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Unit 7
Writing Workshop
A Formal Email
Period 2
Setting Rubrics
Revising & Editing
Sender
Publishing
Homework
Format
Recipient
Subject
Greeting
Opening para.
The body
Main para.
Closing para.
Signature
Setting Rubrics
Revising & Editing
Publishing
Homework
Summary
Effective Communication
Structure
Content
Language
Writing Tone
Formal
• I am writing to
ask for ...
• I would like to
ask about...
• Could you tell
me...
• I wonder if...
• Would it be
possible...
Dear Sir/ Madam
Greeting
• Properly greet
• Purpose
• A brief self-introduction
the recipient.
Opening para.
• No contractions.
• Polite requests.
• A sports documentary
• Application
• Prizes
• Show your
The body
Main para.
appreciation.
• Use proper sign-
• I appreciate...
and look
offs
• Appreciation
• Expectation
Closing para.
Signature
forward to...
Yours faithfully,
Liu Ze
Setting Rubrics
Revising & Editing
Publishing
Homework
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Orchestra
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Painting
Drama
Chorus
Setting Rubrics
Revising & Editing
Publishing
Homework
• Add a brief self-introduction
• Make the message clearer
• Correct the grammar mistakes
Setting Rubrics
Revising & Editing
Publishing
Homework
• Complete the format
• Leave out the unnecessary
information
• Add a topic sentence
• Adjust the order
Setting Rubrics
Revising & Editing
Publishing
Homework
• coherence -- keep to the point
-- more explanation
Setting Rubrics
Revising & Editing
Publishing
Homework
Discussion: setting the
rubrics!
Structure
Content
Language
Writing Tone
Formal
• I am writing to
ask for ...
• I would like to
ask about...
• Could you tell
me...
• I wonder if...
• Would it be
possible...
Dear Sir/ Madam
Greeting
• Properly greet
• Purpose
• A brief self-introduction
the recipient.
Opening p.
• No contractions.
• Polite requests.
• A sports documentary
• Application
• Show your
appreciation.
• Use proper sign
-offs.
The body
Main p.
• Prizes
• I appreciate...
and look
• A