UNIT 3 Writing——如何描写运动时刻（Word教参）-【勤径学升】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第一册同步练测（外研版2019）

　　　　　　Writing——如何描写运动时刻　[对应学生用书第61页] 本单元的写作话题是“Writing about a sporting moment”， 描写一个运动时刻， 属于记叙文。写作时， 可以从事件的起因、经过、结果以及感想等方面作简单的介绍。写作中多用一般过去时和一般现在时。 [基本框架] 第一部分：介绍比赛项目， 举行的时间、地点和参与人物； 第二部分：详细介绍比赛过程； 第三部分：抒发自己的感受。 [常用词语] 1．sports meeting　　　　　　 运动会 2．an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历 3．on the playground 在操场上 4．strengthen one's friendship 增进友谊 5．compete with 与……竞赛 6．catch up with 赶上 7．fall down 跌倒 8．neck and neck with 并驾齐驱 9．finishing line 终点线 10．fighting spirit 拼搏精神 11．be proud of/take pride in 为……感到自豪 12．enrich one's life 丰富……的生活 [常用语句] 1．I watched the final of the 4×100­metre relay at our sports meeting held on Monday. 我观看了周一举行的运动会上的4×100米接力赛决赛。 2．It was an exciting experience which I would never forget. 这是一次激动人心、令我难以忘怀的经历。 3．It is one of the unforgettable moments that I have ever experienced． 这是我所经历过的难以忘记的时刻之一。 4．When the runners set off, everyone went wild! 当赛跑运动员们开始跑时， 人们都疯狂起来！ 5．We all stood up and started cheering and shouting. 我们都站起来， 开始欢呼喝彩。 6．I could see the runners running as fast as they could． 我能看到赛跑运动员们都在尽力地快速奔跑。 7．I believe this moment will remain a precious memory for all of us. 我相信这一时刻将会是我们所有人的珍贵记忆。 8．It was such a wonderful moment that I enjoyed its speed and passion. 这是如此精彩的时刻， 我享受它的速度和激情。 根据下面的提示， 描述某一个运动时刻。 1．上周日学校在操场上举行了跑步比赛；在所有的跑步运动员中， 汤姆是跑得最快的一个； 2．他在拼命奔跑， 其他运动员在拼命追赶； 3．突然， 汤姆摔倒了， 左腿受伤了；一些同学过去帮助他； 4．过了一会儿， 汤姆站起来， 继续跑； 5．在场的人都被他的精神感动了。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。 Last Sunday our school held a running race on the playground． I learned a lot from him.From now on, I will be a determined person and never give up. [审题谋篇] 明确体裁话题：记叙文， 运动时刻 确定人称时态：以第三人称及一般过去时为主 布局文章架构： 首段——简要介绍这次运动会的跑步比赛 中段——详细介绍跑步比赛中发生的事情 尾段——你从中得到的感悟 列出核心要点： 1．汤姆摔倒， 左腿受伤；一些同学过去帮助他 2．汤姆站起来， 继续跑 3．在场的人都被汤姆的精神感动 [词汇推敲] 1．try one's best 尽力 2．keep up with 赶上 3．cheer for sb． 为某人加油 4．fall down 摔倒 5．give up 放弃 [遣词造句] ①Tom ran very fast and he was ahead of the others after a short time. 汤姆跑得很快， 一会儿就领先于其他选手了。 ②All the viewers were very excited and they were cheering for them． 所有的观众都很兴奋， 在为他们加油。 ③All the viewers that were present at the race were moved by his spirit． 在比赛现场的所有观众都被他的精神感动了。 [句式升级] 1．用so…that…升级句① Tom ran so fast that he was ahead of the others after a short time. 2．用非谓语动词升级句② All the viewers were very excited, cheering for them． 3．用形容词短语作状语升级句③ All the viewers present at the race were moved by his spirit. [妙笔成篇] [参考范文] Last Sunday our school held a running race on the playground． Tom ran so fast that he was ahead of the others after a short time.He was trying his best to run and the other runners were trying to keep up with him.And all the viewers were very excited, cheering for them.Suddenly, Tom fell down and his left leg was badly injured．Some students ran to him and took care of him.One student advised him to give up the race.However, after some time, Tom struggled to stand up and went on running.All the viewers present at the race were moved by his spirit. I learned a lot from him.From now on, I will be a determined person and never give up. 假定你是李华， 你的英国笔友Fred所在学校的足球队上周三来你校进行友好访问， 并进行了一场足球赛。请你给他写封邮件， 向他介绍比赛的情况， 内容包括： 1．比赛过程； 2．比赛结果； 3．你的感受。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。 [参考范文] Dear Fred, I'm writing to tell you something about the football match between our school football team and yours last Wednesday. The match started in the audience's warm applause.As the best football team in our city, we still found it hard to compete with the visiting team.Although we took the lead in the first half, in the second half, our strength was obviously decreasing.Worse still, some problems appeared in our cooperation, which made us lose the match in the end．Although we lost the match, we gained deep friendship from each other.I think such friendly matches can not only help to improve our skills but also learn from each other. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$