Week 7感谢信&优秀品行类读后续写-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 7 感谢信&优秀品行类读后续写 Monday 如何写好感谢信 ◆对接答案P217 说明写信目的.明确对对方提供的帮助 或赠送的礼物等表示谢意 感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是向帮助、关心和支 ·描述事件经过或详细介绍对方提供的 持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的专业书信，有感 帮助，并说明该帮助所起的作用，或表 谢和表扬的双重意思。 达对所收礼物的喜爱以及以后如何使用 及收藏等 再次表达诚挚的谢意.并问候对方 典题示例 (2024·广东省信宜中学高二期中)假设你是校学生会主席李华，上周末学生会举办了中国诗词翻译 大赛，得到了外教Thomas的大力帮助。请你给Thomas写一封邮件，表示感谢。内容包括：l.感谢他的帮 助：2.同学们的收获。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 参考词汇中国诗词翻译大赛Chinese Poem Translation Competition Dear Thomas, Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 现在完成时和过去时为主 主题 感谢信 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段：写信目的：第二段：感谢内容：第三段：再次感谢 OStep Two 词汇运用 1,表达 6.参与者 2.衷心的感谢 7.促进，激发（某事物） 3.巨大的 8.热情 4.翻译技巧 9.角度 5.专业指导 69 启航黄语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Step Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我写这封信是为了向您表示衷心的感谢，感谢您在中国诗词翻译比赛中给予我们的巨大帮助。 (2)我们在比赛中收获颇多。 (3)您在比赛前地热心教了我们基本的翻译技巧和技巧。 (4)在您专业的指导下，参与者们呈现了许多精彩的翻译诗歌。 (5)同时，我们认识到了翻译的美。 (6)我们也提高了我们的诗歌鉴赏能力。 (7)最重要的是，这次活动激发了我们从不同角度学习诗歌的热情。 (8)我非常感谢您的宝贵时间和支持，并给予最良好的祝愿！ 2.句式升级 (1)用in which引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 (2)用t作形式主语改编升级句子(3)。 (3)用not only..but also句式合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。 (4)用省略主语和谓语的形式升级句子(8)。 OStep Four连句成篇 Week7感谢信&优秀品行类读后续写 Tuesday 感谢信满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 express.表达 sincere gratitude衷心的感谢 generous adj.慷慨的，宽厚的 description n.描述，说明 obliged adj.感激的，感谢的 recommend,.推荐，介绍 semester n.学期，半学年 happiness m.幸福，高兴 horizon n.视野，范围 express.表达，表示 friendly adj.友善的，友好的 feel at home宾至如归 cherish v.珍惜，怀念 homesickness n.乡思 extend v.延长，扩展 unselfish assistance无私的帮助 tremendous support巨大的支持 encouragement n.鼓励 enlighten.启发，教化 guidance n.指导，导航 usher.引领 appreciation n.感谢 meaningful ad.意味深长的，有意义的 comprehensively ad.完全地，彻底地 considerate adj.考虑周到的，体贴的 unforgettable adj.难忘的，铭刻肺腑的 不知道上周五在学校举行的英语演讲比赛中我获得 话题句式 第一名时是多么激动，这都归功于你友好的帮助。 引出话题先声夺人 5.It's one of the most wonderful gifts I have ever got. 1.I am writing to extend my thanks/convey my 这是我收到的最好的礼物之一。 gratitude/appreciation/thanks to you for your help. 6.Under your professional guidance,the participants 我写这封信是表达我对你的帮助的感激。 gave such an impressive performance.在您的专业 2.On behalf of my whole family,I would like to 指导下，参加者的表现令人印象深刻。 extend my sincere gratitude for your help..我谨代表 首尾结合余音回味 我全家对你的帮助表示真诚的感激之情。 7.Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and we will remember them forever.没什么能抹掉 3.Without your kind and generous help,I think I 我们美好的记忆，我们会水远牢记在心。 wouldn't have succeeded.如果没有你好心慷慨的 8.Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to 帮助，我想我是不会成功的。 you!我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。 主题部分，娓娓道来 9.Please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes.f 4.You don't know how excited I was to get the first 接受我诚挚的感谢和最美好的祝愿。 prize in the English Speech Contest held in my 10.My true gratitude is beyond the word's description. school last Friday and I owe it to your kind help. 我真正的感激之情是无法用语言来形容的 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Dear Professor Liu. Knowing that I am admitted to London University,I am writing to express 模板中黑体字部 my sincere thanks to you for your great help.Without your kind and generous 分是描写感谢信时可 help,I think I wouldn't have succeeded. 以通用的部分，其他部 Last June,when I applied to London University,you really gave me a lot of 分可以根据写作要求 灵活处理。 valuable help.You not only wrote a letter of recommendation for me but also gave 第一段往往是 me important and useful instructions on how to fill in the application forms.It is 般现在时，第二段主要 your unreserved help that enables me to get such a great opportunity to get further 是一般过去时，第三段 education abroad. My true gratitude is beyond the word's description.I feel most obliged to 除了一般现在时，有时 thank you once more. 也可以用一般将来时。 Yours sincerely, 文章人称以第一 Li Hua 和第二人称为主。 启航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Wednesday 感谢信写作跟踪训练 ◆对接答案P217 跟踪训练1◆感谢信 (2024·山东省青岛二中高二月考)假如你叫李华，在美国学习期间，吃住在一户美国人家里，现在马 上就要学成回国，临走前你给你的房东Mrs.Jons写封感谢信，感谢她三个月来的悉心照顾。内容包括： 1.房东一家和蔼可亲：2.饭菜很合口：3.利用周末带你聚会、野餐，玩得开心。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Mrs.Jones, Yours, Li Hua 跟踪训练2◆感谢信 (2024·河南省实验中学高二期未)假如你是班长李华，你们班举办了以“Protect Our Earth”为主题的 班会活动，并邀请了王教授给同学们做了讲座，请你在活动结束后给王教授写一封信表示感谢。内容包括： 1.表达感谢：2.活动的反响和同学们的收获：3.再次表达感谢。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Professor Wang, Yours, Li Hua 72 Week7感谢信&优秀品行类读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能7 ◆对接答案P218 运用定语从句提升应用文写作表达 一、写作中常用的几种定语从句 1.关系代词引导的定语从句 关系代词who,whom,whose,that,which,as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导 的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。 A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent sailor,设经历过暴风雨的水手永远不 会成为一名优秀的水手。 People can enjoy the moon while eating mooncakes,which are the special food for this festival.人f们可以一 边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。 2.关系副词引导的定语从句 关系副词引导的定语从句是指when,where,why引导的定语从句。 The reason why people celebrate the festival is that they believe it is the time when the moon is at its fullest and brightest in the whole year.and people will gather together eating mooncakes and appreciating the full moo,人们庆祝这个节日的原因是，他们相信这时候是一年中月亮最满、最亮的时候，人们聚在一起吃月 饼、赏满月。 3.“介词+which./whom”引导的定语从句 Years of school life have taught me a lot of things,of which what strikes me most is that we should take care not to hurt others with our words,deliberately or by accident.多年的校园生活教会了我很多东西，其中使我 印象最深的是我们应该尽量不要用言语伤害别人，无论是故意还是无意。 二、定语从句的写法 定语从句是比较难掌握而又是学生在写作中喜欢尝试的复杂句，因此在写作时可采用“三步法”： 第一步：写出两个简单句。 第二步：在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇，这个词在两个简单句中都有。 第三步：把另一个简单句改成定语从句，要特别注意引导词的选择。 [示例] 第一步：写出两个简单句。 TThe foreigner is from Canada. 2He visited our class yesterday 第二步：在句①中找出一个要修饰的词汇：the foreigner。 第三步：用句②充当定语从句，the foreigner为先行词，指人，句②中的代词he指代the foreigner且在句 子中作主语，故用who或that作引导词。 The foreigner who/that visited our class yesterday is from Canada. 三、定语从句写作的几点注意事项 1.误用关系词 I live in Beijing,where is the capital of China. E:I live in Beijing,which is the capital of China. 误：I have a friend,who's name is Liu Mei. 正：I have a friend,whose name is Liu Mei. 73 启航碳语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 2.句子残缺 There were many students took part in the English competition. IE:There were many students who took part in the English competition. Those who in favor of the proposal,please raise your hands. IE:Those who are in favor of the proposal,please raise your hands. 3.有多余词 The film I saw it last night was really very good. IE:The film I saw last night was really very good. Last week,I returned to the village where I grew up there in my childhood. E:Last week,I returned to the village where I grew up in my childhood. 4.定语从句与并列句的混淆 In fact,smoking is a bad habit,it does great harm to people's health IE:In fact,smoking is a bad habit,which/and it does great harm to people's health His parents told him many times not to play beside the river,it didn't help. E:His parents told him many times not to play beside the river,which/but it didn't help. 「跟踪练习 I.结合定语从句的用法，完成句子 1.我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆对于拓宽视野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。 2.当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。 3,你知道，中国结非常受中国人的喜欢。 4.我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个国际会议。 5.我经常想起被陌生人的言语伤害和侮辱的时候，其中有些甚至是来自熟悉的人。 Ⅱ.请按以下内容要点写一篇有关你的同学Kate的英语微写作，尽可能多地使用定语从句。 1.我有一个同学叫Kate,她的妈妈是我以前的英语老师。 2.Kate是一个容易相处的人，我们都喜欢她。 3.Kate在此次口语竞赛中获得第一名，这使得她妈妈很高兴。 4.新年就要到了，到时Kate会和她妈妈一起去香港 5.众所周知，香港是一个购物天堂，Kate打算在那里买她需要的东西。 74 Week7感谢信&优秀品行类读后续写 Friday 读后续写示例指导7 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·新课标I卷)I met Gunter on a cold,wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm,my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane,I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going,but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem,so I explained again more slowly.but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up,Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century,Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally,with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully,there was a long queue (still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned around,and looked at me with a big smile on his face."We made it,"he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times,but the card machine just did not play along.A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment,Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There,at the entrance,was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the machine.and popped my card in,only to read the message:"Out of order.Sorry." 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised. 语篇解读 本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途中，匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一班去 布拉格的公共汽车。司机Gunter不熟悉车站位置，通过电话求助后顺利抵达。到达时作者却发现自己没 带现金，尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功，而车站的取款机也出故障了。 75 言英语江 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Gunter,Taxi driver When:On a cold,wet and unforgettable evening in September. Where:In Vienna airport. What:Due to a big storm,my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.Finally,with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.He tried it several times. but the card machine just did not play along.I jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in,only to read the message:"Out of order.Sorry." Why:A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. (2)Details: DThe moment I got off the plane,I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. 我一下飞机，就像疯了一样穿过机场大楼，毫不犹豫地跳上了第一辆出租车。 本句为动作描写，本句中运用了the moment引导的时间状语从句，一系列的动作和介词短语without a second thought来表达作者怕耽误会议的急切心情。 2After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century,Gunter put his phone down and started the car. 在一番似乎持续了一个世纪的激烈的讨论之后，Gunter放下手机，启动了汽车。 本句为人物描写，句中运用了after引导的时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句，来表达Gunter的认真 负责的务实态度。 3 Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned around,and looked at me with a big smile on his face. Gunter把出租车停在公共汽车后面，转过身来，满脸笑容地看着我。 本句为动作和心理描写，句中运用了一系列动作和with复合结构，表达Gunter把“我”送到目的地的如 释重负的心情。 4I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. 我给他一个抱歉的微笑，同时掏出我的葡萄牙银行卡。 本句为人物和心理描写，句中运用了as引导的时间状语从句和比喻动作flashed him an apologetic smile 来表达“我”对出租车司机的抱歉和尴尬之情。 5A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. 当我看到公共汽车排队的人越来越少时，一种无助的感觉涌上心头。 本句为动作和心理描写，句中运用了as引导的时间状语从句、see sth.doing sth..结构、无灵主语，表达 “我”当时的绝望的心情。 2.找线索 (I)根据第一段中的“The moment I got off the plane,I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.."可知，这次要参加的会议对“我”很重要， “我”不能耽误，可以把“我”的急迫心情和表现在续写的第一段中具体地呈现出来。 (2)根据第二段中的“When I was about to give up,Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century,Gunter put his phone down and started the car.”可知，Gunter是一个很有责任感的善良人士，可以在续写的第一段中将“我”和Gunter的交流详 细地呈现出来。 76 Week7感谢信&优秀品行类读后续写 (3)根据第四段中的“Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet..I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times,but the card machine just did not play along." 知，作者也是信守承诺的人，不是故意不给司机出租费，可以在续写的第二段中把这一点呈现出来。 3.定思路 ①由续写第一段关键信息首句内容“I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.”可知，第一段可描写 作者留下Gunter的电话，承诺会还钱给对方，Gunter同意，最终作者及时登上了公共汽车。 ②由续写第二段关键信息首句内容“Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised.”可知，第二段可描写作者付费给Gunter,并向对方表示感激，两人成为了好朋友。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.He looked at me in disbelief asking me what to do.Flashing him another apologetic smile.I begged him for a delayed payment."If I miss this last bus to Prague.I'll be late for the conference which is so important that I can't afford to miss it!"explained."May I have your phone number?I will call you and return the money i owe you.i promise l will keep my word or you keep my watch!"I added.handing him my watch as well as my business card.Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch.He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me."Just keep your promise.Sir."A feeling of gratitude washed over me as l heard his words.Giving him a firm handshake.l jumped out of the car.made a mad run for the bus,and jumped onto it just before its departure. Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised.He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before.Beaming a warm smile at him.I gave him a big hug the moment i saw him.We chatted happily on the way to the airport.I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help. everything had gone smoothly.When he stopped his taxi outside the airport.I paid him for the "double car ride",back and forth from the airport to the bus station,together with a generous tip that he turned down.I also gave him an attractive souvenir i had bought at Prague. which he accepted with delight.We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly.I felt blessed to have such a warm- hearted friend like gunter 肩航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 ◆对接答案P218 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·山东省聊城市第二中学高二期中)I had stopped at the Swindon services(服务区)while on my way back to London.As I drove up the slip road,I spotted a man with a backpack and his thumb out. I pulled over and lowered the window. “Which way are you heading?”he asked. "I'm going back to London."I answered. "Ah,that would be grand,"came his immediate reply.He opened the door and lifted his backpack on to the back seat..“I'm Brendan,"he said with an easy smile and a rich Irish(爱尔兰)tongue..“I was getting a bit desperate.I've had my thumb out for a day and half.Nobody seems to stop these days. “I haven't eaten in days,”said Brendan.“I'm trying to get home.." I've always enjoyed picking up hitchhikers.I used to be a motoring journalist and crossed the country in various test cars.Picking up a hiker always made me feel a little less guilty about all the miles I was doing. As we headed east along the motorway.Brendan told me how he came to be waiting for a lift on that particular evening,and also about the two recent family tragedies()that had ruined him and pushed him out of his old life and on to the road. Brendan told me that he was 52.He laughed a lot and enjoyed his off-grid lifestyle.Until last week,that is when he'd been mugged(抢劫). "Three young men in Birmingham took my other pack and it had all my money in it.I've been sleeping out since then.I haven't eaten in days.I'm hoping to get some casual work in London,so I can then get myself home to Ireland. It must have been the concept of home that got me,and helping a man who'd clearly had a tough time seemed like the right thing to do. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 As we were approaching the Heathrow turn-off(希思罗机场岔道)，I had an idea.. Before he left to buy his air ticket,he gave me a huge hug. 78答案全解全析 do I owe you?"He shook his head."Nothing.Cynthia (7)Most importantly,this activity has stimulated our passion told me you were a cripple-on a crutch.Glad to be for learning poems from different perspectives. of help.I know you'd do the same for me.There's (8)I give many thanks for your valuable time and support as no charge,friend."I held out a five-dollar bill."No.I well as best wishes to you. 2.句式升级 like to pay my way." (1)I'm writing to express our sincere gratitude to you for your He didn't take the bill and the little girl stepped closer and enormous help in the Chinese Poem Translation Competition, said quietly,"Grandpa can't see it."In the next few frozen in which we have gained quite a lot. seconds,the shame and horror of that moment (2)It's so kind of you to have taught us the basic translation penetrated and I was sick with an intensity I had skills and techniques before the competition. never felt before.A blind man and a child fumbled, (3)Meanwhile,we not only realized the beauty of translation feeling with cold.wet fingers for bolts and tools in but also improved our ability of appreciating poems. the dark.I don't remember how long I sat there (4)Many thanks for your valuable time and support as well as best wishes! after they said good night and left me,.but it was Step Four连句成篇 long enough for me to search deep within myself Dear Thomas, and realize that I was filled to over-flowing with self- I'm writing to express our sincere gratitude to pity,selfishness,indifference to the needs of others you for your enormous help in the Chinese Poem and thoughtlessness.I am trying now not only to Translation Competition.in which we have gained climb 14 steps each day.but in my small way to quite a lot. help others. It's so kind of you to have taught us the basic 高分亮点 translation skills and techniques before the competition. 高分词汇：①stoop.俯身，弯腰②penetrate.穿透 Under your professional guidance,the participants ③intensity n.强烈，刷烈④be filled with充满 presented many brilliant translated poems.Meanwhile, 5 indifference n,冷漠6 houghtlessness m.不体贴 高分句型：（句型I)In the next few frozen seconds,the we not only realized the beauty of translation but also shame and horror of that moment penetrated and I was sick improved our ability of appreciating poems.Most with an intensity I had never felt before.(that/which引乎定 importantly,this activity has stimulated our passion 语从句修饰intensity并赦省略) for learning poems from different perspectives. (2)A blind man and a child fumbled,feeling with cold, Many thanks for your valuable time and support wet fingers for bolts and tools in the dark.(现在分词 feeling.,.作状语) as well as best wishes! (3)I don't remember how long I sat there after they said Yours, good night and left me,but it was long enough for me to Li Hua search deep within myself and realize that I was filled to over- Wednesday 感谢信写作跟踪训练 flowing with self-pity,selfishness.indifference to the needs of others and thoughtlessness.(how long引导名词性从句作 Q跟踪训练1 remember的宾语、，after引导时间状语从句、that引导名词性 [范文] 从句作realize的宾语】 Dear Mrs.Jones. I am writing to express my thanks for the three Week 7 感谢信&优秀品行类读后续写 happy months I spent with you and your family.But Monday 如何写好感谢信 for your considerate care,I wouldn't have enjoyed my stay in America. Step Two词汇运用 Initially,so friendly are you and your family I.express 2.sincere gratitude 3.enormous 4.translation skills 5.professional guidance 6.participant 7.stimulate that I am always feeling at home,thus overcoming 8.passion 9.perspective the homesickness and fright on my arrival.Moreover, Step Three句式表达 I have to sing high praise for the Chinese dishes you 【,完成句子 made,which was just like the taste in my hometown. (1)I'm writing to express our sincere gratitude to you for your Busy as you are,you still try your best to take me enormous help in the Chinese Poem Translation Competition. out for parties,picnics and of course,and I really (2)We have gained quite a lot in the competition (3)Thank you so much for teaching us the basic translation enjoy the time we spent together. skills and techniques before the competition. Gone are the golden days and I'll cherish the (4)Under your professional guidance,the participants presented unforgettable experience forever.Thanks again and many brilliant translated poems. best wishes! (5)Meanwhile,we realized the beauty of translation. Yours, (6)We also improved our ability of appreciating poems Li Hua 启英语Ⅲ 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 高分亮点 3.As you know.Chinese knots are very popular with 高分词汇：①express.表达；表示 ②considerate adj.考虑 Chinese people. 周到的：体贴的 ③friend山yad.友善的：友好的④feel at 4.My uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to home宾至如归 ⑤homesickness n.乡思cherish v.珍 attend an intemational meeting. 惜：怀，念Dunforgettable ad.难忘的：铭刻肺腑的 5.I often think about the times when I have felt hurt and 高分句型：（句型I)Initially,so friendly are you and your insulted by rude remarks from strangers and sometimes family that I am always feeling at home,thus overcoming the even from acquaintances. homesickness and fright on my arrival.(适用了so.,that结 II.I have a classmate called Kate,whose mother is my former 构，s0+形容词/副词位于句首，主句用部分倒装，以及非谓 English teacher.Kate is a girl who is easy to get along with and 语动词作状语) we all like her.Kate took the first place in the Speech Contest, (2)Moreover.I have to sing high praise for the Chinese which makes her mother happy.The New Year is coming,when dishes you made,which was just like the taste in my Kate will go to Hong Kong together with her mother.As we all hometown.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句) know,Hong Kong is a shopping paradise,where Kate intends to (3)Busy as you are,you still try your best to take me buy what she needs. out for parties,picnics and of course.and I really enjoy the time we spent together..(as引导让步状语从句时，as表示 Saturday读后续写话题训练 “尽管”，从句用倒装) [语篇解读]文章以人物为线索展开，讲迷作者在回纶敦的 ⊙跟踪训练2 路上遇到一个中年人示意要搭便车，作者让他上了车。在和 [范文] 此人聊天的过程中了解到他的生活不易，更糟糕的是，他在上 Dear Professor Wang. 周还被三个年轻人抢劫了。他已经好儿天没吃东西，希望可 I'm writing to express our sincere gratitude for 以在伦教找份工作，挣些回爱尔兰的路费。听了男人的故事， your inspiring lecture in our class meeting "Protect 作者决定帮助他。 Our Earth” [段落续写]①根据续写第一段首句“当我们快到希思罗机 Your lecture is such a great success that we are 场的岔路口时，我有了一个主意。”可知，下文可描写作者的主 deeply impressed by it.The activity has fueled our 意是什么一—送男人去机场并给他买回家的机票，以及男人 passion for our earth,and raised our awareness of 的反应。②根据续写第二段首句“在他去买机票之前，他给了 我一个大大的拥抱。”可知，下文可措写男人留下联系方式承 protecting the environment.Realising the great harm 诺还钱。作者当时并不在乎会不会收到钱，因为帮助了一个 caused by the smog and the importance of the 需要帮助的人，作者感到非常快乐，这是比金钱更难得的 environment,many of our students have taken [范文] immediate action such as planting more trees and As we were approaching the Heathrow tum-ofr(希思罗机 volunteering to educate the public to learn recycling场岔道)，I had an idea.“Why don't I just drop you at to protect the earth. the airport now?"I said."I'll buy you a ticket and Many thanks for your time and support,and you can fly home.""That's so kind of you,"he we'll do our part to make our earth more beautiful.replied.Then,ofter a pause,"and please don't worry. Yours. I'll definitely wire you the money when I get home." Li Hua I pulled onto the airport avenue and soon dropped 高分亮点 him off outside the terminal building.I went to a 高分词汇：①sincere ad(.真减的②fuel.增强 ③awareness m.认识，意识④environment n.自然环境，生 cash point,got out 10 shiny new 20 notes and 态环境⑤take immediate action立即采取行动 handed them over.He took the money and thanked 高分句型：（句型I)Your lecture is such a great success that me again and again. we are deeply impressed by it(运用了such.,.that引导的 Before he left to buy his air ticket,he gave me a huge hug. 结果状语从句) He took my phone number and said he'd call as (2)Realising the great harm caused by the smog and the soon as he could to arrange the transfer.I bid importance of the environment,many of our students have taken immediate action such as planting more trees and farewell to him without any real idea whether I'd volunteering to educate the public to leamn recycling to protect ever see the man or the money again.As I drove the he earth.(运用了现在分词、不定式短语作状语】 final miles to my own house in London.I felt happier thinking about Brendan.He asked for help,for a lift Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能7 to get home,and in good faith I gave them to him. [跟踪练习] That's got to be a good thing. I.1.I would visit some museums which should not be missed to widen my horizons as well as enrich my knowledge. 高分亮点 2.Nowadays parents have done everything for their single 高分词汇：①definitelyad,肯定地，当然②airport avenue children,which makes the children rely on their parents 机场大道③terminal building候机楼 ④transfer n.转移， badly 搬迁⑤bid farewell告别 18 答案全解全析 高分句型：（句型I)He took my phone number and said he'd 第二段首句内容“这对夫妇没有注意到有什么不同，他们在依 call as soon as he could to arrange the transfer.(运用了as 照平时的训练调整了路线。”可知，第二段可描写这对盲人夫 0onas引导的时间状语从句) 妇并没有发现有什么异常，他们调整步伐，继续用手杖指引 2)I bid farewell to him without any real idea whether 成功地走到了马路对面。作者发现他们一直都是手牵手，停 I'd ever see the man or the money again,(运用了whether引 在路边的其他司机也都松了一口气。结尾总结，生活忙碌，也 导的同位语从句)） 要停下脚步，发现被忽路的美绿 (3)As I drove the final miles to my own house in [范文] London,I felt happier thinking about Brendan.(运用了as引 Every car in every direction did the same thing.They 导的时间状语从句) stopped at the same time.Everything seemed to Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 freeze.Amazed,I looked at the cars around me,and noticed that everyone's attention was fixed on the 0第一节 blind couple while no one got mad and none was [范文] shouting and yelling.They just waited patiently. Dear Alex, without sounding the horn,afraid of scaring the How are you doing?'m writing to express mycouple.It appeared that all the drivers understood sincere appreciation to you for recommending me what the couple went through. the English movie. Never noticing something different,the couple adjusted The recommended movie,which is suitable for their route as they followed the coaching.Trusting their an English learner like me,has brought me many white walking stick,they finally made it.As they unexpected benefits.Having finished watching it,went across the road,one thing struck me-they have acquired more practical and commonly used were still arm-in-arm.I was surprised at the expressions,which contributes a lot to my spoken emotionless expressions on their faces and judged English.Besides,the idea the movie conveys is so that they had no idea what was really going on inspiring for me that I have regarded it as the around them.Yet I immediately sensed the sights of wisdom to guide me in my life. relief of all the other drivers at that busy crossroads. Please accept my thanks once again.I really So,taking a moment to see what is going on around hope you can recommend me more excellent English you right now may award you something wonderful. movies. 高分亮点 Yours, 高分词汇：①freeze v.突然停止；定格②yell v.叫喊 Li Hua ③patiently ad.耐心地④emotionless adj.没有情感的：不 高分亮点 露情感的 ⑤relief n.宽慰：轻松 6 crossroad n.十字路 高分词汇：①appreciation n.感谢，感激 ②recommend.建 口，交叉路 议：劝告：推荐3 acquire.获得④①practical ad.实用的， 高分句型：（句型1）It appeared that all the drivers understood 实际的⑤contribute to有助于；促成 what the couple went through.(运用了it作形式主语和whai 高分句型：（句型I)The recommended movie, which is 引导的宾语从句) suitable for an English learner like me.has brought me many 2)So,taking a moment to see what is going on around unexpected benefits.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语 you right now may award you something wonderful..(运用了 从句) 动名词短语作主语) (2)Having finished watching it,I have acquired more practical and commonly used expressions,which contributes a Week 8 告知信&我的童年类读后续写 lot to my spoken English.(运用了非谓语动词作状语和 which引导的非很制性定语从句) Monday 如何写好告知信 0第二节 Step Two词汇运用 [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一个 1.impress 2.inspire 3.fantastic 4.surround 直忙于工作的人，开车经过一个十分繁忙的十字路口时，停在 5.blooming flowers 6.refreshing 7.creativity 路口等红绿灯。此时人行道上一对年轻的盲人夫妇抱着小 8.hustle and bustle 9.connection 10.cherish 孩，仅靠手中的手杖要走到马路对面。本以为大家会冲他们 Step Three 句式表达 鸣喇叭，大声戚叫，结果所有车辆都同时安静地停下为他们让：1.完成句子 路。通过此事作者意识到，忙绿生活中有时也要停下脚步，细 (1)We were tasked to draw or paint something 心观察身边，可能会发现之前被忽略的美景。 (2)Something would impressed us most. [段落续写】①由续写第一段首句内容“每个方向的每辆车 (3)I have been inspired by the fantastic scenery. 都做若同样的事情。”可知，第一段可描写一对官人夫妇过马 (4)I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small 路时各个方向的车同时停下了，就像时间静止一样。作者本 bridge over the park's pond. 以为只有白己注意到他们是肓人，结果当他环顾时.每个人都 (5)The bridge was surrounded by blooming flowers. 注意到了。大家都没有生气，没有出声，耐心等待。②由续写 (6)The entire experience was incredibly refreshing.