2024年河北省中考英语二轮复习书面表达写作指导 话题八.优秀品质

话题八 优秀品质 分析河北近 8 年中考真题可知，书面表达针对“优秀品质”这一话题考查了两次： 2018 年通过“看到别人扔垃圾自己该怎么做”考查了“个人行为规范”；2019 年通过“什 么时候说谢谢”考查了“感恩”。 分析全国近年真题可知，此话题为高频话题，通常有以下 命题角度：①个人行为规范；②自律；③感恩。 个人行为规范 该话题通常从以下几个角度考查：①勤俭节约；②遵守校规校纪；③遵纪守法；④爱护 环境；⑤乐于助人；⑥诚实守信等。 该话题下的文章通常是记叙文或应用文，介绍规范 准则时，应用一般现在时；描述自己或他人曾做过的相关事情时则应用一般过去时。 自 律 该话题通常从以下几个角度考查：①自律体现在哪些方面；②如何自律；③自律带来的 好处等。 该话题下的文章通常为说明文或记叙文，时态多用一般过去时。 感 恩 该话题通常要求考生给某人写感谢信或介绍自己的感恩对象。 写作时，首先表明感恩 的对象；其次介绍感恩的原因，并列举具体的事件；最后重申自己的感激之情。 该话题 下的文章通常为记叙文或应用文，在介绍感恩对象或表达感激之情时，多使用一般现 在时；介绍原因可以用一般过去时或一般现在时，强调对方的付出。 话题词汇 个人行为规范 caring adj. 有同情心的 considerate adj. 体贴周到的 kind adj. 关爱的 polite adj. 有 礼貌的 rude adj. 粗鲁的 sincere adj. 真诚的 active adj. 积极的 behavior n. 行为； 举止；态度 brave adj. 勇敢的 honest adj. 诚实的 responsible adj. 尽责的；负责的 volunteer n. 志愿者 street n. 街道 pick v. 拾起 separate v. 分开 adj. 分开的 mix v. 混合；混在一起 throw v. 扔 open v. 打开 close v. 关闭 knock v. 敲；打；击 nod v. 点头 touch v. 接触；触摸 communication n. 交流；通信 conversation n. 谈话；交流 discuss v. 讨论 follow v. 遵循；跟随 rule n. 规则 自 律 lazy adj. 懒惰的 relax v. 放松 hard adj. 努力的 careless adj. 粗心的 careful adj. 小心的 useful adj. 有用的；有益的 try v. 试图；努力 achieve v. 达到；取得 example n. 例子 realize v. 认识到； 实现 free/ spare adj. 空闲的 develop v. 发展 effort n. 努 力 exercise n. & v. 锻炼 learn v. 学；学会 review v. 复习 experience n. 经历；经验 感 恩 gratitude n. 感激；感谢 thankful adj. 感谢的；感激的 thank v. 感谢 appreciate v. 欣 赏；感激；领会 patient adj. 耐心的 serious adj. 严肃的；认真的 strict adj. 严格的 influence n. & v. 影响 encourage v. 鼓励 help v. 帮助 increase v. & n. 增加；增长 improve v. 改进；改善 progress n. 进步；进展 praise v. 赞扬 teach v. 教 explain v. 解释；说明 correct v. 纠正；改正 check v. 检查 solve v. 解决；解答（难题等） 教材好句积累 中学生行为规范 1. Don’t arrive late for class. You must be on time.［人教七下Unit ４］ 2. Don’t eat in the classroom. You must eat in the dining hall.［人教七下Unit ４］ 3. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere. Always keep the library clean. ［译林牛津八下Unit ５］ 自律、感恩等美德 1. We need to share the housework. Then we can have a clean and comfortable home.［鲁教八上Unit １］ 2. I’d like to thank you for giving money to Animal Helpers.［人教八下Unit ２］ 3. Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.［人教八下Unit ３］ 样题示例 ［２3·吉林中考改编］青少年应勤于反思，在自我反思中正确认识自己。 不断完善自己。 请以“Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better ”为 题，结合自己的成长历程，从学习、运动、劳动等方面，用英语写一篇 短文。定主题：自我反思 定人称：第一人称 定时态：一般现在时 定要点：关于“自 我反思”的理解、方 法及收获 提示 ：（1）What do you think of self-reflection? （2）How do you carry on self-reflection in your life? （3）What have you learned from self-reflection? 注意：（1）短文须包括所有提示信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数 80 个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection 审题指导 通过审题可知，本文的人称采用第一人称，时态采用一般现在时。 写作时可以采用三 段式作文形式：第一段讲述自我反思的重要性；第二段结合自身优点或缺点，提出如何保 持优点或改善缺点的方法；第三段发出自我反思的倡议。 思维提纲... self-reflection makes us become better. 段 1：讲述你对反思的理解 I like reading. It can not only... but also... 扩句：可讲述阅读的好处 Advantage: I like reading. 段 2：结合自身的 实际情况，即优点 或缺点，提出如何 保持优点或改善缺点的方法保持优点或改善 缺点的法 I read too fast, so I can’t understand the author’s ideas. Disadvantage: I read too fast. Solution：I will read sentence by sentence. 反思使我变得更好 段 3：发出反思的号召 So let’s do some serious self-reflection together to make us better ourselves. 成篇赏析 Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us becomebetter. Through self-reflection, we can find out the advantages and disadvantages of what we did, and manage to do it well the next time. I like reading. ①It can increase my knowledge, and also open my eyes. If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to the good habit of reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading. ②But I sometimes read too fast. I can’t understand some of the author’s ideas. In the future I will read sentence by sentence to get rid of this bad habit. So let’s do some serious self-reflection together to make us better ourselves. 句子优化 1. It can increase my knowledge, and also open my eyes.（用“not only... but also...”升格） 2. But I sometimes read too fast. I can’t understand some of the author’s ideas.（用“so...that...引导的目的状语从句”升格） 考题速递 ［２3·石家庄模拟］曾子曰：“吾日三省吾身。 ”自省（self-reflection）有助于解决自身的问题， 也是自我完善和自我超越的必经之路。 请根据下面的提示和要求，以“Being a Self- reflective Teenager”为题，用英文写一篇短文。 提示：（1）What do you do to be self-reflective? （2）What benefits have you got from doing so? 要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数 80 个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Being a Self-reflective Teenager Self-reflection plays an important role in our life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题八 优秀品质 句子优化 1. It can not only increase my knowle- dge, but also open my eyes. 2. But I sometimes read so fast that I can’t understand some of the author’s ideas. 考题速递 One possible version: Being a Self-reflective Teenager Self -reflection plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-reflective in life. First, I’m used to thinking about what I’ve done during a day and trying to find out if there is any need to improve something. Then, recording is a good method to reflect myself. For example, I record my good and bad behaviors from time to time, and then I will remember to behave well next time. Besides, from the self-reflection I have, I begin to behave better and better. Last, I want to be a more excellent student in study and in life. So it is important for me to reflect myself. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$