内容正文:
2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(上海专用)
第二期
专题06 书面表达12篇(名校模拟)
1.(23-24九年级·上海嘉定·一模)Write at least 60 words on the topic “The person I respect most”.
(请以“我最尊敬的人”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
提示:在我们的学习和日常生活中接触到过很多人,在这些人之中也许有人对你曾经有过帮助、有过影响。请你说说谁是值得你最尊敬的人,并谈谈他/她是如何影响你的。
(注意: 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
The following is for reference only(以下表达仅供参考)
in trouble
learn from
encourage…to do…
make progress
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【答案】例文
The person I respect most
The one I respect most is my father. First, he is very strong, and he makes me feel very safe. Secondly, he is good at many things such as basketball and ping-pong. I think he plays ping-pong as well as Ma Long. Thirdly, he is very popular in our big family. Everyone in my family loves my father very much. The most important of all, he is a great father. He loves me and my mother a lot. He also helps me a lot. I do think he is as great as a superman. I respect him!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍自己最尊敬的人是如何影响自己的;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②play ping-pong打乒乓球
③popular受欢迎的
④the most important of all最重要的是
[高分句型]
I do think he is as great as a superman.(do表示强调)
2.(23-24九年级·上海浦东新·一模)Write at least 60 words on the topic “An interesting ______” (以“一位有趣的人或一件有趣的事或一次有趣的旅行或一本有趣的书或一部有趣的电影”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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