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读后续写微技能突破
Step 1:利用合适的动词
① 连线
· snap
· mumble
· gulp
· murmur
· sigh
· smirk
· moan
· scream
· whisper
· to say angrily
· to breathe quickly and deeply
· to smile in an unpleasant way
· to make a long deep sound because of pain
· to let out a long deep breath
· to speak very quietly in the ear
· to say sth. in a way that is not clear
· to give a loud, high cry
· to say sth in a soft quiet voice to oneself
② 用合适的动词替换“said”
1. “Your companions are criminals!” said one priest, “Thieves!”
2. “Stop yelling!” said Wukong, “or I’ll hit you!”
3. “Hu-sh, Let’s escape from the room!” said Wukong.
4. “Oh, No! We will die here!” said Bajie.
5. “Wukong! How can you be so cruel!” said Tang Monk.
6. The pig said, “Why is it always me! I just sat down!”
7. “I’m too tired to look for food,” Bajie said, “I’ll take a nap first.
8. “How dare you sleep while we wait for you?” said Wujing, “Now let’s go back to Master.”
Step 2:动作链
微场景写作
1. When you meet a difficult math problem and it takes you a long time to deal with it, what will you do?
2. When you successfully climbed up to a mountain, what will you say or what will you do?
Choose one plot to make up your own story.
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Step 2;给动作“涂脂抹粉”
给动作“涂脂抹粉”可以:
① 给动作增加神态
② 给动作增加心理
③ 给动作增加动作
④ 给动作增加环境
改写以下短文
“Look,”I said, “You never missed a single practice. You always finished every run. Do you want your effort