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2025年高考英语一轮复习书面表达基础复盘(知识点PPT+精讲精练)
建议信
【试题探究】
(2023· 新高考Ⅰ卷)
假定你是李华, 外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组, 让大家课后练习口语, 你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
Step 1: 审题布局
类 型
建议信
人 称
第三人称
时 态
一般现在时
要 点
1. 随机分组的弊端1
2. 随机分组的弊端2
3. 我的口语分组建议1
4. 我的口语分组建议2
Step 2: 巧饰亮点
要点1: 首先, 随机配对的学生可能会导致小组内的语言能力不平衡。
Randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups.
这可能会阻碍学生的进步, 因为更先进的人可能会主导谈话, 给其他学生留下很少的进步空间。(增加细节)
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced ones may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.
要点2: 如果与一个他们相处不好或沟通有困难的人配对, 学生可能会感到不舒服或缺乏动力。
Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along well with or have difficulty communicating with.
要点3: 我的建议是根据学生的语言能力来分组, 或者让学生自己选择合作伙伴。
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
要点4: 大家一起练习和提高英语口语就会更舒服。
Everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Step 3: 衔接成篇
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I don’t think it’s a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced ones may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along well with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. Everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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