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期中必考单元话题满分范文16篇
1.(22-23八年级下·上海宝山·期中)Write at least 60 words on the topic “Make our city better”(以“使我们的城市更美好”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
作为上海的公民,建设美丽的绿色城市是我们每个人的责任。生活中,有些人积极做到低碳出行,有些人严格进行垃圾分类,有的人注意节约能源,还有的参与绿化城市……请你谈谈你打算怎样做,并阐明理由。
(注意:作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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【答案】例文
Make our city better
We should make our city a better place to live in. In our daily life, we can do lots of things. For example, when we go shopping, we can take cloth bags instead of using plastic bags. Recycling glasses, cans and waste paper is also a good idea to protect the environment. Second, we must obey the traffic rules. Breaking rules is very dangerous and it may cause big accidents. If we obey the traffic rules, we’ll have a better and safer life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作题目已给出,考生注意不要偏题,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,使城市更好;
第二步,细节介绍做法。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of而不是
②Recycling回收利用
[高分句型]
①If we obey the traffic rules, we’ll have a better and safer life.(条件状语从句)
②For example, when we go shopping, we can take cloth bags instead of using plastic bags.(when引导的时间状语从句)
2.(22-23八年级下·上海金山·期中)Writing a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My most exciting day”. (以“最令我激动的一天”为题,写一篇至少60个词的短文,要求意思明确,内容连贯,标点符号不占格) (注意:文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分)
Suggested questions (以下问题仅供参考)
(1) When was your most exciting day?
(2) What did you do on that day?
(3) Why was it the most exciting day ?
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