书面表达20篇(2024年浙江省中考英语二模三模名校真题)

书面表达20篇(2024年浙江省中考英语二模三模名校真题) 1．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）为了更好地适应高中的学习和生活，英语课上，大家要对即将到来的暑假安排进行讨论，请你根据下面的表格内容准备好发言稿，简要补充选择这些活动安排的原因。 内容要点 参考词汇 What are you going to learn? English… What are you going to do for fun? read books… How often are you going to exercise? every day… Where are you going with your friends or family? … 注意： (1) 必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥； (2) 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； (3) 词数 80~100 。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello everyone! I’m happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. To start with, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·浙江·二模）假设你是李华，请结合表格内容，用英语邮件向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的，并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。 School Labor (劳动) Courses The course you choose and your reason Courses Aims …  Vegetable-planting To study plants and know about farming  Cooking course: making dumplings & Zongzi To learn about traditional Chinese cultures  Chair-repairing To learn and practice new skills 要求： 1. 必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 2. 词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? This term, we have three labor courses at school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．（2024·浙江舟山·二模）某英文报正开展“Our life has changed for the better”征文竞赛，请你投稿，从下表所列的几个方面描述过去和现在美好生活的变化，并谈谈你的感受。 In the past Now Living condition small house, … comfortable house, … Leisure (休闲) activity swim in the river or sea, few books, ... swim in the swimming pool, more books, ... 注意： （1）短文中必须描述表格中所列的内容，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息； （3）词数：80—100，短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 首句：Our life has developed rapidly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·浙江湖州·三模）你校英语文化节举办了主题为“Sharing My Hometown”的短视频征集活动，你所在组的作品成功入选。请根据下表信息写一篇发言稿，在英语课上分享你们的创作历程及收获。 Process Gains ·make a plan ·understand local culture better ·... ·collect information ·create a video 注意： （1）发言稿必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节； （2）你们的收获至少两条； （3）词数：80—100； （4）发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：收获 gain Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown. To start with, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening. 5．（2024·浙江嘉兴·二模）某英文网站开展了有关青少年兴趣爱好的网络调研，请你结合以下网页信息，写一篇英语短文投稿， 分享你的爱好 (包括所属类别、喜欢的原因、与这个爱好相关的生活经历及收获) 注意： (1)短文必须包含网页中的相关信息，并适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； (3)词数：80～100词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·浙江温州·三模）一个有意义的周末可以这样度过：你可以与家人共享美食，可以与朋友参加志愿活动，可以学习特长提升自我⋯⋯请你根据下面的评价量表写一篇短文，在班级“My Meaningful Weekend”英语沙龙上分享。 Checklist Content include: specific information (time, places...) meaningful activities feelings Language Use proper expressions and correct sentences. Hand-writing Write clearly. 注意：①词数：110词左右；②文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 My Meaningful Weekend _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·浙江·二模）假如你是李华，请你根据以下邮件写一封回复邮件。为他提出建议，帮助他走出困境。 Hi, Li Hua, Thanks for your last letter. Everything goes on well these days. How about you? I had an argument with my mom. She is mad at me. Because my room is always in a mess. What should I do? How can I keep my room tidy? Hope to hear from you soon. Dan 注意： (1)请回复邮件中所提及的问题，可适当发挥；词数：80-100。 (2)邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息； Hi, Dan, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 8．（2024·浙江台州·二模）青少年活动中心(Teenager Activity Center)发布了针对初中毕业生的暑期志愿活动招募公告。假设你是李华，想要参加该志愿活动。请你写一封英语邮件，向青少年活动中心自荐。 Volunteers Wanted Are you a junior high graduate (初中毕业生)? Do you have time in July and August? We need some volunteers to work in the city as: ·guides in History Museum               ·cleaners in Central Park ·librarians in Public Library           ·teachers in Kids’ Summer Camp Can you come? We need your help. Please e-mail Mr. Black with the following information: □Your name           □Your personality (性格)        □Your ability □What job you want    □How you will do the job well 注意：   (1)邮件必须包括上述要求提供的所有信息，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息； (3)词数：80~100。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Black, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your kind reply. Yours, Li Hua 9．（2024·浙江金华·二模）假定你是李华，请你对英国朋友Max的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Hua, Long time no talk! I bet you are busy with your upcoming exams. Big news—I’m moving to Zhejiang with my parents, starting Grade Two there next term. Can’t wait to see you! But I’m a bit nervous about my coming school life. Would you mind sharing your middle school experience and giving me some advice? Hope you’re doing well. Thanks! Yours, Max Dear Max, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．（2024·浙江台州·二模）为丰富校园文化，学校腾出一个教室作为活动场所，校英语栏目组正向全校学生征求建议。假如你是李华，请用英语给栏目组负责人写一封信，从下面的表格中推荐一个名称(或者自拟一个名称)，并阐明理由。 注意： (1)书信内容要点应选自上表，可适当发挥； (2)词数：80—100； (3)书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear sir, I’m glad to have a chance to share my ideas. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice will be helpful. Thank you! Yours Li Hua 11．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）学校英文报正以“Wonderful Zhejiang”为题开展征文活动。请根据以下图示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意要求： 1．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 2．词数100词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）文明社会，从我做起，请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一短文，向校刊English Garden投稿，倡导做文明人。 注意： (1) 短文必须包括所给图片的信息，合理想象并补全第3幅图片的内容。 (以第三人称描述图片故事) (2) 必须谈谈你对此事的看法，并说明原因。 (3) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (4) 字数100词左右。短文首句已给，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：果皮 skin；踩在……上摔倒 slip on sth (slipped, slipped)；救护车 ambulance；一些不文明行为 some uncivilized behaviour To Be a Civilized Person Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（2024·浙江宁波·三模）曾子曰：“吾日三省吾身：为人谋而不忠乎？与朋友交而不信乎？传不习乎？”习近平总书记在演讲中多次引用这句话，告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。怎样成为更好的自己？请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to be a better teenager”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在毕业典礼上发言。内容提示： 注意： （1）演讲稿必须包含上图中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； （3）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 How to be a better teenager Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 14．（2024·浙江·二模）阳光学校将于六月底举行 2024届九年级毕业典礼，学校英语周刊向全校学生征集典礼活动金点子。假设你是该校学生李华，请给负责人王老师写一封电子邮件，推荐你认为最合适的三至四项活动，并给出理由。 Activities Reasons give best wishes to our friends help us a lot... invite parents to the ceremony share... with them … 注意： （1）邮件需包含表中所给的所有信息，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数：80—100词。信件开头已给出，不计入总词数； （4）邮件开头已给出，不计入总数。 Dear Mr. Wang, I am very glad to share my ideas about the graduation ceremony activities. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 15．（2024·浙江台州·二模）假如你是李华，请你对英国朋友Jim的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Hua, How’s it going? Recently, viewing short videos is becoming more and more popular all over the world, and many students lose themselves in it. That’s a big deal. Could you please share your opinions on the advantages and disadvantages of short videos? What can students do to deal with short videos in a proper way? I’m looking forward to your reply. Jim Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 16．（2024·浙江温州·二模）为庆祝第31个国际家庭日，学校英语社举行“Happier family, Better life”分享会。请你从下图中选择你认为最重要的两项提升家庭幸福感的秘诀，写一篇演讲稿分享你们家的具体做法及理由。 Keys to a Happy Family□Set rules □Eat together □Show thanks □Share housework □Have fun together □Be kind and patient □Share happiness or worries □Have family traditions and celebrations 注意：①词数：100词左右；首句和尾句已给出，不计入总词数； ②文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Good morning, everyone. I’m happy to share the keys to a happy family. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 17．（2024·浙江温州·二模）你曾经为提升自己做过一些努力吗？请根据以下征文海报，写一篇英语短文投稿，分享你在提升自我方面的一次经历以及收获，并谈谈你在这方面的计划。        注意： （1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （2）词数：100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 During the past three years, I have done a lot of things to be better. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Dave正在调查中学生的烦恼及应对情况，请你根据Dave发给你的调查表内容，给他回复一封邮件，谈谈你最近解决过的最大烦恼。 A Survey on Problem Solving 1. What was the biggest problem you have solved these days? How did you feel? (Tip: You can write about your friendship, study, parent-child relationship and so on.) 2. What did you do to solve it? What was the result? 3. What can you learn from the experience? 注意：(1) 短文必须包括图表中所有内容，可适当增加细节； (2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； (3) 词数：100词左右； (4) 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dave, Thanks for your last e-mail. I’d like to share the biggest problem I have solved recently. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 19．（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）你校英语俱乐部将举行“劳动教育”主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容用英语给负责人写一封书信，谈谈自己的劳动经历并提供建议。 注意： 1. 短文必须包括上图所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 补充内容至少各一条； 3. 词数：80—100； 4. 文章的开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 Dear sir, Labor is a very important part of our life. Here is my experience and some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 20．（2024·浙江台州·二模）假如你是李华，上周六你和同学去参观台州博物馆，期间你见到了一些不文明的现象。作为台州人，你深刻地意识到：文明台州，需要大家共同努力。请根据以下表格内容给英语周刊的文明城市 (Civilized City) 栏目投稿，呼吁更多人参与文明台州建设。 Uncivilized (不文明的) behaviors on the way throw rubbish about, step on the grass,… in the museum smoke in public, cut in line, … Feelings shameful (羞愧的) ,… Advice As local people in Taizhou, we… 注意：   (1)短文必须包括表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息； (3) 词数: 80~100。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。     Last Saturday I went to Taizhou Museum with my friends. I saw some uncivilized behaviors. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．例文 Hello everyone! I’m happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. To start with, I am going to learn English because English is my weakness. I will improve my English by reading English stories and listening to English radio. After studying, I plan to read some books. I think reading can not only increase my knowledge, but also relax me. In addition, I also plan to exercise every day. After all, a healthy body is the most important thing. Finally, I plan to travel to Beijing with my family. There, we will climb the Great Wall and visit the Forbidden City. I think we will have a good time. What’s your summer vacation plan? Can you tell me? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“描述自己的暑假计划”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，根据题干表格，详细描述暑假的安排和原因； 第三步，肯定自己将度过一个有意义的暑假，提出问题，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①listen to听 ②not only…but also不仅……而且 [高分句型] ①To start with, I am going to learn English because English is my weakness. （because引导的原因状语从句） ②I think we will have a good time. （宾语从句） 2．例文 Dear Mike, How is everything going? This term, we have three labor courses at school. In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on. In each kind of Chinese traditional food lie rich Chinese cultures. And we have chair-repairing course. It’s very interesting to learn new skills and practice them. There is also a vegetable-planting course this term. I choose it this term. My classmates and I can plant tomatoes and have a lot of fun. We study plants and know about farming and get close to nature. I really enjoy vegetable-planting course as they not only enrich our school life but also offer us basic life skills. Do you have labor courses? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的； 第二步，介绍自己选择的劳动课程。 [亮点词汇] ①have a lot of fun玩得开心 ②get close to亲近 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on.（疑问词+动词不定式结构） ②It’s very interesting to learn new skills and practice them.（动词不定式作主语） 3．例文： Our life has developed rapidly. People’s living conditions have improved a lot. In the past, most people lived in small houses with no air conditioners. But now they live in big houses which are more comfortable. And people now have more leisure activities. Before, they swam only in the river or sea. Now they can play in the pool with warm water. For children, they used to have few books to read, but they can enjoy more books now. Communications are becoming easier and quicker, as people use mobile phones, and computers instead of writing letters. With the development of the society, our life is becoming better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写短文介绍过去和现在生活中的变化。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题并根据表格内容介绍人们生活条件及休闲活动的变化； 第二步，谈谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①air conditioners空调 ②used to do sth.过去常常做某事 ③instead of代替，而不是 [高分句型] ①But now they live in big houses which are more comfortable.（which引导定语从句） 4．例文： Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown. To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan carefully. After that, we made every effort to collect information in different ways. For example, we talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people. Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown. From this experience, we have gained a lot. Above all, we now understand our local culture better. In addition, our English has improved greatly. Last but not least, we’ve realized how important good teamwork is! Thanks for your listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，道出发言目的：分享制作经验； 第二步，分享收获与感受； 第三步，感谢大家聆听。 [亮点词汇] ① to start with 首先 ② above all 最重要的是 ③ last but not least 最后但同样重要的 [高分句型] ①Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown.（which引导定语从句） ②Last but not least, we’ve realized how important good teamwork is!（宾语从句） 5．例文 My hobby is all about reading and learning, especially reading adventure stories. Last spring when I started to read Harry Potter at the city library nearby, it felt like stepping into a whole new world. I was totally drawn in by the hero’s adventures at once. From then on, I lost myself in the book, which has made a memorable experience. Through reading, I’ve got a wealth of new knowledge. Also, it has brought me a lot of pleasure when I feel bored or stressed. Now, books are my closest friends, offering me endless adventures and unforgettable experiences. (98 words) 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：在写作时注意阅读题目要求，把网页中的相关信息和个人观点写进去，并注意衔接，保证条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍自己的爱好； 第二步，介绍读书的意义； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①start to do sth.开始做某事 ②From then on从那时起 [高分句型] ①Last spring when I started to read Harry Potter at the city library nearby, it felt like stepping into a whole newworld. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②From then on, I lost myself in the book, which has made a memorable experience. (which引导的定语从句) 6．例文 As a student, life at weekends is an important part of my daily life. Last weekend, I helped my parents do a lot of housework. My mother was very pleased with the work that I did. Besides that, I also cooked a delicious dinner for them. I felt very happy when I saw my parents eating the food. After dinner, we watched TV together. We spent a sweet family day. In this way, I understand my parents better and show my love to them. This is the meaning of family: we help each other and care for each other. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作主题已给出，写作时主要围绕表格中的要点展开，合理组织语言，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入主题； 第二步，具体介绍周末做的事情； 第三步，表达感受，结束文章。 [亮点词汇] ①be pleased with对……很满意 ②eat out吃光 ③in this way用这种方法 [高分句型] ①My mother was very pleased with the work that I did. （定语从句） ②I felt very happy when I saw my parents eating the food. （时间状语从句） 7．例文： Hi, Dan, Long time no see, I miss you very much. Everything is fine with me, so don’t worry about it. I heard that you had an argument with your mom. Because your room is always in a mess. Here is some advice about your problems. Firstly, you can say sorry to your mother. Secondly, you should do some housework at least twice a week. You can help clean up the room and do the dishes when your mom and dad are busy with work. If you can help at home, they will be relaxed and happy. Last but not least, you should discuss with your parents when you have problems. When you ask for help from them, they can always give you some good advice and solve the problems. The more we communicate with parents, the better relationship we will have. I hope my suggestions can help you. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生要根据以下邮件给Dan写一封回复邮件。为他提出建议，帮助他走出困境。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单问候，表明写作目的是为了给对方一些建议； 第二步，介绍如何保持房间整洁以及自己的做法； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] last but not least最后但并不是最不重要的 ask for寻求 solve the problems解决问题 [高分句型] ①When you ask for help from them, they can always give you some good advice and solve the problems. (When引导的时间状语从句) ②The more we communicate with parents, the better relationship we will have. (the+比较级，the+比较级) 8．例文 Dear Mr. Black, I am Li Hua, a junior high graduate. I am free in July and August, and I’d like to volunteer as a guide in History Museum. I can surely be a good guide. I am outgoing and talkative. Also, my rich knowledge of history and my clear explanation will make visitors satisfied. To do it well, I plan to tell stories to make my explanation more interesting. Another way of getting my job done well is to give out gifts if visitors can answer my questions. I’ll be more than glad if I can work for the museum. Looking forward to your kind reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“希望成为一名志愿者”来引出下文中对自荐信内容的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“个人基本信息、想做的工作和如何做好志愿工作”三方面入手，重点介绍自己的优势； ③第三步，书写结语。希望能被录取。 [亮点词汇] ①give out 分发，赠送 ②more than 非常 [高分句型] ①Another way of getting my job done well is to give out gifts if visitors can answer my questions.（if引导的条件状语从句） 9．参考范文： Dear Max, Glad to hear from you! Yes, exams are keeping me on my toes, but I’m managing. Congratulations on your move to Zhejiang! It’ll be exciting to start a new school here. Middle school was a mix of challenges and fun for me. At first, I felt a bit nervous, but I quickly found my way by making friends and joining interesting activities in school clubs. My advice would be to get involved in activities you enjoy—it’s a great way to meet people. Also, hug the cultural differences, which will enrich your experience. You’ll get used to everything soon. Looking forward to seeing you in Zhejiang! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据信中提到的问题写一封回信，给出自己的建议，注意语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，引出下文要给出的建议； 第二步，详细介绍自己的中学生活； 第三步，给出建议。 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①hear from收到……的信 ②making friends交朋友 ③get used to习惯于 ④look forward to期待   [高分句型] ① At first, I felt a bit nervous, but I quickly found my way by making friends and joining interesting activities in school clubs.（but表示转折） ②Also, hug the cultural differences, which will enrich your experience.（which引导的定语从句） ③Looking forward to seeing you in Zhejiang!（动名词作宾语） 10．例文 Dear sir, I’m glad to have a chance to share my ideas. I think it will be a good place for Book Bar. Here’re my reasons. You know, reading is a long-life journey. We can read what we’re interested in in such a quiet place. Also, we can share the characters and the worlds from the books with our friends, which can help improve our knowledge. The most important is that we will form the habit of reading gradually and make new friends who have the same hobbies. Besides, to enrich our school life, the reading competition can be held in Book Bar. In a word, reading in Book Bar can really make a difference to our school life. I hope my advice will be helpful. Thank you! Yours Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”以及“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：根据所给表格完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，给出理由； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in…对……感兴趣 ②character人物 ③gradually逐渐地 ④hobby爱好 ⑤competition比赛 ⑥make a difference to…对……产生影响 [高分句型] The most important is that we will form the habit of reading gradually and make new friends who have the same hobbies.(that引导表语从句；who引导定语从句) 11．例文 Wonderful Zhejiang   Zhejiang is located in the southeast of China. It has a long history and splendid culture. The population of Zhejiang is more than 60 million. There are many kinds of delicious food in Zhejiang, such as seafood and West Lake lotus root starch and so on. Zhejiang also has many places of interest, such as West Lake in Hangzhou, Putuo Mountain in Zhoushan and so on. Many people travel there every year. The people here are friendly and helpful. If you come to Zhejiang, no matter what difficulties you meet, there will be someone to help you. Welcome to Zhejiang. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，介绍浙江的地理位置和历史、人口。 第二步，介绍浙江的美食，名胜以及人文。 第三步，书写结语，表达欢迎。 [亮点词汇] ①be located in位于 ②more than超过 ③many kinds of 许多种类 ④such as比如 [高分句型] If you come to Zhejiang, no matter what difficulties you meet, there will be someone to help you. (条件状语从句；让步状语从句) 12．例文 To Be a Civilized Person Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. Everything was nice until I saw a man was eating a banana. When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground. We were surprised at that moment, and my cousin wanted to pick it up right away. However, a girl ran so fast that she slipped on the skin by accident. At that time, we not only picked up the skin, but also helped the girl. From this experience. I sincerely realized the importance of environmental protection and behaving politely. If the man took the skin to into the bin, the accident wouldn’t happen. It’s good for you and others. In conclusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the convenience to people around. Action from now on! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应对题干图片进行描述并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述事件的背景，包括事件，地点，人物等信息； 第二步，结合题干图片，描述事件的经过并合理想象，补全第3幅图片的内容； 第三步，谈谈对此事的看法，并说明原因。 [亮点词汇] ①so…that如此……以至于 ②lead to导致 [高分句型] ①When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground.（when引导时间状语从句） ②In conclusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the convenience to people around.（not only…but also） 13．One possible version: How to be a better teenager Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager. First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What’s more, we’re supposed to make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, we’re ready to try to help them. Finally, it’s good to develop good hobbies and take part in voluntary activities. There is no doubt that volunteering makes a big difference to our society and people in need. In a word, if we try our best, we’ll become better and better. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借用“如何成为一个更好的青少年”的话题来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述怎样成为一个更好的青少年； 第三步，书写结语，表达“我们会变得越来越好”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①First of all首先 ②take action采取行动 ③be friendly to sb对某人友好 ④take part in参加 ⑤makes a big difference to对……有很大的影响 [高分句型] ①The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. (the+比较级，the+比较级句式) ②In a word, if we try our best, we’ll become better and better. (if引导的条件状语从句) 14．例文 Dear Mr Wang, I am very glad to share my ideas about the graduation ceremony activities. The graduation ceremony is considered as a time to say goodbye and thank you to the junior high school life and give wishes to the coming life as well. The following activities are probably some good choices. The activity I want to recommend first is to say thanks to all the teachers who helped us and take a photo with them. When we were going through a difficult time or making progress, teachers are always with us, supporting and helping us. They are the ones we will never forget. Also, giving wishes to our friends is a good idea. Although we will part with each other, the friendship will last forever. Wha’s more, it could be a wonderful thing to invite parents to the ceremony. Parents will be glad to share your joy with you and also it is a proper time to show great thanks to them. No matter what activities we will have, thank you for holding the ceremony for us. And wish everything goes well. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要有遗漏，可适当发挥，注意用词准确，语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出下文毕业典礼的活动； 第二步，具体介绍三到四个活动，并给出理由； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be considered as被视为 ②take a photo with sb和某人合影 ③go through经历 ④part with sb与某人分开 [高分句型] ① The graduation ceremony is considered as a time to say goodbye and thank you to the junior high school life and give wishes to the coming life as well.（被动语态） ②The activity I want to recommend first is to say thanks to all the teachers who helped us and take a photo with them.（定语从句） ③When we were going through a difficult time or making progress, teachers are always with us, supporting and helping us.（时间状语从句） ④Although we will part with each other, the friendship will last forever. （让步状语从句） 15．例文： Dear Jim, Long time no see, I miss you very much. Everything is fine with me. Short videos are very popular with many people. They are mostly short and interesting. We can learn some skills through the videos. We can also feel relaxed as well as getting some useful information from them. However, short videos have some disadvantages. More and more people are crazy about the Internet now. They will waste a lot of time if they watch too many short videos. Besides, people sometimes get harmful information. Meanwhile, it is bad for our health if we spend long time watching them. In my opinion, we’d better choose short videos in a proper way. We can learn good thing from short videos. At the same time, we shouldn’t spend too much time on them. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，进行简单的问候； 第二步，介绍短视频的优缺点； 第三步，介绍处理短视频的方式。 [亮点词汇] ①as well as也 ②meanwhile与此同时 ③be crazy about对……着迷 [高分句型] They will waste a lot of time if they watch too many short videos. (if引导的条件状语从句) 16．参考范文： Good morning, everyone. I’m happy to share the keys to a happy family. I think sharing housework is the most important. In my family, we have a rule that everyone helps with housework. My sister and I help clean the house. My father cooks meals and my mother does some washing. By working together, we finish faster and have more time to have fun. Being kind and patient is another key. Sometimes we may get annoyed with our family members, but it’s important to stay calm and communicate. We always try to listen to each other and understand how everyone feels. This helps us solve problems and stay happy. By doing these simple things, we create a warm and happy family. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出幸福家庭的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从两个方面讲述提升幸福家庭秘诀的具体做法； 第三步，书写结语。总结这样做的理由及意义。 [亮点词汇] ①help with帮助解决 ②get annoyed with sb.生某人的气 ③try to do sth.尝试做某事 [高分句型] ①Sometimes we may get annoyed with our family members, but it’s important to stay calm and communicate. (it为形式主语) ②We always try to listen to each other and understand how everyone feels. (并列句) 17．例文 During the past three years, I have done a lot of things to be better. The most meaningful experience was joining an English speaking competition. Before the competition, I was not confident and was afraid to speak English in front of others. But my teacher encouraged me to challenge myself. So I practised again and again whenever I had time. During the competition, I did quite well and got the first prize. It was the experience that helped me become more confident in learning English. And I also learned that hard work pays off. For the future, I plan to read more books and join an English club to improve myself. I believe every effort will take me closer to my goals. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你在提升自我方面的一次经历； 第二步，介绍你的收获； 第三步，最后谈谈你在这方面的计划。 [亮点词汇] ① be afraid to do害怕做 ② encourage sb to do鼓励某人做 ③ plan to do计划做 [高分句型] ① It was the experience that helped me become more confident in learning English.（强调句） ② I believe every effort will take me closer to my goals.（宾语从句） 18．参考范文： Dear Dave, Thanks for your last e-mail. I’d like to share the biggest problem I have solved recently. Last week, I had a fight with my best friend. I was so upset that I asked my mother for help. What my mother suggested me was that I was supposed to call her up. I knew I should, but I didn’t want to talk about it on the phone. Later, I made up my mind to come to her house, say sorry to her and invite her to go to the movies. At last, we became best friends again. It is common to have problems in our daily life. What we should do is having better communication with others and ask for help if needed. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体介绍自己的经历； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①had a fight with 与某人发生争吵 ②be supposed to 应该 ③talk about 谈论 ④ask for help 寻求帮助 [高分句型] ①I was so upset that I asked my mother for help.（结果状语从句） ②What we should do is having better communication with others and ask for help if needed.（主语从句） 19．例文 Dear sir, Labor is a very important part of our life. Here is my experience and some advice. I usually help with housework, such as doing the dishes, cleaning my bedroom, sweeping the floor and so on. Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. Also, sharing housework can help our parents free from heavy chores after work. And then they can relax themselves. For the coming Labor Education Theme Activity, I have some suggestions. I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. We can encourage students to clean up and decorate our school as well. Students will learn about the importance of hard work and the value of labor. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括思维导图中的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，开篇点题，介绍劳动很重要性，并引入自己的经验和建议； 第二步，介绍自己所做的家务劳动及收获； 第三步，对主题活动提出建议并总结。 ［亮点词汇］ ① clean up 打扫干净 ② form good habits 养成好习惯 ［高分句型］ ① Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. (动名词作主语，not only … but also…连接并列成分) ② I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. (宾语从句) 20．例文：     Last Saturday I went to Taizhou Museum with my friends. I saw some uncivilized behaviors. On the way to the museum, I found some people throwing rubbish about or stepping on the grass. Some even broke traffic rules. How dangerous! In the museum, some people cut in line or smoked in public. Some children talked so loudly that we couldn’t focus on the shows. I felt kind of shameful and sorry about what they did.     As local people in Taizhou, we should obey the rules to make Taizhou a more civilized city. Besides, we should develop good social behaviors. For example, we’d better keep quiet and wait in line in public places. As long as everyone tries their best, Taizhou will become more and more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要用“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，详述在台州博物馆看到的不文明的现象以及自己内心的感受； 第二步，呼吁人们参与文明台州建设并提出切实的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①cut in line 插队 ②focus on 专注于 ③obey the rules 遵守规则 [高分句型] ①I felt kind of shameful and sorry about what they did. （宾语从句） ②As long as everyone tries their best, Taizhou will become more and more beautiful.（as long as引导的条件状语从句） 答案第1页，共2页 答案第1页，共2页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$