内容正文:
Section Ⅴ WRITING WORKSHOP,VIEWING WORKSHOP,
READING CLUB 1 & READING CLUB 2
Part Ⅰ WRITING WORKSHOP
UNIT1
学范文
教材原文
Dear Mr Jenson,
I am writing on behalf of① the school's Student Union. As you may know,[1] we are running a school-wide public speaking competition, and the final will take place② at the lecture hall on 10 May(9 am-12 pm).I am writing to ask whether you would be willing to③ help us judge the final competition.[2]
Since March, we have already had two rounds of the competition, with more than 100 students. Now we have 12 students left[3] for the final.The topic of the final speech is“Education for Innovation”.Students have to give a five-minute speech on the topic in English.
During the final round, as a judge, you would be responsible for listening to all the speeches, noting down any positive or negative aspects for each one.[4] Competitors should be judged on their pronunciation, clarity and fluency, and also progression of ideas and audience engagement.[5] Then you will discuss your notes with three other judges, and come to a decision④ about who comes first, second and third.
Would you have time to attend a short meeting at the Student Union Room at 4 pm on 8 May so that we can introduce you to the other judges and discuss the details?[6] We would not take up too much of your time.
I sincerely hope you can come. If you have any questions, please do let me know.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Zheng
President, Student Union
学结构
第一部分:引出写信目的;
第二部分:具体交代事件、要求、活动时间及地点;
第三部分:回扣主题,再次发出邀请。
一、句式美
[1]句使用as引导非限制性定语从句。
[2]whether引导宾语从句;句中使用whether,语气更加委婉。
[3]本句中使用“have+宾语+宾语补足语”的结构。
[4]动词-ing形式短语作状语。
[5]本句使用被动语态,使主语更加突出。
[6]本句使用情态动词would,语气更加委婉。另外使用so that引导目的状语从句。
学语言
二、词汇美
①on behalf of因为前面用的现在进行时,此处比用represent要好。
②take place 发生,后不能加宾语。
③be willing to do乐意做某事,此处语气比较委婉。
④come to a decision比decide要高级
题目要求
假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参加中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
仿写作
Dear Henry,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
解题步骤
1.一仿结构布局合理
第一段:________________________
第二段:________________________
第三段:________________________
写信的目的;
交代时间、地点及事件;
再次邀请并感谢。
2.二仿语言规范美观
(1)我知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣。
I know that __________________________________________________.
(2)我写信是想告诉你我们学校要举办中国剪纸展。
_____________________there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school.
(3)展览将在下周日下午2点到5点在学校大厅举行。
The exhibition ___________________________________________________
_________________.
(4)这次展览的主题是“中国之美”。
__________________________is“Beauty of China”.
you are interested in traditional Chinese culture
I'm writing to tell you
will take place in the school hall from 2: 00 pm to 5: 00
pmnext Sunday
The theme of the exhibition
(5)我们的作品不仅会被展出,我们还有一套由这一领域的著名艺术家创作的珍贵的剪纸。
Our works ______________________,but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist in this field.
(6)将会有很多有用和有趣的活动,从中你可以对中国文化有一个更清晰的认识。
____________________________________________,from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.
(7)如果你能接受我的邀请,我将不胜感激。
_____________________ you could accept my invitation.
will not only be displayed
There will be a lot of useful and interesting activities
I would appreciate it if
3.三仿句间过渡自然
(1)用含有动词-ing形式短语作状语的句子升级句(1)和句(2)。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(2)用含有“介词+关系代词”的定语从句的句子升级句(3)和句(4)。
________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
(3)用倒装句升级句(5)。
________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school.
The exhibition,the theme of which is“Beauty of China”, will take place in the school hall from 2: 00 pm to 5: 00 pm next Sunday.
Not only will our works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist in this field.
4.誊写
________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
Dear Henry,
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class.Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school.
________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
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沙场点兵
假定你是新华学校学生会主席李华,请你代表校学生会给著名教育家王老师写一封信,邀请他为同学们作报告,内容包括以下几个方面:
1.主题——选择积极的人生态度;
2.学生面临的问题;
3.再次邀请并感谢。
注意:1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Wang,
I am the chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua School. _____________
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I'm writing the letter on behalf of the Student Union with the intention of inviting you to give us a report whose topic is choosing a positive attitude towards life.
________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
Some students who are sensitive, reserved or unmotivated have trouble associating with their mates. By contrast, some are distracted or chatter away when having classes. Others are upset, depressed or desperate because of intense and demanding courses. In addition, a few students complain occasionally, which is hard to handle.
I'll be sincerely grateful if you can give us some practical and effective advice on these emotional problems.
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