江苏省南京市秦淮区2022-2024年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：书面表达

江苏省南京市秦淮区 2022-2024年中考英语二模试题分类汇编 书面表达 2024年江苏省南京市秦淮区中考二模英语试题 八、书面表达(本题共15分) 六、书面表达(满分15分) 望子成龙、望女成凤是很多父母的心愿。现在有一种类型的父母被称为直升机父母(helicopter parents) 。请根据学校的征稿要求, 用英语写一篇短文。 Helicopter parents are those who are always watching their children closely and offering help at any time. Please look at the picture and write a passage that includes: ●whether your parents are helicopter parents and the reason ● the influence helicopter parents have on teenagers ●your advice to helicopter parents Look forward to hearing from you. 注意： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点, 全文连贯通顺。 2 . 词数80 左右(已给 出的文 章开头 , 不计入总词数) 。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。 To tell the truth, my parents _______________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2023年江苏省南京市秦淮区中考二模英语试题 八、书面表达(本题共15分) 2023年是毛泽东等老一辈革命家为雷锋同志题词60周年, 你校英文网站开展了“传承雷锋精神, 争做时代新人”的主题征文活动。请根据以下提示, 写一 篇英语征文, 分享自己的看法。 · What is your understanding of Lei Feng spirit? ·What was your unforgettable experience about learning from Lei Feng and why? ·What do you think of Lei Feng spirit in today's world? 注意： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点, 全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头, 不计入总词数)。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。 I'd like to talk about my ideas on Lei Feng spirit. _______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2022年江苏省南京市秦淮区中考二模英语试题 八、书面表达（满分15分） 76. 为了促进学生健康成长，“双减”政策中明确了各年级作业总量。假如你是初三学生李华，请根据表格内容，用英文写一封信，向国外笔友Mike简要介绍作业量要求，并谈谈“双减”的好处及你的看法。 Written homework every day Grades 1-2 none Grades 3-6 less than 60 minutes Grades 7-9 less than 90 minutes Advantages more relaxed,... Your opinion(s) ... 注意： 1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。 2.词数 80左右 (已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Dear Mike, I’d like to tell you something about the “double reduction” policy _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 答案： 2024年江苏省南京市秦淮区中考二模英语试题 76．例文   To tell the truth, my parents love me like Helicopter parents, even though they sometimes criticize me. It makes me unhappy that they often look through my personal things. Besides, if I chat with my friends online, they won’t allow me to use the computer, because they are afraid that I will be cheated.   Helicopter parents have a bad influence on their children. Helicopter parents don’t make their children encounter failure, which will kill the children’s confidence. Even worse, children don’t have many choices of their own and can’t be more independent when they grow up.   I am convinced that parents should allow children to have their own choices. Parents should help children to develop their independence and confidence, and give their more personal space. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③要点：写作时应围绕提示问题进行写作，注意不要遗漏信息，语句应通顺连贯有逻辑。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己的父母是否是“直升机”父母并说明原因； 第二步，描述“直升机”父母对青少年的影响； 第三步，对“直升机”父母的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①even though尽管 ②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 ③encounter failure遇到失败 [高分句型] ①To tell the truth, my parents love me like Helicopter parents, even though they sometimes criticize me.（even though引导的让步状语从句） ②Helicopter parents don’t make their children encounter failure, which will kill the children’s confidence.（定语从句） 2023年江苏省南京市秦淮区中考二模英语试题 76．例文 I’d like to talk about my ideas on Lei Feng spirit. Lei Feng was a soldier who devoted himself to helping others all his life. From my point of view, Lei Feng spirit means that we are ready to give a helping hand to others at any time. Last month, I went to an old people’s home with my classmates. We spent hours there chatting with the elderly and making dumplings together. I even taught Grandma Li how to do some online shopping, which made her quite happy. The smiling faces of the old that day made the experience so unforgettable. Although Lei Fai passed away years ago, his spirit never dies. It’s still necessary and important for us to carry forward Lei Feng spirit today. The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine. Let’s learn from Lei Feng and make the world more fragrant. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意针对要点进行适当的发挥，使得文章更丰富、更有逻辑。 [写作步骤] 第一步，谈谈自己对雷锋精神的理解； 第二步，介绍自己学雷锋的经历； 第三步，总结全文，号召大家一起向雷锋学习。 [亮点词汇] ①devote oneself to 献身于…… ②be ready to do sth. 准备好做某事 ③give a helping hand 伸出援助之手 ④carry forward 发扬 [高分句型] ① Lei Feng was a soldier who devoted himself to helping others all his life.（who引导的定语从句） ② Although Lei Fai passed away years ago, his spirit never dies.（although引导的让步状语从句） 2022年江苏省南京市秦淮区中考二模英语试题 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I’d like to tell you something about the “double reduction” policy. There is no written homework in Grade One and Grade Two of primary school. Grades three to six should have less than 60 minutes of homework every day. Junior high school students should have less than 90 minutes of homework every day. So now I feel more relaxed. I hope I can better plan my time and improve myself, so that I can have a better future. In a word, I had too much pressure in the past, but now things are completely different and my daily life is colorful and meaningful. I enjoy the changes and will study harder. I hope the school can prepare more extracurricular activities for us. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以李华的名义给笔友“Mike”写一封信，介绍作业量要求、谈谈“双减”的好处以及自己的看法。 2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时；文章可分为三段式：第一段文章已给，引出话题“双减”。第二段介绍各年级作业量和“双减”的好处。最后一段就“双减”给出自己的看法。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误，正确使用时态。 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$