Week 3 邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写-【启航英语】2025版高二英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 3 邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 Monday 如何写好邀请信 ◆对接答案P208 邀请信是邀请亲朋好友等参加某项活动时所发出的 表明写作意图，向某人发出邀请 邀约性书信。邀请信一般包括此次活动的性质、活动内 容、发出邀请以及请求同意等。一般邀请信具有简洁、热 局谋篇 说明邀请的具体原因和邀请的内容 情的特点。 ·期待对方接受邀请.并表示感谢 典题示例 (2024·山西省大同市高二期末)假定你是李华，你校近期成立了“孔子思想研究网上俱乐部 (Confucianism online club)”,你的朋友Tom对中国文化很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，邀请他加入该俱 乐部。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Tom, Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 OStep One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 般现在时 主题 邀请信 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段：写信日的：第二段：该俱乐部的具体情况：第三段：期待回复 Step Two 词汇运用 1.极度，非常 6.拥有，持有 2.对…感兴趣 7特征，特点，特色 3.高兴 8.会议 4.参加 9.经常地，频繁地 5.建立，设立 10.具有重大意义 24 Week3邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 OStep Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我知道你非常喜欢中国文化。 (2)我们学校最近成立了孔子思想研究在线俱乐部。 (3)我非常高兴地写信邀请你加入俱乐部。 (4)这个俱乐部有各种各样的特点。 (5)首先，我们定期举行会议。 (6)我们正在研究孔子的语录。 (7)更重要的是，相关的教授经常被邀请在网上做关于儒学的演讲。 (8)这个俱乐部很有意义，可以帮助你更好地了解中国文化 (9)我期待你的回复。 2.句式升级 (1)用现在分词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(1)，(2)、(3)。 (2)用现在分词作伴随状语合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。 (3)加as far as I am concerned升级句子(8)，表达个人观点。 (4)用省略主语和谓语的形式升级句(9)。 Step Four连句成篇 6 言航英 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Tuesday 邀请信满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 improve,.提高 awareness m.意识，了解，觉察 host.主办 theme n.主题，中心思想 opportunity m.机会，时机 sign up报名 charity n.慈善机构 stadium n.体育场，运动场 variety n.多样化，变化 benefit n.好处，益处 responsibility n.责任，负责 delighted adj.高兴的 set aside留出 take place举行 performance n.表演，演出 invitation m.邀请 eply.回答，答复 exhibition n.展览，展出 detailed adj.详尽的，详细的 information m.消息，资料 feature.以…为特色 be enthusiastic about对热心的 range from.,.to.,,范围从…到… sincerely ad.由衷地，真诚地 brilliant adj.巧妙的，使人印象深的 「话题句式 5.The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m.on January 20th in the lecture hall and its theme is "Differences 引出话题先声夺人 between Eastern and Western Customs'”,活a动定于I 1.It's my pleasure/a great honour to invite you to join 月20日上午8点在报告厅举行，主题为“东西方 us.非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。 习俗的差异”。 2.I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the 6.Our music festival will cover a wide range of activities.including short musical performances, nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double playing musical instruments,as well as a singing Ninth Festival..我想邀请您下周六重阳节和我们一 contest.我们的音乐节将包括各种各样的活动，包 起去拜访附近的养老院。 括音乐短剧表演，演奏乐器以及一场歌唱比赛。 3.I'm writing to invite you to attend a photography 首尾结合余音回味 exhibition to be held in our school,whose theme is 7.I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is “Impressive changes around me'".我写信是想邀请 convenient to you.你方便的话我真心希望你能接 你参加即将在我们学校举办的摄影展，主题是“我 受我们/我的邀请。 身边令人印象深刻的变化”。 8.We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.如果你能 主题部分娓娓道来 在你方便时尽早确认参加，我们将不胜感激。 4.Here are some details about the activity.这是一些关 9.I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. 于这个活动的细节。 如果你能接受我的邀请，我将不胜感激。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Dear Jimmy, How is it going?In order to improve teenagers'awareness of environment 模板中黑体字部 protection,the Students Union will host a practical activity themed"Promoting 分是描写邀请信时可 Ecotourism”, 以通用的部分，其他部 We will design posters to promote ecosystem and hand them out on the squares 分可以根据写作要求 or near schools.At the end of the activity,we will have an opportunity to watch 灵活处理。 birds and take photos in the natural park,through which we can have fun and learn 主体部分往往是 a lot about nature. 一般将来时，其次是 Volunteers are needed.Would you like to join us?If so,you can sign up 般现在时。 on our school website or call at 8233686.Looking forward to your early reply. 文章人称以第 Yours, 人称和第二人称为主。 Li Hua 26 Week3邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 Wednesday 邀请信写作跟踪训练 ◆对接答案P208 跟踪训练1◆邀请信 (2024·广西壮族自治区桂林市实验中学高二期中)你校近期要举办一场以“Impressive changes around e”为主题的摄影展，请你代表学生会给外教Roy写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.时间和地点：2.活动 特色：3.你的期待。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Roy, Yours sincerely, Students'Union 跟踪训练2◆邀请信 (2024·河南省洛阳一高高二月考)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你们学校下个月将要举办主题 为“寻找春天，拥抱白然”的踏青骑行活动，请给你校的交换生Jm写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动。内 容包括：1.活动安排：2.准备事项。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Jim. Yours, Li Hua 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能3 运用非谓语动词 提升应用文写作表达 众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉 1 If it is carried out continuously,it will 得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散：而文 benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make 章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。 obvious progress. 恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转 -Carried out continuously.it will benefit all of 换，不仅句型多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑， us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress. 言简意明。 2 As I have been exposed to foreign teachers 一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句 since a young age,I can communicate freely with 写作时，我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单 others in English. 句进行转换，使其成为较高级的表达方式。转换时 -Having been exposed to foreign teachers since a 可采用以下三步。 young age,I can communicate freely with others in 第一步：写出两个简单句。 English DConsequently,some viewers began to turn away 三、写作中非谓语动词的常用句型 from cinemas. l.remain to be done有待于被 (2It led to a slower growth. Many questions have to be settled and much remains 第二步：让句①作主句，用非谓语动词改写句②。 to be done in our educational work.我们的教有 第三步：让句②作结果状语，由于其动词lead to 作中还有许多问题要解决，还有许多事情要去做。 与主语it之间为主谓关系，故用现在分词短语作结2.连词when/while/.once/unless/although...+doing/, 果状语。 done Consequently,some viewers began to turn away When faced with the difficulties and failures,I must from cinemas,leading to a slower growth. overcome them. 1 I hear that you are recruiting some 面对困难和失败时，我必须战胜它们。 volunteers to welcome the coming foreign students.I When searching for some information,we can am gladly writing to apply for this job. operate by touching the screen. -Hearing that you are recruiting some volunteers 当查找一些信息时，我们可以通过触摸屏来操作。 to welcome the coming foreign students,I am gladly: 3.compared with/o..与…比较 writing to apply for this job. Compared with the escaped driver,I am proud of 2 Then there will be various fantastic what I did. performances and they will be played by talented 与逃逸的司机相比，我为自己所做之事感到自豪。 students. 4.be said/,reported/.considered..todo..据说/报 -Then there will be various fantastic performances 道/认为… to be played by talented students. A bus full of passengers was reported to have gone 二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句 out of control on a highway south of the city. 用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易 据报道，一辆满载乘客的公共汽车在城南的一条 一些，因为需转换的一般是从句部分，这时只需要判 公路上失去了控制。 断用何种非谓语动词，再把握好时态和语态即可，所 5,with+宾语+宾语补足语 以只需以下两步。 Every runner tried their best to finish the task,with 第一步：写出一个复合句。 their classmates along the way giving them necessary Since you have realised that your time is limited. help as well as encouragement. you'll have to study for your goals without hesitation. 每位赛跑者都尽最大努力来完成此次任务，他们的 第二步：把since引导的原因状语从句转换为非 同班同学在途中给他们提供必要的帮助和鼓励。 谓语动词，realise与you之间为主谓关系，且表示完 In the picture,a boy in worn clothes sits beside a 成，故用现在分词的完成时作状语。 wooden table with a pile of bamboo books on it. Having realised that your time is limited,you'll 在画中，一个穿着破旧衣服的男孩坐在木桌旁边， have to study for your goals without hesitation. 桌上有一堆竹简。 28 Week3邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 Friday 读后续写示例指导3 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·广东省江门一中高二期中)My baby Reese started screaming and I struggled to hold him in my arms as we pushed our way through the crowd to the side of the taekwondo studio,where I would send my boy for the training. I looked up,and that is when I saw the photo on a poster,a woman with a bright white smile surrounded by her daughters.“OUR MOM NEEDS A KIDNEY(肾a脏)，”it said above the photo.“My name is Vonchelle Knight,and I have polycystic kidney disease,"it said below."I am a single mother of two girls and have been on the transplant waitlist for eight years." As I continued to read,I thought about how desperately this momma needed a kidney.And then the idea struck me.I wanted to donate my kidney to the woman whom I had never met. On the drive home,I told my husband I wanted to donate my kidney to a stranger.By the look on his face, he clearly thought I had lost my mind.I was a busy mom of two boys working a full-time job as a sales account manager.I had a calendar filled with sporting events,group fitness and volunteer church hours. "Where is this coming from?"he asked.I was excited and slightly terrified as I explained the poster.I told him I wanted to at least call Vonchelle's nurse and get more information. Several weeks later,the results were in.We were a perfect match!The nervous excitement filled my body. Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life.Vonchelle had already waited eight years and obviously didn't have any family members who could donate. I told my husband that the doctor could do the transplant on January twenty-fifth in the hospital.His eyes filled with tears,he stared at me and nodded.Vonchelle's daughter worked at my son's taekwondo studio,so I shared the news with her. One day before the donation,the doctors scheduled me to meet Vonchelle in the hospital. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 As she walked through the door of the meeting room,I walked up to her,my heart beating wildly. After the successful transplant,Vonchelle was recovering well. 29 启航英语江 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 语篇解读 本文是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自我”主题语境下的“做人与做事”主题群。文章讲述了作者在带孩子 去跆拳道赛场现场比赛的时候，无意间看到了一个肾脏捐赠的传单。一位名叫Vonchelle Knight的单身母 亲患有肾病，已经在等待移植的名单上等待了八年。读完她的经历后，作者决定为这个陌生人捐赠自己的 肾脏。虽然丈夫一开始不理解，但是作者依旧下了这个决定，联系医护人员，得到匹配成功的结果。医生安 排好移植手术后，作者的文夫最终同意。手术前的一天，作者与Vonchelle在医院会面。 写作步骤 1.读文本 (1)Elements: Who:Vonchelle,my husband and me. Where:taekwondo studio,home,hospital When:When I sent my boy to the taekwondo studio. What:As I continued to read,I thought about how desperately this momma needed a kidney.And then the idea struck me.I wanted to donate my kidney to the woman whom I had never met. Why:Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life. (2)Details: DMy baby Reese started screaming and I struggled to hold him in my arms as we pushed our way through the crowd to the side of the taekwondo studio,where I would send my boy for the training. 我的孩子R©s心开始尖叫起来，我努力着把他抱在怀里，我们穿过人群，挤到跆拳道工作室那里，我将送 我的儿子去那里训练。 本句为动作描写，主句运用了and连接的并列句，从句运用了as引导的时间状语从句和where引导的非 限制性定语从句。该句表达了我在送孩子去跆拳道训练时的忙碌状态。 2I looked up,and that is when I saw the photo on a poster,a woman with a bright white smile surrounded by her daughters. 我拾起头，看到了一张海报上的照片，一个带着灿烂笑容的女人被她的女儿们包围着。 本句为人物描写，运用了连词and引导并列句，surrounded过去分词为后置定语，表达出这个女人的幸福 状态。 3I was excited and slightly terrified as I explained the poster. 当我解释海报时，我既兴奋又有点害怕。 本句为心理描写，句中运用了s引导的时间状语从句。 4Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life. 当我意识到我有能力让这位妈妈重获新生时，思绪在我的脑海里盘旋。 本句为心理描写，表达我当时意识到那位妈蚂会因为我的帮助而重获新生时的激动心情。 5His eyes filled with tears,he stared at me and nodded. 他盯着我，点了点头，眼里充满了泪水。 本句为动作描写，运用stared和nodded两个并列动词以及独立主格结构表现出丈夫在得知我做手术时 的担忧的状态。 2.找线索 (I)根i据第二段中的“I am a single mother of two girls and have been on the transplant waitlist for eight years.'"和第六段中的"Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life.”可知，要捐助的对象是一个快乐幸福的女士，而我又是一个心地善良的人，会为能让对方重 生而激动，在续写的第一段中可呈现出这些内容。 Week3邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 (2)根据第二段中的“I looked up,and that is when I saw the photo on a poster,a woman with a bright white smile surrounded by her daughters.."和第三段中的“I wanted to donate my kidney to the woman whom I had never met..”可知，病人在手术后一定会恢复往日的活力和健康，而作为一个陌生人，作者所做的这一切 体现了她无私奉献的高尚品质，凸显了人与人之间美好的互助力量这个主题。 3.定思路 (I)由续写第一段首句“As she walked through the door of the meeting room,I walked up to her,my heart beating wildly..”可知，第一段可描写作者见到Vonchelle的印象和感受，两人会面的表现和交流。 (2)由续写第二段首句“After the successful transplant,Vonchelle was recovering well."可知，第二段可描 写作者去看望Vonchelle恢复的情况，作者内心的体会和感悟。 4.形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 As she walked through the door of the meeting room,I walked up to her,my heart beating wildly.Her pale but bright smile was infectious.and I couldn't help but feel a sense of admiration at the woman before me.Here was the person who had been waiting eight long years for a kidney,and now because of my decision to donate. she had a chance at a new life.We hugged tightly,tears streaming down both our faces as we exchanged words of gratitude and hope. In that moment.I knew I had made the right decision,and that the bond between us would be unbreakable. After the successful transplant,Vonchelle was recovering well.I visited her in the hospital watching as she slowly regained her strength and vitality.Her daughters were by her side.holding her hand and smiling through their tears.As I looked at them.I felt a sense of fulfillment that I had never experienced before.In giving Vonchelle the gift of life.I had also given myself a gift-the knowledge that even in the darkest of times,there is always hope.always a chance for something beautiful to emerge.And as l left the hospital that day,I knew that the experience would stay with me forever,a reminder of the power of human connection and the beauty of selfless giving. 肩航英语I高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 Saturday 读后续写话题训练 ◆对接答案P209 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·辽宁省沈阳二中高二月考)On February21,2018,Christine Cheers'world fell apart.Someone on the other end of the phone had said the words that bring parents to their knees:"There's been an accident." Her 32-year-old Navy flight surgeon James was injured in a training mission.At hospital,Christine and her husband David were told that he would never breathe on his own and he would never smile at them again. It was time for Christine to honor the spirit of her son who had switched his major from commerce engineering to premed (because he wanted to help people.It was time to make her every worst day some stranger's best one.She instructed the hospital to begin the organ donation process.Christine Cheers wasn't leaving the hospital until every last one of her son's organs left the building.She and David watched hospital employees carry coolers from the operation room.The last one was his heart."That was the one I cared about most,"Christine says,"With bravery and selflessness,James had such an amazing heart."Seeing James's heart leave the building,Christine fell into a sadness so deep that climbing out seemed impossible.Her only comfort would be to find out that James's organs had helped people,so she wrote each receiver a letter just to know if they were doing all right. Mike Cohen,a cyclist,had a heart transplant ()James's heart!Two months after the surgery,Mike got a call from the organization that arranged the transplant.They had a letter for him from James's mother.As he read Christine's letter,Mike began to understand just how special his new heart was.Eager to know more about James,Mike googled him.He found they had a lot in common.They were both athletic and practically the same age.Another thing he learned about James:His grave site (was in Jacksonville-the other side of the country. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Upon recovery,Mike announced on social media to take a cross-country trip. Mike got off his bike and walked straight to Christine,who was waiting at the grave site. 32 Week3邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 ◆对接答案P209 第一节◆应用文写作 (2024·辽宁省盘锦市高级中学高二期未)假定你是校报编辑李华，想邀请你的美国朋友Jordan为专 栏“Teenage life around the world”撰写一篇稿件。内容包括：l,发出邀请：2.稿件要求（内容、字数等）： 3.表示感谢。 注意1，写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·山东省外国语学校高二期未)School volunteers don't get paid,but sometimes we receive special gifts.One morning,just before Christmas vacation,I was selling tickets to our grade school's last evening performance of The Nutcracker. One of my customers that day was a parent."I think it's awful that I have to pay to see my own child perform,"she announced,yanking (a wallet from her purse. "The school asks for a voluntary donation to help pay for scenery and costumes,"I explained,"but no one has to pay.You're welcome to all the tickets you need." “Oh,I'll pay,”she said unhappily.“Two adults and a child."She plunked down(猛地放下)aten-dollar bill.I gave her the change and her tickets.She stepped aside,holding her purse.That's when the boy waiting behind her emptied a pocketful of change onto the table. "How many tickets?"I asked. "I don't need tickets,"he said."I'm paying."He pushed the coins across the table."But you'll need tickets to see the show tonight. 33启黄语Ⅲ高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 [段落续写】①由续写第一段首句内容“Do默默地看着她： (7)What's more,related professors are frequently invited to 的小鸟。”可知，第一段可描写Doa看到鸟玩耍的场景，意识 give speeches on Confucianism online. 到小鸟也需要自由。②由续写第二段首句内容“妈妈进来后， (8)The club is of great significance and can help you gain a Dom把自己的决定告诉了妈妈。”可知.第二段可描写Doa将 better understanding of Chinese culture. 小鸟放生及再次看到树上的小鸟时的感悟。 (9)I am looking forward to your reply [范文] 2.句式升级 Dora watched her bird in silence.She found her bird (1)Knowing that you are extremely keen on Chinese culture. kept looking out of the window.In the trees outside, I'm more than delighted to write to invite you to join in the many birds were playing gladly.She thought that Confucianism online club,which was established by our school recently. perhaps her bird didn't like being kept in the cage at (2)First of all,we hold regular sessions,studying the statements all.Just as she missed staying with her friends,it of Confucius. also wanted to go out to play with other birds.But (3)As far as I'm concerned,the club is of great significance before she got sick,she didn't think a lot about her and can help you gain a better understanding of Chinese bird.Now Dora realized she shouldn't selfishly take culture. away its freedom for her own enjoyment. (4)Looking forward to your reply. When her mother came inside,Dora told her mother about Step Four 连句成篇 her decision.She said,"Mom.can you set my bird Dear Tom, free?"Her mother was surprised and asked why. Knowing that you are extremely keen on "I'm sure it also wants friends,"said Dora.Feeling Chinese culture,I'm more than delighted to write to amazed and moved at Dora's growth,her mother invite you to join in the Confucianism online club. agreed.She opened the cage and the bird cheerfully which was established by our school recently. flew out of the window and disappeared soon.A few The club possesses various characteristics.First of days later,Dora could play with her friends again.all,we hold regular sessions,studying the statements How excited she was!And when she looked up at of Confucius.What's more,related professors are the birds in the trees,she knew her bird must be frequently invited to give speeches on Confucianism very happy,too. online.As far as I'm concerned.the club is of great 高分亮点 significance and can help you gain a better 高分词汇：①gladly ad.乐意地：高兴地②get sick生病 understanding of Chinese culture. ③selfishly adv.自私，地④cheerfully ad.高高兴兴地 Looking forward to your reply. ⑤disappear.消失；不见：失踪 高分句型：（句型I)She thought that perhaps her bird didn't Yours, like being kept in the cage at al.(由连接词that引导的宾语 Li Hua 从句) Wednesday 邀请信写作跟踪训练 2)And when she looked up at the birds in the trees. she knew her bird must be very happy,too.(由when引导的 Q跟踪训练1 时间状语从句) [范文] Dear Roy. Week 3 邀请信&慈善助人类读后续写 How is it going?I'm writing to invite you to attend a photography exhibition to be held in our Monday 如何写好邀请信 school,whose theme is "Impressive changes around Step Two词汇运用 me".Here is some detailed information. I.extremely 2.be keen on 3.delighted 4.join in The exhibition will begin at 8 a.m.and last for 5.establish 6.possess 7.characteristic 8.session 9.frequently 10.be of great significance about three hours in the school hall on Feb.15th.In Step Three句式表达 addition,the exhibition will feature about fifty 【,完成句子 students'works centering on the ways people live (1)I know that you are extremely keen on Chinese culture and work in this fast-developing city.You will surely (2)The Confucianism online club was established by our be amazed by the brilliant pictures and thus more school recently. (3)I'm more than delighted to write to invite you to join in familiar with the city. the club. I would be very joyful if you could come.I'm (4)The club possesses various characteristics. looking forward to your reply. (5)First of all,we hold regular sessions. Yours sincerely, (6)We are studying the statements of Confucius. Students'Union 08 答案全解全析 高分亮点 [范文] 高分词汇：①exhibition.展览，展出②detaileda,详尽 Upon recovery.Mike announced on social media to take a 的，详细的3 information n.消息，资料④feature. eross-country trip.He wanted to cycle to James's grave 以…为特色⑤brilliant ad.巧妙的，使人印象深的 site to pay his respects in person.It seemed fitting to 高分句型：（句型I)『m writing to invite you to attend a make the journey by bike-to show how transformative photography exhibition to be held in our school.whose theme the heart was.Mike was back to cycling and gradually is“Impressive changes around me”.(运用了whose引导的 built up his body.Blessings for the ride flooded in on 非限制性定语从句】 social media."What a biker with a big heart,"someone (句型2)I would be very joyful if you could come.(运用了if 引导的条件状语从句) commented.Hearing about Mike's decision,Christine and David decided they would meet him there when 0跟踪训练2 [范文] he arrived. Mike got off his bike and walked straight to Christine.who Dear Jim. was waiting at the grave site."Thank you.Thanks for Spring has come and our school is going to coming."said Christine as they folded into a deep organize a cycling activity themed "Greet Spring. hug.Then came the tears.They were not the deep Embrace Nature"on April 10th.I am writing to invite weeping tears of grief,but tears of relief from a you to join us. mother who knew she'd done right.At James's At 8:00 a.m.,we will gather at the school gate headstone,Mike squatted down and took a deep and then go to the famous cycling park in the breath,feeling the strong pulse of James's heart in suburbs.After arriving there,we will rent road bikes his chest.He told James how thankful he was and and begin our cycling along the 10-kilometer-long promised to take care of his heart. route.After that,we will have a picnic.It's a good 高分亮点 chance to get some exercise and enjoy the beautiful 高分词汇：①in person亲自，当面②transformative adj.有 view in the countryside.Don't forget to wear your 改革能力的，起改造作用的③build up锻炼④grief n.悲 helmet and protective gloves if you come.You'd 伤，悲痛⑤squat.蹲坐 better bring your lunch pack with you. 高分句型：（句型1）Hearing about Mike's decision,Christine and David decided they would meet him there when he If you are interested in it,just let me know. arrived.(运用了规在分词作状语及when引导的时间状语 Yours. 从句) Li Hua (2)They were not the deep weeping tears of grief,but 高分亮点 tears of relief from a mother who knew she'd done right. 高分词汇：①organize v.组织：筹备②theme,(休闲场 用了who引导的定语从句) 所，活动)以…为主题③suburb.城郊，近郊 ④picnic n.野餐：野餐活动⑤helmet n.头盔，安全帽 6protective Sunday 应用文写作/读后续写提分训练 ad.保护的：防护的 0第一节 高分句型：（句型1）After arriving there,we will rent road [范文] bikes and begin our cycling along the 10-kilometer-long route. Dear Jordan. (动名词作宾语) I'm writing to sincerely invite you to write an 2)It's a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the article for "Teenager life around the world",a new beautiful view in the countryside.(it作形式主语) column of our school newspaper. Saturday 读后续写话题训练 To begin with,your article is welcome to focus [语篇解读]本文以心脏为线索晨开，讲述了James让父母 both on your life and study on campus,which 在他去世后，将所有器官捐给需要的人，心脏捐给了Mik。 makes it possible for us teenagers to have a better Mike在收到James母亲的信后，开始了解James并发现了 understanding of teenagers in your country.Meanwhile, James与自己有很多相似之处。他想要亲自去拜访James的 you can also involve some special occasions or 父母表示感谢和敬佩，随后便骑自行车来到国家的另一 activities,thus enabling us to have a deep insight to 一James的家。 authentic American culture.In addition,attention [段落续写]①由续写第一段首句内容“康复后，Mike在社 should be paid to the number of words.ranging 交媒体上宜布要进行横跨全国的旅行。”可知，第一段可描写 from 300 to 400 or so. Mike为骑行做的准备及大家在媒体上对此事的看法。②由 续写第二段首句内容“Mke下了自行车，径直走向在幕地等 I would appreciate it if you could accept my 候的Christine。"可知，第二段可描写Mike见到James父母后， invitation.Looking forward to your prompt reply. 向他们表达感激和敬意，并在James墓前承诺好好照顾他的 Yours, 心脏 Li Hua 高二英语应用文写作+读后续写 高分亮点 Week 4 咨询信&朋友真情类读后续写 高分词汇：①sincerely ad.由衷地，真诚地 ②to begin with 首先3 involve v,(使)参加.加入：使承担.使面对 ④authentic adj.真正的，真迹的⑤prompt adj.迅速的.立 Monday 如何写好咨询信 刻的 Step Two词汇运用 高分句型：（句型1）To begin with,your article is welcome to 1.eagerly 2.apply 3.volunteer 4.relevant 5.seek focus both on your life and study on campus,which makes it 6.in advance 7.be of vital importance 8.share possible for us teenagers to have a better understanding of teenagers in your country.(运用了which引导的非限制性定 9.become familiar with 10.opportunity 句式表达 语从句) Step Three (2)I would appreciate it if you could accept my 1.完成句子 invitation.(透月了形式宾语用法) (1)I am eagerly planning to apply to be a volunteer in the 0第二节 Paris 2024 Olympic Summer Games. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了身为校园志愿 (2)I know you have relevant experience. 者的作者在圣凝前夕的义演募捐活动中先后遇到的两个人： (3)I'm writing to seek advice from you. 一位学生家长不太情愿付钱买票，但还是出钱了：一个小男孩 (4)To begin with,please tell me what I should prepare in 则带着一准零钱表示已经看过演出，执意要补票 advance. [段落续写]①由续写第一一段首句内容“所以我决定付出 (5)A convincing application is of vital importance. 些努力来劝他放弃付钱。”可知，第一段可描写作者试图劝小 (6)Could you give me some advice on how to write it? 男孩放弃付钱，但在他的执意要求下接受了他的善意。②由 (7)What's more.I would appreciate you too much if you 续写第二段首句内容“我们的对话有些影响到之前那位抱怨 could share your volunteer experience with me in detail 买票的女士。”可知，第二段可描写那位家长转变了态度，理解 (8)I think it will help me to become familiar with this kind of 了募捐活动的好意并做出了实际行动。 work. 范文】 (9)Volunteering can improve my social skills and build new So I decided to make some efforts to persuade him to give relationships. up paying."If the ticket table was closed when you (10)I really hope to get this opportunity. got there,you couldn't pay."I reasoned."Don't (11 )I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. worry about it..”I assured him.Thinking the matter2.句式升级 was settled.I started to push the coins back. (1)Knowing you have relevant experience,I'm writing to However,stubborn,he put his hand on mine."I seek advice from you. must pay for the show."For a moment our hands (2)Since a convincing application is of vital importance. bridged the money.Realizing I was whable to could you give me some advice on how to write it? persuade the boy.I spoke,"OK,it's up to you.Two (3)What's more,I would appreciate it if you could share tickets cost two dollars."The pile of coins added up your volunteer experience with me in detail,which I think will to the correct amount."Thank you,"I said.The boy help me to become familiar with this kind of work. (4)Volunteering can improve my social skills and build new smiled,turned away and was gone. Our conversation somewhat affected the woman who had relationships so that I really hope to get this opportunity complained about buying tickets."Excuse me,"I looked (5)Looking forward to hearing from you soon. up,surprised to see the woman who had bought her Step Four连句成篇 own tickets moments earlier.She was still there, Dear Tim, purse open,change and tickets in hand."The I am eagerly planning to apply to be a volunteer scenery is beautiful,and those costumes couldn't in the Paris 2024 Olympic Summer Games.Knowing have been cheap.You'd better keep the change."you have relevant experience,I'm writing to seek She said quietly,handing me a few dollar bills,and advice from you. left.Little did that boy know that he had given us To begin with,please tell me what I should our first gift of the Christmas season. prepare in advance.Since a convincing application is 高分亮点 of vital importance,could you give me some advice 高分词汇：①assur心v.使确信：向…保证②add up to总 on how to write it?What's more,I would appreciate 计，合计；达到③purse m.钱包，手袋④scenery n.风景， 景色⑤costume n.服装，装束 it if you could share your volunteer experience with 高分句型：（句型I)Thinking the matter was settled,I started me in detail,which I think will help me to become to push the coins back.(运用了现在分词作状语) familiar with this kind of work.Volunteering can (2)I looked up,surprised to see the woman who had improve my social skills and build new relationships bought her own tickets moments earlier.(运用了关系代词 so that I really hope to get this opportunity. who引导的定语从句】 (3)Little did that boy know that he had given us our first Looking forward to hearing from you soon. gift of the Christmas season.(运用了little在句首引导的部 Yours, 分倒装)】 Li Hua