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2025年高考英语一轮复习书面表达基础复盘(知识点PPT+精讲精练)
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【试题探究】
假定你是李华, 打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询, 内容如下:
1. 请其推荐合适的旅游路线;
2. 请其告知相关的旅游费用。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
第一人称 (I), 第二人称(you)
时态
一般现在时
要点
1. 写信目的
2. 咨询的内容: 旅游路线, 旅游费用
Step 2: 字斟句酌 巧饰亮点
要点1: 我打算在美国住10天左右, 希望能看一看那些独特的自然风景, 品味一下当地的风俗。
一般表达: I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, and I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.
句式升级(定语从句)
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.
要点2: 除此之外, 我想了解路线的价格, 包括所有旅游费用。
一般表达: In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, and all the traveling expenses.
句式升级(分词短语作定语)
In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
Step 3: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m planning to travel to the USA in the coming July. Therefore, I’m writing to inquire about travel routes of your agency.
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs. So, could you please recommend some suitable travel routes? In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
A reply at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【句式储备】
1. 篇头——开篇表明写信目的
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I am writing to inquire about some information regarding/concerning travel.
我是李华, 一名在新西兰学习的中国学生。我写信是想询问一些关于旅行的信息。
2. 篇中——陈述要咨询的内容
①First of all, I’m tempted to know the departure time and traveling route.
首先, 我很想知道出发时间和旅行路线。
②Secondly, how much do I have to pay for the travel?
其次, 我需要支付多少旅费?
③Thirdly, is there anything I should pay special attention to?
第三, 有什么我应该特别注意的吗?
3. 结尾——表感谢, 盼回复
①I would be much appreciated if you could furnish me with the above information and you ca