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Week 8 告知信&我的童年类读后续写 Monday 如何写好告知信 ◆对接答案P219 告知信多是从个人角度出发，将对方想要了解的事情告诉 介绍信息来源点明告知内容 对方，让对方知道。告知的内容涉及广泛：如传统文化类、计划 具体介绍告知的内容 安排类、课外活动类招聘广告类、个人近况类、地点建筑类等。 局谋篇 表达愿意进一步提供信息 典题示例 (2024·新课标I卷)假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chis写 封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：1.你完成的作品：2.你的感想。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Chris, I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 记叙文 时态 ~般过去时 主题 活动介绍 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题：第二段：具体活动和体验：第三段：感想总结 Step Two 词汇运用 1.使留下深刻印象 6.令人耳目一新的：使人精神振作的 2.激励：赋子灵感，激发（想法） 7.创造力，独创性 3.极好的，美的 8.繁忙和喧露 4.围绕，环绕 9.接触，联系 5.盛开的鲜花 10.珍惜 O Step Three 句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我们的任务是画一些东西。 (2)有些东西会给我们留下最深的印象。 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (3)奇妙的景色给了我灵感。 (4)我决定创作一幅水彩画，画的是公园池塘上的小桥。 (5)桥的四周开满了花。 (6)整个体验让人耳目一新。 (7)被大自然包围激发了我的创造力。 (8)被大自然包围也让我从繁忙的学校生活中得到了急需的休息。 (9)我正在画画。 (10)我感到一种深深的平静。 (11)总之，这不仅仅是一堂美术课：这是我与大自然亲密接触的时刻。 (12)我真的很珍惜这一切。 2.句式升级 (1)用hat引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 (2)用过去分词作状语，用过去分词作定语合并上题中的句子(3)、句子(4)和句子(5)。 (3)用not only..but also.,结构合并上题中的句子(7)和句子(8)。 (4)用s引导的时间状语从句合并上题中的句子(9)和句子(10)。 (5)用hat引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(11)和句子(2)。 Step Four连句成篇 82 Week 8 告知信&我的童年类读后续写 Tuesday 告知信满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 be interested in对…感兴趣 shae..with与…分享 detail n.细节 introduce v.介绍 take a great fancy很喜欢 delighted ad.高兴的 relevant information相关信息 traditional festivals传统节日 celebrate.庆祝 ultimate goal最终目标 experience n.体验 helpful adj.有用的 a piece of good news一个好消息 be supposed to do sth.应该做某事 coming-of-age ceremony成人t礼 unforgettable experience难忘的经历 话题句式 7.The Spring Festival,one of the most traditional festivals in China,falls on the first day of the first 引出话题先声夺人 lunar month and lasts fifteen days..春节是中国最传 1.I feel delighted that you are so interested in the 统的节日之一，在农历的第一个月的第一天到来， speech contest,so I'm writing to give you a brief 持续十五天。 introduction of it.我很高兴你对这次演讲比赛感兴 8.During the coming-of-age ceremony,the headmaster 趣，所以我写信向你简要介绍一下它的情况。 congratulated us on stepping into the adulthood, 2.I feel greatly honoured to be asked to contact you. reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. informing you of our arrangements.我感到很荣幸 在成人仪式上，校长祝贺我们步入成年，回顾了我 受委托与你联系，告知你我们的安排。 们所经历的成长时期。 3.I would like to inform you of some details about the 首尾结合余音回味 next class.我想告诉你关于下一节课的一些细节。 9.If you have any other questions,please let me know. 4.Here is a piece of good news!/I have a piece of I'm looking forward to your coming.如果您有任何其 good news to tell you!这里有一个好消息！/我有 他问题，请让我知道。我期待您的到来。 一个好消息要告诉你！ 主题部分娓娓道来 10.Do you think you'd like so?If not,I can try and 5.The match will take place in our school gym on the find another place for you.Just let me know.你认 为你会喜欢吗？如果不喜欢的话，我可以尝试给 afternoon of July 4th and we will play against the 你另找地方。只是得让我知道。 team from Hongxing High School..比赛将在7月4 日下午在我们学校体育馆举行，我们将与红星高 11.If there is anything I can do for you,I would be 中的球队比赛。 more than glad to help..如果有什么我能为你做 6.On July 20,we are going to learn poems of the 的，我会非常乐意帮助。 Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the 12.You will have an unforgettable experience if you come lecture hall.7月20日，我们将在演讲厅学习你感 to celebrate the Spring Festival with us！如果你来和 兴趣的唐诗。 我们一起过春节，你将会有一个难忘的经历！ 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Dear David, 模板中黑体字部 I feel delighted that you are interested in the second-hand book fair held by 分是描写告知信时可 us last Wednesday.I'd love to share some details with you. 以通用的部分，其他部 It aimed to enrich students'after-school life and arouse their enthusiasm for 分可以根据写作要求 reading.Each class exhibited on the school yard the second-hand books they 灵活处理。 collected and sold them at the price they set in advance. 第一、二段往往是 I will be delighted it if my introduction is beneficial to you.If you want to 一般现在时，第三段主 know more about it,don't hesitate to contact me. 要是一般将来时。 Yours, 文章人称以第三 Li Hua 人称为主。 83 肩航英雷I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Wednesday 告知信写作跟踪训练 ◆对接答案P220 跟踪训练1◆告知信 (2024·浙江省湖州中学高二期中)假定你是李华，你刚从为期五天的去英国的旅游回来，感谢好友 Rk的款待。得知他对中国的文化非常感兴趣，特别是即将到来的春节，请你写一封信介绍中国的春节。 内容要点：1.感谢他的招待：2.介绍中国的春节（时间、风俗等）：3.欢迎他来中国。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Rick, How is everything going? Best wishes！ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 跟踪训练2◆告知信 (2024·广东省深圳外国语学校高二月考)假定你是李华，你市新建成的主题公园将于下月对外开放， 请你给新西兰朋友Tm写一封邮件，向他介绍此公园。内容包括：L.写信目的：2.公园的主题：3.主题公园 的意义。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Tim, Yours, Li Hua 84 Week 8 告知信&我的童年类读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能8 借助案例巧妙设计读后续写情节 如何选择或创设情节内容？情节源于生活，但不是对事实真实完整的记录。出于刻画人物性格和凸显 文章主题的需要，小说作者会选择或“创造”一系列事件，从自己的思想感情倾向出发，对它们进行整理、提 炼和重组，形成有逻辑关系的结果。在某种程度上，情节指的是整个故事的框架结构，作者根据写作的实际 需要决定人物出场顺序的先后、，信息选择的取舍、叙述的方式和详略。情节是对故事的整体构思，作者需要 决定哪些内容要说，哪些不说：哪些内容多说，哪些少说：哪些内容先说，哪些后说。 要从英语小说阅读层面看高考读后续写的情节设计。Feelings and Thinking:好的文学从智力和情感两 个方面满足读者。1.阅读时我在想什么？2.我感受到什么？这是两个active reader随时要做的灵魂拷问。 Effects:作品中哪些文字产生了什么效果，让我产生了这样的感受和想法？Techniques:作者用了哪些技巧 手法营造了这些效果？ [教学案例1] 阅读下面三句话，然后判断哪两句话是情节，并简述原因。 第一句：The king died and then the queen died,. 第二句：The king died,and then the queen died of grief, The queen died.No one knew why,until it was discovered that it was from grief at the death of the king. 解读：第一句是故事，国王死了，不久王后也死了，这只是按时间顺序放在一起的两个事件。除了在时 间上有先后之外，这两者之间没有任何逻辑关联，就像客观的报道一样。从小说鉴赏的角度去分析，整句话 本身没有什么意义。 第二句话是情节，强调的是因果关系，突出的不是时间上的先后，而是因果关系，句中暗含作者对这两 个事件内在关系的主观解释，使整句话有了一丝感情色彩。 第三句话也是情节，且在情节设计上更胜一筹：不仅有因果关系和感情色彩，而且设置了悬念，更能引 发读者的好奇心。 由此可见，情节是按照因果逻辑组织起来的一系列事件。当我们对小说内容好奇时，会关注接下来的 故事内容，不停询问“然后呢？”。但是，我们在了解内容之后，好奇心依旧不会得到满足，会继续追问“为 什么？” [教学案例2] 据报道，2024年5月，某市动物园有三只金钱豹(1 eopard)逃逸，搜救队先后追捕回两只。第一只安然 无恙，第二只爪子略受小伤：但第三只金钱豹仍然下落不明。请根据所给信息，发挥想象，使之构成一个结 构完整的故事。 第一篇学生作文： Three leopards escaped from the zoo.However,the zoo kept it secret.Villagers living nearby spotted large, cat-like animals and reported them to the authorities.The local government took the report seriously and took effective measures.Immediately search teams were sent out,and the official search effort has so far involved thousands of people. 85 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Several days later,two of the leopards were recovered.One was in good health,and the other required minor surgery for an injury to its paw.However,the third one was still at large.A hunt for the third leopard was under way among hills covered by forest,after fresh paw prints were found. The zoo has been closed while local authorities investigate.It remains unclear how the leopards escaped.In a statement,the zoo said it was sincerely sorry for not alerting people sooner,adding:"We were worried that the announcement of the incident would cause panic." 解读：在这篇作文中，作者只是按照时间顺序叙述整个事件的过程，没有对信息材料进行提炼、重组和 再创造，没有作者的情感倾向，没有性格鲜明的人物，更没有统一指向的主题思想。因此，这篇作文算不上 是有情节的短文，更像一则有一说一的新闻报道。 第二篇学生作文： Three leopards escaped from the zoo.It felt good to be free.Lily sniffed the air of freedom;Lucy wandered happily in the forest;Jack was chasing a rabbit.The outside world seemed fascinating. However,when darkness fell,the forest became frightening and cold.They were starving.To make things worse,Lily's paw was hurt by a sharp thorn.She wept bitterly,complaining that nobody brought meals to feed them."If only I had learned skills to hunt in the wild,"Lucy muttered.The two leopards began to miss the comfortable zoo.But Jack was lost in thought. Just then,they heard dogs barking and people yelling.That must be the rescue team."Maybe we are too young to explore the world."Lily murmured. Finally,the three leopards went their separate ways.Lily and Lucy chose to go back to the comfortable zoo,but Jack preferred to live in the wild because he understood that freedom comes at a price. 解读：这篇作文对原材料进行了筛选、重组和再创造，采用拟人化的写法，成功塑造了三只性格鲜明的 金钱豹的形象：由于无聊难耐，三只金钱豹从动物园逃脱，然而Lily和Lu©y受不了野外生存的困苦，重回 衣食无忧的动物园，而Jack愿意为自由付出代价 第一段中的三个动作描写sniffed the air of freedom,wandered happily和chasing a rabbit很有代表性，生 动形象地描绘出三只金钱豹获得自由、初次走进大自然时那种欢欣雀跃的场面。 在第二段中，金钱豹饥寒交追，Ly的爪子被刺伤，这是合情合理的想象，是对原材料的合理重组和再 创造，因为圈养动物不具备在野外生存的能力。 这篇作文的环境描写可圈可点。第一段的最后一句与第二段中的首句形成鲜明对比，同样是外面的世 界（同一个树林），在不同时候给人带来的感受却截然相反：刚获得自由时，它是令人着迷的自由王国，而在 天黑之后却显得阴森恐怖。这种用环境描写烘托人物心情的写法比较高明。 最后一段的情节设计更加巧妙，三只金钱豹的性格不一样，导致最后分道扬镳，做出不同的选择：有的 选择重回舒适的动物园，有的选择逍遥自在的野外生活。本段最后一句借用Jck之口点明文章的主题： Freedom comes at a price. 由此可见，这篇作文的情节不只具有机械的因果关系，还包含人对变化的环境做出的种种反应，探索人 的动机形成的逻辑，所以说，情节就是行动中的人物。 86 Week8告知信&我的童年类读后续写 Friday 读后续写示例指导8 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·黑龙江省哈尔滨市第二中学高二期末)“Never give up！Never give up!”chanted(吟唱)my two young children,Max and Charley,as they marched barefoot behind their grandmother Mimi.My mom Mimi was leading Max and Charley on another adventure,straight off the beach where they'd spent the day building sand castles and playing in the waves.This time,they were seeking an ice-cream truck. Over the years,Mimi had become our family's tower of positivity.It wasn't a title she earned without effort,however.Having been a single mother at only forty years old and left to raise me and my ten-year-old brother alone,she faced countless challenges.She had been the one who had to make the decision to remove our dad from life support fourteen days after he was in a car accident. My mom could have lived under a black cloud.Instead,she challenged herself to find joy every day.She was always up for a new challenge,whether that was hiking across the high mountaintop in Austria to get a better view of the breathtaking beauty or signing up for tap-dancing classes at fifty.Leading by example.Mom taught us just how much one could accomplish with a positive attitude. She has taken the same approach in her relationship with her grandchildren.Before starting her adventure with Max and Charley on that hot July afternoon,Mimi heard the familiar clang()of the ice-cream man's bell from her beach chair.She turned and saw him briefly,spotting his shining green shirt and catching the gleam (of his waving bell before he turned and disappeared.Happily,the ice-cream man's visit was a daily occurrence on the beach,although the time between the sound of his bell and the departure of his truck wasn't long.One must be quick to catch him. Max and Charley fell into a world full of sadness and disappointment when they didn't catch him in time that day.Mimi smiled and said,"Never give up!"She explained that the truck might be gone,but they could hurry off to find it at its next stop. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 They walked block after block. Just two blocks later,they found it. ⊙ 肩航英雷I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 语篇解读 本文是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自我”主题语境下的“做人与做事”主题群。文章讲述了奶奶Mimi带着 Max和Charley开始了一场超棒的追冰激凌车的有趣的经历，他们追了很久都没有追到，Max和Charley想 放弃，但是奶奶一直告诉他们“永不放弃”的故事。 「写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Max and Charley and grandmother Mimi. When:My mom Mimi was leading Max and Charley on another adventure. Where:Off the beach and blocks. What:My mom Mimi was leading Max and Charley on another adventure,straight off the beach where they'd spent the day building sand castles and playing in the waves.This time,they were seeking an ice-cream truck. Why:She explained that the truck might be gone,but they could hurry off to find it at its next stop. (2)Details: DMy mom Mimi was leading Max and Charley on another adventure,straight off the beach where they'd spent the day building sand castles and playing in the waves. 我妈妈Mimi带着Max和Charley正在进行又一次冒险，直接从他们花了一天时间玩沙堡、玩海浪的海滩 出发。 本句为环境描写，运用了where引导的定语从句，在定语从句中用spend time...doing sth,句式来表达我 们一家在这次探险中的环境状况。 2Having been a single mother at only forty years old and left to raise me and my ten-year-old brother alone, she faced countless challenges. 成为一个单身母亲独自抚养我和10岁的弟弟时她只有40岁，她面临着无数的挑战。 本句为人物描写，运用了现在分词的完成式，不定式作目的状语来表达单身母亲的艰辛生活和坚强意志。 3She turned and saw him briefly,spotting his shining green shirt and catching the gleam (of his waving bell before he turned and disappeared. 她转过身，看了他一眼，看到了他那件闪亮的绿衬衫，也看到了他挥动的铃铛发出的微光，然后他就转身 消失了。 本句为动作描写，运用了现在分词作结果状语，before引导的时间状语从句来表达母亲看到那个卖冰激 凌的人当时的情景。 4Max and Charley fell into a world full of sadness and disappointment when they didn't catch him in time that day. 那天Max和Charley没能及时追上他，他们陷入了悲伤和失望之中。 本句为心理描写，运用了when引导的时间状语从句，表达了Max和Charley因为没有追到那个卖冰激凌 的人的失望之情。 5She explained that the truck might be gone,but they could hurry off to find it at its next stop. 她解释说，卡车可能已经走了，但他们可以赶紧追，在下一站找到它。 本句为细节描写，运用了but引导的并列句，that引导的宾语从句，不定式作目的状语来表达奶奶Mimi 对两个孩子那种永不放弃的敦敦教诲。 Week8告知信&我的童年类读后续写 2.找线索 (I)根据第一段中的“‘Never give up!Never give up!'chanted(吟唱)my two young children,Max and Charley,as they marched barefoot behind their grandmother Mimi.”和第五段中的“Mimi smiled and said, ·Never give up!’”可知，奶奶Mimi是一个永不放弃的人，即使在和孩子们寻找卖冰激凌的车子时，也秉 持这种精神，在续写的第一段中可呈现出这些。 (2)根据第三段中的“Leading by example,Mom taught us just how much one could accomplish with a positive attitude."和第五段中的“She explained that the truck might be gone,but they could hurry off to find it at its next stop.”可知，奶奶Mimi一直坚信一个人用积极的态度可以取得更大的成就，只要去寻找，就 一定能找到那个卡车，一切皆有可能。在续写的第二段中可呈现出这些，来突出主题。 3.定思路 (I)由续写第一段首句“They walked block after block.”可知，第一段可描写祖孙三人寻找冰激凌车的过 程和她们三人的对话，彼此互相鼓励，坚持寻找车子。 (2)由续写第二段首句“Just two blocks later,they found it,.”可知，第二段可描写他们找到冰激凌车后发 生的事，以及“永不放弃”这个口号给他们带来的影响。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案， 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 They walked block after block.Not knowing which direction the truck had taken.theu had to make their best quess about where to search.The kids'tiny legs were tired,but they went on,continuing the chant."Never give up!Never give up!"After about twenty minutes of walking.Max's faith started to get shaken in the burning sun.Mimi bent over and patted him gently on the shoulder.Smiling.she comforted the boy."Max,remember:winners never quit,and quitters never win”“Yeah!Never give up!'”Charley agreed.Max looked up. thought for a while and jumped to his feet."You are right.Let's hurry!"And so they marched on. Just two blocks later,they found it.The ice-cream truck was parked just around the corner.shining brilliantly in the sunlight.as if waiting to reward the three adventurers with a most generous treat for their patience and determination."Finally!"Max cried at this sight. throwing a fist in the air.while Charley screamed with excitement. They laughed,cheered,and chanted in chorus."Never give up!"As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way. anything is possible-there's no end to where our dreams can take us. 89 肩航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 ◆对接答案P220 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·江西省上饶市第二中学高二期中)“I'm sorry,Lisa,but Debbie and I are going to move back into the house.You're going to have to find another place to live." I couldn't believe what Neil,my landlord ()was telling me on that warm April night.I had tears in my eyes,and so did he.I had lived in his Staten Island house for more than twelve years. Neil had never raised my rent,which was $750 a month,very cheap for New York City.This was a big comfort when I was laid off from my newspaper job and couldn't find any work for two years.He promised me that I would always have a home,even if I had a hard time paying the rent.But now,I was going to have to find a new apartment and pay more. Although he gave me six months to find a new place,I was still astonished and worried.So I called Jon, my best friend,to complain about my bad experience.But Jon surprised and annoyed me. "Look on the bright side."he said."Maybe you will find a place you like better.Do you remember you complained all the time about the crowded bus to and from the house?Why don't you find a place where you don't have to take that bus?" “How can you say that?"I shouted at him.“This is way out of my comfort zone！” "Come on,Lisa.Did it ever occur to you that change could be good?"Jon said. “No！”I screamed and hung up on him. I felt upset for the next few days about our argument.But what if Jon was right?Why did I assume that every change would be bad?Maybe my life needed to be shaken up. That summer,as I started looking for apartments,I began to think about new possibilities.Maybe I could find an apartment with better furniture. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Finally.that October.I spotted the apartment of my dreams in a new home in a nice neighborhood. As time went on,I found myself doing more things out of my comfort zone and feeling more positive about life. 90答案全解全析 高分句型:(句型 1)He took my phone number and said he'd 第二段首句内容“这对夫妇没有注意到有什么不同,他们在依 call as soon as he could to arrange the transfer.(运用了 as 照平时的训练调整了路线。”可知,第二段可描写这对盲人夫 soonas引导的时间状语从句) 妇并没有发现有什么异常,他们调整步伐,继续用手杖指引 (句型 2)I bid farewell to him without any real idea whether 成功地走到了马路对面。作者发现他们一直都是手牵手,停 I'd ever see the man or the money again.(运用了 whether 引 在路边的其他司机也都松了一口气。结尾总结,生活忙碌,也 导的同位语从句) 要停下脚步,发现被忽略的美景。 (句型3) As I drove the final miles to my own house in [范文] Every car in every direction did the same thing. Theu London. I felt happier thinking about Brendan. (运用 了 as 引 导的时间状语从句) stopped at the same time. Everuthing seemed to [Sunday freeze. Amazed. I looked at the cars around me, and 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 noticed that everuone's attention wos fixed on the 第一节 blind couple while no one got mad and none was [范文] Dear Alex. shouting and uelling. They just wgited patiently How are you doing? I'm writing to express mucouple. It appeared that all the drivers understood without sounding the horn, afraid of scaring the sincere appreciation to jou for recommending me 2what the couple went through. the English movie Never noticing something different. the couple adjusted The recommended movie, which is suitable for their route as they followed the coaching. Trusting their an English learner like me. hos brought me manywhite wglking stick. theu finglly made it. As they unexpected benefits. Having finished watching it. 1went across the road. one thing struck me-theu have acquired more practical and commonly used were still arm-in-orm. I was surprised at the expressions, which contributes g lot to mu spoken 1emotionless expressions on their foces and judqed English. Besides. the idea the movie conveus is so that they hod no idea what was realy going on inspiring for me that I have regarded it as the around them. Yet I immediately sensed the sights of wisdom to quide me in mu life relief of all the other drivers at that busu crossroads Please accept mu thanks once oggin. I regly So, taking a moment to see what is going on around hope uou can recommend me more excellent English :uou right now mau award uou something wonderful movies. Yours 一高分亮点 高分词汇:①freezev.突然停止;定格②yellv.叫喊 Li Hug ③patiently ad.耐心地 ④emotionless adj.没有情感的;不 高分亮点 露情感的 reliefn.宽慰;轻松 erossroadn.十字路 高分词汇:①appreciationn.感谢,感激 ②recommendv.建 口,交又路 议;劝告;推荐 ③acquire v.获得④practical adj.实用的. 高分句型:(句型1)It appeared that all the drivers understood 实际的 contributeto有助于:促成 what the couple went through.(运用了 it作形式主语和what 高分句型:(句型1)The recommended movie,which is 引导的宾语从句) suitable for an English learner like me, has brought me many (句型 2)So, taking a moment to see what is going on around unexpectedbenefits.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语 you right now may award you something wonderful.(运用 了 从句) 动名词短语作主语) (句型 2) Having finished watching it, I have acquired more practical and commonly used expressions, which contributes a Week8 告知信&我的童年类读后续写 lot tomyspokenEnglish.(运用了非谓语动词作状语和 Moday which引导的非限制性定语从句) 如何写好告知信 第二节 Step Two 词汇运用 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者是一个一 [语篇解读] 1. impress 2. inspire 3. fantastic 4. surround 直忙于工作的人,开车经过一个十分繁忙的十字路口时,停在 5. blooming flowers 6. refreshing 7. creativity 路口等红绿灯。此时人行道上一对年轻的盲人夫妇抱着小 8. hustle and bustle 9. connection 10. cherish 孩,仅靠手中的手杖要走到马路对面。本以为大家会冲他们 StepThree 句式表达 鸣喇吼,大声喊叫,结果所有车牺都同时安静地停下为他们让 1.完成句子 路。通过此事作者意识到,忙碌生活中有时也要停下脚步,细 (1) We were tasked to draw or paint something 心观察身边,可能会发现之前被忽略的美景。 (2) Something would impressed us most. [段落续写] ①由续写第一段首句内容“每个方向的每辆车 (3)I have been inspired by the fantastic scenery. 都做着同样的事情。”可知,第一段可描写一对盲人夫妇过马 (4)I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small 路时各个方向的车同时停下了,就像时间静止一样。作者本 bridge over the park's pond. 以为只有自己注意到他们是盲人,结果当他环顾时,每个人都 (5) The bridge was surrounded by blooming flowers 注意到了。大家都没有生气,没有出声,耐心等待。②由续写(6)The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. 219 启语 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 (7) Being surrounded by nature sparked my creativity Welcome to Ching. You will hove an unforgettable (8) Being surrounded by nature offered a much-needed break experience if you come to celebrate the Spring from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. too. (9)I was painting. Festivol with us! (10)I felt a deep sense of peace Best wishes! (11) In a word. it was not just an art class: it was a moment Yours sincerely, of connection with nature. Li Hua (12)I truly cherished all of this 高分亮点 2.句式升级 高分词汇:①hospitalityn.股勤好客;招待 ②take a grea (1) We were tasked to draw or paint something that would fancy很喜欢 ③red lantern红灯笼 impress us most. 高分句型:(句型1)Next, let me tell you what Chinese (2) Inspired by the fantastic scenery. I decided to create a people often do during the Spring Festival, which falls on the watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond. first day of the first lunar month an lasts fifteen days.(运用了 surrounded by blooming flowers what引导的宾语从句和which引导的定语从句) (3) Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity (句型2) You will have an unforgettable experience if you but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle come to celebrate the Spring Festival with us!(运用了 if 引 and bustle of school life 导的条件状语从句) (4)I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted (5) In a word. it was not just an art class: it was a moment of 跟踪训练2 connection with nature that I truly cherished [范文] oStepFour 连句成篇 Dear Tim. Deor Chris. A newlu-built theme park will be open to the 'm writing to share with uou an art class I had public next month. I guess uou are interested in it. so in a park last Fridau. I'm writing to offer uou some information about it We were tasked to draw or paint something The theme of the pork is famous architecture that would impress us most. lnspired bu the fantastic around the world, which includes the Great Woll sceneru. I decided to create a watercolor painting of Eiffel Tower and Puramid and so on. Aithough theu the smgll bridge over the park's pond. surrounded are small in size, it offers precious chonces to those . blooming bu 1 flowers. The entire experience wos who are curious to hove a knowledge of them and incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded bu nature 3 who are not able to pau a visit to them in person. 1 not only sparked mu creativitu but also offered a definitely believe paging a visit to it will broaden our much-needed breok from the usugl huste and bustlehorizon. of school life. I felt a deep sense of peoce as I painted if uou want to know more about it. I will tell ln a word. it was not just an art class: it wos a fuou next time moment of connection with nature that I trulu cherished Yours. Yours. Li Hua LiHug -高分亮点 Wednesdlay 告知信写作跟踪训练 高分词汇:①newly-builtadj.新建的 ②theme park 主题公 跟踪l练1 园 ③architecture n.建筑设计;建筑风格 ④precious adj 宝贵的,珍贵的 [范文] broadenv.增长(经验、知识等),变宽, Dear Rick, 变阔 horizonn.地平线;眼界 How is everything going? I would like to express mg 高分句型:(句型1) The theme of the park is famous architecture around the world. which includes the Great Wall. Eiffel gratitude for uour hospitalitu and kindness when 1 Tower and Pyramid and so on.(运用了which 引导的非限制 wos in London and tell uou something about the 性定语从句) Spring Festivgl. (句型 2) Although they are small in size, it offers precious First, words fail to express mu thankfulness for chances to those who are curious to have a knowledge of them uour compang. which made me feel at home when and who are not able to pay a visit to them in person.(运用了 visiting London. Next. let me tell uou what Chinese 让步状语从句以及who引导的定语从句) people often do during the Spring Festivol. which Saturday 读后续写话题训练 folls on the first dou of the first lunar month and lasts fifteen daus. During the Spring Festivol. people [语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了在房东告知作 use red lantern and Spring Festival couplets to 者他们要搬回自己的房子,所以作者不得不搬出去的时候,作 者感到很难过。因为她在这里住了十二年,朋友安慰作者会 decorate their house, put on all kinds of colored 找到一个更喜欢的地方,但是作者认为这超出了她的舒服区。 clothes. And we often visit friends and relatives or 之后,作者认为朋友也许是对的,她的生活需要改变。于是, together enjou the grand Spring Festival gala 作者开始寻找新公寓。 220 答案全解全析 [段落续写] ①由续写第一段首句内容“终于,那年十月,我 took place onthat dau. I benefitedalot from the 在一个不错的社区找到了我梦寐以求的公寓。”可知,第一段 activities. which enriched my knowledge about 可描写作者的新公寓。②由续写第二段首句内容“随着时间 traditional culture and helped me develop o good 的推移,我发现自己越来越多地跳出自己的舒适区,对生活感 到更加积极向上。”可知,第二段可描写作者走出舒适区的例 readinghabit. 子以及所带来的好处。 I hope we can share our reading experience [范文] some dau. Looking forward to our reply Finally. that October. I spotted the apartment of my dreams Yours. in a new home in a nice neighborhood. The ploce had g Li Hua stainless-steel refriqerator and a microwave oven. lt 高分亮点 also had central air-conditioning. What's more, the 高分词汇:①a series of一系列 ②be intended to 目的是 new place was close to the train and the express ③awarenessn.认识,意识④diverse adj.不同的,各式各样 bus. Thus, although the apartment wos a little 的 enrichv.使充实,使丰富 expensive, I decided to move in. It took me a few 高分句型:(句型1)Based on the theme of the Reading Day一 Reading Chinese Classics and Inheriting Chinese Culture, all weeks to aet the ploce fullu in order. but I remember the activities are intended to raise our awareness of traditional how proud and happu I was to show my new house Chinese culture.(运用了非谓语动词作状语) to mu friend. Jon. one Saturdau night when he came (句型2)I benefited a lot from the activities, which enriched over for dinner. my knowledge about traditional culture and helped me develop As time went on. I found myself doing more things out of agood reading habit.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语 my comfort zone and feeling more positive about life. / storted 从句) to gddress being overweight. I ran regulorlu. whicho第二节 [语篇解读] helped me lose eightu pounds. I also started to get 1 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Emily唱歌很 out of mu comfort zone professionallu. As change 好听,但缺乏勇气,她从来不敢在陌生人面前唱歌。有一年夏 天,她住的那个街区举办了一场歌唱比赛。她最好的朋友 upon change built up in my life. I felt like I was d 7 Lucy来邀请她参加比赛,但Emily不敢参加。她妈妈鼓励她 different person. Mu life hod improved in so mang 勇敢地去做。Emily听从了妈妈的建议,参加了比赛。但比赛 waus, and it all started when I moved out of mu old 当天,她太胆小了,不敢上台。在等别人唱完后,她颤抖着强 apartment. took a risk and found a new place to 迫自已站在舞台上,开始唱歌,但声音很低。更糟糕的是,她 spread my wings 太紧张了,唱了几句就忘词了。在别人的嘲笑下,她从舞台上 跑开了。她哭着跑回了家,将一切告诉了妈妈,妈妈告诉她只 高分亮点 要多在陌生人面前练习唱歌,她就会一点一点变得勇敢。 高分词汇:①stainless-steel adj. 不锈钢的 ②refrigerator n. [段落续写] ①由续写第一段首句内容“Emily认真听妈妈 冰箱;冷藏库 ③microwave n.微波炉 ④address v.解决 的话,听从了她的建议。”可知,第一段可描写Emily开始在花 professionally adv.专业地,内行地 园里练歌,路过的邻居都鼓励她,慢慢地她变得自信了,有足 高分句型:(句型1)Thus, although the apartment was a little 够的信心在许多陌生人面前唱歌。②由续写第二段首句内容 expensive,I decided to move in.(由连接词 although引导的 “第二年,邻居们又举行了一次歌唱比赛。”可知,第二段可描 让步状语从句) 写Emily报名参加比赛,不顾别人的嘲笑,专注唱歌,她已经 (句型2)I ran regularly, which helped me lose eighty 变成一个勇敢的女孩了。 pounds.(由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句) [范文] (句型 3) My life had improved in so many ways, and it all Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her started when I moved out of my old apartment, took a risk and suggestion. The next dau. she began to practice singing found a new place to spread my wings.(when 引导的时间状 语从句) in their garden. When the neighbors possed bu. theu encouraged her. Gradually. she became more and Suday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 more confident and her singing voice became louder 第一节 and louder. Months loter. she wos confident enough [范文] to sing in the park, where many people were singing Dear Adam. and dancing. Hearing her begutiful voice. some How is everuthing qoing with uou? f'm writing 1 stopped to listen to her singing and clapped for her to introduce a series of activities which were held in Emily felt pleased that she could sing confidently in mu school on World Reading Dou. front of strangers. Based on the theme of the Reading Day- The next year. the neighborhood held the singing Reoding Chinese Clossics and lnheriting Chinese competition again. Emily signed up for the competition Culture. all the activities are intended to roise our without hesitation. This time, Emily walked onto the awareness of traditional Chinese culture. Diverse stoge bravelu. Before singing, she heard someone activities such as Reoding Salon and Books Exchange said, "Emilu, coward!". But she chose to ignore it 启l 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 and concentrated on her singing. Her loud and Step Four 连句成篇 beautiful voice of singing moved all the people. Theu The Power of Reading all cheered for her. including those who had lauahed Reading is an essential part of our lives, which at her. Her mother and Lucu were deliahted to see allows us to explore new worlds, gain knowledge the timid qirl had become a brave one. So, don't be 寸and develop our imagination. Reading is not only a beaten bu a failure easilu. As long as uou work hard. :source of entertainment but also a means to expand uou will succeed one dau. our minds and broaden our horizons One book that I particularly enjog is"To Kill a -高分亮点 Mockinqbird" bu Horper Lee. This classic novel is set 高分词汇:①confident adj.自信的 ②clapv.鼓掌 ③hesitationn.犹豫;不情愿 .④ignore v.忽视 in the 193os American South. telling the story of a concentrate on专注于 timidadj.羞怯的,胆小的 uoung girl's growth and her fother's battle against 高分句型:(句型1)When the neighbors passed by,they racism and injustice. 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