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书面表达15篇(安徽名校真题) 1．（2024·安徽滁州·二模）某英文网站正在开展以“Should Teenagers Share Housework at Home?”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文投稿，分享你对该话题的看法。 要求： 1.文中不得出现你所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2.词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：责任感sense of responsibility Should Teenagers Share Housework at Home? Doing housework is an important part of our lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Should Teenagers Share Housework at Home? Doing housework is an important part of our lives. I think teenagers should share housework at home because it brings us some advantages. Firstly, doing housework can help us develop a sense of responsibility. By doing the dishes or cleaning our own rooms, we learn to be responsible for ourselves. Secondly, doing some housework at home makes us learn some basic life skills. This enables us to live an independent life when we grow up. More importantly, by doing housework we can strengthen our relationship with our parents because they are happy to see us share housework with them. All in all, doing housework is so good to us that we should form the habit of sharing housework at home. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给话题完成写作，可适当发挥，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明自己的观点：青少年应该在家分担家务。 第二步，具体描述青少年做家务的好处； 第三步，最后表达总结。 [亮点词汇] ① help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ② grow up长大 ③ all in all总之 [高分句型] ①I think teenagers should share housework at home because it brings us some advantages.（宾语从句） ②This enables us to live an independent life when we grow up.（时间状语从句） ③More importantly, by doing housework we can strengthen our relationship with our parents because they are happy to see us share housework with them.（原因状语从句） 2．（2024·安徽合肥·二模）假定你是李辉，你的英国笔友Tom对你校开设的“AI教你学书法”课程很感兴趣。请结合下面图式信息，给他写一封邮件，分享你和同学们学习的经历、收获和感受。 注意： 1.邮件需包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80-100 (邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。) 参考词汇： Chinese calligraphy 中国书法； stroke  n.笔画； Chinese character 汉字 Dear Tom, I’m excited to share with you my experience in our school’s unique “AI Teaches You Calligraphy” course. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m excited to share with you my experience in our school’s unique “AI Teaches You Calligraphy” course. The course was taught by AI teacher, which was the reason why my friends and I took the course. Last week, we gathered in the computer lab to learn the basics of Chinese calligraphy. The AI program guided us through the strokes and techniques, showing us how to hold the brush and form the characters. It was amazing to see how the AI could change its teaching style based on our progress. We really enjoyed the course. Not only did we learn a new skill, but we also had a deeper understanding of Chinese culture. The AI program made learning calligraphy easy and fun. I highly recommend this course to you because you are interested in learning Chinese calligraphy. I’m sure you would find it as rewarding as I do. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍自己选这门课的原因； 第二步，分享自己在该课程的经历； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①share with sb与某人分享 ②base on基于 ③be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①I highly recommend this course to you because you are interested in learning Chinese calligraphy.(because引导的原因状语从句) ②I’m sure you would find it as rewarding as I do.(省略that的宾语从句) 3．（2024·安徽池州·三模）假如你是李华，你校最近开展“文明校园，优良学生”的主题活动，请根据以下思维导图用英语写一篇短文向校报投稿，谈一谈你认为如何做一名新时代的好学生。 注意：1.短文须包括含以上所有内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80-100 （短文题目和首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：cooperate (合作 V.) To be good students As Liang Qichao said, “If young people are strong, our country will be strong.” _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 To be good students As Liang Qichao said, “If young people are strong, our country will be strong.” Students are the future of the country. To be good students, we need to remember the following steps. Firstly, it’s necessary for us to develop a good personality. We should love our country, and try to be honest and kind. Secondly, we’d better focus on study. We need to work harder, and enjoy cooperating with each other. What’s more, we must exercise every day to make our body healthier. Last but not least, we should take action to do small things in daily life to become independent. As students, we are supposed to try our best to do what we should do. The more we practice, the better we will become. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“思维导图”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图：借用梁启超说的话来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，如何成为一名优秀的学生； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①take action to do采取行动做某事 ②are supposed to应该 ③try our best to do尽力去做 [高分句型] ①As students, we are supposed to try our best to do what we should do. (what引导的宾语从句) ②The more we practice, the better we will become. (the+比较级，the+比较级句式) 4．（2024·安徽合肥·一模）假如你是李华，近期你校英语报公布了 2023年度热词——challenge（挑战）并发起了主题征文活动。请你围绕该年度热词，根据以下图示，写一篇英文短文投稿。 注意： 1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数 80-100（短文首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 Word of the Year of 2023 is challenge. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Word of the Year of 2023 is challenge. It reminds me of the challenges I once had in learning English. When I first went into junior high school, I couldn’t understand my English teacher because she only spoke English in class. I was worried and didn’t know what to do. My teacher encouraged me and gave me lots of helpful advice. First of all, I listened to the tapes and read English aloud every morning, which helped to improve my pronunciation. Second, I improved my listening by watching English movies. In this way, I not only practiced listening but also had fun. Day by day, I could follow my teacher in class and I really enjoy the English class now. Through the experience, I have realized that as long as we keep trying, nothing is impossible. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己曾遇到的挑战是什么； 第二步，谈谈为了解决这个挑战，自己都做了哪些事情； 第三步，谈谈自己从中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①remind sb. of 让某人想起…… ②by doing sth. 通过做某事 ③not only ... but also 不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①When I first went into junior high school, I couldn’t understand my English teacher because she only spoke English in class.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②First of all, I listened to the tapes and read English aloud every morning, which helped to improve my pronunciation.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 5．（2024·安徽合肥·二模）书籍是人类进步的阶梯，阅读使人成长。假如你是李辉，你的学校正在开展以“书香校园，阅享人生”为主题的读书节活动。请你结合下图信息，用英文写一篇短文，和同学们分享你的读书体会。 注意：1.短文须包含下图所有信息。可适当增强细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80-100 (首句已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 Reading Makes Me Grow as a Person As we all know, reading plays an important part in our daily life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Reading Makes Me Grow as a Person    As we all know, reading plays an important part in our daily life. As students, it is sure that reading books is good for us. It can make us relaxed when we are free or in trouble. Reading books can really bring us a lot of knowledge. Reading can improve our memory.     As for me, I like reading a lot. In my spare time, I not only go to bookstores to buy books but also borrow books from the library. Before going to bed, I always spend some time reading. That really makes me feel relaxed. On weekends, I enjoy reading some novels. Journey to the West is my favourite book. And Monkey King is my super hero. The summer holiday is coming, I am going to read Harry Potter which is a very popular magic book. Reading brings me a lot and reading is a lifelong journey. I hope everyone can read as much as possible in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“众所周知，读书在我们的日常生活中发挥着重要作用”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——何时、何地读书以及读的内容及原因等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“希望大家以后能够尽可能多地读书。”的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①in trouble有麻烦 ②feel relaxed感到放松 ③as much as possible尽可能多 [高分句型] ①In my spare time, I not only go to bookstores to buy books but also borrow books from the library. (not only...but also） ②The summer holiday is coming, I am going to read Harry Potter which is a very popular magic book. (定语从句） 6．（23-24九年级下·安徽合肥·期中）“少年强，则国强。”请你以“Have a Healthy Lifestyle”为题，根据以下内容提示写一篇短文向你们校报的“健康栏目”投稿。 内容提示： 1. 少看电视，少玩手机游戏； 2. 多锻炼，保持身体健康； 3. 多和朋友交往，多和师长沟通； 4. …… 要求： 1. 短文必须包含以上信息； 2. 内容可适当发挥，以保证内容丰富与完整； 3. 文章不可出现真实的人名、地名及校名； 4. 词数：80-100。作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Have a Healthy Lifestyle As we all know, health is very important. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Have a Healthy Lifestyle As we all know, health is very important. But now more and more teenagers have serious health problems. It has something to do with spending too much time on watching TV or playing phone games. So first, we should cut off the time of watching TV or playing with phones. As students, we should balance our study time and playtime. Second, the increased use of digital devices steals away our time for exercises. As a result, our bodies are becoming weaker and weaker and many of us wear glasses. In order to build a strong body, we should exercise more. Third, the people on the Internet may not be always the same as our real friends or parents. We’re supposed to communicate more with our loved ones such as our parents and friends. All in all, it’s important for us to have a strong body and mind, so we can build our great country. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Have a Healthy Lifestyle”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出自己对青少年如何过健康生活的看法； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从身体健康和心理健康两个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①do with处理 ②cut off 切掉 ③be supposed to应该；被期望 ④all in all总而言之 [高分句型] ①But now more and more teenagers have serious health problems.（more and more越来越多） ② In order to build a strong body, we should exercise more.（in order to为了） ③All in all, it’s important for us to have a strong body and mind, so we can build our great country.（so引导的结果状语从句） 7．（2024·安徽阜阳·一模）假如你是李辉，你所在的班级将要举行一次毕业研学旅行。请结合下面图示信息用英语给你们班的交换生Mike写一封邮件，邀请他参加。 注意： 1. 邮件须包含图示所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3. 词数80—100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mike, How’s everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I look forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hui 【答案】范文 Dear Mike, How’s everything going? I am writing this letter to invite you to take part in the school graduates’ study trip. With our graduation coming closer and closer, our class plans a study trip for school graduates next weekend. Our class is going to take a two-day trip to Tianzhu Mountain. During the trip, we will get to the Tianzhu Peak where we can take photos and have a picnic. To enjoy the beauty of the sunrise, we need to get up early. What’s more, the sea of clouds is really worth seeing from the top of the mountain. I believe we will have a wonderful time. I hope you will join us. I look forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，以问候开头，接着表明写作目的； 第二步，具体介绍毕业研学旅行的时间、地点、参加者及你的计划等内容； 第三步，书写结语，期待回复。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②get to到达 ③take photos拍照 ④have a picnic野餐 [高分句型] ①During the trip, we will get to the Tianzhu Peak where we can take photos and have a picnic. (定语从句) ②I believe we will have a wonderful time. (宾语从句) 8．（2024·安徽马鞍山·二模）假定你是李辉，你的英国笔友John对中国传统美食很感兴趣。请结合下面图示信息用英语写一封邮件，向他介绍即将在你校开展的以“品中华美食，感民族风情”为主题的中华美食节活动。 要求： 1．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 2．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．词数80—100（邮件的开头与句首已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 Dear John, I’m glad that you are interested in Chinese food. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear John, I’m glad that you are interested in Chinese food. As we all know, Chinese food plays an important role in Chinese culture. Our school will hold a traditional Chinese Food Festival in our school dining hall on March 5, 2024. At the beginning of the activity, we will enjoy different kinds of traditional foods, such as Fuliji Chicken, Shaanxi roujiamo, Yunnan flower cake and Peking Duck. Then the cooks will show us the process of cooking and the stories behind each dish. For the most interesting part, we can cook dishes by ourselves. This activity is not only a good chance to enjoy traditional dishes, but also a chance to spread Chinese culture. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己学校将举行中华美食节活动； 第二步，具体介绍活动内容； 第三步，最后介绍活动的意义。 [亮点词汇] ① play an important role发挥重要作用 ② different kinds of不同种类的 ③ not only...but also...不但……而且…… [高分句型] As we all know, Chinese food plays an important role in Chinese culture. （定语从句） 9．（2024·安徽宿州·二模）人世间有许多美好的东西值得我们去珍惜，比如生命（life）、健康（health）、时间（time）、友情（friendship）……你最珍惜的是什么呢？请以“What I value most”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。 写作要求：1.文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 3.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 What I value most There are many things we should value in our life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: What I value most There are many things we should value in our life. Without doubt, the most valuable thing to me is my family. The reasons are as follows. My family offer me love and warmth, which encourages me to face difficulties bravely. What’s more, they teach me how to behave properly. They help me become a better person. In my daily life, I always put myself in my family members’ shoes. I offer to do some housework whenever I have time because it not only helps me learn some basic life skills but also gives my parents some time to have a rest. All in all, what I value most is my family. It’s my family that give me the power to go forward. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最珍惜的是什么； 第二步，具体介绍其中的原因以及自己如何珍惜它的； 第三步，最后作总结。 [亮点词汇] ① without doubt毫无疑问 ② what’s more而且 ③ offer to do sth主动提议做某事 ④ all in all总之 [高分句型] ①My family offer me love and warmth, which encourages me to face difficulties bravely.（定语从句） ②I offer to do some housework whenever I have time because it not only helps me learn some basic life skills but also gives my parents some time to have a rest.（原因状语从句） 10．（2024·安徽亳州·二模）假定你是李辉。初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。你的英国朋友John想了解你的假期计划。请根据下表中的提示，以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题，向他介绍你的假期计划。 My Summer Vacation Plan Health Hobbies Housework 注意：1. 短文内容必须包含上表所提供的要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名； 3. 词数：80—100左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数） My Summer Vacation Plan Dear John, Long time no see. The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文： My Summer Vacation PlanDear John, Long time no see. The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it. First, I am going to take exercise regularly so that I can keep healthy. And I will eat more fruit and vegetables every day because they are good for my health. Second, I plan to develop some hobbies, such as reading books, playing basketball and so on. Third, I am going to help my parents do some housework. I think they are hard in daily life and I should learn to help them in my spare time. How about your plans about it? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：要求根据提示信息进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据开头提示，引出自己的暑假计划； 第二步，从健康、爱好和家务等方面具体介绍自己的计划； 第三步，结尾反问对方的计划，期待对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ①take exercise运动 ②keep healthy保持健康 ③plan to do计划做 [高分句型] ①First, I am going to take exercises regularly so that I can keep healthy.（so that引导的目的状语从句） ②And I will eat more fruit and vegetables every day because they are good for my health.（because引导的原因状语从句） 11．（2024·安徽合肥·一模）假定你是李辉，你的新加坡笔友Peter近期要来你校参加“中国传统文化”研学活动，请你写一封邮件介绍你们学校的计划与安排。 内容包括： 1. 聆听诗词朗诵； 2. 学习中国剪纸； 3. 品尝传统美食； 4. …… 注意： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3. 词数80~100(邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇： paper-cutting (n. 剪纸) Dear Peter, I am happy to learn that you will come to my school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I am happy to learn that you will come to my school. Here are the plans, which may help you know more about the activity. Chinese poems are of great importance in our traditional culture. You are going to attend a party, where some students will read beautiful Chinese poems. Besides, you will be invited to learn Chinese paper-cutting. In this way, people can express their best wishes. In addition, we will prepare different kinds of delicious Chinese food. It will be an unforgettable experience for you. Certainly, it’s my pleasure to show you around our school. You will get the best possible experience here. I’m looking forward to your arrival. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容包括”中的计划安排，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补充开头，告诉对方写邮件的目的； 第二步，具体介绍学校的计划安排； 第三步，收尾，表达自己的祝福和期待。 [亮点词汇] ①in addition此外 ②be of great importance非常重要 [高分句型] ①Here are the plans, which may help you know more about the activity.（which引导的非限定性定语从句） ②You are going to attend a party, where some students will read beautiful Chinese poems.（where引导的非限定性定语从句） 12．（2024·安徽宿州·一模）假如你是李华，你的好朋友Linda想知道你通常如何在医院做志愿工作，请你根据要点提示，给她写封邮件。要点如下： 1. 学习相关知识； 2. 耐心、仔细； 3. 学会保护自己。 写作要求： 1. 短文内容必须包括以上所有要求的内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3. 词数：80~100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：mask n. 口罩 Dear Linda, I’m glad to tell you about my volunteer in the hospital.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. With my best wishes for you! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Linda, I’m glad to tell you about my volunteer in the hospital. Usually , at first I learn much about how to look after patients in some classes or online. It can help me to know how to be a volunteer in the hospital. Or I may make mistakes while taking care of patients. Next, it’s quite important for me to learn to be patient and careful. Being patient and careful can help patients feel comfortable. If I’m not patient enough, I may make patients angry or mad. It’s similar that if I’m not careful enough, patients might fall badly ill. Last but not least, I must learn to protect myself, so I often wear a mask when I do volunteer jobs. Or I may fall ill because of patients. That’s all. With my best wishes for you! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己在医院的志愿者工作。 第二步，具体阐述自己在医院如何做志愿者工作的。 第三步，书写结语，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①look after照顾 ②fall ill生病 [高分句型] If I’m not patient enough, I may make patients angry or mad. (if引导的条件状语从句) 13．（2024·安徽池州·一模）成长不是一帆风顺的，在人生的道路上，任何人都会遇到困难和挫折，就看你能否战胜它，战胜了，你就是生活的强者。请以“The Difficulty I Overcame”为题，写一篇英语短文向我们介绍一下你曾经战胜过的困难吧！ 内容包括： 1.你曾经遇到的困难； 2.克服困难的过程； 3.你的收获。 注意： 1.词数 80~100(短文题目已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； The Difficulty I Overcame ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Difficulty I Overcame School life is colorful, but not always easy. I used to have some trouble making friends with others. I was so quiet and shy that I found communicating with others really difficult. As a result, I often felt lonely. But things have changed since my head teacher Ms. Zhang had a long talk with me. She encouraged me to be open and offer my hand to others. I tried and it really worked. Now I have made a few friends and become more confident. I don’t find it so hard to make friends now. I will not be a closed book any more. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你曾经遇到的困难； 第二步，具体描述克服困难的过程； 第三步，最后谈谈你的收获。 [亮点词汇] ① used to do过去常常做 ② communicate with sb和某人沟通 ③ encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①I was so quiet and shy that I found communicating with others really difficult.（结果状语从句） ②But things have changed since my head teacher Ms. Zhang had a long talk with me.（时间状语从句） 14．（2024·安徽阜阳·一模）一学期很快就要结束了，英语老师就同学们这一学期在学习和生活中出现的问题给出了一些解决的方法。下图就是这周你们学校对100名学生进行问卷调查的结果。请你结合调查结果并以“How do the students solve their problems?”为题写一篇英语短文，在下周的英语主题班会上展示你的佳作。 提示： 要求： 1. 短文必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 How do the students solve their problems? Our school asked 100 students about their ways of solving problems this week. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How do the students solve their problems? Our school asked 100 students about their ways of solving problems this week. Here are the results. 52% of students talk to their friends when they have problems. 22% of them ask their teachers or parents for help. And 17% solve problems by themselves. And 9% choose other ways to solve their problems. For me, asking the teachers or parents for help is the best way to solve problems. I was too shy to make friends when I was in Grade 7. So I was upset. I told my parents the problem. They advised me to join some clubs and taught me how to make friends during activities. From the experience, I know that sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. I believe that as long as we work hard, we will find a solution to the problem. I hope we can get better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容陈述问卷调查结果，并向大家介绍你解决问题的方法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，陈述问卷调查结果； 第三步，介绍自己解决问题的方法。 [亮点词汇] ①ask sb for help向某人求助 ②choose to do选择做某事 [高分句型] 52% of students talk to their friends when they have problems. (when引导的时间状语从句) 15．（2024·安徽淮北·二模）假设你是李华，学校希望每位即将毕业的学生给学弟学妹们留下一些建议。请你根据下图中的信息用英语给学弟学妹们写一封信。 1.信件内容须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3. 词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear younger schoolmates, How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. Here is my advice for you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear younger schoolmates, How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. Here is my advice for you. First, as students, it’s important for you to study hard at school. You must listen to the teacher carefully in class and do your homework carefully after school. Second, it’s also important to keep healthy. To keep healthy, you can exercise often and eat regularly. Third, you must follow rules both in and out of school. For example, following the rules at school can make you behave well. Following the traffic rules can make you safe. Last, you can develop a hobby. It can make your life interesting and full. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“给学弟学妹们的建议”来引出下文中对具体建议的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“努力学习、保持健康和遵守规则”三方面入手，给出具体的建议； ③第三步，书写结语。希望学弟学妹们的生活能有趣充实。 [亮点词汇] ①keep healthy 保持健康 ②both...and 两者都 [高分句型] ①First, as students, it’s important for you to study hard at school.（it作形式主语） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$