内容正文:
书面表达20篇(云南名校模拟)
1.(2024·云南昆明·一模)在你的初中生活中,一件点滴小事,一个平凡之人,一个简单的习惯……都会帮助你成为更优秀的自己。请以“________ Helps me Grow up Better”为题,用英语写一篇短文,讲述帮助你更好成长的一件事、一个人或者一种习惯……并谈谈你的感受或收获。
要求:
1.请先将题目补全后,再作答;
2.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80个;
3.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
4.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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【答案】例文
Reading Helps me Grow up Better
Reading is playing an important part in our daily life. It can not only open up our eyes to the world but also make our life colorful. And reading really makes me a better person.
When I was a little girl, my mother always read comic stories to me, which made me interested in reading. When I was older, I began to read whatever I found interesting, including Robinson Crusoe, The Romance of the Three Kingdoms. I was moved by the main characters. While reading, I felt peaceful. I get all kinds of knowledge from reading. Now I am a middle school student, I become rich in knowledge and I am better at all subjects.
As Goethe said, “One book, one world.” Now reading helps me grow up better. It makes my life colorful. It also makes me more confident and braver.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补全题目,开头引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍自己喜欢上看书的经历;
第三步,发表自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①begin to do sth开始做某事
②all kinds of各种各样的
③become rich in在某方面变得富有
[高分句型]
①When I was a little girl, my mother always read comic stories to me, which made me interested in reading.(when引导时间状语从句,which引导的定语从句)
2.(2024·云南·一模)Less Stress, Better Life
紧张的初三生活,让很多同学倍感压力和焦虑,面对这些压力和焦虑的情绪你是如何让自己放松心情并减轻自己的压力的?是听一首好听的音乐,和朋友一起出游还是向你的父母或老师倾诉?请以Less Stress, Better Life为题写一篇短文,分享一下你面对压力调整心情的故事,或者介绍一下应对压力和焦虑的一些行之有效的方法。
要求:1.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少