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专题10 中考高分写作
知识点:中考高分作文的特征
1. 清晰的分段,头尾两段比较简洁明了,中间内容可以详细描述。明确时态和文章的体裁,有时候会穿插不同的时态在文章中,特别是是描述个人的一段经历时要用到一般过去时,作文体裁考察书信体、邮件、记叙某件事情、描写某个人居多。
例如这样一篇材料是目前中考比较容易考察的类型:
生活是一位睿智的长者,生活是一位博学的老师。生活需要我们用心面对,无论是美好还是意外,我们都要记得微笑和感恩。请以“Life is full of”为题写一篇短文,分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历。
内容包括:1. 请先将标题填写完整;2. 分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历;3. 谈谈你的感悟。
Life is full of challenges
Life will be wonderful with all kinds of challenges. It is the challenges that make me stronger.
(开头段比较简洁,点明主题“生活充满挑战,但挑战让我更坚强。”)
I moved to the city when I entered the middle school. But my problem was that no one cooked for me because my parents came home late, so I made up my mind to learn how to cook. I must challenge myself. Then one day I watched my parents cooking dinner carefully. They taught me how to cook. A few days later, I learned to cook for myself. Now I am happy I can cook delicious food. My parents are satisfied with me. I am also proud of myself.
(中间段主要分享自己的一段特殊经历,这里一定要围绕主题去展开故事的讲解,并且要提到现在自己的改变有哪些。)
I learned from it that we may meet some difficulties in our life, but if we have confidence and are good at learning, everything will be better. I am so eager to meet the coming difficulties, I won’t give up no matter how hard they will be.
(结尾段谈谈个人的感悟,这个时候需要重新说明一下主题,并且提到遇到挑战个人会怎么应对。)
2. 适当运用英语中的定语从句、状语从句和宾语从句这大句式以及what引导的主语从句和it作为形式主语和形式宾语的句式。同时,感叹句和强调句也可以使用。
例如:
Her smile is so bright that she won the heart of mine when I first met her.(so ….that引导结果状语从句;when引导时间状语从句)
Besides, it is important for us to keep safety rules in mind, especially when we row a boat or play in the amusement park.(it作形式主语,“It is +adj. for sb. to do sth.”句型)
It’s my great honor to inform you that we will go to the Slender West Lake in Yangzhou for a study tour next Wednesday.(it作形式主语,It is +名词+to do sth)
You may find it difficult to make friends with people who always have doubts about you. (it作形式宾语,sb find it +adj+to do sth)
Mary is always ready to help others who get into trouble.(who引导定语从句)
Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can co