Week 10 报道&家庭亲情类读后续写-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 10 报道&家庭亲情类读后续写 Monday 如何写好报道 ◆对接答案P224 报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的 ·开篇：时间、地点、人物、事件 经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。高中生活离不开 目的（灵活处理） 各种各样的活动，而丰富多彩的活动能够培养学生的兴趣 局 能力及创造力，从而促进学生全面、健康地发展。在高考英 主体：具体内容（目的、人员、流 篇 程等) 语中，活动介绍是非常重要的考查方式之一，通过活动介绍 可以体现对交际能力的考查。 结尾：意义、反响、感受等 典题示例 (2024·浙江萧山中学高二月考)假定你是李华。上周四你校高二年级开展了“高雅艺术进校园”的活 动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动日的：2.活动内容；3.活动反响。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Elegant Art into Campus 思路点拨 OStep One 审题谋篇 体裁 记叙文 时态 一股过去时和一股现在时 主题 报道校园活动 人称 以第三人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题；第二段：详细报道陈述事实：第三段：感想评论 Step Two 词汇运用 1.打算，想要 6.雄伟地，壮丽地 2.可到达的，可进入的 7.全世界的，通用的 3.专业艺术家 8.清楚的，显然的 4.结合，联合 9.高度评价 5.音乐元素 10.接触 Step Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)上周四，我们高二年级举办了“高雅艺术进校园”活动。 105 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (2)这场活动旨在让高雅艺术更亲民。 (3)我们邀请了一群当地的专业艺术家到这里。 (4)在学校大厅里，精彩演出了中西合璧的《梁祝》。 (5)接着是一场以世界通用语言一音乐的基础知识为中心的讲座。 (6)很明显，这次活动组织得很好，受到了很高的评价。 (7)它丰富了我们的学校生活。 (8)它也使我们更多地接触到了优雅的艺术 2.句式升级 (1)用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 (2)用被动语态的用法升级句子(3)。 (3)用地点状语放到句首的用法升级句子(4)。 (4)用过去分词作后置定语的用法升级句子(5)。 (5)用because引导的原因状语从句和not only..but also句式合并上题中的句子(6)、(7)和句子(8)。 Step Four连句成篇 @© Week10报道&家庭亲情类读后续写 Tuesday 报道满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 in order to为了 enrich v.使充实，使丰富 intend.打算，想要 purpose n.目标，目的 benefit,.受益 build up建立 arouse.引起，激起 awareness m.认识，意识 take turns轮流 performance n.表演，演出 applause m.掌声，喝彩 be highly spoken of高度评价 participate in参加 apart from除了…之外 teenager m.青少年 be addicted to沉迷于… suggestion n.建议 in addition除此之外，另外 be of great importance重要的 pay more attention to更加关注 mentally and physically精神上和身体上 the school administration学校管理处 be divided into被分成，被划分为 assign.分派，布置（工作、任务） 话题句式 5.Not only can take physical exercise be beneficial to health,but it can also be good for character 引出话题先声夺人 building.进行体育锻炼不仅有益健康，还有助于 1.Aimed at enriching our experiences and exercising 培养品格。 our willpower,this activity is scheduled to take place 6.The exhibition is scheduled for this weekend,from from 7 00 a.m.to 5:00 p.m.next Tuesday. 了丰富我们的经历和锻炼我们的意志力，这次活 8:30 a.m.to 5:30 p.m..It covers a wide range of 动预定于下周二上午7点到下午5点进行。 contents.展览会安排在本周末，从上午8点30到 2.Last Thursday our Senior Two held the activity of 下午5点30。展览内容包罗万象。 Elegant Art into Campus,which was intended to 首尾结合余音回味 make elegant art more accessible.上周四，我们高二 7.The event we held will enable us to gain a better 年级举办了“高雅艺术进校园”活动，旨在让高雅 understanding of each other..我们举办的这次活动 艺术更亲民 将使我们能够更好地相互了解。 3.I am honored to have taken part in an activity called 8.The activity provides an opportunity for us to "Save the Earth",whose aim is to raise people's promote friendship and teamwork.Also,we'll awareness of protecting the earth.我很荣幸地参加 develop our practical skills and sense of 了一项叫作“拯救地球”的活动，其目的是提高人 responsibility.此次活动给我们提供了一次促进友 们保护地球的意识。 主题部分娓娓道来 谊和团队合作的机会。同时，也会培养我们的实 4.A wide variety of activities are offered including 践能力和责任感。 singing,dancing and reading to excite/arouse 9.Doing voluntary work will make great contributions students'interest in learning English.举办丰富多彩 to the society,which is able to enrich my life as 的活动，包括唱歌、跳舞和阅读，目的是为了激发 wel.做志愿者活动将会给社会带来巨大的贡献， 学生学习英语的兴趣。 也能丰富我的生活。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 An Exciting Tug of War 模板中黑体字部分是报道 Aimed to inspire students to pay more attention to physical 描写时可以通用的部分，其他 exercise,an exciting tug of war was held on our school playground last 部分可以根据写作要求灵活 Sunday. 处理。 The activity,organized by Students'Union,attracted all Senior One 第一、二段往往是一般过 students.Twenty teams tried their best to win,with the rest cheering all the 去时，第三段主要是一般过去 way.The activity lasted about two hours and drew to a successful close. 时，也可以用其他时态。 Through the activity,we benefited a lot mentally and physically. 文章人称以第三人称为 Not only did it enrich our school life,but it also let us further realize 主，如果第三段有作者的感悟， the importance of building up our body and working as a team. 要用第一人称。 启航黄语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Wednesday 报道写作跟踪训练 ◆对接答案P224 跟踪训练1◆报道 (2024·山西省榆次一中高二期末)假如你是学校英语报的记者李华，上周你校举办了“社交媒体脱 瘾”活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动目的：2.活动具体内容：3.活动反响。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 参考词汇脱瘾detox 跟踪训练2◆报道 (2024·广东省湛江市第三中学高二月考)假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了以“中国书法之美”为主 题的展览活动，请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括：1.参加活动人员：2.活动内容；3.活动反响。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The Beauty of Chinese Calligraphy ® Week10报道&家庭亲情类读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能10 ◆对接答案P225 巧用无灵主语 出彩读后续写 无灵主语，即以没有生命的事物作主语，包括物 品、动作、情感、时间、地点等。无灵主语搭配表示动 跟踪练习 作的谓语动词，为无生命体赋予了生命力，达到生动 根据提示的动词，用无灵主语恰当表达下列句子。 的表达效果。在续写中运用无灵主语，不仅可以增 L.此刻我无话可说。(fail) 加主语的多样性，而且有出彩刻画人物情绪心理、道 at the 染环境氛围等作用。 moment. 例：Excitement deprived me of all power of 2.嫉妒使他发狂。(drive)》 speech.我兴奋得说不出话来。 him crazy. 解析：这句话直译为“兴奋使我丧失了说话的能 3.由于动作迟缓，他错过了机会。(1lose) 力”，用表达情绪的抽象名词Excitement作主语，配 the chance 合使用动词短语deprived...of.,.(使丧失)，句子一 4.我沮丧不堪。(seize) 下子生动起来，凸显了“我”极其兴奋的情绪，比以 Feelings of depression “我”为主语时的句子(I was so excited that I lost the power of speech.)更富有表现力。 5.他不期而至，我们都很惊讶。(astonish) 无灵主语句欣赏： His unexpected arrival Anxiety tore the boy into pieces.这个男孩焦虑 6.突然之间，我有了一个一闪而过的主意。(strike) 不安，整个人都崩溃了。 Suddenly, The thick carpet killed the sound of my footsteps. in a flash 我走在厚厚的地毯上，一点脚步声也没有。 7.午夜的铃声吓了我一跳。(scare) The astonishment robbed me of the power to say The ringing sound at midnight anything.我震惊得说不出话来。 Suddenly the ground underneath opened up and 8.过了一会，他们来到茅草屋门前。(bing) swallowed him.突然，大地裂开，并将他吞噬 A few moments All my confidence deserted me after I walked out to a cottage door. of the exam room.走出考场后，我完全丧失了信心。 9.他走上台时突然失去了自信。(escape) A sincere gratitude woke within me as I gazed at His confidence my mother and father..我看着我的父母，一种真诚的 when he walked on the stage. 感激之情在我心中油然而生。 10.新学校才开学一小时，我就成了全班同学的笑 Jerry's absence of mind during the drive nearly 料。(make) caused an accident.杰瑞驾驶时心不在焉，差点儿出 My first hour at the new school 了车祸。 the laughing stock of the A faint wind sighed through the woods and the red classroom. leaves stirred and whispered.一阵微风拂过树林，犹如IL.这幅画使我一下子想起了我的童年时光。 深沉的叹息：红叶沙沙作响，彼此窃窃私语。 (remind)】 The glow in her eyes has become deep and The painting immediately menacing,and the red in her cheeks burns more and my childhood. more warmly..她眼里的光变得阴沉凶险，而她面颊 12.疾病缠身，她失去了完成任务的信心。(rob of) 的红晕也越来越炽热。 Illness the For a moment,small lines appeared above her confidence in accomplishing the task. sharply traced black eyebrows,showing how hard she 13.她耗尽了热情，显得虚弱不堪，当她走下台阶时， was thinking,before a happy light played over her 步伐踉跄了。(cause) whole face.一时间，她那轮廓分明的乌黑眉毛上出 The weakness of exhausted passion 现了细小的纹路，显示出她在拼命思考，接着她的脸 to totter as she descended 上闪出了一道愉快的光芒。 the steps. 9 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Friday 读后续写示例指导10 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·辽宁省大连市第一中学高二期末)On a Friday evening in December,two weeks before Christmas,I lost my job.I hadn't seen it coming.My daughter,Kristil,was 12 and I planned to get our Christmas tree.Then I listened to my voicemail,"We're sorry,but your work assignment has ended as of today.”My heart sank. I wasn't just a single parent;I was the only parent.My paycheck was survival.I did everything I could to give Kristil a good life,but there were some things my love couldn't fix.The next day as we searched for our Christmas tree,I struggled to be cheerful as I eyed the Christmas tree prices. “Is everything OK?”Kristil asked.“You seem worried." "I got some bad news yesterday,"I told her."But it is OK,honey.Please select your favorite Christmas tree!Let's take it home!"I didn't want my daughter to discover the fact that I was unemployed.She told me a few months ago that she wanted a Christmas tree. "Daddy,is it too expensive?"She pointed to a Christmas tree and said to me cautiously. “Absolutely not,”I told her..“Let's take it home!" I swiped my card ()and paid,quietly making up my mind to set off on my moneymaking pursuits. Over the next week,I crazily applied for jobs as my bank account grew smaller.However,there was no suitable position for me in this world.I felt as if the world was closing in on me. The day before Christmas,I dropped Kristil in a wealthy community for her friend's birthday party.I watched as she went in,surrounded by all the nice things that were expensive for me.When she was there,she looked so happy.At that moment,I even thought that she seemed to belong there,a fairy tale world decorated with extremely beautiful and carefully made desserts and beautiful decorations.I went back home defeatedly. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 After arriving home and seeing the Christmas tree,my heart sank to the bottom. After reading the card my daughter wrote,my eyes were filled with tears. 语篇解读 本文以人物为中心展开，主要讲述在圣诞节前两周，作者失业了，但是他早已经和女儿商量好要买一裸 圣诞树了。虽然钱不多了，但是作者并没有在女儿面前表现出来，而是照常买了女儿喜欢的圣诞树。后来 女儿去她有钱的朋友家给朋友过生日，作者觉得自己很失败。 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:My daughter and me. When:On a Friday evening in December,two weeks before Christmas. Where:In my home. What:Two weeks before Christmas,I lost my job. Why:There was no suitable position for me in this world.I felt as if the world was closing in on me. (2)Details: DOn a Friday evening in December,two weeks before Christmas,I lost my job. 12月的一个星期五晚上，也就是圣诞节前两周，我丢了工作。 本句为背景描写，特别强调了是圣诞节前夕我失去了工作，为下面事情的展开提供了线索。 2I did everything I could to give Kristil a good life,but there were some things my love couldn't fix. 我尽我所能给Kristil一个美好的生活，但有些事情我的爱无法解决。 Week10报道&家庭亲情类读后续写 本句为人物描写，运用了省略ht的两个定语从句、but引导的并列句来表达我目前的艰难处境。尽管有 爱，但经济拮据，表现了作者无东的心情。 3I felt as if the world was closing in on me. 我觉得好像整个世界都在向我关闭。 本句为心理描写，运用了sf引导的表语从句，有利地表达了当时作者绝望的心情。 4I watched as she went in,surrounded by all the nice things that were expensive for me. 我看着她走进去，周围都是对我来说很贵的好东西。 本句为动作和心理描写，运用了watched、went in,surrounded这一系列动词表现了父亲对女儿的关注和 爱，也运用了定语从句“that were expensive for me"体现了当时作者对自己没有能力给女儿最好的美好生 活的悲伤，这也为下面文章的续写提供了思路。 2.找线索 (I)根据第一段中的“Then I listened to my voicemail,‘We're sorry,but your work assignment has ended as of today.'My heart sank.”和第四段中的“Please select your favorite Christmas tree!”可知，作者失去了工 作后，心情很是沉重，尽管经济困难，但是还是给女儿挑选了她喜欢的圣诞树。这些相关的线索在续写第 一段中的细节中可呈现出。 (2)根据第三段中的“Is everything OK?'Kristil asked.·You seem worried..'”和第五段中“·Daddy,isit too expensive?'She pointed to a Christmas tree and said to me cautiously."可知，女儿非常关心爸爸，担心 购买的圣诞树太贵，这一切都说明女儿对爸爸的爱，这些相关的线索在续写第二段中的细节中可呈现出。 3.定思路 (1)由续写第一段开头语“回到家看到圣诞树后，我的心沉了下来。”及续写第二段开头语“看完女儿写的卡 片后，我热泪盈眶。”可知，第一段可描写作者觉得自己失业了而感到很伤心；并提到了圣诞卡片的出现。 (2)由续写第二段开头语“看完女儿写的卡片后，我热泪盈眶。”可知，第二段可描写作者看到女儿的卡片 之后的反应和改变。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 After arriving home and seeing the Christmas tree,my heart sank to the bottom.The tree stood there.decorated with beautiful lights. but i couldn't help but feel a sense of emptiness inside.How could l provide the joy and abundance that this season deserved for my daughter?The weight of unemployment pressed down on me,casting a shadow over the holiday spirit.However,as l looked at the tree. whose branches reached the ceiling.I suddenly saw a card hanging on the Christmas tree. After reading the card my daughter wrote,my eyes were filled with tears.She wrote."Daddy.I love you.The best gift is not the tree but you.No matter what difficulties you encounter.I believe you can always overcome them."In that moment.I realized that no matter what challenges that lay ahead,I would never give up,even though it was difficult.And I realized that the greatest gift l could give her was my unwavering support and devotion.Together,we would find a way to make our Christmas meaninaful and filled with warmth. 肩航英雷I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 ◆对接答案P225 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·安徽省蚌埠市蚌埠二中高二期末)Krone's interest in music began in middle school,and after repeated requests and a promise to study hard and get into the best high school,he got his parents to buy him a shabby old wooden guitar.He kept practicing,performing with others and composing his own songs.He loved music so much that he dropped out of college despite his parents'objections.After that,he participated in singing competitions and sent demos (to record companies,but they disappeared forever. Once,he got a chance to perform in front of a famous musician,but the musician told him directly that his voice and composition were not unique enough to make him a professional singer. His grandmother died,and his sister Mary repeatedly asked him to attend the funeral ()On the way home,Mary asked him about his plans for the future,and he began to feel that he was not confident enough to take up a career in music,and his father's poor health did not allow him to leave home again. After arriving home,Krone saw the thin and weak father,who argued a few words about his future,which made him feel that his father would not understand him.Later,his sister told him that,in fact,dad supported his free development,so Krone decided to talk to dad again.But when he walked back home and looked at his father through the window,he saw that his father had placed the family knives away,as if feeling sorry for not passing on the family business started by grandfather with the shop named"Fish Song".Krone felt guilty and sad. Should he inherit the family business,or find a way to develop the fish business? Next morning,Mary shook Krone out of his sleep and told him that father fainted in the market.The doctor thought that father should take a few more days off,but he didn't agree.He really didn't want to close the shop. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Krone offered to help,which surprised everyone.especially father. It was time for Krone to make up the decision. 112 Week10报道&家庭亲情类读后续写 Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 ◆对接答案P225 第一节◆应用文写作 (2024·江苏省南京金陵中学高二期末)假定你是李华，上周你们学校组织学生们参观了动物关爱中 心，请你给校英文报写一篇文章，报道这次活动。内容包括：1.活动目的：2.活动内容：3.个人感受。 注意1，写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear editor, 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·广东省佛山市佛山一中高二期末)Shoveling(铲)the snow had always been the best part about winter.Not that I thought it was fun,but my dad's reaction to a clean driveway kept me going.He hated shoveling snow more than anything.So,I took it upon myself at eight years old to do it for him.Every time I saw snow fall from the sky,I knew the universe was ready to put me to work. I would run and put on my jacket,snow boots to prepare myself for the work ahead.But every single time, before I went outside,I would stop by my older sister's room to see if she wanted to help me.I knew she would say no,but I always asked anyway. One day there was a lot of snow,and there was no way I would be able to clean it all up myself.It was getting dark,and I hated the thought of my dad having to shovel the snow after a long day of work.So I did the routine and knocked on my sister's door.As I expected,she gave me the same old "no".Annoyed,I asked again.Without saying anything further,she got up,pushed me out of the room and slammed (the door in my face. 713 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 I stood there silently for a second.Then,I turned around,went out of the house,and set out in the cold to tackle the enemy that lay in my driveway.But I couldn't calm down.I was really angry that she would leave me to battle this alone.All I wanted was some help.The more I remembered every "no"she had ever said to me, the angrier I became. I fought tirelessly,my short arms swinging from side to side while the wind cut against my cheeks.After one long hour,I was not even halfway done.Looking at the victorious snow,I thought of Dad's disappointment. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Feeling bitter and desperate,I couldn't stop my tears. My sister and I went outside. 7ng启川 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 第二节 Step Three 句式表达 [语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一只叫“独眼” 1.完成句子 的流浪狗一直跟着街头表演者Danny,其他人以为他们是主 (1)Last Thursday our Senior Two held the activity of Elegant 人和宠物的关系,而Danny为此感到很苦恼,不想“独眼”跟 Art into Campus 着他。Danny一心想着如何摆脱这只狗,却没有注意他的脚 (2) The activity was intended to make elegant art more 步,他掉进了湖里,极度恐慌。 accessible. [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容”就在这时,远处传 (3) We invited a group of local professional artists here. 来熟悉的狗叫声。“可知,第一段可描写“独眼”如何救Danny。 (4) Butterfly Lovers, a great combination of Chinese and ②由续写第二段首句内容“我的英雄!谢谢你救了我。'丹 Western musical elements. was superbly played in the school 尼含泪感激地说。”可知,第二段可描写Danny被“独眼”救起 hall. 后他们之间关系的改变。 (5)Then eame a lecture which was centered on basic [范文] knowledge of the universal language-music Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance. In Q (6) It was evident that the activity was well organized and was highly spoken of. split second. a splash of brown. out of breath (7)It enriched our school life quicklu jumped into the lake. It was One-Eued! It (8) It also enabled us to have more exposure to elegant art barked. swimming toward Donng with allits might. 2. 句式升级 On spotting One-Eued. Dannu seemed to see a rou (1) Last Thursday our Grade Two held the activity of Elegant Art into Campus, which was intended to make elegant art of hope. attempting to move towards it instantlu more accessible. lnstinctivelu. Dannu qrabbed the tail of One-Eued (2)A group of local professional artists were invited here Ultimatelu, theu mangged to climb ashore, exhausted. (3) In the school hall. Butterfly Lovers, a great combination Gazing at One-Eued in disbelief Dannu patted it of Chinese and Western musical elements, was superbly played. tenderlu in return. One-Eued was no longer (4)Then came a lecture centered on basic knowledge of the troublesome: instead. it became a"hero" in his universal language-music. heart. (5) It was evident that the activity was well organized and was "My hero! Thank you for saving me," Danny said gratefully highly spoken of, because it not only enriched our school life with watery eyes." You're mu brave guardian angel!" but also enabled us to have more exposure to elegant art. Since that niaht, "One-Eued" was nonexistent while StepFour 连句成篇 "Hero". as the dog wos re-named, became o part Elegant Art into Campus Last Thursdau our Senior two held the activit of Dannu's performance. So attached were theu to of Eleaant Art into Campus. which was intended to each other that theu became genuine partners. make eleaant art more accessible. Dannu would include his pet as he enqaged the A group of local professional artists were invited qudience. Hero also had its own place to lie on-the here. ln the school hall, Butterfly Lovers, a great feet of Danng. While Danng plaued the guitar, Hero combination of Chinese and Western musical elements would bark happilu to harmonize with his owner. wos superblu plaued. Then came a lecture centered on What a perfect match basic knowledqe of the universal lanquaqe-music 高分亮点 lt wos evident thot the activitu was well 高分词汇:①instinctively adv.本能地,凭直觉地 orqanized and was hiahlu spoken of. because it not ②ultimately adv.最终,最后,根本上 ③climb ashore 爬上 onlu enriched our school life but also enabled us to 岸 ④exhausted adj.筋疲力尽的 nonexistent adj.不存 have more exposure to eleqant art. 在的 re-name改名 Wednesday 高分句型:(句型1)So attached were they to each other that 报道写作跟踪训练 they became genuine partners.(so位于句首引起的部分例 跟踪训练1 装句) [范文] (句型2) While Danny played the guitar, Hero would bark With the development of science and technologu happily to harmonize with his owner.(由 while 引导的时间 状语从句) there appear an increasing number of social medig apps. Lost week, our school held an activity called Week 10 报道&:家庭亲情类读后续写 "sociol medig detox." aiming to make the students raising their awarness of making a wise use of socia [Monday 如何写好报道 medig oStep Two 词汇运用 To begin with, a lecture about the potentiol 1. intend 2. accessible 3. professional artist 4. combination damages of social medig was delivered by a 5. musical element 6. superbly 7. universal 8. evident professor. after which the students have a heated 9. be highly spoken of 10. exposure discussion about how to take control of screen time 答案全解全析 Additionallu, under the quidance of teachers, the [Saturday 读后续写话题训练 students created some dramas to appeal to teenogers to use sociol medig properlu. arousing qregt reaction. [语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述喜欢音乐的 Krone为了追求自已的梦想,不顾家长反对而放弃了上大学。 The activitu was well received. from which all 他希望通过个人不断的努力来实现自己的梦想,结果却接连 the students benefited greatlu. 碰壁。在参加完祖母的葬礼之后,他见到了虚弱却一直在强 高分亮点 撑着的父亲,父亲的身体状况让他陷入了进退两难的地 ②potential 高分词汇:①make a wise use of. 明智利用 步--是继续追求个人的梦想,还是回家继承家族的店铺? damages潜在危害 ③ additionally 此外 ④ under the 病概上父新的话让他找到了答案。 guidance of 在.....指导下 appeal to呼吁 [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句“Krone主动提出帮忙,这 高分句型:(句型1) Our school held an activity called... 让每个人都感到惊讶,尤其是父亲。”可知,第一段可写父亲听 aimingto...(运用了非谓语动词) 到Krone主动提出帮忙时的反应、Krone的态度及父亲的支持 (句型2) To begin with, a lecture..., after which...(运用 和鼓励。②由续写第二段首句“Krone是时候做出决定了。” 了非限制性定语从句) 可知,第二段可写Krone的决定以及他的心理活动及行动。 o跟踪训练2 [范文] [范文] Krone offered to help, which surprised everyone, especially The Beauty of Chinese Calligraphy father." So, giving up your music dream?" asked A colliaraphu exhibition, whose theme wos father."I just want to help out for a few daus." “The Beautu of Chinese Calligraphg". wos held by Krone answered. Father looked at his son intentlu the students' union last Sundou. which attractedand continued."Don't think too much obout me. Go many cligraphu lovers. including teachers andfight one more time. and if you lose. it doesn't students. matter. At least uou left uour footprints. Don't come The exhibition featured a wide range of works back until ou've done that." Hand pressing chest. from famous people toaether with their backaround father smiled in o weok but firm voice information. Visitors had a good taste of the It was time for Krone to make up the decision. Bock in traditional art of handwriting that has developed the room, Krone immediatelu beqan to pock. He put everuthing in the room in good order. It wos time to over manu centuries and has been widelu practiced in Ching, Oyer fiftu works of our students were glso get reodu for the challenge."l don't think this room will ever be used again. It can be given to mu on displau. sister." Krone said to himself Stepping out of the The cuitural feast was hiahlu reaarded. Some house, Krone looked back at the fomilu. With his students interviewed said theu not onlu gppreciated father's words echoing in his heart. Krone turned the beautu of Chinese characters. but also had a around and left."It doesn't matter if you lose the better understanding of its hidden meanings as well battle. At least uou left uour footprints." as writer's inner world 高分亮点 高分亮点 高分词汇:①intentlyadv.专心地,一心一意地 ②footprint 高分词汇:①themen.主题;(音乐的)主旋律 n.脚印,足迹③echov.回响,发出回声 ④tur around 转 ②background n.出身背景 ③handwriting n.手写;书写 身 at least至少 ④be on display 在展出 cultural feast 文化盛宴 高分句型:(句型1) Krone offered to help,which surprised interviewv.面谈;采访 character n.文字:字体 everyone,especially father.(使用了which引导的非限制性 高分句型:(句型D)Visitors had a good taste of the traditiona 定语从句) art of handwriting that has developed over many centuries and (句型 2) Hand pressing chest, father smiled in a weak but has been widely practiced in China.(运用了 that 引导的定语 firm voice.(使用了独立主格结构) 从句) (句型3) Stepping out of the house, Krone looked back at the (句型2) Some students interviewed said they not only family.(使用了现在分词短语作状语) appreciated the beauty of Chinese characters, but also had a Sunday better understanding of its hidden meanings as well as writer's 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 inner world.(运用了省略that的宾语从句) 第一节 Tnurscay 新作文基本功提高微技能10 [范文] Dear cditor, [跟踪练习] I am writing to tell uou about the activitu our 1. Words fail me 2. Jealousy drives/drove 3. His slowness lost him 4. seized me 5. astonished all of us 6. an idea school held last week. We went to the Animal Care struck me 7. scared me 8. brought them 9. escaped him Center located in the mountains 10. made me 11. reminded me of 12. robbed her of The activity aims to improve the students' 13. caused her awareness of wildlife protection. On arriving. we 22F 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 attended a lecture qiven bu an expert on rare happiness that he felt on top of the world. That was animals and their habitats. Next. we watched a short the beautu of companionship. And from the bright video about the endanaered animals. What attracted smile blooming on mu sister's face. I could tell that me most was the visit to the pando research center. she felt the same. Arm in arm. we walked inside as where I sow several newlu-born baby pandas. They darkness fell, waiting for father to come home were so cutel 一高分凛点 All of us found the activitu educational. inspiring 高分词汇:①uncontrollably adv.控制不住地 and hiqhlu rewarding ②dissatisfaction n.不满,不悦 ③accusation n.控告,指责 W/ith best regards ④sincerityn.真诚,真挚witnessn.目击,目睹,见证 离分亮点 eompanionshipn.情谊,友谊 高分句型:(句型1)Before I realized it, I was sobbing inmy 高分词汇:①be located in位于.... ②awareness n.认识. sister's room, with bullets of words firing through my mouth. 意识③habitatn.(动植物的)生活环境,栖息地 expressing my long-buried dissatisfaction towards her absence ④endangered adj.(动植物)危的 inspiring adj.鼓舞人 from my snow shoveling experiences.(before 引导的时间状 心的,有激励作用的 高分句型:(句型1)What attracted me most was the visit to 语从句,expressing现在分词作状语) (句型 2) However, deep inside me was a brother, who was the panda research center, where I saw several newly-born so overcome with happiness that he felt on top of the world. babypandas.(运用了what引导的主语从句,同时用where (who和that引导的定语从句) 引导了非限制性定语从句) (句型 2) All of us found the activity educational, inspiring Week11 人物介绍&生活故事类读后续写 and highly rewarding.(运用了三个形容词educational, inspiring and highly rewarding 作found的宾语补足语) orday 如何写好人物介绍 第二节 oStep Two 词汇运用 [语篇解读] 文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者的爸爸不 1. national hero 2. devote oneself to 3. rice output 4. suffer 喜欢铲雪,于是作者自已担负起这项工作。每次下雪,他都会 from 5. starvation 6. strive for 7. well-being of mankind 主动为爸爸铲需。有一次下了很大的雪,他一个人不可能在 8. perseverance 9. indifference 10. personal fame and fortune 爸爸下班之前完成,于是寻求姐姐的帮助,但是被拒绝了。作 者不知疲倦地战斗着,却还没有完成一半,他感到很生气,也StepThree 句式表达 11.virtue 因为想到爸爸在工作了一天之后还要去铲雪感到失望。 1.完成句子 [段落续写] ①由续写第一段首句内容“我感到痛苦和绝 (1)We all know. 望,无法停止我的眼泪。”可知,第一段可描写作者因为难过去 (2) Most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts. 姐姐房间哭泣,表达自己对她不帮自己铲雪的不满的过程 (3) For me, Yuan Longping is actually my national hero. ②由续写第二段首句内容“我姐姐和我出去了。”可知,第二段 可描写姐弟俩携手铲雪的过程和作者内心的感受。 (4)Dr. Yuan devoted himself to doing research on the rice output: [范文] (5)He was very young. Feeling bitter and desperate, I couldn't stop my tears. Mu (6) With the development of new rice, gone are the days. inner anger wos like a growing monster, uncontrolloblu (7) Chinese people suffered from terrible starvation in those driving me to the edae of madness. Before I realized days. it. / was sobbing in mu sister's room. with bullets of (8)More countries of the world are able to grow more rice. words firing through mu mouth, expressing mu long (9)These countries will feed the growing world population. buried dissatisfaction towards her absence from mu (10) We should learn from him the spirit of striving for the well-being of mankind. snow shoveling experiences. The house seemed to (11) His perseverance, indifference to personal fame and be holding its breath when / stopped mu accusation. fortune, his devotion to research work and profound insight still weeping. " Please don't cru. Everu teardrop of are also great virtues. uours is a reminder of how selfish I was. /'m sorru. (12)We should follow! Would ou give me another chance to go shoveling 2.句式升级 with ou?" said mu sister with gentleness and (1) As we all know. most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts. sinceritu in her voice. (2) Dr. Yuan has devoted himself to doing research on the rice My sister and I went outside. More than half of the output since he was very young. drivewau was still blanketed in white but I wasn't (3) With the development of new rice, gone are the days alone in this bottle anu more. Everu shovel of snow when Chinese people suffered from terible starvation. was a witness to the energu and excitement in me (4)More countries of the world are able to grow more rice to Bu the time we finished. my back was aching feed the growing world population. (5) His perseverance, indifference to personal fame and muscles sore, and bodu exhausted. However. deep fortune. his devotion to research work and profound insight inside me was a brother. who was so overcome with are also great virtues that we should follow! 226