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读后续写专项训练3 学生佳句欣赏
一、表达情绪
1. While I was thinking, the girl exploded with expectation with her eyes glittering.
亮点:with复合结构;
高级词汇:explode with +情绪 某种情绪突然爆发
2. The Mexican family was so kind that tears blurred(v. 使模糊) my vision.
3. Seeing the paper bag, I was totally overwhelmed by shame.
亮点:现在分词作状语;
高级词汇 be overwhelmed by 充溢着(某种情绪)
4. Looking at the words on the note, I was overwhelmingly moved by their action. I stood there, waving goodbye to them, wearing an appreciative expression.
5. A rush of warmth swept over me and teas rolled down my cheeks.
6. A wave of warmth surged into my heart. What the girl had done changed my view to strangers.
二、描写动作
7. Time ticking by, I was about to leave when the girl stormed out of their car.
亮点:be about to 正要,将要(表将来);
storm out of 怒气冲冲地出去
三、主题升华
8. It dawned on me that it was kindness that made the whole world tightly bonded.
亮点:It dawned on sb. that + Cl. 某人突然明白,恍然大悟
9. Sometimes, you do something good but don’t expect anything in return. Therefore, when someone returns the favor, it becomes an extra bonus.
10. Meanwhile, we should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others like this family.
亮点:what引导的宾语从句;
高级词汇 seize every opportunity 抓住机遇
11. Not only did they help me to fix my truck, but they gave me what I needed.
亮点:Not only放句首的倒装: “Not only +be/情态v./助动词 + S+V, but also....”
12. It totally slipped my mind that I should have asked them how to get in touch with them.
亮点:slip one’s mind 某人忘记了
13. An idea flashed into my mind: The kindness in the world is like the light of fireflies; the darker it is, the brighter the light will be.
14. The experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my memory, warming the rest of my life.
15. It was an unforgettable memory, which was carved in my mind permanently.
16. It was no exaggeration (n. 夸张,夸大) that the experience would be carved in my mind and it would warm the rest of my life.
4、 牛刀小试
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