专题14 如何续写八类话题 - 2024年新高考英语读后续写思维培优

专题14 如何续写八类话题 在高中阶段，一周最多有时间练一篇续写。我们不仅要写一篇会一篇，更要写一篇会一类，因为同一主题下的续写情节是可以复用的。通过把知识系统化，同一主题下很多情节是相似的，题目的情节是相似的，这又会导致后面在设计续写时的续写情节相似，而续写情节相似其实又指的是场景相似+感情相似。 这样一环套一环，有意识的归纳（1）每篇续写前文的情节；（2）续写范文中的场景；（3）续写范文中的感情。这样就可以实现模块化写作了。 一、助人篇 故事构造三部曲 【第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）】 【消极情绪】 感到：1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一阵... 2. joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/ disappointment/guilt/shame...) 3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb 因...颤抖：tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...) 【进一步细节描写】 流泪：1. Tears blurred one's eyes. 2. One's eyes got misty. 3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊 4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了 5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下 【第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）】 【突然有了一个想法】 某人想到/明白...：1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句 2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind 3. One's mind began to race 【动作链】 1. 主语+动作A+动作B and 动作C （三个并列谓语，动作依次发生） 2. 句子+ing/ed, 或者ing/ed+句子（使用条件：同一逻辑主语，主动或被动，表示动作伴随，原因或结果） 【第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）】 【突然有了一个想法】 过了一段时间：1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ... 2. for an instant/moment一瞬间 有了结果：1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句 2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，... 3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙 【感谢】 1. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手). 2. Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her. 【感动】 1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. 2. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work. 3. In a flash, with tears wel