山东省临沂市沂水县2022-2024年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：书面表达

山东省临沂市沂水县 2022-2024年中考英语二模试题分类汇编 书面表达 2024年山东省临沂市沂水县中考二模英语试题 六、书面表达 51．时光飞逝，初中生活已接近尾声。回顾初中生涯，你一定经历了成长的烦恼，也成就了更好的自己。假设《中学生英文报》正在举办以“成长”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下提示，以“Growing Pains and Gains”为题写篇短文投稿。 What problem did you have? How did you solve it? Who/What either encouraged or helped you? (friends/teachers/heroes/music/films/books…) What have you learned from it? 要求： 1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分； 2. 全文不少于 80词。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2023年山东省临沂市沂水县中考二模英语试题 六、 书面表达(计15分) 假如你是李华, 近日, 你收到了笔友Tony 发来的邮件。在邮件中, Tony 倾诉了自己遇到的 烦恼并向你寻求帮助。请你根据邮件内容进行回复。 Dear Li Hua, My family just moved to a new place because my father has to work here for two years. The town is not bad, but it's hard for me to get used to the life in my new school. I have no friends here and often feel lonely. What should I do to feel better? Can you give me some advice? Yours, Tony 写作要求： 1. 至少提出两条建议； 2. 条理清楚, 语句通顺, 书写工整； 3. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)。 Dear Tony, I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble getting used to the life in the new school. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 2022年山东省临沂市沂水县中考二模英语试题 八、材料作文 45．“青春需早为，岂能长少年。” 世间有很多美好的东西，如生命、健康、时间、亲情、友情……，需要我们珍惜。某英文网站正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请以“The most valuable thing in my life”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右短文，谈谈你最珍惜什么，为什么最珍惜它，以及你在日常生活中是怎么做的。 ● What do you value most in your life? Why? ● How do you value it in your daily life? 要求：1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 2）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确. The most valuable thing in my life There are many valuable things in our lives, such as health, time, friendship and so on. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案： 2024年山东省临沂市沂水县中考二模英语试题 51．例文 Growing Pains and Gains How time flies! My junior school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I had not only pains but also gains. I faced the biggest problem when I entered Grade Nine. I always hated running, but I had no choice because of the sports exam. Although I practised hard every day, I couldn’t run fast enough to pass the exam. I just wanted to give up. At that moment, the story about Spud Webb encouraged me. Through hard work, Spud Webb became the shortest player in the NBA. His story gave me courage to solve all kind of problems. Now, I’m not afraid of 800-meter running any more. I have learned that nothing is impossible if we don’t give up easily. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括四个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，回顾初中生活，有痛苦也有收获，从而引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己遇到的最大困难； 第三步，介绍如何解决这一问题，描述激励自己的人或事； 第四步，书写结语，表明自己成长的收获。 ［亮点词汇］ ① not only…but also…不但……而且…… ② because of 因为 ［高分句型］ ① Although I practised hard every day, I couldn’t run fast enough to pass the exam. (although引导让步状语从句) ② I faced the biggest problem when I entered Grade Nine.  (when引导时间状语从句) 2023年山东省临沂市沂水县中考二模英语试题 61．例文 Dear Tony, I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble getting used to the life in the new school. I’d like to give you some advice on how to make new friends at school. Firstly, be friendly to others and smile often. A smiling face promotes friendships because it makes others willing to accept you. Secondly, try to express yourself bravely at school. As far as I know, a confident person can always attract many friends. Thirdly, join some clubs that you are interested in. There you’ll find many people who share the same hobby with you. And that will make it easier for you to make new friends. I hope these suggestions will be useful for you and that everything goes well with you in the new school. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：要求根据邮件内容进行回复，并提出建议。学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先告诉对方已收到来信并了解情况； 第二步，针对笔友的烦恼提出建议； 第三步，谈谈自己对笔友的祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①have trouble in doing sth做某事有困难 ②be friendly to sb对某人友好 ③be interested in…对……感兴趣 ④share sth with sb与某人分享某事 [高分句型] ①I hope these suggestions will be useful for you and that everything goes well with you in the new school.（宾语从句） 2022年山东省临沂市沂水县中考二模英语试题 45．范文： The most valuable thing in my life There are many valuable things in our lives, such as health, time, friendship and so on. I think the most valuable thing is health. In the past, I often went to bed late at night. So I felt very tired and sleepy the next day. I couldn’t learn well. Then, my mother ordered me to go to bed before 10 o’clock. Now I feel much better and I can learn well. In order to have good health, we should eat healthy food and exercise in a proper way every day. What’s more, we should get enough sleep every day. From my experience, I know health is so important and valuable. I hope everyone can have a healthy and happy life every day. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“The most valuable thing in my life”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，谈谈生活动你最珍惜的是什么，以及为什么珍惜，和怎样做的。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别介绍生活中你最看重的是什么，为什么以及你在日常生活中如何看待它。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$