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Week 9
征文投稿&关爱动物类读后续写
Monday
如何写好征文投稿
◆对接答案P222
总体阐述事件、问题或现象
征文投稿类文章一般都是就某个特定主题进行描写
和论述,以记叙文和议论文为多。
布局谋篇
具体论述或描写相关情况
表达愿望、得出结论、体会或呼吁
典题示例
(2024·浙江省金华市实验中学高二期中)为庆祝创刊50周年,你校英文报以“The Power of Reading”
为题举办征文活动。请你以此为题写一篇征文稿。内容包括:1.阅读的意义;2.介绍一本你喜欢的书;3.你
喜欢的理由。
注意1.写作词数应为80个左右:2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
The Power of Reading
思路点拨
O Step One
审题谋篇
体裁
议论文
时态
一般现在时为主
主题
以“The Power of Reading”为题征文投稿
人称
第三人称为主
结构
第一段:总体阐述:第二段:具体论述:第三段:自己学习新技能的体验和感受
O Step Two
词汇运用
1.必不可少的,非常重要的
7.以…为背景
2.探讨,探究
8.永恒的杰作
3.想象力,想象
9.种族主义和不公正
4.娱乐,娱乐表演
10.有意义的
5.开阔眼界
11.精通
6.经典小说
OStep Three
句式表达
1.完成句子
(1)阅读是我们生活中必不可少的一部分。
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(2)它使我们能够探索新的世界,获得知识,并发展我们的想象力。
(3)读书是一种娱乐。
(4)阅读也是一种扩大我们思想和开阔我们视野的手段。
(5)我特别喜欢一本书。
(6)这本书是哈珀·李的《杀死一只知更鸟》。
(7)这部经典小说以20世纪30年代的美国南方为背景。
(8)这本书讲述了一个小女孩的成长和她父亲与种族主义和不公正作斗争的故事。
(9)我喜欢这本书。
(10)它是一部永恒的杰作,至今仍有意义。
(11)让我们为快乐而读书,为精通而读书,为智慧而读书!
2.句式升级
(1)用which引导定语从句的用法合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。
(2)用not only.,.but also句式合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。
(3)用hat引导定语从句的用法合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。
(4)用现在分词作状语的用法合并上题中的句子(7)和句子(8)。
(5)用同位语的手法合并上题中的句子(9)和句子(10)。
Step Four
连句成篇
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征文投稿满分词汇句式&模板晨诵
晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式
常用词汇
topic n.话题
theme n.主题
depress v.使抻郁
refresh v.使精神抖擞
adversity n.困境,逆境
awareness n.意识,了解
take action采取行动
put into practical use付诸实践
be competent in在…有能力
independence n,独立,自主
practical ability实践能力
toughness m.韧性,坚韧
inevitably adv.可避免地,必然地
be optimistic about对于…感到乐观
environmental protection环境保护
attach even greater importance to更加重t视
essential ad山.基本的,必不可少的,根本的
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6.To solve the problem,I asked my parents for help,
话题句式
and they offered some practical advice.为了解决这
引出话题先声夺人
个问题,我向父母寻求帮助,他们提出了一些切实
1.When it comes to ocean,its pollution is becoming
可行的建议。
more and more serious.说到海洋,它的污染越来越
首尾结合余音回味
严重。
7.To change the habit,I am supposed to put more
2.At present our city is carrying out a campaign,the
emphasis on something more meaningful such as
content of which is that anyone who is riding an
reading and taking exercise,which are not only
electric bike must wear a helmet.目前我市正在开
beneficial to my mental and physical health but also
展一项活动,活动内容是骑电动自行车的人必须
can help me get rid of my bad habit.为了改变这个
习惯,我应该把更多的精力放在一些更有意义的
戴头盔。
事情上,比如读书和锻炼,这些不仅有利于我的身
3.As a famous saying goes,"Life is not a bed of roses.
心健康,而且可以帮助我改掉坏习惯。
正如一句名言所说,“生活不是一张玫瑰的床。”
8.My appeal is that all our students riding electric
主题部分娓娓道来
bikes should wear helmets for the safety of
4.Moreover,as is known to all,setting too much time
themselves and other people.我的呼吁是,为了自
aside just for watching TV is a waste of time.而且,
己和他人的安全,我们所有骑电动自行车的学生
众所周知,为看电视而留出太多时间是浪费时间。
都应该戴头盔。
5.The purpose of the campaign is to mitigate the 9.As long as people can work together,we will leave
consequence of such a traffic accident and reduce the
behind a wonderful planet for future generations.
death rate in an accident..这项运动的目的是减轻这
要人们一起努力,我们就会为子孙后代留下一个
类交通事故的后果,降低事故中的死亡率。
美好的星球。
晨诵2◆背满分模板
My First Try
When it comes to the topic of"My First Try",my first attempt at adapting
模板中黑体字部
a novel I had read before for an English play is unforgettable.
As a member of English Theater Club,I volunteered to be responsible for the
分是征文投稿时可以
script to be played in the approaching English Drama Festival.Consequently,I took
通用的部分,其他部分
advantage of the Winter Vacation to prepare for the adaptation.The most challenging
可以根据写作要求灵
but rewarding part was to overcome the language barriers.Fortunately,with nearly
活处理。
two weeks'effort,the lines were not only beautifully uttered but also easily
文章一般是一殷
过去时,人称以第一人
understood.
It was not until I made the first try of adaptation that I realized language is
称为主。
never a helpful tool unless you put it into practical use.
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Wednesday
征文投稿写作跟踪训练
◆对接答案P222
跟踪训练1◆征文投稿
(2024·河北省秦皇岛市第五中学高二期末)为培养学生的独立生活能力,你校英语俱乐部举办“我是
生活小能手”征文活动,请你写一篇文章,介绍你拿手的生活技能。内容包括:1.具体的一项生活技能:
2.你在生活中获得的体验。
注意1,写作词数应为80个左右:2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
I am competent in
跟踪训练2◆征文投稿
(2024·福建省宁德市实验中学高二期中)你校英语俱乐部举行英语征文比赛,请以“How to Decide
on Possible Future Careers”为题,写-一篇短文参赛。内容包括:l.职业选择的重要性;2.如何选择。
注意1.写作词数应为80个左右:2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
How to Decide on Possible Future Careers
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Thursday
新作文基本功提高微技能9
◆对接答案P223
运用名词性从句提升应用文写作表达
名词性从句是重要的语法项目之一,也是写作中常用的高级表达之一。它包括主语从句、宾语从句、表
语从句和同位语从句。
一、名词性从句的连接词
了解并正确使用连接词是写好名词性从句的关键。引导名词性从句的连接词的分类、词义和用法见
下表:
类别
词义
在从句中的作用
连接词:that
无任何意义
仅起连接作用,不作成分
连接词:whether,.if
是否
起连接作用,不作成分
连接代词:what,which,who,whom,whose,
起连接作用,并在从句中充当主
有各自含义
whatever,whoever,whomever,whichever
语、表语、宾语、定语
连接副词:how,when,why,where,however,
有各自含义
起连接作用,并在从句中作状语
whenever,wherever
[名师指津]
表语从句还可由asif,as though,how,because等词引导。
I have bought a robot who looks as if he were a real person..我买了一个看起来像真人的机器人o
This is how I am thinking about the picture.我就是这样看待这幅画的。
I know that it is because I don't spend much time memorizing them after class.我知道是因为我在课后没
有花大量时间记忆它们。
二、名词性从句的写法
和定语从句一样,名词性从句也是学生在写作中喜欢尝试的复杂句,在写作时同样可采用“三步法”:
第一步:写出两个简单句。
第二步:让一个简单句作从句,要注意和另一个句子的关联性。
第三步:把两个句子合成复合句,要特别注意关联词的选择和从句的语序。
[示例们
第一步:写出两个简单句。
DHe said a lot at the meeting.
2His words were very attractive.
第二步:让句①作主语从句,可转换为“他在会上所说的话”,即what he said at the meeting。
第三步:把句①转换的主语从句和句②连在一起。
What he said at the meeting were very attractive.
三、ⅱ作形式主语或形式宾语的高级句型
1.作形式主语的常用句型
(I)It+系动词+形容词(necessary/right/likely./unlikely/wrong/important/certain等)+that..
(2)t+be+名词(短语)(a pity/.a shame/.no wonder/,one's desire等)+that..
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(3)t+be+过去分i词(said/told/reported/.decided等)+that..
(4)t+特殊动词(seems,appears,.happens,matters)+hat.,
(5)It doesn't matter who/whether/if...
It's our desire that you should provide some money to fund our program,as well as offer us some practical
suggestions..我们渴望你能为我们的项目提供一些资金,还能提供一些实用的建议。
2.t作形式宾语的常用句型
(I)动词ind,fcel,think,consider,make,believe,guess,suppose,assume等后有宾语补足语时,则需要
用t作形式宾语,而将宾语后置。
(2)有些动词(短语)带宾语从句时,需要在宾语从句前加it,这类动词(短语)主要有:hate,like,owe,
have,appreciate,see to等。
I would appreciate it if you could take my applicatin into consideration.如果您能考虑我的申请我会感激
不尽。
跟踪练习
I,完成句子
1.我为自己在爸爸不在家时的表现感到自豪。
2.我在想你是否能够到机场去接他。
3.据报道,大约30名至少18岁的志愿者将从世界各地被选出来于2025年前奔赴火星。
4.如果你们能以每个10美元的价格卖这些中国结,我将不胜感激。
Ⅱ.请按以下内容要点写一篇有关Ady的英语微写作,尽可能多地使用名词性从句。
1.大家都知道Ady是位有名的作家,但没有人知道她来自何处,而且她是否出生于1961年仍然是个谜。
2.大家对她了解的是穷人都喜欢她,因为她总是帮助那些急需钱的人。
3.Ady很憾慨而且乐于助人,但有些人认为她想出名。
4.Ady说她不明白为什么他们那么心胸狭窄,但别人怎么想对她无所谓,她只是想做自己认为正确的事。
5.我认为那就是生命意义之所在。
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读后续写示例指导9
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·福建省泉州市第三中学高二期末)Danny's grandfather loved to keep pigeons,and Goldie was
one of them.Goldie had golden eyes,which was very rare in pigeons.Grandfather said he had never had a
pigeon like her.
Goldie was a champion racing pigeon and had won loads of cups.But once,around the time Goldie was
released two hundred miles away for a race,Danny's grandfather was hospitalized with a heart attack.The
responsibility of waiting for Goldie and taking care of the other pigeons then fell on Danny.
However,Goldie did not fly back on time as usual.In order not to upset his grandfather,while visiting him
that night with his parents,Danny lied that Goldie had already returned and won the first place."I knew it,"
said Danny's grandfather,settling back on his pillows,"I always knew she was a winner.She's one in a
million."Grandfather believed the lie.
Sometimes grandfather's racing pigeons got lost due to bad weather or got attacked by falcons and
never came back home,but those had never happened to Goldie.She always came home,right on time."Goldie
must have been eaten by those falcons nesting in the quarry on her way back home,Danny thought
to himself bitterly and his chest was burning.Danny swore to himself to take revenge."They are a threat,those
falcons!I must get rid of them and pull down their nest.
It only took Danny five minutes to reach the quarry.Danny looked around the quarry walls and found their
nest on a steepest side,which was a long way up.He climbed fast-there were old tree roots to grab hold of.His
hands were bleeding.But he didn't feel the pain.He was hanging on the rock wall with his finger-tips like a
starfish.His arms were so weak and trembling,but he was finally there.
注意1,续写词数应为150个左右:2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
Just as he reached out his hand to destroy the falcons'nest,he suddenly saw the baby-falcons in it.
Halfway down,he saw Goldie in a hole on the rock.wing-broken but still alive.
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语篇解读
本文为记叙文,属于“人与自然”主题语境下的“人与动物和谐共处”主题群。本文讲述了Dany的谷
爷养了很多鸽子,其中Goldie是最好的一只。一天爷爷生病住院了,照顾鸽子的责任落在了Danny身上,
但是Danny发现Goldie没有回来,以为它被猎鹰杀死了。Danny决定摧毁猎鹰的巢穴帮Goldie报仇,但是
当他看到巢中的小猎鹰时,他放弃了复仇,却发现了受伤的Goldie,最后救下了Goldie。
「写作步骤
1.读文本
(1)Elements:
Who:Danny,Danny's grandfather,pigeon Goldie and the baby-falcons.
When:Goldie did not fly back on time as usual and Danny's grandfather was in hospital.
Where:The quarry.
What:Goldie was a champion racing pigeon and had won loads of cups.However,Goldie did not fly back on
time as usual.
Why:They are a threat,those falcons!I must get rid of them and pull down their nest.
(2)Details:
DGoldie had golden eyes,which was very rare in pigeons.
Goldie有着金黄色的眼睛,这在鸽子中非常罕见。
本句为动物的外貌描写,运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句表达Goldie的与众不同。
2In order not to upset his grandfather,while visiting him that night with his parents,Danny lied that Goldie
had already returned and won the first place.
为了不让他的祖父难过,那天晚上当他和父母去看望祖父时,Danny说谎说Goldie已经回来并赢得了第
一名。
本句为人物描写,运用了不定式短语作目的状语,时间状语从句的省略,ht引导的宾语从句来表达出主
人公Danny是一个善解人意的善良的孩子。
3"Goldie must have been eaten by those falcons nesting in the quarry on her way back home,"Danny
thought to himself bitterly and his chest was burning.
“Goldie一定是在回家的路上被那些在采石场筑巢的猎鹰吃掉了。”Danny痛苦地想,他的胸膛在燃烧。
本句为心理描写,运用了情态动词的完成时的用法,现在分词作后置定语,ad前后为并列句等表达形象
地描写了Danny当时的悲愤欲绝,怒发冲冠的心情。
Danny looked around the quarry walls and found their nest on a steepest side,which was a long way up.
Dany环顾采石场的墙壁,发现它们的巢在最陡峭的一侧,还有一段很长的路。
本句为环境描写,运用了两个并列的谓语动词,wih引导的非限制性定语从句来表达巢所在地方的危
险性。
5He was hanging on the rock wall with his finger-tips like a starfish.
他像海星一样悬挂在岩墙上。
本句为动作描写,运用了with的复合结构来表达Dany动作的敏捷。
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2.找线索
(I)根据第三段中的“In order not to upset his grandfather,while visiting him that night with his parents,
Danny lied that Goldie had already returned and won the first place."和第五段中的“His hands were
bleeding.But he didn't feel the pain.”可知,Danny是一个非常善解人意的孩子,同时由于认为Goldie遭遇
不幸,急于为其复仇,在续写的第一段中可呈现出这些。
(2)根据第二段中的“Goldie was a champion racing pigeon and had won loads of cups.”和第四段中的
"Sometimes grandfather's racing pigeons got lost due to bad weather or got attacked by falcons()and
never came back home,but those had never happened to Goldie.”可知,Goldie经验丰富,生存能力极强,遇
险的概率极低,因此生存的机会较大,在续写的第二段中可呈现出这些。最后表现出和谐的自然,无论是
Goldie还是那些猎鹰,都不要受到伤害,以凸显人与自然的和谐主题。
3.定思路
(I)由第一段续写首句"Just as he reached out his hand to destroy the falcons'nest,he suddenly saw the
baby-falcons in it."可知,第一段可描写Danny看到小猎鹰而触动了他内心的善良,从而放弃复仇,保护
了那些小猎鹰们。
(2)由第二段续写首句“Halfway down,he saw Goldie in a hole on the rock,wing-broken but still alive..”可
知,第二段可描写Danny如何救下Goldie,并庆幸自己没有冲动复仇,同时结合前面对爷爷的善意谎言,
可知爷爷也健康出院,见到了心爱的Goldie。
4.形成文
根据以上提示整理出答案:
高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文
Just as he reached out his hand to destroy the falcons'nest,he
suddenly saw the baby-falcons in it.He suddenly remembered Goldie
when she was little,fluffy and helpless.The feeling of anger vanished
like water running down a drain,and the feeling of revenge was
thrown out of the window.Danny realized that if he destroyed the
falcons'nest.the young falcons would fall to the ground.Only death
awaited them.But Danny,who was not a bad boy by nature,did not
do so.Without harming the young,helpless falcon,he continued to
climb over the top of the hill.
Halfway down,he saw Goldie in a hole on the rock,wing-broken
but still alive.The moment he caught sight of the scene,Danny's face
lit up with delight.Without hesitation.Danny carefully lifted Goldie out
and rushed him to the hospital as quickly as he could.Luckily,with
Danny's care.Goldie's injury was cured and Grandpa returned home.
Danny was fortunate not to be carried away by anger and did
something he regretted.The adventure would be deeply rooted in his
mind.
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Saturday
读后续写话题训练
◆对接答案P223
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·山东省临䜣市实验中学高二月考)One morning,my family and I woke up and went to eat
breakfast-until we heard barking and scratching at the door.When my mom opened the door,we saw a puppy
()We looked around to see if we saw its owner,but there was no one.We took it inside and fed it.
Regardless of how badly I wanted to keep the puppy,we decided to look for the owner.We looked all day,
but we failed.We talked about whether we should keep looking or if we should look the next day.We all agreed
to look for its owner the next day.
So,the next day my family and I looked for the dog's owner.It was so hard looking for its owner.We were
looking for flyers (that involved the puppy,but no luck.We wouldn't have quit because it's a puppy.
"We won't stop looking,"my mom and dad said.We were going to take care of the puppy until we found
its owner.
When we woke up in the morning,we went to a pet shop to buy the puppy some dog food.After that we
went back home to feed the puppy the dog food that we had just bought.After we fed the puppy,we gave it a
nice bath.It was so dirty that the fur was black and sticky,but after we gave it a bath,it turned white.And I
noticed there was a collar(狗项圈)on him,which said“Coby”.After we gave him a bath,we went to look
for the puppy's owner,but my mom stayed at home,and it was only my dad and me this time.
We continued looking more and more until we found flyers.We looked at one of them.
It said:"Lost Dog:Please Help if Found."Then we looked at the picture;it looked exactly like Coby.We
were all happy we found a flyer that was for Cody.
注意1.续写词数应为150个左右:2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
There was a phone number on the flyer.
We found the lady's house,and then we knocked on the door.
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and concentrated on her singing.Her loud and Step Four连句成篇
beautiful voice of singing moved all the people.They
The Power of Reading
all cheered for her,including those who had laughed
Reading is an essential part of our lives,which
at her.Her mother and Lucy were delighted to see
allows us to explore new worlds,gain knowledge.
the timid girl had become a brave one.So,don't be
and develop our imagination.Reading is not only a
beaten by a failure easily.As long as you work hard,
source of entertainment but also a means to expand
you will succeed one day.
our minds and broaden our horizons.
One book that I particularly enjoy is "To Kill a
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Mockingbird"by Harper Lee.This classic novel is set
高分词汇:①Oconfident adj.自信的②clap v.鼓学
③hesitation.犹豫:不情愿④ignore.忽视
in the 1930s American South,telling the story of a
⑤concentrate on专注于⑥timid ad.羞怯的,胆小的
young girl's growth and her father's battle against
高分句型:(句型1)When the neighbors passed by,they
racism and injustice.I love this book,a timeless
encouraged her.(由when引导的时间状语从句)
masterpiece that is still relevant today.
(2)Months later,she was confident enough to sing in
Let's read for pleasure.for proficiency and for
the park.where many people were singing and dancing.
wisdom!
where引导的菲张制性定语从句)
(3)Emily felt pleased that she could sing confidently in
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征文投稿写作跟踪训练
front of strangers.(由ht引导的宾语从句)》
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Week 9
征文投稿&关爱动物类读后续写
[范文]
I am competent in cooking various delicious food.In
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如何写好征文投稿
our daily life,cooking by ourselves is an essential life
skill,which will benefit us greatly.
O Step Two词汇运用
In my life,whenever my parents drag themselves
I.essential 2.explore 3.imagination 4.entertainment
5.broaden horizon 6.classic novel 7.set in
tired from work,I will prepare a sumptuous dinner
8.timeless masterpiece 9.racism and injustice
for them and welcome them back.At the same time,
10.relevant 11.proficiency
in the process of cooking.not only can I hone the
Step Three句式表达
quality of independence,but also I can exercise my
L,完成句子
practical ability.More importantly,it can make me
(1)Reading is an essential part of our lives.
clearly understand and experience the toughness of
(2)It allows us to explore new worlds,gain knowledge.and
others.
develop our imagination.
There is no doubt that the ability to cook is
(3)Reading is a source of entertainment.
(4)Reading is also a means to expand our minds and broaden
extremely important.
our horizons.
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(5)I particularly enjoy one book.
高分词汇:①essential ad山.基本的:必不可少的:根本的
(6)The book is To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee.
②delicious a山.美味的:美妙的③sumptuous ac.豪华的:
(7)This classic novel is set in the 1930s American South.
奢侈的④independence n,独立:自主
⑤practical ability
(8)The book tells the story of a young girl's growth and her
实践能力⑥toughness.切性:坚韧
father's battle against racism and injustice.
高分句型:(句型I)In our daily life,cooking by oursel小ves is
(9)I love this book.
an essential life skill,which will benefit us greatly..(运用了
10)It is a timeless masterpiece that is still relevant today.
which引导的定语从句)
(11)Let's read for pleasure,for proficiency and for wisdom!
(2)At the same time,in the process of cooking,not
2.句式升级
only can I hone the quality of independence,but also I can
(1)Reading is an essential part of our lives.which allows us
exercise my practical ability.(运用了部分倒装)
to explore new worlds,gain knowledge,and develop our
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imagination.
[范文]
(2)Reading is not only a source of entertainment but also a
How to Decide on Possible Future Careers
means to expand our minds and broaden our horizons.
As we know,a suitable career is to a person
(3)One book that I particularly enjoy is To Kill a what water is to fish.However,it may not always be
Mockingbird"by Harper Lee.
easy to choose a proper one.Here are some tips on
(4)This classic novel is set in the 1930s American South,
telling the story of a young girl's growth and her father's battle
how to decide on possible future careers.
against racism and injustice.
To begin with,it's necessary to take some time
(5)I love this book,a timeless masterpiece that is still
to really think through the things you are interested
relevant today.
in and good at.Besides,focus on your own ambitions,
答案全解全析
rather than societal expectations,which means you asked whether she was the one who put out the
should let go of other people's expectations of you flyers.She said "Yes!"with excitement and told us
and think about what you truly want to do.
Coby,who was very dear to her.had been gone
All in all,choosing a career path should be a
days before.Then we told her that we had her
personal decision based on a thorough knowledge of puppy and we would take him to her.She told us
your own strengths,weaknesses,interests,and values.
her address at once;then we took Coby to head for
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its owner's house.
高分词汇:①suitable adj.合适的②o begin with首先
We found the lady's house,and then we knocked on the
③ambition n.抱负④societal adi.社会的⑤be based on
以…为基础⑥thorough ac域彻底的,全面的
door.A lady opened the door,and when she saw the
高分句型:(句型I)As we know,a suitable career is to a
puppy,she screamed with joy.We handed her the
person what water is to fish..(运用了as引导的非限制性定
puppy,feeling relieved and proud.She wanted to
语从句以及“A is to B what C is to D”句型,表类比)
give us a reward for taking care of her puppy.but
(2)Besides.focus on your own ambitions,rather than
we said it was OK because we were really happy to
societal expectations,which means you should let go of other
people's expectations of you and think about what you truly
help.So we went home,tired but content,telling my
want to do.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,what
mom the whole thing.Since then,my family have
引导的宾语从句)
been friends with the lady.and it's Coby that
Thursday
新作文基本功提高微技能9
bridged our friendship.
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[跟踪练习]
I.1.I took pride in what I had done in the absence of my
高分词汇:①put out散发②excitement n,令人激动(或兴
father.
奋)的事:激动:兴奋3 scream.(因伤痛,害怕、激动等)
2.I am wondering whether you can pick him up at the
尖叫④reward n.奖励:回报:报偿⑤take care of照料
airport.
高分句型:(句型I)My dad asked whether she was the one
3.It's reported that about 30 volunteers who are at least 18
who put out the flyers.(由who引导的定语从句)
years old will be chosen from all over the world to be sent
2)Since then,my family have been friends with the
to the Mars by the year of 2025
lady,ndit's Coby that bridged our friendship.(强调句式)
4.I would appreciate it if you could sell the knots for 10
dollars each.
Sunday
应用文写作/读后续写提分训练
II.Everyone knows that Andy is a famous writer,but no one
Q第一节
knows where she comes from and whether she was bom in 1961
[范文]
is still a mystery.What they do know was that she is loved by
The athlete I admire most
poor people because she always helps whoever is in need of
money.Andy is generous and helpful,but some people think she
Su Bingtian,the track and field athlete I admire
is chasing fame.Andy said she didn't understand why they were
most,was born in 1989 in Zhongshan.He is an
so narrow-minded.but it doesn't matter what others will think of
experienced athlete who competes in the sprints.
her.She just wants to do what she thinks is right
In 2021,Su Bingtian sprinted to secure a place
I think that is where the meaning of life lies
in the 100 m men's final at the Olympic Games in
Saturday读后续写话题训练
Tokyo.He has become the first Chinese and only
[语篇解读]本文以小狗为线索展开,讲述了作者一家人在
Asian runner to compete in the final round of the
一天早上,在自家的门口发现了一只没有主人的小狗。全家
event since 1932.I admire him,because he overcame
情心照质小狗,并开始寻找它的主人。作者注意到它身上有
all the difficulties and became a legend with his
个项图,上面写着“科比”。作若和爸爸继续找,直到看到寻狗
的传单。他们看了看,上面写着:“走失的狗:找到请帮忙。”然
amazing skills and perseverance.
后他们看了看照片,它看起来和科比一模一样。他们都很高
His spirit will push me to work hard to achieve
兴看到了找科比的传单。
my goal
[段落续写】①由续写第一段首句内容“传单上有个电话号
码。”可知,第一段可描写作者和爸爸给狗的主人打了电话,他
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们要把狗送还给主人。主人立刻把她的地址告诉了他们,然
高分词汇:①athlete n.运动员②experienced adj.熟练的,
后他们一起去送狗。②由续写第二段首句内容“我们找到了
有经验的
3 overcome,.克服④legend n.传说,传奇人
那位女士的家,然后蔽了薇门。”可知,第二段可描写作者将狗
物⑤perseverance n.毅力,不屈不挠的精神
还给了主人,女主人想感谢作者他们以及作者家人和这位女
高分句型:(句型I)He is an experienced athlete who competes
土成了朋友
in the sprints..(运用了who引导的定语从句)
[范文]
2)I admire him,because he overcame all the
There was a phone number on the flyer.My dad called it
difficulties and became a legend with his amazing skills and
and someone answered;it was a lady.My dad
perseverance.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
启英语Ⅲ高二英语应用文写作+读后续写
0第二节
Step Three
句式表达
[语篇解读】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一只叫“独眼“
1.完成句子
的流浪狗一直跟着街头表演者Danny,其他人以为他们是主
(1)Last Thursday our Senior Two held the activity of Elegant
人和宠物的关系,而Danny为此感到很苦恼,不想“独眼”跟
Art into Campus
着他。Danny一心想着如何摆脱这只狗,却没有注意他的脚
(2)The activity was intended to make elegant art more
步,他掉进了湖里,极度恐慌。
accessible.
[段落续写】①由续写第一段首句内容“就在这时,远处传
(3)We invited a group of local professional artists here.
来熟悉的狗叫声。”可知,第一段可描写“独眼”如何救Danny。
(4)Butterfly Lovers.a great combination of Chinese and
②由续写第二段首句内容“‘我的英雄!谢谢你救了我.'丹
Wester musical elements.was superbly played in the school
尼含泪感澈地说。”可知,第二段可描写Dany被“独眼”救起
hall.
后他们之间关系的改变。
(5)Then came a lecture which was centered on basic
[范文]
knowledge of the universal language-music.
(6)It was evident that the activity was well organized and was
Just then,a familiar barking was heard in the distance.In a
highly spoken of.
split second,a splash of brown,out of breath,
(7)It enriched our school life.
quickly jumped into the lake.It was One-Eyed!It
(8)It also enabled us to have more exposure to elegant art.
barked,swimming toward Danny with all its might.
2.句式升级
On spotting One-Eyed,Danny seemed to see a ray
(1)Last Thursday our Grade Two held the activity of Elegant
Art into Campus,which was intended to make elegant art
of hope,attempting to move towards it instantly.
more accessible.
Instinctively.Danny grabbed the tail of One-Eyed.
(2)A group of local professional artists were invited here.
Ultimately,they managed to climb ashore,exhausted.
(3)In the school hall.Butterfly Lovers.a great combination
Gazing at One-Eyed in disbelief,Danny patted it
of Chinese and Westem musical elements,was superbly
played.
tenderly in return.One-Eyed was no longer
(4)Then came a lecture centered on basic knowledge of the
troublesome:instead,it became a "hero"in his
universal language-music.
heart.
(5)It was evident that the activity was well organized and was
"My hero!Thank you for saving me,"Danny said gratefully
highly spoken of,because it not only enriched our school life
with watery eyes."You're my brave guardian angel!"
but also enabled us to have more exposure to elegant art.
Since that night,"One-Eyed"was nonexistent while
Step Four连句成篇
Elegant Art into Campus
"Hero",as the dog was re-named,became a part
Last Thursday our Senior two held the activity
of Danny's performance.So attached were they to
of Elegant Art into Campus,which was intended to
each other that they became genuine partners.
make elegant art more accessible.
Danny would include his pet as he engaged the
A group of local professional artists were invited
audience.Hero also had its own place to lie on-the here.In the school hall,Butterfly Lovers,a great
feet of Danny.While Danny played the guitar,Hero
combination of Chinese and Western musical elements,
would bark happily to harmonize with his owner.
was superbly played.Then came a lecture centered on
What a perfect match!
basic knowledge of the universal language-music.
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It was evident that the activity was well
高分词汇:①instinctively ad.本能地,凭直觉地
organized and was highly spoken of,because it not
②ultimately ad,最终,最后,根本上③climb ashore爬上
only enriched our school life but also enabled us to
岸④exhausted adi.筋庋力尽的
⑤nonexistent adj.不存
have more exposure to elegant art.
在的⑥e-name改名
高分句型:(句型I)So attached were they to each other that
Wednesday报道写作跟踪训练
they became genuine partners.(so位于句首引起的分倒
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装句)
[范文]
(2)While Danny played the guitar,Hero would bark
With the development of science and technology.
happily to harmonize with his owner..(由while引导的时间
there appear an increasing number of social media
状语从句)
apps.Last week,our school held an activity called
Week 10
报道&家庭亲情类读后续写
"social media detox,"aiming to make the students
raising their awarness of making a wise use of social
Monday
如何写好报道
media.
Step Two词汇运用
To begin with.a lecture about the potential
1.intend 2.accessible 3.professional artist 4.combination
damages of social media was delivered by a
5.musical element 6.superbly 7.universal
8.evident
professor,after which the students have a heated
9.be highly spoken of 10.exposure
discussion about how to take control of screen time.
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