Module3 Unit6单元写作课件-2023-2024学年沪教牛津版英语九年级上册

Translate the sentences 我的老师问我觉得这本关于幸福的书怎么样。 从这本书里，我学会了不要取笑别人。 我告诉老师我真的很高兴有这个机会阅读这本书。 Personal task: 2mins Find your shining point and raise your doubt. Group sharing: 4mins Share you problems in writing and your shining point! Tip: Take down the wonderful phrases and sentences from the sharing of your group members. Mistakes I’m writing to some suggestions to how to keep healthy. → ___________________________________ 2. banlaced(拼写) → ___________________________________ 3. many food(语法) → ___________________________________ 4. Listen music is a good way to relax.(语法) → ___________________________________ 5. Happy is very important for us. ___________________________________ I’m writing to give you some suggestions on how to keep healthy. balanced a lot of food Listening to music is a good way to relax. Being happy is very important for us. 6. It is very important to full of sleep time/keep enough sleep. →___________________________________ 7. juck food→_______ 8. These are all my advice. →________________________ 9. It not only make us stronger but also make us full of energy. →____________________________ Mistakes junk food It not only makes us stronger but also makes us be full of energy. This is all my advice. It is very important to have enough time to sleep. Good points 拓展要点1：Sleep early and raise early which can make you have enough sleep so that you can pay attention to studying.(文昊) 拓展要点2: Having a balanced diet is also an important way to keep you healthy. You should eat different kinds of healthy food, such as fruits and vegetables.(智扬） 拓展要点3：1. Doing some sports is good for our health. It can make our body strong and help fight against diseases.(卓然） 2. It is necessary for you to do more exercise and play sports. In this way, you can not only exercise your body but also add energy to study during this process.(家昊，有添加改动） 3. I find it necessary to do some sports because sports can make our body strong.(妤婷) 拓展要点4： 1. You need to learn how to relax yourse