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=|I 2022年高考 英语满分作文全解全析 GBOAO YIYU HAN LOEN QUAXHE DUAN 高考英语满分作文 全解全析 2022 全国甲卷 (适用地区:云南、广西。贵州。四川,西藏) 真题展示 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇 短文投稿,内容包括: 1.海洋的重要性 2.保护海洋的倡议。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 OurOceans. Our Responsibility June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2o09 as World Oceans Day. 真题解析 本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求就世界海洋日为主题进行英语征文比 赛投稿,主要内容为阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。本篇书面表达可开 门见山地阐明主题后,依据提示展开写作,亦可根据内容提示要点分步骤展 120 You never know your luck 2022·全国甲卷K 开。比如,第一部分可写海洋的重要性,比如海洋是人类的生命摇篮,有丰 富的水资源、生物资源、矿产资源等,对人类的生存和发展具有重要意义。 第二部分发出保护海洋的倡议,如我们应该保护海洋环境,不向海洋丢弃垃 圾、排放污水:不损害海洋生态资源,不过度捕捞海洋生物,不购买法律禁 止的海洋生物、制品等。最后,也可以另起一段,以一句话重申保护海洋的 倡议,这样可以让文章铿将有力,起到很好的倡议效果 写作小贴士 ※征文比赛,语言风格应偏正式 ※文章的主体时态是现在时,人称用第一人称。 ※文章应覆盖所有的提示要点,并适当拓展 ※恰当使用高级词汇和句型,给文章润色 Our Oceans, Our Responsibility 满分简评 June 8thwas officially r named by the 本文表达流畅, UN in 2oo9 as World Oceans Day. This 语言丰富,能正确地 使用复杂的语法结构 will help to increase people's awareness of the protection of the ocean environment. Nowadays, the problem of ocean pollution has attracted more and more attention. The oceans play an 1 important role 命运好坏不由己。 121 BOAO YNCU MATN ZEONEN QUAXE DUANX 高考英语满分作文 全解全析 ecosystems. The oceans are not only abundant in water resources, but also rich in fish resources^{①}. As ocean pollution ①"not only..but also...”表达高级。 becomes more and more serious. we make an appeal that people take measures to cope with this situation②. Firstly, we can ②运用了同位语从 句,丰富文章表达。 reduce the use of products such as plastic bottles and bags to avoid plastic waste polluting the oceans. Secondly, when we go to the beach, we must remember to take away the garbage with us. Last but not least we can call on more people to understand the importance # protecting the oceans. The more people are involved. the better the ocean environment is③. ③“the more.the better...(越 过.....越 All in all, it is a critical time to protect our 好)”运用恰当。 oceans. lt is everyone's responsibility to protect the oceans. 亮点词汇 more andmore越来越 the importance of ......的重要性 play an important ro