山东省潍坊高密市2022-2024年中考二模英语试题汇编：书面表达

山东省潍坊高密市2022-2024年中考二模英语试题汇编 书面表达 2024年山东省潍坊高密市中考二模英语试卷 六、书面表达 44．假若你是某校某某俱乐部的成员李华，该俱乐部想要面向全校学生招收新成员，请你写一篇英文文章对该俱乐部进行介绍，通常有什么活动，并说明加入该俱乐部的好处，以便在校英语报上登出。 要求： (1) 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； (2) 词数80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 I’m Li Hua and a member of _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2023年山东省潍坊高密市中考二模英语试卷 六、书面表达 44．Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发帖，假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的生活经历，用英语跟帖。 注意： 1. 不要出现考生本人信息； 2. 80～100词。 Teens Around the World Subject: Friends     Hey guys! Who is your best friend? Can you remember when you got to know each other and what happened that time? Is there anything that makes you unforgettable? How do you feel about the friendship? Please share the story with us.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Becky,                                                                                                                                                             England _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                 Li Hua, China 2022年山东省潍坊高密市中考二模英语试卷 六、书面表达 44．假如你是李华，你在网上看到一家公司正在为设计一款提高英语写作能力的APP征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。 Ideas NeededWe are now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app will help them organize ideas, use correct words and so on. Here’s what to do: Share your ideas. Please let us know:What’s the name of the app? What problems can the app solve? Any other suggestions? Contact（联系）informationEmail us at appdesign@kuailexuexi.com. 要求： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 包含提示所有内容，可适当发挥，内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 邮件的格式及开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for designing an app for us to improve our English writing skills. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案： 2024年山东省潍坊高密市中考二模英语试卷 44．例文 I’m Li Hua and a member of the basketball club in our school. The basketball club is one of the most popular clubs in our school. You will learn a lot if you join this club. New members usually first learn about the history of basketball. The club often holds different basketball games. Watching NBA and CBA games is also what we often do in the club. Joining the club will not only improve your basketball skills, but also help you make a lot of friends with the same interests. Winning the prize during the competition will make you feel very proud. Welcome to our school basketball club! We’re looking forward to your joining us. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍俱乐部的大致情况； 第二步，介绍俱乐部的一些活动； 第三步，加入俱乐部的好处； 第四步，表达期待。 ［亮点词汇］ ①look forward to期待 ②not only … but also…不但……而且…… ［高分句型］ ①You will learn a lot if you join this club. (if引导条件状语从句) ②Winning the prize during the competition will make you feel very proud. (动名词作主语) 2023年山东省潍坊高密市中考二模英语试卷 44．例文 Zhang Bei is my best friend. We got to know each other five years ago. It was on the first day that I moved to the new school. I felt so nervous while seeing everything new and strange that I couldn’t even find my classroom. Zhang Bei came up to me and took me to the classroom. From then she has always given me a hand any time I need. It is nearly five years since we became friends. In my opinion, friendship is just like a light in the dark, which can give us the right direction. Li Hua, China 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息”中“谁是我最好的朋友，相识的过程，我们之间发生的难忘的事情，我对这段友谊的看法”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“张蓓是我最好的朋友。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我们是怎样相识的，她对我的帮助，相识的时间”重点介绍“我的最好的朋友张蓓”的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“在我看来，友谊就像黑暗中的一盏灯，它可以给我们正确的方向。” [亮点词汇] ① each other彼此，互相 ② give sb a hand帮助某人 [高分句型] ① I felt so nervous while seeing everything new and strange that I couldn’t even find my classroom.（while引导的时间状语从句） ② In my opinion, friendship is just like a light in the dark, which can give us the right direction.（which引导的非限定性定语从句） 2022年山东省潍坊高密市中考二模英语试卷 44．例文 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for designing an app for us to improve our English writing skills. I’d like to share my idea here. Could its name be “Make Writing Easy”? Writing in English is difficult for most of us. We don’t know how to organise ideas, use proper words and so on. I hope it can solve these problems. First, there should be some interesting reading materials. The more we read, the better we will write. Second, the app should have online courses so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher and he can correct our mistakes and offer suggestions. I hope my advice will help you.   Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件作文，以“网上征集的关于提高英语写作能力的APP的信息”为话题参照表格中要点进行分析。写作时需包括表格中所有内容，并适当拓展。 2.写作指导：本文以第一、三人称为主，时态为一般现在时及一般将来时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题，给出app可能的名字；第二段介绍app可以解决的问题；第三段介绍如何设计app；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。 试卷第8页，共9页 试卷第5页，共5页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$