内容正文:
九年级 RJ
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Unit 3 Could you please tell me
where the restrooms are?
第六课时 单元写作指导
一阶 素材积累
二阶 典例探究
三阶 写作训练
一阶 素材积累
二阶 典例探究
三阶 写作训练
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第六课时 单元写作指导
一阶 素材积累
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开头句
1.I know you are arriving here next Friday. Now let me tell you the way
to my house.
2.I'd like to see you in Nanning soon. I've made a plan for our trip next
week.
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中间句
1.On the way back, we met a foreigner. He asked us the way to the Hot
Spring Hotel.
2.I told him that he should walk along the street, turn left at the third
corner, and then he will see the hotel. He thanked me a lot.
3.Nanning is located in the south of China. The weather is pleasant.
4.You can climb Qingxiu Mountain and enjoy the beauty of nature.
5.You can travel to Wuxiang Park. There you can go boating and take
photos.
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结尾句
1.For me, I felt very happy for helping him. Besides, I realized that
helping others was a really good thing. It could not only help others out
of emergencies but also make ourselves feel happy.
2.What do you think of my plan? I'm looking forward to your reply.
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写作模板
I'm glad to give you some advice on ____(去某地旅游或参加活动
的建议).
You can go along ____, and turn left/right when you see ____. It
will take you ____ to arrive in____ by ____(去某地的详细路线、交通
工具和花费的时间).
There are some activities you can do in ____,such as ____ and ____
(可以做的事情). If you like ____, you can try to taste different kinds
of food(可以品尝的食物). You can know a lot about ____(可以了解
这个地方的历史或趣事)in ____. But you can't do ____(在这个地方不
能做的事情).
Welcome to ____(欢迎来到某地).
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第六课时 单元写作指导
二阶 典例探究
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某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜爱的中国城市”为主题的征文活动。假
如你是李华,请以“My Favorite City”为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿,介
绍你最喜爱的一座中国城市,内容包括:
1. 你最喜爱哪个城市?(含城市概况,如:地理位置、人口、气候等)
2. 你为什么喜欢它?(有什么景点、美食、标志性建筑等)
3. 最佳游玩时间是什么时候以及可以乘坐什么交通工具?
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注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My Favorite City
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写作点拨
一、
仔细审题:向别人介绍一个地方和自己的看法或偏好时应用第1.____人称;
景点介绍属于客观事实,应用2.__________时。
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一般现在
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二、初拟提纲:
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参考范文
My Favorite City
My favorite city is Haikou. It is in the south of China with a
population of about 2.9 million. It's a small but very beautiful city.
The best thing to do in Haikou is to visit Qilou. You can know a
lot about history and culture of Haikou. Haikou is a good place for
foods, so you must try seafood and different kinds of snacks, such as
Qingbuliang and Hainan noodles. Not far away from Qilou, you can see
Zhonglou which is the landmark building in Haikou.
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The weather in Haikou is fine all year round. Take your swimming
clothes because you can go swimming in the sea, even in December. So
you can come to Haikou any time you like. And the traffic is convenient,
you can come here by plane or by high-speed train. Welcome to Haikou.
第六课时 单元写作指导
三阶 写作训练
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一、句子扩写与升格
1. Walk along this street. Then you will see a post office.(用until升格
句子)
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Walk along this street until you see a post office.
2. I don't know. There is a bank near your home.(用if引导的宾语从句
升格句子)
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I don't know if there is a bank near your home.
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3. You can take the No.7 bus to go there. It will take you half an hour.
(用It will take…to sp. by…升格句子)
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It will take you half an hour to go there by taking the No.7 bus.
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二、书面表达
明天下午是你的生日聚会,请你用英文给住在你们学校二中的英国
留学生Jack写一封电子邮件,邀请他一起参加聚会,内容包括:
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1. 聚会开始时间:明天下午2点30分;
2. 聚会主要内容:唱歌、做游戏、吃蛋糕;
3. 路线:从二中步行去你家,见图示。(图中 为你家)
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Hi, Jack,
I am going to have a party for my birthday tomorrow afternoon.
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I'd like you to come. It will start at 2:30 pm. We'll sing, play games and share a big cake.
Do you know how to get to my home? Firstly, turn left after you
go out of our school. Go along the People's Road and take the second
turning on the right into the Happy Road. Walk straight on to the traffic
lights. Then cross the Sunshine Road and go straight to the end. My
home is on your left.
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Yours,
Li Xue
Call me if you can't find it. I am looking forward to seeing you at
the party.
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