专题13 书面表达15篇-备战2025年中考英语常考语法点+题型练习(中考真题+名校模拟真题)(安徽专用)

专题13 书面表达15篇 (中考真题+名校最新真题) 1．（2024·安徽·中考真题）假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。 要点: 1. 活动目的； 2. 灭火器的使用方法； 3. 你的体会。 注意: 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数） Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. Among the activities, how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most. When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly. As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. During the period, we should be careful enough not to get hurt. From the activities I’ve learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是看图作文； ②时态：一般过去时，一般现在时 ③提示：结合图示信息，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍上周学校举行的 “消防安全日”，点明活动的目的； 第二步，具体介绍灭火器的使用方法； 最后，表达个人从这次活动中得到的感悟体会。 [亮点词汇] ①draw one’s attention 吸引某人的注意 ②pick up 捡起 ③pull off 拔出 ④as soon as 一……就…… ⑤put out 扑灭 [高分句型] ①When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly.（when引导时间状语从句） ②As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire.（as soon as引导时间状语从句） 2．（2023·安徽·中考真题）假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。 注意： 1．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3．词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： poster（n. 海报）； design（v. & n. 设计） My Experience of Making a Poster Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Experience of Making a Poster Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years. Firstly, I asked my grandparents about their past living conditions. Then, I found some old photos online to compare the past and present of my hometown. Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached. This experience helps me know better about my hometown. With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved. I am very happy to see these changes. As a member of this town, I will contribute my own efforts to its development. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的各个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接所给开头，介绍制作海报的目的； 第二步，具体阐述制作海报的过程； 第三步，表达从这次经历中学到的东西以及自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①rapid development快速发展 ②living conditions生活条件 ③sorted the information把信息分类 ④lead a better life过上更好的生活 [高分句型] ①Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached.（that引导的定语从句） ②With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved.（现在完成时的被动语态） 3．（2022·安徽·中考真题）假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下： 1.风趣幽默，深受喜爱； 2.团队合作，历险克难； 3.追逐梦想，永不言弃。 注意： 1.词数80～100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服） Dear Mike, Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng’en during the Ming dynasty. It tells a story about the Tang monk Xuanzang and his three disciples. The book is humorous and well received. In the book, the four main characters show teamwork as they overcame numerous difficulties. Finally, they attained the true Buddhist scriptures. This story tells us to chase our dreams and never give up. You are bound to enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can share with me your opinions whenever you like. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，向Mike介绍《西游记》这本书。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍这本书的内容以及想表达的哲理；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 4．（2024·安徽·模拟预测）手机是现在生活中最普及的通讯工具之一，也是不可缺少的必需品。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的认识。 提示： （1）手机的制成（金属和塑料）、种类、价钱、颜色和形状； （2）手机的用途（打电话、听歌、看视频、上网聊天、发邮件等等）； （3）现在学生几乎都有手机，但是作用不同； （4）补充一至两点个人想法和你的认识。 要求： （1）包含提示中的相关内容，可适当发挥； （2）文中不能出现真实姓名和校名； （3）不少于80词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Mobile phone has become a necessary part of people’s life. Mobile phones are made of metal and plastic. They come in all colors and varieties. Their functions and performance are not the same, so their prices are different from about 1000 to tens of thousands of them. We can use mobile phones to make phone calls, listen to music, watch videos, chat online, send emails and so on. Nowadays, almost all students have mobile phones, but their functions are different. Some students study less because of playing mobile phones, and some students are shortsighted. I think mobile phone brings us convenience, but we should make use of it properly. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍手机的制成、用途等； 第二步，介绍学生的使用； 第三步，表达自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of由……制成 ②make phone calls打电话 ③listen to music听音乐 [高分句型] ①Nowadays, almost all students have mobile phones, but their functions are different. (转折连词but连接并列句) ②I think mobile phone brings us convenience (省略that的宾语从句) 5．（2024·安徽淮北·三模）“父亲是儿那登天的梯、父亲是那拉车的牛……”；父亲用他的肩膀支撑起一个家。没有父亲的辛苦付出，就没有我们现在的生活。今天（6月16日）是父亲节。假如你是Fu Xing，请你用英语写一封电子邮件，向父亲表达自己的感谢之情。 要求： 1．内容可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅； 2．不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名； 3．词数80—100。作文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dad, I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks again for everything you have done for me. Love, Fu Xing 【答案】One possible version: Dear Dad, I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. All these years, you have done so much. Almost every day, you take me to and from school. When I’m sick, you look after me carefully and patiently. You always trust me and care a lot about my school life and personal feelings. What’s more, you always encourage me when I am in trouble. The advice you have given me has helped me a lot. You’re the strongest person I knew. With your help, I’m sure to become a better person. Happy Fathers’ Day! Hope you can be happy and healthy every day. Thanks again for everything you have done for me. Love, Fu Xing 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：邮件开头及结尾已经给出，按照要求向父亲表达自己的感谢之情，要突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接邮件开头，引出话题； 第二步，结合具体事例，表达对父亲的感激之情； 第三步，抒发对父亲的美好祝愿并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be in trouble陷入麻烦中 ②with one’s help在某人的帮助下 [高分句型] ①When I’m sick, you look after me carefully and patiently.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②The advice you have given me has helped me a lot. （省略引导词that或which引导的定语从句） 6．（2024·安徽马鞍山·三模）假定你是李辉，你的英国朋友Peter将随交流团来安徽研学，向你了解安徽的著名景点，请你用英语给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1.欢迎友人来访； 2.介绍著名景点； 3.提醒出行须知。 注意： 1.短文须包含上面所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80~100(邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：famous scenic spots(著名景点) Dear Peter, I’m glad that you are coming to my hometown. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m glad that you are coming to my hometown. I’m very happy to give you a warm welcome and share some famous scenic spots with you. Anhui has many places of interest full of traditional culure, like Mount Jiuhua, where you’ll see lots of ancient temples. You can talk with the local people about the long history. Besides, Anhui is famous for ancient villages, especially Hongcun. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in the village which smells good and tastes nice! What’s more, you’d better bring light clothes and comfortable shoes since you may take a long walk in the countryside. You are bound to have a fantastic time during your stay here. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要有遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作的重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，表达对对方的到来感到高兴； 第二步，具体介绍安徽的景点、特色等以及出行须知； 第三步，书写结语，相信对方一定会在安徽玩得很高兴。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②be famous for因……而出名 ③What’s more此外 ④bound to一定会 [高分句型] ①As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in the village which smells good and tastes nice!(定语从句) ②What’s more, you’d better bring light clothes and comfortable shoes since you may take a long walk in the countryside.(原因状语从句) 7．（2024·安徽合肥·三模）假定你是李辉，请你以“顺利度过九年级”为主题并结合下列三个方面要点向校英文报School Life专栏投稿，为八年级学生介绍你的经验。 要点： 注意： 1．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．不可出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3．词数80-100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 Spend the Ninth Grade Smoothly Now you are going to spend the last year of middle school, I know___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Spend the Ninth Grade Smoothly Now you are going to spend the last year of middle school, I know you may feel confused and nervous about the coming school life. Here is 、、y experience. Firstly, it’s necessary for us to develop good habits and ways to learn. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. Learning in groups and helping each other are two good ways to study. If we meet some problems, we can ask others for help. Many tasks need close teamwork. Nothing will be achieved unless we work well together. What’s more, we should do more reading in our spare time to broaden our horizon. Secondly, find a good friend. When you are upset or in trouble, it’s a good way to communicate with someone you trust. Finally, don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. I hope all these above will be helpful to you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意根据要点提示展开写作，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，引出下文； 第二步，具体从三方面分享顺利度过九年级的建议； 第三步，书写结语，表达美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①get ready for为……做准备 ②in trouble有麻烦 ③communicate with和……交流 [高分句型] ①Nothing will be achieved unless we work well together. （条件状语从句） ②When you are upset or in trouble, it’s a good way to communicate with someone you trust.（时间状语从句） ③I hope all these above will be helpful to you.（宾语从句） 8．（2024·安徽蚌埠·三模）假如你是李华，目前学校正进行一个题为“Is It More Important to Work Independently or as Part of a Team?”的话题讨论，不少同学发表了自己的看法。请结合所给图示写一篇文章向英文报Teenagers投稿，介绍这次讨论情况。 要点包括： 1.介绍讨论结果； 2.表达个人选择； 3.陈述选择理由。 注意： 1.短文须包含上图和要点中的所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数 80~ 100 (短文题目与首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。 Is It More Important to Work Independently or as Part of a Team?   Our school recently had a survey asking if students prefer teamwork or working independently. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Is It More Important to Work Independently or as Part of a Team? Our school recently had a survey asking if students prefer teamwork or working independently. Interestingly, 65% of the students favored teamwork, believing it improves creativity and provides more learning opportunities through working together. Meanwhile, 35% preferred working independently because they pay more attention to independence and concentration. As for me, I stand with the majority. I believe working in a team not only opens one’s mind but helps develop key interpersonal skills like communication and teamwork. These are important qualities that benefit us beyond school studies and they can prepare us for future challenges. In general, while working alone teaches us how to be independent, working as part of a team still plays an important role in achieving growth and success. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍讨论结果； 第二步，表达个人选择以及陈述选择理由； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①pay attention to注意 ②independence独立 ③play an important role in在……种扮演重要的角色 [高分句型] ①Meanwhile, 35% preferred working independently because they pay more attention to independence and concentration. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②In general, while working alone teaches us how to be independent, working as part of a team still plays an important role in achieving growth and success. (while引导的让步状语从句) 9．（2024·安徽合肥·三模）假定你是李辉，你校英语社团正在策划一次以“中国古代杰出人物”为主题的活动周，你和同学看完通知后想参加该活动。请你认真阅读该通知，并按要求写一篇英语短文。 NoticeDear students, The English Club in our school plans to organize a week-length event about Historic Figures in ancient China. You and your friends should work together to introduce one of the Chinese historic figures. ★Who is the figure that you want to introduce? ★Why do you want to introduce the person? ★How will you display the person? (By making a poster? By creating a video? Or by…) ★How will you work together to finish the task? Looking forward to your passage. School English ClubWord Bank: figure (n. 人物); display (v. 展示) 注意：1.词数80—100 左右；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I’m Li Hui from Class One. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m Li Hui from Class One. I will introduce Confucius to you. As you know, China is greatly influenced by Confucianism. Confucius was a great Chinese thinker, educator and philosopher. He had many famous works. Confucius’ thoughts have been developed into a system of philosophy known as Confucianism. He has made a great difference in our education. We will create a video to introduce him. I will search for some information about Confucius, and some of students will turn the information into English dialogues. And others will create the video. I think we will finish the work successfully. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时、现在完成时和一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍一个古代杰出人物，并介绍会如何合作完成任务，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你们要介绍哪个古代杰出人物以及原因； 第二步，介绍你们要如何展示这个人以及会如何合作完成任务； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①search for寻找 ②turn...into把……变成 [高分句型] ①Confucius’ thoughts have been developed into a system of philosophy known as Confucianism. (过去分词作定语) ②I think we will finish the work successfully. (宾语从句) 10．（2024·安徽淮北·三模）假如你是李华，你们学校要求每个学生在周末为家人做一顿饭，你的英国笔友David 来信询问有关情况，请你根据以下要点，给他写一封回信。 要点： 1. What did you cook? 2. What did your family think of it? 3. What did you learn? 要求： 1. 短文需包含所有的要点，可适当发挥； 2. 不得在作文中出现真实名称和地名。 3. 词数80—100(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear David, I’m excited to share with you my recent experience from last weekend. Our school gave us an interesting task—to prepare a meal for our family. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear David, I’m excited to share with you my recent experience from last weekend. Our school gave us an interesting task—to prepare a meal for our family. On Saturday evening. I decided to cook a traditional Chinese dish called Kung Pao Chicken, along with rice and some vegetables. My family was pleasantly surprised when they sat down for dinner. They not only thought highly of my effort in taking on this challenge but also enjoyed the taste of the food. Seeing the joy on my parents’ faces, I realized that sharing love and care through simple acts like cooking can bring great happiness. In a word, this activity developed my independence and responsibility. It was more than just a meal. It was a learning journey filled with laughter, warmth, and deliciousness! Best regards, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图是分享自己上周末的经历——家人做一顿饭； 第二步，介绍自己做的菜以及家人的看法； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的所学。 [亮点词汇] ①along with以及 ②take on承担 ③independence独立 [高分句型] ①My family was pleasantly surprised when they sat down for dinner. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②It was a learning journey filled with laughter, warmth, and deliciousness! (过去分词短语作定语) 11．（2024·安徽淮北·三模）善于合作是一种重要能力。近期你校英语社团将举办以“Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork”为主题的征文活动。请写一篇英语短文，介绍你与他人合作的一次经历并谈谈你的感受。活动内容可从下表中选择一项或自行确定。 Teamwork Activities 要点 ·take part in a ballgame prepare for a party ·clean the classroom ·do social practice (社会实践) ·… ·阐述团队合作的意义和作用； ·介绍活动的时间、地点、人物及过程； ·谈谈你的感受 ·… 注意： （1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； （2）词数：80~100。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）参考词汇 (仅供选择使用)：cooperate (v.合作) team spirit (团队精神) Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults. The ability to work together with others is not simply a skill needed at school. In fact, it is also an important skill used in all areas of life. I remembered that I took part in a football match last month. At first, I thought I could score goals by myself. At last, we failed this game because of arrogance. After that, I realized this was a team sport. I should work together with other teammates. All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen our social skills, but also develop our communication skills. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“与他人合作的一次经历”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，肯定团队合作的重要性； 第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，详细描述这次经历的时间，过程等信息； 第三步，点评自己的感想并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①in fact事实上 ②at first起初 [高分句型] ①I remembered that I took part in a football match last month. （宾语从句） ②All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen our social skills, but also develop our communication skills.（not only…but also） 12．（2024·安徽合肥·二模）如今旅游深受欢迎，但在旅游中我们常会看到一些不文明行为（uncivilized behaviors）。假设你是李华，请结合表格信息，以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题，写一篇短文向某英文报刊投稿，倡导文明旅游。 Uncivilized behaviors Your opinions Your advice throw rubbish everywhere impolite ... ... pick flowers in a park ... ... speak loudly in public places ... ... ... ... ... 注意： 1．词数80～100； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Traveling in Good Manners Dear editor, Nowadays, traveling is getting more and more popular. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li hua 【答案】One possible version Traveling in Good Manners Dear editor, Nowadays, traveling is getting more and more popular. But we can often see some uncivilized behaviors during traveling. For example, some people throw rubbish everywhere when traveling to places of interest. It’s really impolite and also causes much inconvenience for other people. They should put rubbish into dustbins to protect the environment. Secondly, some people like picking flowers in the park just because they are beautiful. This is uncivilized and selfish. We can put up signs to remind people not to do that. Thirdly, there are people speaking loudly in public places. We should also remind them to lower their voice.   In my opinion, we should travel in good manners so that everyone can enjoy the beauty of the world. Yours, Lihua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对表格中的不文明行为进行描述介绍； 第二步，介绍自己对不文明行为的看法并给出改正建议； 第三步，号召大家文明旅行。 [亮点词汇] ①more and more越来越 ②place of interest名胜古迹 [高分句型] ①Some people throw rubbish everywhere when traveling at places of interest. （when引导的时间状语从句） ②We should travel in good manners so that everyone can enjoy the beauty of the world.（so that引导的从句） 13．（2024·安徽阜阳·二模）假定你是李辉。你从你的英国笔友Mike的来信中得知他最近沉迷于手机游戏和短视频，他的学习受到了影响。请你写一封电子邮件，告诉他沉迷手机的危害以及如何正确使用手机。要点如下： 1. 表明写邮件缘由； 2. 沉迷手机危害多； 3. 正确使用手机的建议。 注意： 1. 词数80-100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,                                Li Hui   【答案】例文： Dear Mike, How is everything going? I felt very worried when I heard that you are addicted to computer games. They will be harmful to you in many ways. To begin with, they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things. In addition, playing games and watching videos for a long time will do harm to your health, especially to your eyes. Worse still, some games are full of violence, which will be harmful to your mental health. Therefore, I strongly hope that you can stay away from them. We must use the mobile phone in a proper way. For example, when we have problems in our study, we can use our mobile phone to search for useful information. Looking forward to your good news.                                                                                                                                                           Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是电子邮件，要求陈述沉迷手机的危害以及如何正确使用手机； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中的要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写邮件缘由及观点； 第二步：具体阐述沉迷手机的危害； 第三步：提出正确使用手机的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①be addicted to沉迷 ②To begin with首先 ③do harm to对……造成伤害 [高分句型] ①I felt very worried when I heard that you are addicted to computer games.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Worse still, some games are full of violence, which will be harmful to your mental health.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 14．（2024·安徽滁州·二模） 假定你是李华，你的英国好友Linda想了解你的学校平时是如何通过开展校园安全工作来加强学生的安全防范意识。请你根据要点提示，用英语给她写一封邮件。 要点如下： 1. 举行讲座、演讲、展览等； 2. 开展各种演练； 3. 引导学生关注网络安全。 注意： 1. 短文须包含所有信息内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80～100（开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：drill（n. 演练） Dear Linda, I’m glad to tell you all about my school’s actions about students’ safety. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. With my best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文: Dear Linda, I’m glad to tell you all about my school’s actions about students’ safety. Campus safety is so important to our development that our school has taken a series of measures. First, lectures, presentations and exhibitions are held to make us realize the important of self-protection. Second, various drills are carried out, so we can learn how to stay safe through real practice. Third, our teachers teach us to pay attention to network security when surfing the Internet because there is so much untrue information on the Internet. In a word, safety always comes first. We should try our best to protect ourselves. That’s all. With my best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①体裁：本文是一篇应用文，是回复朋友的一封邮件； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，指出校园安全的重要性； 第二步，介绍学校针对校园安全所开展的一系列工作，介绍细节或成效； 第三步，总结并表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①take a series of measures 采取一系列措施 ②carry out 开展，执行 ③pay attention to 关注 [高分句型] ①Second, various drills are carried out, so we can learn how to stay safe through real practice.（be carried out使用被动语态；how to do sth.作learn的宾语） ②Third, our teachers teach us to pay attention to network security when surfing the Internet because there is so much untrue information on the Internet.（“when doing sth.”作时间状语；because引导原因状语从句） 15．（2024·安徽合肥·三模）有人说，少年强，则中国强。在五四青年节来临之际，学校校报正在向同学们征稿，要求同学们以“How to be a great teenager”为主题积极投稿。请你将完成后的稿件发给校报编辑。 要求：（1）根据图文内容，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，可适当发挥； （2）词数80—100； （3）文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：mood n. 情绪 How to be a great teenager I’m very happy to have a chance to talk about how to be a great teenager. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to be a great teenager I’m very happy to have a chance to talk about how to be a great teenager. Here are some steps which might help us to achieve our goals. To begin with, it is necessary to live a healthy lifestyle. For example, we’d better take exercise regularly to build up our bodies. In addition, being active, friendly and honest does help us to have good moods and develop stronger relationships with people around us. Of course, we are supposed to do something meaningful for our country, like protecting the environment. Only if we make efforts to serve society, can we live in a better world. Take action to do something beneficial from now on. The greater teenagers we become, the stronger our country will become. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何成为一名好的青少年，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据思维导图详细介绍如何成为一名好的青少年； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①to begin with首先 ②in addition而且 ③be supposed to do应该做某事 ④make efforts to do sth.努力做某事 [高分句型] ①To begin with, it is necessary to live a healthy lifestyle. (动词不定式作主语) ②Only if we make efforts to serve society, can we live in a better world. (倒装句) ③The greater teenagers we become, the stronger our country will become. (the+比较级，the+比较级) 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$