句式升级 with ou?" said mu sister with gentleness and (1) As we all know. most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts. sinceritu in her voice. (2) Dr. Yuan has devoted himself to doing research on the rice My sister and I went outside. More than half of the output since he was very young. drivewau was still blanketed in white but I wasn't (3) With the development of new rice, gone are the days alone in this bottle anu more. Everu shovel of snow when Chinese people suffered from terible starvation. was a witness to the energu and excitement in me (4)More countries of the world are able to grow more rice to Bu the time we finished. my back was aching feed the growing world population. (5) His perseverance, indifference to personal fame and muscles sore, and bodu exhausted. However. deep fortune. his devotion to research work and profound insight inside me was a brother. who was so overcome with are also great virtues that we should follow! 226 答案全解全析 o Step Four 连句成篇 busu she is. she will drive me to and from school The National Hero in My Heart rain or shine. Besides, whatever difficultu I come As we all know, most people have o nationgl across. mu mother will do her utmost to support me hero or heroes in their hearts. For me, Yuon Longping is which alwaus qives me enouah couraqe. Moreover actuallu mu national hero such an optimistic person is she that ! also have a Dr. Yuan has devoted himself to doing research positive attitude to life on the rice output since he was very uoung. With It is because of her care and consideration that the development of new rice. gone are the daus I grow up happily and healthily. My gratitude to her when Chinese people suffered from terrible starvation. is beuond description More countries of the world are able to qrow more rice to feed the qrowing world population 高分亮点 高分词汇:①hesitationn.犹豫;不情愿 We should learn from him the spirit of striving ②physically adly. 身体上地 ③spiritually adv.精神上地 ④positive adj.乐 for the well-being of mankind. His perseverance. 观的;积极的 considerationn.考虑;期酌 indifference to personal fame and fortune. his 高分句型:(句型1)Not only does she take good care of me devotion to research work and profound insight are physically, but she also inspires me spiritually.(运用了 not also qreat virtues that we should follow! only...but also结构,not only在句首,后接的句子部分 倒装) Wednesday 人物介绍写作跟踪训练 (句型2) Moreover, such an optimistic person is she that 1 跟踪训练1 also have a positive atitude to life.(运用了such位于句首引 [范文] 起的部分倒装句) My favorite figure in Chinese history Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能11 When it comes to mu favorite figure in Chinese historu. it must be Confucius [跟踪练习] As is known to all, he is one of the areatest I. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On thinkers and educators in China. He established an the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another building-our library, in which you can find all educational sustem. which made an enormous impact kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground on the development of Chinese traditional culture is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of Furthermore. he made manu wise sauinas in ancient trees in and around the school. Chino that helped many people learn about nature. II. 1. All we could do was to stand there, trying to catch the the world. and the human behavior. offender. In foct. his thoughts alwaus inspire me to 2. The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. 3. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went pursue knowledge and I'd like to be a teacher like there together. him one dau 4. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese. 高分亮点 maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. 高分词汇:①educatorn.教师:教育家 ②educational systen 5. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing 教育制度 ③make an enormous impact on对..e..产生巨大 telling jokes and plaving chess. 的影响④furthermore adv.此外;而且 pursue vi.继续; 6. My brother was riding the bike with me sitting on the seat 追求 behind. 高分句型:(句型1)When it comes to my favorite figure in 7. My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu Chinese history. it must be Confucius.(运用了when 引导的 who had saved my little sister. 时间状语从句) Saturday (句型 2) He established an educational system, which made 读后续写话题训练 an enormous impact on the development of Chinese traditional [语篇解读] 1 本文以作者的经历为线索展开。作者高中毕业 culture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 后,去做了一名服务员。五年之后,作者去一所中学担当了一 跟踪训练2 个课外活动的老师。在第一堂课上,作者遇见了一个非常暴 [范文] 躁的学生Jeremy。作者和Jeremy了解他的情况,了解了他悲 The Person I'm Grateful to 惨的家庭生活。之后作者一直帮助Jeremy,并取得了成功。 When it comes to the one r'm qrateful to. I will 1 通过自己的经历,作者明白了为他人服务的真谛。 tell uou without hesitation that it is mu mother. Not +[段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“意识到我没有什么 onlu does she take good care of me phusically. but 不一样,我走出去进入大厅,赶上了Jeremy。”可知,第一段可 描写作者和Jeremy聊天,了解他的情况的过程。②由续写第 she glso inspires me spirituallu 二段首句内容“在那一刻,我为这个男孩和他的家庭生活心碎 Every morning. she gets up early to prepare a 了。“可知,第二段可描写作者帮助Jeremy,鼓励他,并且最终 healthy breakfast for mu familu. No motter how 获得成功的故事。 启l 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 [范文] mother who teaches me to be curious, kind. Realizing I was not different, I walked out into the hall and optimistic and persistent. When I come across caught up with Jeremy."f m sorru. Jeremu. Could I have someone in need. f'm willing to aive g helping hand a talk with ou?" I said. truing to be calm and sincere. He turned around. looked at me for gIalwgus have a positive attude and constantly seek within mu gbilitu. When I encounter difficulties in life moment and nodded."OK.""Jeremu. could you telfor approaches to oddressing them. me what have happened to you?" I asked. She is not only mu mother, but also mu life Hesitantlu, Jeremu began to share with me about his mentor. lndeed, she is just the person affecting me storu. From what he said. I knew his mother wos greatlu. killed in a car accident three months before. Worse 高分亮点 still. his fother. who was in deep sorrow, lost his jot 高分词汇:①have a great influence on对.....有巨大影响 ot the some time After thgt his fother became bad. ②compare with与j....相比 ③extraordinary adj,异乎寻常 tempered and often shouted at him, ignoring all his 的,令人惊奇的;非凡的 ④devotedlyadv.忠实地;一心一 requests. As he told me what was happening. he 意地 persistent ad). 坚持不懈的 began to cru. 高分句型:(句型1) It is my mother who teaches me to be At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family curious,kind,optimistic and persistent.(强调句的运用) life. I gently hugged him and patted him on the back. (句型 2) When I come across someone in need. I'm willing tc Then I walked him home and encouraged him to give a helping hand within my ability.(时间状语从句的 运用) face life in a positive wau. After that. I often chatted with Jeremy ond helped him deol with his troubles. [语篇解读] 第二节 even pgid a visit to his fother severol times. As time Aponte 非紫幸运,因为她遇到了她的守护天使 Peter Getz。 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Josibelk went bu. Jeremu behaved better and better andGetz是一名退休的哈特福德警官,在Aponte 5岁的时候救了 smiles often appeared on his face. At the end of the !她的命,在警车里给她做了心肺复苏术,并把她送到了医院 program, Jeremg hugged me tightly and thanked Aponte一直还留着住院期间Getz送给她的泰迪熊,但随着时 me again and again. At that moment. I suddenl 间的流逝,他们失去了联系。 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“大约两年前,Aponte realized what it meant to serve-Get to know g 1 试图通过社交媒体联系Getz。”可知,第一段可描写Aponte对 person from the bottom of uour heart and qive what t Getz心存感激,希望Getz能来参加自已的毕业典礼,所以想 he needs. 要找到他。最终两人取得了联系,并定期聚会。②由续写第 高分亮点 二段首句内容“在毕业典礼上,许多人来到Getz面前,高度赞 高分词汇:①hesitantlyadv.迟疑地;曙地 ②bad- 扬他的勇敢。”可知,第二段可描写在毕业典礼上,Getz得到人 temperedadj.脾气不好的;易怒的 ③ignore v.详装未见; 们的赞扬并表达了自己的希望。 不理 ④pay a visit to拜访 from the bottom of 来自 [范文] 于底部 About two years ago. Aponte tried to contact Getz through 高分句型:(句型1)I said, trying to be calm and sincere.(现 social media. "We really appreciate Peter putting 在分词作状语) himself in danqer to save others." said Aponte."! (句型 2) Worse still, his father, who was in deep sorrow, owe gratitude to Peter. Had it not been for people lost his job at the same time.(由关系代词who引导的非限 like Peter, all of our police officers and firefighters, 制性定语从句) couldn't be alive now. Now I'll graduate from (句型3)I suddenly realized what it meant to serve.( what 引l 导的宾语从句) college. 1 do hope he can attend mu graduation ceremong." To the great delight of Aponte, she TSuday_ 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 eventuallu found Getz with the help of manu kind 第一节 people. Since then, the two got together regularlu [范文] sometimes meeting for lunch. The person who influences me most At the graduation ceremony. many people came to Getz and Many people do have a great influence on me, but I think spoke highly of his bravery. In response, he soid. "1 no one can be compared with mu mother. Her simplu did what I was trained to do, what I hod to attitude towards life will never stop influencing mu do. lt is mu dutu. The firemen did their job, I did mg thoughts and actions. job. and the hospital staff did their job. They were She doesn't appear to be extraordinaru in ang really heroes." Thunderous applouse erupted from way. but just works foithfullu and devotedlg: at the the people surrounding him and Aponte. With tears same time, she never puts her familu aside. It is murolling down, Aponte said."Had it not been for uou, 答案全解全析 wouldn't have reached the stage now. Thank uou,:extracurricular reading in our school. It is well known mu guardian angel." that reading plaus an important part in our studu 一高分亮点 and life. ②gratituden.感激之 高分词汇:①indanger处于危险之中 First of all. reoding can brooden our vision. Not 情,感谢 ③ceremonyn.仪式,典礼 ④in response 作为回 only con you gain knowledge from the books ou 应 staffn.全体员工,全体雇员 read. but also uou can get inspiration and 高分句型:(句型I)Had it not been for people like Peter,all encourogement. The more ou read, the more of our police officers and firefighters, I couldn't be alive now. (运用了if虚拟条件句和倒装) attroctive uou mau find reoding is. What's more, as (句型 2)I simply did what I was trained to do, what I had to the famous writer Gorku once said. "Books are the do.(运用了what引导的宾语从句) ladder of human progress." (句型3) Thunderous applause erupted from the people ln conclusion, reading is veru useful. Spare our surrounding him and Aponte.(运用了非谓语动词) time to read some qood books everu dou,. and uou'l Week 12 现象评论&体育运动类读后续写 find reading makes o difference to our life. Wednesday 现象评论写作跟踪训练 [Monda 如何写好现象评论 跟踪训练1 。Step Two 词汇运用 [范文] 1. look into 2. carry out 3. extracurricular With fewer and fewer people using cash. non- 4. play an important part 5. broaden 6. vision 7. inspiratior cosh pauments are becoming increasingly popular 8. encouragement 9. ladder 10. in conclusion oStep Three 句式表达 especiallu in Ching 1.完成句子 Non-cash paument has manu advantages. First (1)I want to look into the students' reading situation. of all. we can pau for whatever we buu with onlu g (2) Last week, I carried out a survey about extracurricular smart phone. Second, it reduces the risk of losing reading in our school moneu. and it can prevent receiving counterfeit (3) Reading plays an important part in our study and life is moneu. However, non-cosh paument also has mang well known. disadvantages. The moneu can't arrive in time. It is (4) First of all, reading can broaden our vision not convenient for some elderlu people who do not (5) You can gain knowledge from the books you read (6) You can also get inspiration and encouragement. use mobile phones to use it. ln addition. it cannot (7) If you read more books. you will find reading more protect people's privacu. attractive As for me. I prefer non-cash paument. I think it (8) What's more, the famous writer Gorky once said is an indispensable part of modern life (9) Books are the ladder of human progress. 一高分亮点 (10) In conclusion, reading is very useful. 高分词汇:①increasinglyadv.越来越多地,不断增加地 (11) You may spare your time to read some good books every ②advantage n.有利条件,优势 ③counterfeit adi.伪造的 da 假冒的 ④however adv.然而,可是 as for至于 (12) You'll find reading makes a difference to your life. prefer v. 更喜爱,宁可indispensable adj.不可或缺的. 2.句式升级 必需的 (1) In order to look into the students' reading situation, last 高分句型:(句型1)First of all,we can pay for whatever we week, I carried out a survey about extracurricular reading in our school. buy with only a smart phone.(运用了whatever 引导的宾话 句) (2) It is well known that reading plays an important part in our (句型 2)It is not convenient for some elderly people who do study and life. not use mobile phones to use it.(运用了who引导的定语从 (3) Not only can you gain knowledge from the books you 句和it作形式主语) read, but also you can get inspiration and encouragement. 跟踪训练2 (4) The more you read, the more attractive you may find reading is. [范文] (5) What's more, as the famous writer Gorky once said. Recently. I have read an article about the mental state of "Books are the ladder of human progress." teenagers, which said that despite better living conditions (6) Spare your time to read some good books every day, and teenogers are becoming unhappier. you'll find reading makes a difference to your life. Why are teenagers unhappier? For one thing. oStep Four 连句成篇 teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with ln order to look into the students' reading others for lack of time, which makes them feel situation. last week, I carried out a survey aboutlonelu. For another. they suffer from too much