专题09 应用文写作 (答案解析+专家评价+三年真题+词汇变式+解题技巧+话题变式+题型变式)-2024年高考英语新课标卷真题深度解析与考后提升

《2024年高考英语新课标卷真题深度解析与考后提升》 专题09 应用文写作（新课标I卷） 原卷版 (答案解析+专家评价+三年真题+满分答案+满分策略+话题变式+题型变式) 目录 一、原题呈现 P1 二、答案解析 P2 三、专家评价 P2 四、写作素材 P2 五、满分范文 P7 六、三年真题 P9 (一)2023年阅读理解A篇 P9 (二)2022年阅读理解A篇 P10 (三)2021年阅读理解A篇 P10 七、满分策略 P11 八、话题变式 P12 九、题型变式 P14 ( 一 原题呈现 ) 应用文写作关键词：告知信，人与社会，公园上美术课，学生活动，五育并举 假定你是李华，你们班上周五在公园上了一节美术课，请给英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享你的经历，内容包括： 1. 你的作品内容； 2. 你的感想。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I am writing to share with you the art class I had in the park last Friday. ( 二答案解析 ) ( 三专家评价 ) 聚焦立德树人，强化高考育人功能 高考英语命题贯彻落实高考内容改革要求，通过选取有关体育、美育和劳动教育的语篇，引导学生坚持五育并举，实现身心健康成长和德智体美劳全面发展。在体育方面，新课标Ⅱ卷阅读A篇介绍了秋季徒步健身活动，引导学生走近大自然，开展体育运动，文中提及多项注意事项，于潜移默化之中强调了运动安全的重要性。在美育方面，全国甲卷阅读A篇介绍了校园艺术节上丰富多彩的活动，引导学生走进画廊和博物馆，培养审美情趣，提高艺术品味。新课标I卷/II卷应用文写作告知英国笔友在公园上了一节美术课的作品和感受。在劳动教育方面，新课标Ⅰ卷阅读A篇介绍了一个地区生物栖息地修复工作队的工作内容和招募志愿者的要求，引导学生热爱劳动、参与劳动、享受劳动。 ( 四写作 素材 ) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 一、应用文审题分析 1．体裁：邮件。 2．主题：给好朋友Chris介绍上周五在公园上美术课的经历。 3．内容要点： 1） 除了开头语，需要具体描述完成的作品是什么样子的，包括使用的色彩、呈现的内容等。 2）详细阐述自己对于这次在公园上美术课的感想，比如对户外创作的感受、对艺术的新理解等。 4．语言表达： 1）要用较为流畅自然的英语来表述。 2） 注意时态，描述上周五的事情一般用过去时。 3）整体来说，这是一个比较常规的书信类写作任务，重点在于如何清晰地描述作品和生动地表达自己的感想，让英国朋友 Chris 能较好地感受到这次特别的美术课经历。 二、要写好这个应用文，学生需具备的能力： 1.语言运用能力：学生需要使用英语进行有效沟通，包括词汇的准确使用、语法的正确性以及句子结构的流畅性。 2.写作组织能力：包括组织文章结构的能力，如何合理地安排引言、正文和结尾，以及如何使用恰当的连接词使文章连贯。 3.描述和叙述能力：学生需要能够清晰地描述自己的作品和经历，同时能够叙述个人的感受和思考。 4.创造性思维：在介绍自己的作品和感想时，学生需要展示自己的创造性思维，使文章具有个性和吸引力。 5.跨文化交流能力：由于是写给外国朋友，学生需要考虑到文化差异，使用适当的语言和表达方式，以确保信息能够被正确理解和接受。 6.情感表达能力：在表达个人感想时，学生需要能够真实、自然地传达自己的情感和态度。三、写作构思 开头（第一段）： 1.在开头部分，除了已给出的语句表明写信目的是分享上周五公园美术课的经历。 2. 还需要写一句过渡语衔接。 主体（第二段）： 1、先描述自己完成的作品，包括作品的主题、主要元素、表现形式等，自己是如何创作的。 2、接着表达自己的感想，比如在公园上课的新奇感受，对自然之美的感悟，从这次经历中获得的启发等。 结尾（第三段）： 可以询问 Chris 对这种在公园上美术课的看法，或者询问 Chris 有没有类似在户外上美术课的情况，使邮件内容更加丰富。 四、相关的词汇和表达素材 1.色彩： vivid鲜艳的 rich浓郁的 dullish有点暗淡的 pastel柔和的 monochromatic单色的 2.线条与形状： curvy弯曲的 angular有棱角的 rounded圆形的 zigzag之字形的 3.整体效果： fantastic极好的 spectacular壮观的 charming迷人的 delightful令人愉快的 captivating迷人的 4.风格： impressionistic印象派的 abstract抽象的 minimalist极简主义的 5.细节与质感： elaborate精心制作的 textured有质感的 rough粗糙的 smooth as silk如丝般光滑 6.氛围与情感： solemn庄重的 cheerful愉快的 mysterious神秘的 romantic浪漫的 melancholic忧郁的 五、首段过渡衔接写作素材 1. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. It was an extraordinary experience that left a deep impression on me. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。那是一次非凡的经历，给我留下了深刻的印象。 2. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. The whole class was filled with creativity and joy. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。整个课堂都充满了创造力和喜悦。 3. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. What happened there truly broadened my horizons. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。在那里发生的事情真的拓宽了我的视野。 4. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. It made me realize the beauty and magic of art in a new way. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。它让我以一种新的方式认识到艺术的美丽和魔力。 5. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. That day in the garden was truly unforgettable. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。在花园里的那一天真的令人难忘。 6. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. The combination of art and nature was simply perfect. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。艺术与自然的结合简直太完美了。 7. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. It was a day filled with inspiration and discovery. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。那是充满灵感和发现的一天。 8. I’m writing to share with you the unique experience of the Art class we had in the park last Friday. It was an extraordinary day where we blended learning with the serenity of nature. 我写信是为了和你们分享上周五我们在公园上的艺术课的独特经历。这是一个非凡的一天，我们把学习与大自然的宁静结合在一起。 9. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday, where we explored the historical beauty and artistic heritage of our city's park. 我写信是为了和你们分享上周五我们的艺术课的丰富经历，在那里我们探索了我们城市公园的历史之美和艺术遗产。 六、介绍公园上美术课活动写作素材 1. I created a work with the theme of "Nature's Harmony". 我创作了一幅主题为“自然的和谐”的作品。 2. The main elements are trees, flowers, and a small pond. 主要元素是树木、花朵和一个小池塘。 3. The form of expression is a watercolor painting. 表现形式是一幅水彩画。 4. I started by sketching the outlines of the main elements. 我首先通过勾勒主要元素的轮廓开始。 5. Then I used different colors to fill in and create a gentle and harmonious atmosphere. 然后我使用不同的颜色去填充并营造出一种轻柔和谐的氛围。 6. I also added some details like birds and butterflies to make the picture more vivid. 我还添加了一些像鸟儿和蝴蝶这样的细节以使画面更加生动。 7. I made a work titled "Sunlit Park". 我创作了一幅名为“阳光照耀的公园”的作品。 8. The main elements are the bright sun, the green grass, and people enjoying the leisure time. 主要元素是明亮的太阳、绿草以及享受休闲时光的人们。 9. I began by outlining the basic shapes of the elements with light strokes. 我一开始用轻柔的笔触勾勒出元素的基本形状。 10. Then I gradually added colors and shades to bring out the vividness of the scene. 然后我逐渐添加颜色和色调以展现出场景的生动性。 七、公园上美术课活动感受写作素材 1. It's so amazing to have classes in the park. It really brings a whole new feeling. 在公园上课真是太令人惊奇了。它真的带来了一种全新的感受。 2. The beauty of nature is truly breathtaking and makes me feel so peaceful. 自然之美真的令人惊叹，让我感到如此平静。 3. This experience has inspired me to cherish and explore more of the wonders of nature. 这次经历启发我要珍惜并探索更多自然的奇妙之处。 4. Taking classes in the park makes me feel closer to nature and enriches my learning experience. 在公园上课让我感觉更贴近自然，丰富了我的学习体验。 5. The beauty of nature is an endless source of inspiration and makes me appreciate life more. 自然之美是无尽的灵感源泉，让我更加珍惜生活。 6. This park class experience has taught me to look at the world from a different perspective. 这次公园上课的经历教会我从不同的角度看世界。 7. Being surrounded by nature during class has made me realize how important it is to protect our environment. 在上课期间被自然环绕让我意识到保护我们的环境是多么重要。 8. The peace and tranquility of nature in the park have given me a newfound appreciation for simplicity. 公园里自然的宁静与安宁让我对简单有了新的认识。 9. Taking the art class in the park was really a novelty. 在公园上美术课真的是一种新奇体验。 10. It made me feel so close to nature and appreciate its beauty in a whole new way. 它让我感觉如此贴近自然，并以全新的方式欣赏它的美。 11. I was deeply inspired by this experience and realized the importance of connecting with nature. 我从这次经历中深受启发，意识到与自然相连接的重要性。 12. This class in the park broadened my horizons and taught me to look at things from different perspectives. 这次在公园的课拓宽了我的视野，教会我从不同角度看待事物。 八、公园上美术课活动结尾写作素材 1. What do you think about having art classes in the park, Chris? 克里斯，你觉得在公园上美术课怎么样？ 2. Have you ever had an art class outdoors like this before, Chris? 克里斯，你以前有过像这样在户外上美术课的情况吗？ 3. Did you enjoy this kind of art class in the park, Chris? 克里斯，你喜欢这种在公园上的美术课吗？ 4. Have you experienced something similar to this art class in the park, Chris? 克里斯，你经历过类似在公园上美术课这样的事情吗？ 5. What's your opinion on taking art classes in such an open environment like the park, Chris? 克里斯，对于在像公园这样开阔的环境中上美术课，你有什么看法呢？ 6. Was it interesting for you to have an art class in the park, Chris? 克里斯，在公园上美术课对你来说有趣吗？ 7. How did you feel when you had an art class in the park, Chris? 克里斯，当你在公园上美术课的时候你感觉如何？ ( 五满分范文 ) 满分范文1 Dear Chris, How is everything going? Hearing that you are an enthusiast in painting, I could hardly wait to share my delightful experience from our painting class. Last Friday witnessed our venturing into the park, a unique setting that inspired me to create a painting of the serene lake surrounded by lush green trees. The tranquility of nature was truly captivating. Not only was painting outdoors a refreshing change, but it also allowed me to see colors and shapes in a new light. Moreover, it was a sensory feast that heightened my perception and appreciation for the beauty of our natural world even more. Needless to say, it was a day filled with creativity and a sense of peace. Looking forward to hearing about your adventures! Yours, Li Hua 满分范文2 Dear Chris, I hope this message finds you well. I'm excited to share with you my latest artwork created during our art class in the park on Friday! It was such a serene environment, with the gentle breeze and the soft rustle of leaves, which truly inspired me. For this piece, I chose acrylics to depict a vibrant landscape. Drawn to the play of light and shadow amidst the trees, I tried to capture the interplay of colors as the sun began to set. The result is a mix of warm oranges, deep reds, and cool blues, which I think conveys the peaceful yet vibrant nature of that moment. I'd love to hear your thoughts on my creation. Maybe next time, we could take our art supplies and paint together in the park! Looking forward to our next adventure! Yours Li Hua 满分范文3 Dear Chris, How is everything going! This Friday afternoon witnessed such a marvelous art class held in the city park that I can’t wait to share with you. As the sun gently caressed the grassy expanse, our teacher set up an array of canvases, paints, and brushes amidst the serene environment. With great enthusiasm, I began crafting my masterpiece, a vibrant landscape that captured the essence of nature's beauty. The verdant trees, the azure sky, and the delicate flowers came alive under my brushstrokes. I must admit, it was a challenging task to balance the colors and the lighting, but the result was truly rewarding. My piece received commendations from both my instructor and peers, filling me with pride and motivation to continue improving my artistic skills. I eagerly await your feedback and hope you will enjoy this small glimpse into my world of creativity. Yours Li Hua 满分范文4 Dear Chris, How is everything going? Hearing that you are an enthusiast in painting, I could hardly wait to share my delightful experience from our painting class. Last Friday witnessed our venturing into the park, a unique setting that inspired me to create a painting of the serene lake surrounded by lush green trees. The tranquility of nature was truly captivating. Not only was painting outdoors a refreshing change, but it also allowed me to see colors and shapes in a new light. Moreover, it was a sensory feast that heightened my perception and appreciation for the beauty of our natural world even more. Needless to say, it was a day filled with creativity and a sense of peace. Looking forward to hearing about your adventures! Yours, Li Hua 满分范文5 Dear Chris, Last Friday, we had a fantastic art class in the park. I'm writing to share the exciting experience with you. The natural beauty in the park inspired me to pursue my art dreams. I chose to paint the harmonious environment of the park. In my painting, the birds were singing sweetly in the trees and butterflies were dancing gracefully in the fields. We live in harmony with nature. What a meaningful activity it is to paint in the park! How I wish you could have been here to experience it with me！ Yours, Li Hua 满分范文6 Dear Chris, I'm writing to share with you an art class in a park last Friday. Instead of our usual classroom setting, our teacher took us to the local park, where we were surrounded by nature and vibrant autumn colors. For my artwork, I decided to capture the scene of a small bridge over the park's pond. The colorful leaves reflecting on the water create a visually stunning effect that I tried to reproduce with watercolor. It was challenging but incredibly rewarding to paint directly from nature.  This outdoor class not only enhanced my artistic skills but also deepened my appreciation for the environment. It's refreshing to get out of the traditional classroom and get in touch with nature, which truly sparked my creativity. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 满分范文7 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class we had in a park last Friday. Our teacher decided to have our session outdoors, which was a refreshing change. We set up our materials under the open sky, each of us choosing a different part of the park to draw. I selected a large oak tree by a quiet pond. Its thick branches and the gentle ripples on the water made a lovely scene. I tried to capture the light and shadows, which made the tree look even more impressive.  This outdoor class was a wonderful experience. Being in nature not only improved my drawing skills but also made me feel calm and inspired. It was great to see how a different environment can influence our creativity. I can’t wait to show you the painting I made! Yours sincerely, Li Hua ( 六 三年真题 ) 【2023年新高考I卷应用文写作】 标签：建议信；给外教写邮件指出分组问题并提出建议 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括； 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【2022年新高考I卷应用文写作】 标签：邀请信；邀请外教Caroline到校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”做一次访谈 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括： 1. 节目介绍； 2. 访谈的时间和话题。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Caroline, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【2021年新高考I卷应用文写作】 标签：短文投稿；校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年投稿 你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 读报的经历； 2. 喜爱的栏目； 3. 期望和祝福。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ( Youth and Me ) 第一节 这是一篇针对报纸创刊10周年投稿的文章。通过审题，我们可以确定，本文主要以第一人称进行展开和叙述。文章可以用三段式的结构。第一段简明表示对报刊创办10周年的祝贺。第二段是文章的主体，主要阐述阅读报纸的经历和喜爱的栏目。第三段表达对报纸的期望和祝福。 ( 七 满分策略 ) 英语书面表达高分秘诀 根据最新《考纲》、书面表达的评分标准、及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点： 一、外在美： 第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。 二、结构美： 有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰，要点全面。 三、词汇美： 生动具体词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。 四、句式美： 运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。 五、衔接美： 使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。 书面表达增加细节五大技巧 一、增加交际功能性语言 1. 收信人和写信人是朋友关系 在书信的开头可以添加问候语How are you doing these days? 或根据题目增加合适的寒暄语。 2. 收信人是长辈或地位高一点的人，或陌生人。在信件开头可以补充自我介绍，以表尊重。 结合题目中设置的情景，增加个人身份介绍，合情合理，符合交际需要。 3. 回应来信所提问题，自然引出写作目的 有些书面表达题，要求考生根据题目要求，给对方回信。先提及对方的来信内容，说明回信背景。 4. 根据信件写作目的，补充适当的开头和结尾 不同类型的信件一般会有特定的格式，我们要用心去整理和归纳。如建议信： 写作目的——I am writing to give you some practical/constructive suggestions. 信件结尾——I do hope that you’ll find these suggestions useful/ beneficial/helpful. 二、扩充写作要点的具体内容 我们要根据提示要求，通过列举等添加与要点相关的具体内容。如: 三、添加句子成分，拓展句子，充实文章 在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语，状语（如原因，目的，结果，让步，方式）等，使语言逻辑清晰，便于理解。 1. 巧用修饰语 恰当地使用形容词或定语从句使句子更加形象生动。 2. 明确交待原因 交待原因是为了使句意更完整，避免给读者留下疑问。交待原因通常可以借助介词短语或原因状语从句，如owing to, due to, because of, thanks to, as a result of, because, as, since, now that等词语引导。 3. 清晰阐明目的 在句子中使用阐明目的的词语，如: so as (not) to, in order to, so that, in order that, for the fear that, for the purpose of等，使句子条理清晰，逻辑性强。 4. 恰当补充条件，增强表达效果 可以通过if, as long as, only if, unless, provided that, supposing that 等引导条件状语。如： 5. 合理延伸结果 可用so that, so…that, such…that或therefore, hence等来增加结果状语句。 6. 添加与要点相关的让步状语等内容 可通过although, though, while, as, even though, even if, whoever, whatever, whenever, wherever, however, no matter+疑问词等添加与写作内容相关的信息。 四、添加过渡词，突出篇章连贯性 根据行文或段落需要，在句子与句子或段落与段落之间适当增加过渡词语或过渡句，以使文章浑然一体， 五、补充个人感受和评价 作者如果能在行文中流露真实情感，则可以有效缩短与读者之间的距离，使读者产生共鸣。 ( 八 话题变式-名校好题再练 ) 1．（23-24高三下·河北邢台·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校即将举行“用英语讲述中国传统文化”活动。你的英国朋友Jack对中国传统文化感兴趣，想要了解即将到来的端午节。请你写信向他介绍中国的传统节日——端午节。 包括以下要点： 1. 端午节的时间及起源； 2. 端午节的习俗。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·重庆·模拟预测）假定你是李华，重庆某中学高三学生。在寒假期间，你作为交换生（exchange student） 将前往美国进行为期三周的交流活动，你被安排在Peter家寄宿。请你用英语给Peter写一封email。要点如下： 1. 自我情况介绍； 2. 告之自己的生活习惯； 3. 询问注意事项。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Your, Li Hua 3．（23-24高三下·江西宜春·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校今年开设了蔬菜栽培、传统工艺（handcraft）等实践课程。请你给外国好友John写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 你的参与情况； 2. 你的体会。 注意：1. 写作词数100左右；   2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。 Dear John, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 4．（23-24高三下·北京·阶段练习）假设你是红星中学高三年级的学生李华。你校的交换生Tom受邀要去一个中国朋友家做客，他发来邮件询问一些做客习俗。请你根据以下内容回复： 1. 到达的时间及礼物； 2. 中国餐桌礼仪及含义。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 餐桌礼仪：table manners。 Dear Tom, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 5．（23-24高三下·广东·期中）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Jim在你校公众号上看到学生参加学农活动的照片，很感兴趣，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1.学农活动的目的和安排； 2.参加学农活动的感受。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.请在答题卡相应位置作答。 参考词汇：学农learning from farmers Dear Jim, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours, Li Hua ( 九 题型变式-名校好题再练 ) 1．（23-24高三下·江西·阶段练习）假定你是李华，上个月你和家人去了庐山（Lushan Mountain）旅游。请你给外国网友Justine写一封邮件，和她分享此次经历，内容包括： 1. 询问她的近况； 2. 旅游的经过； 3. 你的收获。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Justine, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·安徽芜湖·三模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack非常喜欢中国茶文化。近期你市文化馆the Cultural Center 将举办中国茶文化展。请写一封信告知Jack这一消息。 内容包括： 1. 时间地点； 2. 展览内容。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 Dear Jack, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 3．（23-24高三下·福建福州·阶段练习）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语，请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。 内容包括： 1.时间和地点； 2.内容：学习唐诗； 3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Leslie, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 4．（23-24高三下·江苏无锡·期中）假如你是李华。4月23日是“世界读书日”，为此，你校开展了一系列活动。请给你的笔友Tom 写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 介绍活动内容； 2. 分享个人收获。 注意：1. 写作词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, With the World Reading Day coming, I am writing to share some related information with you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $$《2024年高考英语新课标卷真题深度解析与考后提升》 专题09 应用文写作（新课标I卷） 解析版 (答案解析+专家评价+三年真题+满分答案+满分策略+话题变式+题型变式) 目录 一、原题呈现 P1 二、答案解析 P2 三、专家评价 P2 四、写作素材 P3 五、满分范文 P7 六、三年真题 P9 (一)2023年阅读理解A篇 P9 (二)2022年阅读理解A篇 P11 (三)2021年阅读理解A篇 P12 七、满分策略 P14 八、话题变式 P15 九、题型变式 P21 ( 一 原题呈现 ) 应用文写作关键词：告知信，人与社会，公园上美术课，学生活动，五育并举 假定你是李华，你们班上周五在公园上了一节美术课，请给英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享你的经历，内容包括： 1. 你的作品内容； 2. 你的感想。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I am writing to share with you the art class I had in the park last Friday. ( 二答案解析 ) Dear Chris I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. It was such a novel and exciting experience to be able to create art surrounded by nature.（整体评价活动效果；高级词汇+非谓语） I created a work with the theme of "Nature's Harmony", whose main elements are trees, flowers, and a small pond. I started by sketching the outlines of the main elements, with different colors to create a gentle and harmonious atmosphere. Taking the art class in the park was really a novelty. It made me feel so close to nature and appreciate its beauty in a whole new way. （定语从句+非谓语+高级词汇） What do you think about having art classes in the park, Chris? Have you ever had an art class outdoors like this before, Chris? I’m looking forward to your reply. （特殊疑问句式+客套语） Yours Li Hua ( 三专家评价 ) 聚焦立德树人，强化高考育人功能 高考英语命题贯彻落实高考内容改革要求，通过选取有关体育、美育和劳动教育的语篇，引导学生坚持五育并举，实现身心健康成长和德智体美劳全面发展。在体育方面，新课标Ⅱ卷阅读A篇介绍了秋季徒步健身活动，引导学生走近大自然，开展体育运动，文中提及多项注意事项，于潜移默化之中强调了运动安全的重要性。在美育方面，全国甲卷阅读A篇介绍了校园艺术节上丰富多彩的活动，引导学生走进画廊和博物馆，培养审美情趣，提高艺术品味。新课标I卷/II卷应用文写作告知英国笔友在公园上了一节美术课的作品和感受。在劳动教育方面，新课标Ⅰ卷阅读A篇介绍了一个地区生物栖息地修复工作队的工作内容和招募志愿者的要求，引导学生热爱劳动、参与劳动、享受劳动。 ( 四写作 素材 ) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 一、应用文审题分析 1．体裁：邮件。 2．主题：给好朋友Chris介绍上周五在公园上美术课的经历。 3．内容要点： 1） 除了开头语，需要具体描述完成的作品是什么样子的，包括使用的色彩、呈现的内容等。 2）详细阐述自己对于这次在公园上美术课的感想，比如对户外创作的感受、对艺术的新理解等。 4．语言表达： 1）要用较为流畅自然的英语来表述。 2） 注意时态，描述上周五的事情一般用过去时。 3）整体来说，这是一个比较常规的书信类写作任务，重点在于如何清晰地描述作品和生动地表达自己的感想，让英国朋友 Chris 能较好地感受到这次特别的美术课经历。 二、要写好这个应用文，学生需具备的能力： 1.语言运用能力：学生需要使用英语进行有效沟通，包括词汇的准确使用、语法的正确性以及句子结构的流畅性。 2.写作组织能力：包括组织文章结构的能力，如何合理地安排引言、正文和结尾，以及如何使用恰当的连接词使文章连贯。 3.描述和叙述能力：学生需要能够清晰地描述自己的作品和经历，同时能够叙述个人的感受和思考。 4.创造性思维：在介绍自己的作品和感想时，学生需要展示自己的创造性思维，使文章具有个性和吸引力。 5.跨文化交流能力：由于是写给外国朋友，学生需要考虑到文化差异，使用适当的语言和表达方式，以确保信息能够被正确理解和接受。 6.情感表达能力：在表达个人感想时，学生需要能够真实、自然地传达自己的情感和态度。三、写作构思 开头（第一段）： 1.在开头部分，除了已给出的语句表明写信目的是分享上周五公园美术课的经历。 2. 还需要写一句过渡语衔接。 主体（第二段）： 1、先描述自己完成的作品，包括作品的主题、主要元素、表现形式等，自己是如何创作的。 2、接着表达自己的感想，比如在公园上课的新奇感受，对自然之美的感悟，从这次经历中获得的启发等。 结尾（第三段）： 可以询问 Chris 对这种在公园上美术课的看法，或者询问 Chris 有没有类似在户外上美术课的情况，使邮件内容更加丰富。 四、相关的词汇和表达素材 1.色彩： vivid鲜艳的 rich浓郁的 dullish有点暗淡的 pastel柔和的 monochromatic单色的 2.线条与形状： curvy弯曲的 angular有棱角的 rounded圆形的 zigzag之字形的 3.整体效果： fantastic极好的 spectacular壮观的 charming迷人的 delightful令人愉快的 captivating迷人的 4.风格： impressionistic印象派的 abstract抽象的 minimalist极简主义的 5.细节与质感： elaborate精心制作的 textured有质感的 rough粗糙的 smooth as silk如丝般光滑 6.氛围与情感： solemn庄重的 cheerful愉快的 mysterious神秘的 romantic浪漫的 melancholic忧郁的 五、首段过渡衔接写作素材 1. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. It was an extraordinary experience that left a deep impression on me. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。那是一次非凡的经历，给我留下了深刻的印象。 2. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. The whole class was filled with creativity and joy. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。整个课堂都充满了创造力和喜悦。 3. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. What happened there truly broadened my horizons. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。在那里发生的事情真的拓宽了我的视野。 4. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. It made me realize the beauty and magic of art in a new way. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。它让我以一种新的方式认识到艺术的美丽和魔力。 5. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. That day in the garden was truly unforgettable. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。在花园里的那一天真的令人难忘。 6. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. The combination of art and nature was simply perfect. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。艺术与自然的结合简直太完美了。 7. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday. It was a day filled with inspiration and discovery. 我写信是想和你分享上周五在花园里的美术课。那是充满灵感和发现的一天。 8. I’m writing to share with you the unique experience of the Art class we had in the park last Friday. It was an extraordinary day where we blended learning with the serenity of nature. 我写信是为了和你们分享上周五我们在公园上的艺术课的独特经历。这是一个非凡的一天，我们把学习与大自然的宁静结合在一起。 9. I’m writing to share with you the Art class in the garden last Friday, where we explored the historical beauty and artistic heritage of our city's park. 我写信是为了和你们分享上周五我们的艺术课的丰富经历，在那里我们探索了我们城市公园的历史之美和艺术遗产。 六、介绍公园上美术课活动写作素材 1. I created a work with the theme of "Nature's Harmony". 我创作了一幅主题为“自然的和谐”的作品。 2. The main elements are trees, flowers, and a small pond. 主要元素是树木、花朵和一个小池塘。 3. The form of expression is a watercolor painting. 表现形式是一幅水彩画。 4. I started by sketching the outlines of the main elements. 我首先通过勾勒主要元素的轮廓开始。 5. Then I used different colors to fill in and create a gentle and harmonious atmosphere. 然后我使用不同的颜色去填充并营造出一种轻柔和谐的氛围。 6. I also added some details like birds and butterflies to make the picture more vivid. 我还添加了一些像鸟儿和蝴蝶这样的细节以使画面更加生动。 7. I made a work titled "Sunlit Park". 我创作了一幅名为“阳光照耀的公园”的作品。 8. The main elements are the bright sun, the green grass, and people enjoying the leisure time. 主要元素是明亮的太阳、绿草以及享受休闲时光的人们。 9. I began by outlining the basic shapes of the elements with light strokes. 我一开始用轻柔的笔触勾勒出元素的基本形状。 10. Then I gradually added colors and shades to bring out the vividness of the scene. 然后我逐渐添加颜色和色调以展现出场景的生动性。 七、公园上美术课活动感受写作素材 1. It's so amazing to have classes in the park. It really brings a whole new feeling. 在公园上课真是太令人惊奇了。它真的带来了一种全新的感受。 2. The beauty of nature is truly breathtaking and makes me feel so peaceful. 自然之美真的令人惊叹，让我感到如此平静。 3. This experience has inspired me to cherish and explore more of the wonders of nature. 这次经历启发我要珍惜并探索更多自然的奇妙之处。 4. Taking classes in the park makes me feel closer to nature and enriches my learning experience. 在公园上课让我感觉更贴近自然，丰富了我的学习体验。 5. The beauty of nature is an endless source of inspiration and makes me appreciate life more. 自然之美是无尽的灵感源泉，让我更加珍惜生活。 6. This park class experience has taught me to look at the world from a different perspective. 这次公园上课的经历教会我从不同的角度看世界。 7. Being surrounded by nature during class has made me realize how important it is to protect our environment. 在上课期间被自然环绕让我意识到保护我们的环境是多么重要。 8. The peace and tranquility of nature in the park have given me a newfound appreciation for simplicity. 公园里自然的宁静与安宁让我对简单有了新的认识。 9. Taking the art class in the park was really a novelty. 在公园上美术课真的是一种新奇体验。 10. It made me feel so close to nature and appreciate its beauty in a whole new way. 它让我感觉如此贴近自然，并以全新的方式欣赏它的美。 11. I was deeply inspired by this experience and realized the importance of connecting with nature. 我从这次经历中深受启发，意识到与自然相连接的重要性。 12. This class in the park broadened my horizons and taught me to look at things from different perspectives. 这次在公园的课拓宽了我的视野，教会我从不同角度看待事物。 八、公园上美术课活动结尾写作素材 1. What do you think about having art classes in the park, Chris? 克里斯，你觉得在公园上美术课怎么样？ 2. Have you ever had an art class outdoors like this before, Chris? 克里斯，你以前有过像这样在户外上美术课的情况吗？ 3. Did you enjoy this kind of art class in the park, Chris? 克里斯，你喜欢这种在公园上的美术课吗？ 4. Have you experienced something similar to this art class in the park, Chris? 克里斯，你经历过类似在公园上美术课这样的事情吗？ 5. What's your opinion on taking art classes in such an open environment like the park, Chris? 克里斯，对于在像公园这样开阔的环境中上美术课，你有什么看法呢？ 6. Was it interesting for you to have an art class in the park, Chris? 克里斯，在公园上美术课对你来说有趣吗？ 7. How did you feel when you had an art class in the park, Chris? 克里斯，当你在公园上美术课的时候你感觉如何？ ( 五满分范文 ) 满分范文1 Dear Chris, How is everything going? Hearing that you are an enthusiast in painting, I could hardly wait to share my delightful experience from our painting class. Last Friday witnessed our venturing into the park, a unique setting that inspired me to create a painting of the serene lake surrounded by lush green trees. The tranquility of nature was truly captivating. Not only was painting outdoors a refreshing change, but it also allowed me to see colors and shapes in a new light. Moreover, it was a sensory feast that heightened my perception and appreciation for the beauty of our natural world even more. Needless to say, it was a day filled with creativity and a sense of peace. Looking forward to hearing about your adventures! Yours, Li Hua 满分范文2 Dear Chris, I hope this message finds you well. I'm excited to share with you my latest artwork created during our art class in the park on Friday! It was such a serene environment, with the gentle breeze and the soft rustle of leaves, which truly inspired me. For this piece, I chose acrylics to depict a vibrant landscape. Drawn to the play of light and shadow amidst the trees, I tried to capture the interplay of colors as the sun began to set. The result is a mix of warm oranges, deep reds, and cool blues, which I think conveys the peaceful yet vibrant nature of that moment. I'd love to hear your thoughts on my creation. Maybe next time, we could take our art supplies and paint together in the park! Looking forward to our next adventure! Yours Li Hua 满分范文3 Dear Chris, How is everything going! This Friday afternoon witnessed such a marvelous art class held in the city park that I can’t wait to share with you. As the sun gently caressed the grassy expanse, our teacher set up an array of canvases, paints, and brushes amidst the serene environment. With great enthusiasm, I began crafting my masterpiece, a vibrant landscape that captured the essence of nature's beauty. The verdant trees, the azure sky, and the delicate flowers came alive under my brushstrokes. I must admit, it was a challenging task to balance the colors and the lighting, but the result was truly rewarding. My piece received commendations from both my instructor and peers, filling me with pride and motivation to continue improving my artistic skills. I eagerly await your feedback and hope you will enjoy this small glimpse into my world of creativity. Yours Li Hua 满分范文4 Dear Chris, How is everything going? Hearing that you are an enthusiast in painting, I could hardly wait to share my delightful experience from our painting class. Last Friday witnessed our venturing into the park, a unique setting that inspired me to create a painting of the serene lake surrounded by lush green trees. The tranquility of nature was truly captivating. Not only was painting outdoors a refreshing change, but it also allowed me to see colors and shapes in a new light. Moreover, it was a sensory feast that heightened my perception and appreciation for the beauty of our natural world even more. Needless to say, it was a day filled with creativity and a sense of peace. Looking forward to hearing about your adventures! Yours, Li Hua 满分范文5 Dear Chris, Last Friday, we had a fantastic art class in the park. I'm writing to share the exciting experience with you. The natural beauty in the park inspired me to pursue my art dreams. I chose to paint the harmonious environment of the park. In my painting, the birds were singing sweetly in the trees and butterflies were dancing gracefully in the fields. We live in harmony with nature. What a meaningful activity it is to paint in the park! How I wish you could have been here to experience it with me！ Yours, Li Hua 满分范文6 Dear Chris, I'm writing to share with you an art class in a park last Friday. Instead of our usual classroom setting, our teacher took us to the local park, where we were surrounded by nature and vibrant autumn colors. For my artwork, I decided to capture the scene of a small bridge over the park's pond. The colorful leaves reflecting on the water create a visually stunning effect that I tried to reproduce with watercolor. It was challenging but incredibly rewarding to paint directly from nature.  This outdoor class not only enhanced my artistic skills but also deepened my appreciation for the environment. It's refreshing to get out of the traditional classroom and get in touch with nature, which truly sparked my creativity. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 满分范文7 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class we had in a park last Friday. Our teacher decided to have our session outdoors, which was a refreshing change. We set up our materials under the open sky, each of us choosing a different part of the park to draw. I selected a large oak tree by a quiet pond. Its thick branches and the gentle ripples on the water made a lovely scene. I tried to capture the light and shadows, which made the tree look even more impressive.  This outdoor class was a wonderful experience. Being in nature not only improved my drawing skills but also made me feel calm and inspired. It was great to see how a different environment can influence our creativity. I can’t wait to show you the painting I made! Yours sincerely, Li Hua ( 六 三年真题 ) 【2023年新高考I卷应用文写作】 标签：建议信；给外教写邮件指出分组问题并提出建议 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括； 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 首先：to begin with → first of all 提高：improve → progress 建议：suggestion → advice 选择：choose → select 2句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 【点睛】[高分句型1] This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2] Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句） 【2022年新高考I卷应用文写作】 标签：邀请信；邀请外教Caroline到校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”做一次访谈 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括： 1. 节目介绍； 2. 访谈的时间和话题。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Caroline, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Caroline, This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建立：establish→set up 了不起的：amazing→fabulous 帮助：aid→assistance 许多：plenty of→a lot of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. 拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot. 【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略) 【2021年新高考I卷应用文写作】 标签：短文投稿；校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年投稿 你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 读报的经历； 2. 喜爱的栏目； 3. 期望和祝福。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ( Youth and Me ) 第一节 这是一篇针对报纸创刊10周年投稿的文章。通过审题，我们可以确定，本文主要以第一人称进行展开和叙述。文章可以用三段式的结构。第一段简明表示对报刊创办10周年的祝贺。第二段是文章的主体，主要阐述阅读报纸的经历和喜爱的栏目。第三段表达对报纸的期望和祝福。 Possible version 1: Dear Editor-in-Chief， Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of Youth. I have been a devoted reader since I subscribed to the newspaper. Obsessed with it, I read each issue from cover to cover. It boasts a variety of columns, of which Chinese culture is my favorite. The series of contents not only introduces abundant cultural knowledge but also values the inheritance of brilliant culture and strengthens our cultural confidence. As a fan of Youth. I recommend that it will be better if it carries some articles about the life of foreign teens and I hope that it will become even more popular. Sincerely yours, Li Hua Possible version 1: Dear editor, My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student. I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on the 10th anniversary ceremony of YOUTH. Since it was founded, YOUTH has been popular with many students including me, a regular reader of YOUTH. Thepaper’s broad content and rich knowledge have not only widened my horizons but also given me much enjoyment. I am fond of all its columns, but what impressed me most is culture, where I can read humorous stories, poems, fictions and so on to improve my oral English. Please accept my sincere congratulations again and I best wish that YOUTH could achieve greater success and gain more popularity. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建立：found→establish 沮丧的：depressed→upset 此外：besides→what’s more 得到：receive→obtain 2.句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. 拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon. 【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句) ( 七 满分策略 ) 英语书面表达高分秘诀 根据最新《考纲》、书面表达的评分标准、及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点： 一、外在美： 第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。 二、结构美： 有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰，要点全面。 三、词汇美： 生动具体词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。 四、句式美： 运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。 五、衔接美： 使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。 书面表达增加细节五大技巧 一、增加交际功能性语言 1. 收信人和写信人是朋友关系 在书信的开头可以添加问候语How are you doing these days? 或根据题目增加合适的寒暄语。 2. 收信人是长辈或地位高一点的人，或陌生人。在信件开头可以补充自我介绍，以表尊重。 结合题目中设置的情景，增加个人身份介绍，合情合理，符合交际需要。 3. 回应来信所提问题，自然引出写作目的 有些书面表达题，要求考生根据题目要求，给对方回信。先提及对方的来信内容，说明回信背景。 4. 根据信件写作目的，补充适当的开头和结尾 不同类型的信件一般会有特定的格式，我们要用心去整理和归纳。如建议信： 写作目的——I am writing to give you some practical/constructive suggestions. 信件结尾——I do hope that you’ll find these suggestions useful/ beneficial/helpful. 二、扩充写作要点的具体内容 我们要根据提示要求，通过列举等添加与要点相关的具体内容。如: 三、添加句子成分，拓展句子，充实文章 在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语，状语（如原因，目的，结果，让步，方式）等，使语言逻辑清晰，便于理解。 1. 巧用修饰语 恰当地使用形容词或定语从句使句子更加形象生动。 2. 明确交待原因 交待原因是为了使句意更完整，避免给读者留下疑问。交待原因通常可以借助介词短语或原因状语从句，如owing to, due to, because of, thanks to, as a result of, because, as, since, now that等词语引导。 3. 清晰阐明目的 在句子中使用阐明目的的词语，如: so as (not) to, in order to, so that, in order that, for the fear that, for the purpose of等，使句子条理清晰，逻辑性强。 4. 恰当补充条件，增强表达效果 可以通过if, as long as, only if, unless, provided that, supposing that 等引导条件状语。如： 5. 合理延伸结果 可用so that, so…that, such…that或therefore, hence等来增加结果状语句。 6. 添加与要点相关的让步状语等内容 可通过although, though, while, as, even though, even if, whoever, whatever, whenever, wherever, however, no matter+疑问词等添加与写作内容相关的信息。 四、添加过渡词，突出篇章连贯性 根据行文或段落需要，在句子与句子或段落与段落之间适当增加过渡词语或过渡句，以使文章浑然一体， 五、补充个人感受和评价 作者如果能在行文中流露真实情感，则可以有效缩短与读者之间的距离，使读者产生共鸣。 ( 八 话题变式-名校好题再练 ) 1．（23-24高三下·河北邢台·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校即将举行“用英语讲述中国传统文化”活动。你的英国朋友Jack对中国传统文化感兴趣，想要了解即将到来的端午节。请你写信向他介绍中国的传统节日——端午节。 包括以下要点： 1. 端午节的时间及起源； 2. 端午节的习俗。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack, Knowing that you are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival, I'd like to introduce it to you. The Dragon Boat Festival, one of the most traditional festivals in China, falls on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month in honor of a great poet named Qu Yuan, who devoted his life to his motherland. On that day, we often eat Zongzi, a special kind of rice-dumplings. Besides, exciting dragon-boat races are usually held, through which we follow the trace of our ancestors to spread traditional Chinese culture. As the Dragon Boat Festival is approaching, why not join us to celebrate it? Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的告知信。要求考生给英国朋友Jack写信，向其介绍中国的传统节日——端午节。 【详解】1.词汇积累 对……感兴趣：are interested in→ show interest in 为了纪念：in honor of → in memory of 献身于：devote…to… → dedicate to 此外：besides→ what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：On that day, we often eat Zongzi, a special kind of rice-dumplings. 拓展句：On that day, we often eat Zongzi, which is a special kind of rice-dumplings. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The Dragon Boat Festival, one of the most traditional festivals in China, falls on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month in honor of a great poet named Qu Yuan, who devoted his life to his motherland.（运用了who引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】Besides, exciting dragon-boat races are usually held, through which we follow the trace of our ancestors to spread traditional Chinese culture.（运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句） 2．（2024·重庆·模拟预测）假定你是李华，重庆某中学高三学生。在寒假期间，你作为交换生（exchange student） 将前往美国进行为期三周的交流活动，你被安排在Peter家寄宿。请你用英语给Peter写一封email。要点如下： 1. 自我情况介绍； 2. 告之自己的生活习惯； 3. 询问注意事项。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Your, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student from Chongqing, China. I’m so lucky to be chosen as an exchange student to pay a three-week visit to the US and will be hosted in your home. Firstly, I’d like to say thank you for your reception during my stay in the US. I will be a nice guest. I don’t smoke but I don’t mind if anybody smokes. Besides, I enjoy various foods, including pork, beef and mutton and I’m not particular about food. What’s more, I like pets, so it’s OK for me if your family keeps some pets. If you have any requests or suggestions for me, don’t hesitate to tell me so that I can get well prepared before I go and pay attention to my behaviors when in your home. I believe I will have a good time and learn a lot in your home! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。在寒假期间，你作为交换生（exchange student）将前往美国进行为期三周的交流活动，将被安排在Peter家寄宿。要求考生给寄宿家庭写一封信，介绍自己的一些情况，告知对方自己的生活习惯，并询问注意事项。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 各种各样的：various→all kinds of 此外：besides→in addition 建议：suggestion→advice 对……挑剔：be particular about→be picky about 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, I’d like to say thank you for your reception during my stay in the US. 拓展句：Firstly, I’d like to say thank you for the reception you will provide during my stay in the US. 【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s more, I like pets, so it’s OK for me if your family keeps some pets. (运用了so连接的并列句和if引导的条件状语从句) 【高分句型2】I believe I will have a good time and learn a lot in your home! (运用了省略that的宾语从句) 3．（23-24高三下·江西宜春·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校今年开设了蔬菜栽培、传统工艺（handcraft）等实践课程。请你给外国好友John写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 你的参与情况； 2. 你的体会。 注意：1. 写作词数100左右；   2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。 Dear John, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John, How are you doing recently? I can’t wait to inform you of the relevant details that will definitely attract you a lot. To foster students’ correct outlook on labor, two courses, planting vegetables and traditional handcrafts are available to students in each grade this year in our school. Full of curiosity, I take these courses. Making handicrafts is one of my favourite, where I gained a fundamental glimpse of essential life skills such as sewing a button and knitting a scarf. It was surely a rewarding experience, enriching my after-school life and helping me form the good habit of laboring. Most of the students are fascinated by the courses because they offer an alternative to our busy school life. Not only can we get relaxed but also we can gain a higher moral value on life. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国好友John写一封邮件，告诉他参加学校今年开设的蔬菜栽培、传统工艺等实践课程的情况以及体会。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 相关的：relevant→related/relative 培养：foster→cultivate 肯定地：surely→certainly 获得：gain→obtain/get 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：It was surely a rewarding experience, enriching my after-school life and helping me form the good habit of laboring. 拓展句：It was surely a rewarding experience, which enriches my after-school life and helps me form the good habit of laboring. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I can’t wait to inform you of the relevant details that will definitely attract you a lot. (运用了that引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】Not only can we get relaxed but also we can gain a higher moral value on life. (运用了“not only...but also...”连接并列句，且not only位于句首引出的部分倒装） 4．（23-24高三下·北京·阶段练习）假设你是红星中学高三年级的学生李华。你校的交换生Tom受邀要去一个中国朋友家做客，他发来邮件询问一些做客习俗。请你根据以下内容回复： 1. 到达的时间及礼物； 2. 中国餐桌礼仪及含义。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 餐桌礼仪：table manners。 Dear Tom, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, I am glad to hear from you. Knowing that you are going to come to China, I am excited. I would like to tell you some Chinese customs. Firstly, you’d better arrive a few minutes early. The moment you meet with your Chinese friend and his/her family, you should say “Ni hao” to them. Secondly, it’s important for you to buy an appropriate gift for your friend’s family. I am sure that receiving your gift will make them delighted. Thirdly, knowing table manners can help you behave decently. For example, chopsticks and spoons are usually used when you are eating in China. Then, you are not supposed to make a noise while eating the soup. Finally, remember to thank the host for the delicious food he/she has offered, which will surely make him/her happy. I wish you enjoy yourself in China.                                                                 Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。交换生Tom受邀要去一个中国朋友家做客，要求考生给交换生Tom写信，告知一些在中国做客的习俗。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴的：glad→delighted 告诉某人某事：tell sb. sth.→inform sb. of sth. 重要的：important→significant 玩得开心：enjoy oneself→have fun 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I would like to tell you some Chinese customs. 拓展句：I would like to tell you some Chinese customs, which I think may help you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are going to come to China, I am excited. (运用了现在分词作状语以及 that引导宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Finally, remember to thank the host for the delicious food he/she has offered, which will surely make him/her happy. (运用了省略关系代词which/that的限制性定语从句以及which引导非限制性定语从句) 5．（23-24高三下·广东·期中）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Jim在你校公众号上看到学生参加学农活动的照片，很感兴趣，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1.学农活动的目的和安排； 2.参加学农活动的感受。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.请在答题卡相应位置作答。 参考词汇：学农learning from farmers Dear Jim, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Delighted to know that you are fascinated by our activity called “Learning From Farmers”, I’ll share my experience with you. The activity organized by our school aimed to encourage us to learn from the real world. Under the precise instruction of experienced farmers, we learned to perform various tasks such as helping the owner of a farm to plant trees, sowing seeds in rows and feeding ducks. Frankly, there were several times when I came across difficulties. But after overcoming them, I realized they were not a big deal. Though exhausted, I was inspired by the diligence of farmers and pushed on. We not only gained knowledge of farming but also had a better understanding of nature. It was meaningful and rewarding. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新西兰朋友Jim回复邮件，因为Jim在校公众号上看到了学生参加学农活动的照片，对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问相关信息。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：delighted →pleased 教导，指导：instruction →guidance 各种各样的：various →all kinds of 遇到：come across →encounter 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The activity organized by our school aimed to encourage us to learn from the real world. 拓展句：The activity which was organized by our school aimed to encourage us to learn from the real world. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity organized by our school aimed to encourage us to learn from the real world.  (使用了过去分词充当后置定语) 【高分句型2】But after overcoming them, I realized they were not a big deal. (使用了动名词overcoming充当介词after的宾语以及省略that的宾语从句) ( 九 题型变式-名校好题再练 ) 1．（23-24高三下·江西·阶段练习）假定你是李华，上个月你和家人去了庐山（Lushan Mountain）旅游。请你给外国网友Justine写一封邮件，和她分享此次经历，内容包括： 1. 询问她的近况； 2. 旅游的经过； 3. 你的收获。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Justine, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Justine, How have you been lately? I hope everything is going well with you. Last month, my family and I had an amazing trip to Lushan Mountain, and I’m excited to share the experience with you. The trip was truly unforgettable. We were surrounded by the breathtaking views. Hiking up Lushan Mountain was the highlight of our adventure. Along the way, we came across some playful monkeys, which added fun to the journey. Overall, the trip was rewarding. It made my family closer as we got together and immersed ourselves in the beauty of nature. It reminded me of the importance of spending time appreciating the simple joys in life and creating lasting memories with loved ones. Yours. Li Hua 【导语】这是一封告知信，要求考生分享上个月和家人去庐山旅游的经历，包括询问她的近况、旅游的经过和自己的收获。 【详解】词汇积累 难忘的：unforgettable → memorable 令人屏息的：breath-taking → stunning 徒步旅行：hiking → trekking 顽皮的：playful → mischievous 收获：rewarding → enriching 句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：The trip was truly unforgettable. 拓展句：The excursion was genuinely memorable, leaving an indelible mark on our hearts and minds. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 It made my family closer as we got together and immersed ourselves in the beauty of nature. （使用了as连接的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】Along the way, we came across some playful monkeys, which added fun to the journey.（使用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句，先行词为monkeys） 2．（2024·安徽芜湖·三模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack非常喜欢中国茶文化。近期你市文化馆the Cultural Center 将举办中国茶文化展。请写一封信告知Jack这一消息。 内容包括： 1. 时间地点； 2. 展览内容。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 Dear Jack, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version Dear Jack, Given that you take a great interest in Chinese tea culture, I’m writing to keep you informed of an exhibition of Chinese tea culture to be held by the Cultural Center of my city. As scheduled, the exhibition will be available to the public next Monday, running for a week. Organized in time order, the exhibition hall will display precious and fine cultural relics of various periods in China, while systematically introducing traditional Chinese tea culture, showing its lasting charm beyond time and space. This exhibition, I believe, will bring you an impressive cultural feast never to be missed. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jack写封信，告诉他你市文化馆the Cultural Center 将举办中国茶文化展的事情。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 告知：keep sb informed of→inform sb of 举办：hold→host 各种各样的：various→a variety of 对……感兴趣：take an interest in→be interested in 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Given that you take a great interest in Chinese tea culture, I’m writing to keep you informed of an exhibition of Chinese tea culture to be held by the Cultural Center of my city. 拓展句：Given that you take a great interest in Chinese tea culture, I’m writing to inform you of an exhibition of Chinese tea culture which will be held by the Cultural Center of my city. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Given that you take a great interest in Chinese tea culture, I’m writing to keep you informed of an exhibition of Chinese tea culture to be held by the Cultural Center of my city. (运用了given that引导的状语从句以及不定式作后置定语) 【高分句型2】This exhibition, I believe, will bring you an impressive cultural feast never to be missed. (运用了不定式作后置定语) 3．（23-24高三下·福建福州·阶段练习）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语，请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。 内容包括： 1.时间和地点； 2.内容：学习唐诗； 3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Leslie, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Leslie, How are you? I have learnt your progress in your Chinese with my help and your hard work. I am writing to tell the plan what you should do in advance. As scheduled, we will have a Chinese lesson next weekend. Considering our students are preparing for their final exam, I suggest we have the lesson in the park near our school. The main course of our class is to learn the poem of Tang Dynasty. It’s universally acknowledged that the poem of Tang Dynasty is one of the solid foundations of our culture. A large number of talented poets showed their view about the society and expressed their satisfaction with the beauty of our motherland. You can broaden your horizon and have a better understanding of our colorful culture through this study. Knowing the history of Tang Dynasty is better for you before having class. It’s the society that creates the brilliant poems. As the saying goes, no pains, no gains. Chinese is so beautiful and difficult that you need to be involved sincerely. I am looking forward to starting our study. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本文是应用文。你正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语，请写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。 【详解】1.词汇积累 进步：progress→advance 提前：in advance→ahead of time 建议： suggest →advise 满意：satisfaction→contentment 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：It’s universally acknowledged that the poem of Tang Dynasty is one of the solid foundations of our culture. 拓展句：What is universally acknowledged is that the poem of Tang Dynasty is one of the solid foundations of our culture. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Considering our students are preparing for their final exam, I suggest we have the lesson in the park near our school.（suggest 后运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句以及(should)do的虚拟语气） 【高分句型2】It’s universally acknowledged that the poem of Tang Dynasty is one of the solid foundations of our culture.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句是真正的主语） 4．（23-24高三下·江苏无锡·期中）假如你是李华。4月23日是“世界读书日”，为此，你校开展了一系列活动。请给你的笔友Tom 写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 介绍活动内容； 2. 分享个人收获。 注意：1. 写作词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, With the World Reading Day coming, I am writing to share some related information with you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Tom, With the World Reading Day coming, I am writing to share some related information with you. It’s widely acknowledged that reading benefits us in many ways. Not only can it broaden our horizons but it also deepens our thoughts. Therefore, a series of activities, such as Reading Salon, a Second-hand Book Exchange took place at our school. What deserved to be mentioned most was the theme of the reading day－Reading Chinese Classics and Inheriting Chinese Culture. From then on, we students realized that it was high time that we did more reading and passed on Chinese culture. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Tom 写一封邮件，介绍学校举行的“世界读书日”活动，并分享个人收获。 【详解】1.词汇积累 对……有益：benefit → be beneficial to 因此：therefore → thus 意识到：realize → be aware 传播：pass on → spread 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：With the World Reading Day coming, I am writing to share some related information with you. 拓展句：As the World Reading Day is coming, I am writing to share some related information with you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only can it broaden our horizons but it also deepens our thoughts.（运用了not only… but also …的倒装句式） 【高分句型2】What deserved to be mentioned most was the theme of the reading day－Reading Chinese Classics and Inheriting Chinese Culture.（运用了what引导的主语从句） $$