2024年河北省中考英语二轮复习书面表达写作指导 话题五 人际沟通

话题五 人际沟通 分析河北近 8 年中考真题可知，2022 年考查了“人际沟通”这一话题，角度为师生关 系。 分析全国近年真题可知，此话题为高频话题，通常有以下命题角度：①与他人沟通时 出现的问题并给出建议；②如何与他人相处。 与他人沟通时出现的问题并给出建议 题干通常是一封邮件，发件人介绍自己与他人沟通时出现的问题，需要考生给 出建议。 在写作时，考生首先需要确定并分析问题，其次给出建议。 该话题下的 文章通常是应用文，给对方提建议时，人称以第二人称为主，时态以一般现在 时为主。 如何与他人相处 ①语言沟通；②待人处事；③行为举止等。 该话题下的文章通常为说明文，以介绍 如何与他人相处为主，人称多为第一、二人称，时态多用一般现在时。 话题词汇 交 际 meet v. 会面；偶遇 party n. 宴会；聚会 communicate v. 沟通；传达（思想和感情） com- munication n. 沟通 together adv. 一起 conversation n. 谈话；交谈 discuss v. 讨论；谈论 discussion n. 讨论；谈论 treat v. 对待 introduce v. 介绍；引见 introduction n. 介绍；引 见 attend v. 出席；参加 public adj. 公共的；公众的 n. 公众 提出观点 idea n. 主意；想法 think v. 想；思考 thought n. 思想；想法 suggest v. 建议；提议 pur－ pose n. 目的；意图 advice n. 忠告；建议 advise v. 忠告；建议 opinion n. 意见；看法 believe v. 认为；猜想 wonder v. 想知道 沟 通 talk v. 谈话；交谈 n. 交谈；会谈 speak v. 讲话；谈话；发言 tell v. 告诉；讲；吩咐 rea－ son n. 原因，理由 promise v. 保证；承诺 explain v. 解释；说明 mention v. 提及；提到 mean v. 意思是； 意味着 believe v. 相信 trust v. & n. 相信； 信任 support v. 支持 might modal v. 可能；也许 must modal v. 必须；一定 should modal v. 应该 argue v. 争 论；辩论 attitude n. 态度 manner n. 方式；方法；（pl.）礼貌，礼仪 教材好句积累 与他人沟通时出现的问题并给出建议 1. My best friend and I had a fight. She won’t speak to me.［人教八下Unit ４］ 2. You’d better talk to your friend, then you can say you’re sorry. ［人教八 下Uni ４］ 3. We can’t communicate well. We can hardly get along with our friends. ［冀教九Uni ９］ 如何与他人相处 1. You should just be yourself.［人教八下Uni ４］ 2. Smiling can be a passport to good commun- ication.［冀教九Uni９］ 样题示例 ［名师原创］我们经常听说“少年不知愁滋味”，其实青少年的成长阶 段也有很多的苦恼与困惑 ，比如厌学、交友等。你的朋友 Linda 写信向 你求助。 假如你是李华，请根据来信内容用英语给她写一封信。定文体：应用文 定人称：以第二人称为主 定时态：以一般现在时为主 定主题：针对成长阶段 遇到的问题提出建议 定要点：写信的目的、建议、期望 Dear Li hua, Recently I had some trouble in my daily life. I can’t get good grades and have too much pressure. My mother thinks it’s not safe to make friends on the Internet. Relations between mother and I become difficult. I always feel lonely, so I spend more time playing computer games. What can I do? I hope to hear from you soon. Linda 注意：（1）信件须包括所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数 80 个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Linda, It’s normal to have problems in our daily life. I’m glad to give you my advice. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 审题指导 通过审题可知，本文属于求助信，为应用文；由于是根据信件内容给 Linda 回信，主要 以建议为主， 因此时态采用一般现在时。 写作时首先要开门见山地指出写信的目的；其 次，从学习、交友、人际关系的角度具体阐述建议；最后，表达期望。 思维提纲I’m glad to give you my advice.（已给出） 开头：引出话题，指出写信目的 spend more time on study Study have problems, ask teachers or classmates for help eyes 段2：介绍最喜欢的阅读 方式及原因，如以看纸质书为例 communicate with Mother Relation 求助信 use the Internet wisely wiselyuse the Internet wiselywisely make friends online carefully Friendship 结尾：表达期望 I hope things will be better for you soon. 成篇赏析 Dear Linda, It’s normal to have problems in our daily life. I’m glad to give you my advice. ①First, you shouldn’t play computer games too much and you should spend more time on studies. If you have some problems, you can ask your teachers or classmates for help. Second, why not sit down and communicate with your mother? You can ask her not to push you so hard and you can make an effort to study. ②Last but not least, the Internet is useful, but you should use it wisely. You have to make friends online carefully. You can’t leave more personal information on the Internet. I hope things will be better for you soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 句子优化 1. First, you shouldn’t play computer games too much and you should spend more time on studies.（用“instead of”升格） 2. Last but not least, the Internet is useful, but you should use it wisely.（用“even if引导的状语从句”升格） 考题速递 ［名师原创］假如你是 Helen，你的一个学校的朋友 Sarah 最近给你发了一封电子邮件，请根据邮件内容给她回复一封邮件，针对她目前遇到的困惑提出至少 3 条合理建议。 注意：（1）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； Dear Helen, I am really upset nowadays. I have many friends, but now none of them wants to talk to me. At lunchtime, nobody likes to share a table with me. I feel really puzzled and lonely. And I can’t understand why they’re trying to avoid me. Would you please give me some advice? Thank you! Yours, Sarah （2）词数 80 个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Sarah, I’m sorry to hear you have some trouble getting along with your friends. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Helen 话题五 人际沟通 句子优化 1. First, you should spend more time on your study instead of playing computer games. 2. Last but not least, you should use the Internet wisely even if it is useful. 考题速递 One possible version: Dear Sarah, I’m sorry to hear you have some trouble getting along with your friends. Here are some suggestions for you. First, you’d better find out what got you into such a mess, and then turn to your teachers or parents for advice. Second, why not open your mind to communicate with your friends? It shows you really cherish the friendship and value their viewpoints. Besides, in your daily life, it’s wise to be ready to help your friends and the people around you. In this way, you can not only win back your old friends but also make some new ones. I hope my suggestions can make a difference. I’ll continue to offer help if you need. Yours, Helen 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$