读后续写“成长类”故事一至五篇 讲义-2024届高三下学期英语作文复习专项

成长类提纲 第一段 1. 主人公遭遇困境，犹豫，想放弃/想做出利己行为 2. 得到外界的鼓励和支持/想到了某种精神力量 3. 决定勇敢尝试，抓住机会，改变自己/做出利他行为。完成心理上的准备。 第二段 4. 克服困难，完成任务（群众鼓励加油） 5. 群众祝贺，给予积极反馈 6. 结尾的设计 ①主人公感悟：结果是否完美不重要，更重要的是找到热爱、发掘潜力、增强自信、给世界带来真善美。 ②欢笑和泪水的温馨画面 ③人物离场但全新自我 ③某地见证改变 第一篇 i人变e人的夏令营 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 This Friday brought a mix of emotions—both excitement and disappointment—all because of a flyer from school. When I got home, Mum saw the flyer in my hand and asked, “What's this?” “A flyer for a five-day art camp,” I explained. “But Emily can't go.” “Would you like to attend?”Mum asked. “You've always loved art.” Her words reminded me of what Emily had said earlier: “Tessa, you're the real artist. My brother thought the roses I painted were rocket ships.”I sighed. Mum patted my back. She knew I had a hard time jumping into something with no familiar faces around. “Maybe next year.” “Maybe,” I echoed. Then I told Mum I wanted to go outside to draw the Westons' pine tree( 松树 ). She nodded with an encouraging smile. As I walked into the bright sunshine, I couldn't help but think about the art camp. I wished I felt a little bit braver. Emily could make friends with a whole bus of kids in ten minutes, but my stomach felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm when I was surrounded by strangers... By the time I started drawing, I had made up my mind to forget about the art camp. I began by drawing the pine tree's strong and straight trunk, and then added the beautiful branches, making sure the upper ones lifted gently towards the sun. Lost in my work, I jumped when I heard Mr. Weston speak up, “You’ve done a great job showing the strength of that tree on paper.” “Thanks,” I smiled, glancing up. As I drew the needles to the branches, Mr. Weston told me something I never knew about pines: If you plant the root ball too deep, the tree dies. Their roots grow out, not down—to get enough water and grow tall. “You have a good eye, Tessa.”With these words, Mr. Weston nodded goodbye. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: His words made me pause and think. Paragraph 2: The next Monday, I signed up for the camp. 情节设计： His words made me pause and think. 1. 我反思，应该像松树那样伸展，朝上朝外生长 （思考） 2. 我回家告诉妈妈，得到鼓励和支持 The next Monday, I signed up for the camp. 1. 一开始很难熬（困难） 逐渐敞开心扉打开自己，交到朋友（行动） 2. camp结束，但全新自我，新找到的自信，新到达的高度---像松树一样（呼应） 设计思路： 1. 主旨：人与自我+人与他人，青少年的自我成长。 2. 情节：首先作者自己意识到改变的必要性，再加上外界的帮助（美术老师的提醒和妈妈的支持），并抓住camp这个机会，积极采取行动，让自己变得更好，实现成长。 3. 结尾：前文中出现过“松树”，主人公的成长也正像松树一样，此处为“类比，隐喻，以物喻人”的写作手法，所以在设计结尾时要前后呼应，点到“松树”才有高分。 His words made me pause and think . · As I reflected on Mr. Weston ' s words, the analogy 类比，比喻 of pine roots growing out, not down, struck a chord with me引起了我的共鸣deeply. Perhaps I could learn something valuable from stepping beyond my comfort zone, just like the tree ' s need to spread its roots to grow tall. Surprisingly, even in the absence of不在场my best friend, the idea of the art camp now seemed so appealing . 当我想起Weston先生的话，松树根朝外生长，而不是向下的比喻，引起了我的共鸣。也许我可以从走出我的舒适区中学到一些有价值的东西，就像树需要伸展它的根来长得更高一样。令人惊讶的是，即使我最好的朋友不在，艺术营的想法现在也显得如此吸引人。 · Fueled by被激发this newfound understanding, I eagerly shared my insights with Mum, who listened attentively认真地as I poured out my thoughts. With her approving nod and encouraging gaze鼓励的凝视, I felt a surge of determination and confidence to embrace the camp as an opportunity for artistic exploration and growth . 受到这种新发现的理解的激发，我急切地与妈妈分享了我的见解，妈妈认真地听着，当我和盘托出我的想法时。随着她赞许的点头和鼓励的凝视，我感到一种决心和信心，接受这个夏令营作为艺术探索和成长的机会。 The next Monday , I signed up for the camp . · As I handed in my registration form, the initial disappointment I felt gradually gave way to a thrilling sense of anticipation, elicited/evoked by被激发，被引起the countless possibilities awaiting me . 当我递交登记表时，我最初的失望逐渐让位于一种令人兴奋的期待感，这是由等待着我的无数可能性引起的。 · Throughout the camp, I immersed myself in沉浸在interactive workshops, eagerly absorbing new techniques and connecting with fellow art enthusiasts like me. It turned out that原来 the strangers I was initially afraid of were already my friends. 在整个夏令营中，我沉浸在互动工作坊中，急切地吸收新技术，并与像我这样的艺术爱好者建立联系。原来，我最初害怕的那些陌生人已经是我的朋友了。 · From this experience, I realized that embracing unfamiliarity and conquering fears can pave the way for铺平道路remarkable personal growth and opportunities. The towering pine tree in the Westons ' yard serves as a constant reminder that不断提醒着the strongest growth often springs from来自 venturing into the unknown world冒险进入未知的世界. 从这次经历中，我意识到，欣然接受不熟悉和征服恐惧可以为非凡的个人成长和机会铺平道路。Westons院子里高耸的松树不断提醒我，最强劲的生长往往来自于冒险进入未知的世界。 第2篇 轮椅篮球 Bob and I hung out the whole summer, running in the field, swimming in the lake and exploring everywhere joyfully. It was a typical summer afternoon. Bob suggested we skip a language lesson to play basketball. Aha! I would show my defense, lay-ups and three-point shooting. I loved to explore, I loved sports, and I loved basketball most. I believed I would be the next LeBron James. But my passion for sports came to a sudden stop when I began experiencing extreme back pain later that day. After several visits to doctors, finally I was told that a spine (脊柱) surgery was necessary. Unfortunately, the surgery accidentally damaged my spinal cord (脊髓). I was in the ward hanging face down to relieve the pressure on my spine. After four-month rehabilitation training (康复训练) in hospital, reality slowly set in – I was unable to walk again. I couldn’t believe this should have happened to me, that it wasn’t possible to recover, that I wouldn’t become a famous basketball player, that my life as I had known it, was over. My future would be chained to a wheelchair. I was just 16 years old! Back home, I learned how hard it was going to be to get around in a wheelchair. I withdrew from my friends and my basketball. At Bob’s repeated invitation, I agreed to go to our regular swimming hole. Unable to make it down the riverbank alone, I was too proud to ask for help. When I finally realized my pride would keep me away from people and sports I loved, I let Bob carry me on his back to the river’s edge. Allowing others to help was a turning point. I realized my attitude was the biggest barrier I had to face. How could I expect others to see my potential if I didn’t see it myself? How could I realize my basketball dream if I withdrew into myself? P1: One day, Bob took me to a wheelchair basketball game. P2: With Bob’s encouragement, I decided to have a try at my dream. 情节设计： One day, Bob took me to a wheelchair basketball game. 我看到的篮球比赛场景--- 我的心理产生了巨大变化--- bob鼓励我去找到自身价值 With Bob’s encouragement, I decided to have a try at my dream. 怎么尝试：意志+训练--- 做的过程中的心理活动--- 没有什么能阻止梦想 范文： Para1: One day, Bob took me to a wheelchair basketball game. · It was an eye-opening experience for me. As I watched the players controlling their wheelchairs with incredible speed and precision, my admiration for them grew. They displayed a level of determination and resilience that inspired me. 这对我来说是一次大开眼界的经历。当我看着球员们以令人难以置信的速度和精确度控制他们的轮椅时，我对他们的钦佩不断增多。他们表现出了一种激励着我的决心和韧性。 · Bob told me that everything depended on my own attitude towards my disability, that physical limitations didn’t have to be a barrier to pursuing my dreams, and that the love for life could triumph over any difficulty. Bob告诉我，一切都取决于我自己对残疾的态度，身体上的限制不一定是我追求梦想的障碍，对生活的爱可以战胜任何困难。 · His words ignited a spark within me. 他的话在我心中点燃了一股火花。 笔记：先整体评价某事物（这次观赛经历），再详细描述; 当我在做某事时，我油然而生了某种情绪。As I did（saw/heard/thought of/picked up） sth, my 情绪n. grew. 某人展现出的某种品质激励了我。Sb displayed a level of ...that inspired me.(美好品质如：determination决心,resilience弹力,快速恢复的能力,persistence坚持不懈 perseverance不屈不挠) 语料：鼓励他人（需要我们自己也具备这样的人生态度，真实的最动人）【一切取决于态度】...【某个缺陷或不利条件未必是追逐梦想的障碍】.【对生活的热爱能战胜困难】...【点燃火花】... Para2: With Bob’s encouragement, I decided to have a try at my dream. · Instead of withdrawing into myself, I focused on what I could achieve. Through endless training and firm commitment, I began to adapt my skills to the world of wheelchair basketball.我没有退缩，而是专注于我所能实现的目标。通过无尽的训练和坚定的承诺，我开始让我的技能适应轮椅篮球的世界。 · It wasn’t an easy journey, but with each milestone I reached, my confidence improved, and I rediscovered my passion for the game. 这不是一个简单的旅程，但随着我每达到一个里程碑，我的信心都提高了，我重新发现了我对比赛的热情。 · I set off on a new chapter of my life, proving to myself and the world that a positive attitude can conquer any obstacle. 我开始了我人生的新篇章，向自己和世界证明，积极的态度可以克服任何障碍。 笔记：接上句，决定尝试，那么就要付诸行动。在付诸行动之前，先转变观念。观念先行，行动跟上。 人物发生变化句型：instead of doing 怎么改变？客观（练习）+主观（投入） 语料【改变与进步，自信与热爱】It wasn’t an easy journey, but with each milestone I reached, my confidence improved, and I rediscovered my passion for the game.【人生新篇章】【积极的心态可以克服任何障碍】 最终自测： One day, Bob took me to a wheelchair basketball game. · 这对我来说是一次大开眼界的经历。当我看着球员们以令人难以置信的速度和精确度控制他们的轮椅时，我对他们的钦佩不断增多。他们表现出了一种激励着我的决心和韧性。 · Bob告诉我，一切都取决于我自己对残疾的态度，身体上的限制不一定是我追求梦想的障碍，对生活的爱可以战胜任何困难。 · 他的话在我心中点燃了一股火花。 With Bob’s encouragement, I decided to have a try at my dream. · 我没有退缩，而是专注于我所能实现的目标。通过无尽的训练和坚定的承诺，我开始让我的技能适应轮椅篮球的世界。 · 这不是一个简单的旅程，但随着我每达到一个里程碑，我的信心都提高了，我重新发现了我对比赛的热情。 · 我开始了我人生的新篇章，向自己和世界证明，积极的态度可以克服任何障碍。 第3篇 被宠坏的Hasan Though his father, grandmothers, uncles, aunts and cousins were all going to be there, it would be the first time for Hasan, a thoroughly pampered (娇生惯养的)child, to be without the constant mothering of his helicopter mother. At first Hasan tried to emotionally blackmail (要挟)his mother into not going , but after she promised to bring back his favorite toys and candies, he unwillingly let her go. When he went to drop off his mother at the airport, he had teary eyes as he wondered how he was going to survive without her for the next two weeks. Although he felt like crying like a baby, he was too embarrassed to cry out loud. But when his father hugged him, Hasan could’t stop crying in his arms. When they returned home, Hasan, who had always been told by hi mother what to do, now had no one to tell him to wash his hands or finish his dinner. Though he was very upset about his mother's leaving, suddenly he also realized the potential for partying. away from his mother's discipline(管教).There would be no checks or balances. He could stay up late, eat junk food and use the Internet to his heart's content. Back from school, he would think, “Homework? I'll make the most of my freedom and have some fun instead!” Hasan started to stay up till he could no longer stay awake and then woke up with a lot of difficulty at seven in the morning, barely making it to school on time. But after a few days, his partying started catching up with him. In school, he was barely managing to stay awake. Things started getting out of control. His homework remained undone. He failed his tests. He felt weak from eating only junk food. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 One day, his teacher finally demanded to know what was going on with him. The teacher’s words sank into his brain and made sense to him.  范文： One day, his teacher finally demanded to know what was going on with him. 1　 Unable to figure out why Hanson’s once-promising school performance had taken a nose-dive, he called Hasan to his office and inquired about it with concern. 因为不明白汉森曾经很有希望的学校表现为什么急转直下，他把哈桑叫到自己的办公室，关切地询问此事。 形容词短语做原因状语；with+n, 方式状语 2　 Head drooping and tongue tied, Hasan stammered out what had happened recently. 垂着头，舌头打结般，哈桑结结巴巴地说出了最近发生的事情。 独立主格做状语，动作描写 3　 Upon hearing Hasan’s reply, the teacher uttered in disbelief, “Hasan, you are ruining your body and soul and even your future. True freedom comes from self-discipline and responsibility rather than indulgence in your own desire. You need to take your responsibility for attending yourself.” 听到哈桑的回答，老师难以置信地说：“哈桑，你正在毁掉你的身体和灵魂，甚至你的未来。真正的自由来自于自律和责任，而不是对你自己欲望的放纵。你需要承担起责任好好照顾自己。” upon doing, 动作衔接；in+n, 方式状语；rather than, 而不是 The teacher’s words sank into his brain and made sense to him. 4　 Now he recognized the consequence of his reckless behavior and needed to make amends without delay. 现在，他认清了自己鲁莽行为的后果，需要立即弥补赎罪。 叙事节奏 5　 From that day on, determined to get back on track, he assigned time for study, set up a sleeping time and said no to junk food and computer games. Gradually, he became active in class and improved his test scores, which surprised his father and teacher a lot. 从那天起，他决心回到正轨，分配了时间学习，安排了睡觉时间，对垃圾食品和电脑游戏说不。渐渐地，他在课堂上活跃起来，提高了考试成绩，这让他的父亲和老师非常惊喜。 过去分词短语做状语；动作链；非限定从用来补充说明 6　 This experience was like a wake-up call, always reminding him that discipline and responsibility mattered most in his life. 这段经历就像一个警钟，一直提醒他，纪律和责任在他的生活中是最重要的。 哲理感悟式结尾 最终自测： One day, his teacher finally demanded to know what was going on with him. · 因为不明白汉森曾经很有希望的学校表现为什么急转直下，他把哈桑叫到自己的办公室，关切地询问此事。 · 垂着头，舌头打结般，哈桑结结巴巴地说出了最近发生的事情。 · 听到哈桑的回答，老师难以置信地说：“哈桑，你正在毁掉你的身体和灵魂，甚至你的未来。真正的自由来自于自律和责任，而不是对你自己欲望的放纵。你需要承担起责任好好照顾自己。” The teacher’s words sank into his brain and made sense to him. · 现在，他认清了自己鲁莽行为的后果，需要立即弥补赎罪。 · 从那天起，他决心回到正轨，分配了时间学习，安排了睡觉时间，对垃圾食品和电脑游戏说不。渐渐地，他在课堂上活跃起来，提高了考试成绩，这让他的父亲和老师非常惊喜。 · 这段经历就像一个警钟，一直提醒他，纪律和责任在他的生活中是最重要的。 第四篇 跟数学硬磕到底 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Not again!” Aliya shouted angrily, looking at the marks she had attained in her maths test. It seemed as if failing in the math test had become a part and parcel of her life. Despite her efforts, she had been unable to perform well. Tears in her eyes, she quickly shoved (乱塞) the paper into her bag before any classmate could make a rude comment on her. Effortlessly, using the back of her palm, she was wiping the tears when her teacher Mrs Leena noticed her. She came to Aliya’s desk and, in a soft voice, asked her to see her during the break time. Wondering what it could be, Aliya waited impatiently for lunchtime. Finally, when the bell rang, she made her way to Mrs Leena. As soon as she saw Aliya, she gestured for her to sit on the empty chair beside her. She carefully studied her face, cleared her throat with a bright smile and said, “You seem to be anxious. I think I know what’s bothering you. If you allow me I think together we may come up with a good solution.” With a puzzled look, she said, “Well ma’am, you know I have been struggling in maths since the beginning of the term. It seems as if no matter how hard I work, I am unable to get the desired result. I feel so upset,” she said sadly. “You need not be so gloomy,” encouraged Mrs Leena. “With these three key ingredients: hard work, determination and resilience (韧性), you will move ahead and succeed. It’s always the first step that’s difficult, but once you decide not to look back and not give up, you will be successful, my dear. Come on, gather yourself and let’s work on it together.” From that day onwards, Aliya worked hard, religiously following her teacher’s advice. By the time the final exams drew close, she had thoroughly revised her math book and well-prepared. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 On the exam day, a fear of failure upset her stomach. She passed her math exam with an unbelievable A grade on her report card. 情节推断 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“考试当天，她对失败的恐惧搅得她心神不宁。”可知，第一段可描写阿里亚因害怕失败而紧张不安，但在老师的话语的鼓励下，她凭借所学的策略逐一应对难题，每完成一题就增强了自信，最终克服了恐惧，全力以赴完成了考试，获得了成就感。 ②由第二段首句内容“她的数学考试考了一个难以置信的A等成绩。”可知，第二段可描写阿里亚看到成绩时，眼中涌出了喜悦的泪水，这成绩不仅代表分数，更是她努力、老师支持和自身韧性的证明。她自信地离开教室，已从害怕数学的学生蜕变为战胜恐惧、自信满满的年轻女性。 2.续写线索： 考试日——恐惧失败——老师的话——运用策略——信心增加 得了A等成绩——成就感——获得自信——感悟 范文： On the exam day, a fear of failure upset her stomach.  · Aliya felt the grip of fear and anxiety tightening around her. Just then Mrs. Leena’s words of encouragement echoed in her mind, and she tried to compose herself. · But as she remembered the struggles she had faced with math, determination and calm began to fill her heart. With newfound courage, Aliya tackled the math problems without hesitation. · Amazingly, she finished with time to spare and submitted her paper. Days later, her report card came, and Aliya unfolded it with trembling hands. · Aliya 感到恐惧和焦虑在她周围越来越紧。就在这时，Mrs. Leena鼓励的话在她的脑海中回荡，她试图使自己镇定下来。 · 但当她想起她用数学所面临的挣扎时，她的心开始充满了决心和平静。凭借新获得的勇气，阿利亚毫不犹豫地解决了这些数学问题。 · 令人惊讶的是，她抽出时间并提交了她的论文。几天后，她的成绩单来了，阿利亚用颤抖的手展开了它。 · 笔记：feel 情绪名词 tightening around her,现在分词做宾语补足语；determination and calm began to fill her heart.无灵主语句； With newfound courage, without hesitation，Amazingly,.状语的使用； Days later时间衔接。 She passed her math exam with an unbelievable A grade on her report card. · The moment she saw the grade, tears of joy welled up in her eyes. Overcome with pride and excitement, she couldn’t contain her joy as she leaped from her seat. · She found Mrs. Leena in the office and expressed her gratitude, but Mrs. Leena insisted that it was Aliya’s own determination and effort that had led to her success. · Overwhelmed with emotion, Aliya realized that these same qualities would carry her through any challenges in the future. · 她一看到分数，喜悦的泪水就涌上了她的眼睛。她感到骄傲和兴奋，当她从座位上跳下来，无法抑制自己的喜悦。 · 她找到了Mrs. Leena在办公室里表达了她的感激之情，莉娜坚持认为，是阿利亚自己的决心和努力导致了她的成功。 · 充满情感的阿利亚意识到，这些同样的品质将使她在未来经历任何挑战。 笔记：The moment 时间状语从句；tears of joy welled up in her eyes无灵主语句；Overcome with pride and excitement, 过去分词作状语； it was Aliya’s own determination and effort that ...强调句型； 第五篇 自负导致比赛失败 Having held the interschool storytelling championship for the past two years, I was the shining star of my school. When it came to choosing the right candidate to participate in such competitions, I was always the first choice. Naturally, I was once again selected to represent my school in the approaching contest this year. Upon hearing the fact that I was chosen again, my classmates and friends acknowledged that I would undoubtedly emerge as the champion again. Consequently, I became conceited. I was so proud that I neglected the importance of practicing for the contest. A week before the contest, my teacher Ms. Sara asked, “Selena, would you like to stand in front of the class to rehearse for the contest?” She had tutored me in the past two competitions and knew how important practice was. “Just imagine you are on the stage in the presence of the audience,” she added. “I’m sorry, Ms. Sara,” I replied. “I have a bit of a sore throat.” This was usually the lie I would tell whenever my teacher requested me to practice in front of the class. I always found excuses to avoid doing it because I believed that I was the best and therefore the practice was unnecessary. On one occasion, I even told Ms. Sara not to worry too much as I was well prepared for the contest. In fact, I did everything but practice my script. I only managed to glance briefly through the story the day before the contest. As the best storyteller among the students of the local secondary schools, I was too vain to practice and expected everything to be fine. The contest was being held in the local community hall. On the day of the contest, the hall was packed. My school teachers and principal were there along with many of my classmates and schoolmates. I was the eighth contestant out of twenty in total. Those who spoke before me did extremely well. On seeing their fascinating and outstanding performance, I began to lose confidence in myself. My palms sweated heavily and I started to feel nervous. Soon, it was my turn to talk. Finally, results were announced after the contest. 二、分句练习 Paragraph 1: Soon, it was my turn to talk. (1) 我鼓起了一些勇气，走上舞台，试图掩盖我已经失去信心的事实。【前后都是非谓语】 ①鼓起勇气 pluck up some courage Having plucked up some courage, I stepped onto the stage, attempting to conceal the fact that confidence had deserted me. ②隐藏、掩盖 conceal (2) 当我看到观众时，我听到我的声音在颤抖，我的腿也在颤抖。【with结构，so表示也】 看到 one’s glance meet sb With my glance meeting the audience, I heard my voice was trembling and so were my legs. (3) 由于不够熟练，我甚至在演讲的过程中出现了几次结巴，当我捕捉到老师、同学和校长惊讶、困惑和失望的表情时，情况变得更糟了。【非限定性定语从句】 ①缺乏 lack of … Owing to lack of proficiency, I even stammered a few times in the course of speech, which worsened when I captured the astonished, puzzled and disappointed look of my teachers, classmates and principal. ②熟练 proficiency ③结巴 stammer ④在…的过程中 in the course of ⑤捕捉 capture (4) 我想不起是怎么结束的，只记得我说完最后一句话后逃离了舞台。当然，没有任何掌声。【except for】 I couldn’t recall how it ended, except for my desperate escape from the stage when I finished my last word. Of course, without any applause. Paragraph 2: Finally, results were announced after the contest. (1) 听到我没有被列入获奖名单后，我垂下眼睛，努力躲避周围人的注视。【非谓语】 ①将…列入名单 list … Having heard that I was not listed among the winners, I drooped my eyes and endeavored to avoid the gaze around me. ②努力做某事 endeavor to do ③注视 n. gaze (2) 突然，我感到一只手放到了我的肩膀上。是萨拉老师。 Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder. It was Ms. Sara. (3) 我回头，看到一双关心的眼睛。“没关系”，她用温柔的声音安慰我。 ①回头 look back I looked back and a pair of concerned eyes came into my sight. “It’s OK”, she comforted me in a soft voice. ②安慰 comfort (4) 当几个同学也围过来安慰我时，我再也抑制不住自己的情绪，泪水夺眶而出，羞愧和悔恨交织在一起。【as从句，with结构】 ①聚集在一起 gather around As several classmates also gathered around to console me, I couldn’t contain my emotions anymore and my tears brimmed over, with a mixture of shame and remorse overwhelming me. ②安慰 console ③抑制 contain ④泪水夺眶而出 one’s tears brimmed over ⑤悔恨 remorse (5) “骄者必败。愿你永远不要再让自负阻碍你的成功。”听到萨拉女士的话，我认真地点点头，决心明年再战。 ①骄兵必败 Pride goes before a fall. “Pride goes before a fall. May you never let arrogance stand in the way of your success again.” hearing what Ms. Sara said, I nodded earnestly with a strong will to fight next year. ②愿 may + sb + do(原形) ③自负 arrogance, conceit, vanity ④阻碍 stand in the way of … ⑤谁的话 what sb said ④带着…的决心 with a strong will to do … 三、最终自测 Soon, it was my turn to talk.我鼓起了一些勇气，走上舞台，试图掩盖我已经失去信心的事实。当我看到观众时，我听到我的声音在颤抖，我的腿也在颤抖。由于不够熟练，我甚至在演讲的过程中出现了几次结巴，当我捕捉到老师、同学和校长惊讶、困惑和失望的表情时，情况变得更糟了。我想不起是怎么结束的，只记得我说完最后一句话后逃离了舞台。当然，没有任何掌声。 Finally, results were announced after the contest. 听到我没有被列入获奖名单后，我垂下眼睛，努力躲避周围人的注视。突然，我感到一只手放到了我的肩膀上。是萨拉老师。我回头，看到一双关心的眼睛，“没关系”，她用温柔的声音安慰我。当几个同学也围过来安慰我时，我再也抑制不住自己的情绪，泪水夺眶而出，羞愧和悔恨交织在一起。“骄者必败。愿你永远不要再让自负阻碍你的成功。”听到萨拉女士的话，我认真地点点头，决心明年再战。 范文 Paragraph 1: Soon, it was my turn to talk. Having plucked up some courage, I stepped onto the stage, attempting to conceal the fact that confidence had deserted me. With my glance meeting the audience, I heard my voice was trembling and so were my legs. Due to lack of proficiency, I even stammered a few times in the course of speech, which worsened when I captured the astonished, puzzled and disappointed look of my teachers, classmates and principal. I couldn’t recall how it ended, except for my desperate escape from the stage when I finished my last word. Of course, without any applause. Paragraph 2: Finally, results were announced after the contest. Having heard that I was not listed among the winners, I dropped my eyes and endeavored to avoid the gaze around me. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder. It was Ms. Sara. I looked back and a pair of concerned eyes came into my sight. “It’s OK”, she comforted me in a soft voice. As several classmates also gathered around to console me, I couldn’t contain my emotions anymore and my tears brimmed over, with a mixture of shame and remorse overwhelming me. “Pride goes before a fall. May you never let arrogance stand in the way of your success again.” hearing what Ms. Sara said, I nodded earnestly with a strong will to fight next year. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$