2024年河北省中考英语二轮复习书面表达写作指导 话题六 校园生活

话题六 校园生活 分析河北近 8 年中考真题可知，书面表达针对“校园生活”这一话题仅在 2021 年考 查了一次，角度为：从“学校、教师、同学”三个方面介绍自己喜欢的一所学校。 分析全国近 年真题可知，此话题为高频话题，通常有以下命题角度：①学生的学校生活；②校园活动。 学生的学校生活 该话题通常考查以下几个方面：①介绍曾经的校园生活、学校概况或对未来校园生活 的畅想；②介绍校园生活内容，如每天的学习安排，与朋友、老师之间的相处等；③对 学校生活的感触或对未来校园生活的期待。该话题下的文章通常是记叙文。注意写此 类文章时的时态变化：介绍曾经的校园生活以一般过去时为主；畅想未来的校园生活 以一般将来时为主。 校园活动 该话题通常是要求考生介绍曾经参加过的一次校园活动或者邀请别人参加校园活动。主 要包含以下要点：①点明学校举办的活动：俱乐部活动、校园旅行、参观博物馆等；②具 体介绍活动的内容，如时间、地点、人物、经历等；③介绍自己的感受或期待对方的到 来。 该话题下的文章通常为记叙文或应用文，以介绍校园活动为主。 时态多用一般过 去时或一般将来时。 话题词汇 学校设施 school n. 学校 college n. 学院；大学 university n. 大学 classroom n. 教室 blackboard n. 黑板 lab (=laboratory) n. 实验室 office n. 办公室 playground n. 操场 library n. 图书 馆 seat n. 座位 chalk n. 粉笔 flag n. 旗 学校人员 teacher n. 教师 student n. 学生 classmate n. 同班同学 pupil n. 小学生 monitor n. 班长 headmaster n. 校长 学校组织 grade n. 年级；成绩 class n. 班级 primary school 小学 secondary (middle) school 中学 senior high school 高中 term n. 学期 row n. 一排；一行；一列 line n. 行；排；列 校园活动 sport n. 体育运动 chess n. 国际象棋 race n. 赛跑；比赛；竞赛 break n.（课间）休息； 间隙 game n. 游戏 meeting n. 会议；集会；会面 match n.（尤指体育方面的）比赛；竞 赛 club n. 俱乐部；社团 party n. 聚会；晚会 weekday n. 工作日 play v. 参加（体育 运动或球赛）；演奏；弹奏；玩耍 n. 剧本；戏剧 enter v. 输入；进入；（使）参加；（使）报名 join v. 参加；加入 exercise v. & n. 锻炼；练习；运动 run v. 经营；跑；奔跑 teach v. 教；教授 organize v. 组织；筹备 absent adj. 缺席的 教材好句积累 介绍学校的基本情况 1. A computer game is in the school library. ［人教七上Unit ３］ 2. My school is very beautiful, and there are some shops around it. ［译林牛津七上Unit ７］ 介绍学生的学校生活 1. My junior high school life is coming to an end. There are a lot of things I will never forget.［人教九全Unit１４］ 2. We have Chinese at eight o’clock. We have science at five to nine. ［外研七上Module ５］ 介绍校园活动 1. You can join the reading club. It is not only helpful to developing your reading habits, but also useful to knowing better about the world. 2. Bob wants to join the English club. He likes to speak English.［人教七下Unit １］ 3. Next month, we will have an art festival. It’s on November 3rd.［人教七上Unit ８］ 样题示例 ［２3·遂宁中考改编］时光荏苒，新一阶段的学习生活即将开启。 对于未来，同学们期待中又有些许担忧，英语课上，大家就新学期是否住校这个问题展开了讨论，请根据科代表整理出的信息， 结合自己的看法，以“Are you going to live in the school?”为题写一篇短文，在下 一堂课上进行分享。 定人称：第一人称 定文体：议论文 定主题：住校问题的利与弊 定时态：一般现在时 注意：（1）短文须包括所有要点提示，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Are you going to live in the school? A new term is coming. Are you going to live in the school dormitory? I think there are advantages and disadvantages. ______________________________________________________________ 审题指导 通过审题可知，本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文，时态为一般现在时。 写作时根据表 格内容提示即可，首先要引出话题（已给出）；其次，介绍住校的好处和坏处；最后，介绍自 己的选择。 注意在写作的过程中不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 思维提纲开头：引出话题 I’m glad to give you my advice.（已给出） Advantages: save time/ be independent/ manage oneself wiselyuse the Internet wiselywisely 你打算 住校吗？ 正文：根据表格提示介 绍住校的好处与坏处 Disadvantages: lack of private space/ no family to take care of I choose to live in the school dormitory, because... 结尾：介绍自己的选择并给出理由 成篇赏析 Are you going to live in the school? A new term is coming. Are you going to live in the school dormitory? I think there are advantages and disadvantages. First of all, it can help us save time and not waste time on the road. ①So we have more time on our studies. Second, living in the dormitory can make us learn to be independent and manage ourselves better. When we have questions, we can communicate with our teachers or classmates in time. However, the lack of private space in the dormitory makes sleep easily affected. ②Because there is no family to take care of, our life may be terrible. If you have something on your mind, you can’t communicate with your parents in time. I choose to live in the school dormitory, because it can not only build up my independence, but also increase the affection between me and my classmates. 句子优化 1. So we have more time on our studies.（用“focus on”升格） 2. Because there is no family to take care of, our life may be terrible.（用“be used to”升格） 考题速递 ［２3·镇江中考改编］假如你是李华，你们学校整理出一块空地，将用于拓宽学生活动和实践 的空间。 校英语报登载了校方初拟的两种方案，就这块空地建设文化角还是菜园征求意 见。 请根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。 A Culture Corner A Vegetable Garden display art works share ideas and feelings hold activities (fashion shows, ...) develop a sense of beauty ... work with classmates learn farming skills harvest vegetables (tomatoes, ...) form the habit of labour (劳动) ... 要求：（1）所写内容必须包括一种方案的所有信息，可适当发挥； （2）对你所选择的方案说明理由，并对其提出建议； （3）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （4）词数 80 个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Sir/ Madam, I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to _________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 话题六 校园生活 句子优化 1. We can focus more on our studies. 2. We may not be used to school life because there is no family to take care of. 考题速递 One possible version: Dear Sir/ Madam, I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to build a Vegetable Garden. The reasons are as follows. We are very tired from studying at school every day, so we need some relaxing time. We can work with classmates to learn farming skills in our spare time. We can grow all kinds of vegetables. We can harvest vegetables, such as tomatoes and potatoes. Through labor, we can also understand the hardships of our parents and the hard - won food. Not only can we form the good habit of working, we can also learn some life skills. So I suggest that we should build a vegetable garden. I hope my suggestion will be adopted. Yours, Helen 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$