专题10 如何拓展续写情节- 2024年新高考英语读后续写思维培优

专题10 如何拓展续写情节 情节过于简单，每一段似乎一句话就可以说完，如何写得有血有肉？ 一个中心：Main Plot 一个中心：每一段，根据提示句确定主要情节，即一个场景，一句话说清楚。遇到情节构造非常明显的，而且一句话能说清楚的，就不要绞尽脑汁去增加戏份，就用这个简单的场景来拓展。 两个基本点：Explain；Enrich（Action, Response, Emotion） 主要情景有了，那么下面细节描写都必须围绕main plot，且指向主题思想。两个点：1.Explain：对提示句里的关键词进行解释：或详述内容，或说明其接下来发生什么。2.Enrich：对解释的内容从动作、角色反应、情绪三个方面进行丰富。 一、人与自我 1.个人、家庭、社区及学校生活；2.健康的生活方式、积极的生活态度；3.认识自我，丰言自我，完善自我；4.乐于学习，善于学习，终身学习；5.语言学习的规律、方法等；6.优秀品行，正确的人生态度，公民义务与社会责任；7.生命的意义与价值；8.未来职业发展趋势。个人职业倾向、未来规划等；9.创断与创业意识。 【第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）】 【孤独】 I never made friends easily, and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. 我从不轻易交朋友，有一段时间，我只是和一些男孩子说说话而已。 【伤心】 1. I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing into my heart ，which started to bleed immediately. 我口袋里什么也没找到，这事实就像一支长矛刺进了我的心脏，我的心脏立刻开始流血。 2.Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying.(我焦急地环顾四周，差点哭出来) 【惭愧】 1. She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame .(她被内疚和羞愧淹没) 2. A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.一阵内疚席卷了我，我不得不承认我去看电影了，这才是我迟到的真正原因。 【嘲笑】 They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”他们大声笑着，卡劳利尖叫着说:“多好的一块坏表啊!” 【绝望】 “My mother wouldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me.“我妈妈不让我带，”我撒了个谎，绝望在我心里沸腾。 【紧张】 1. Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed .与此同时，凯莉不安地坐在座位上，双手交叉着。 2. She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum. 她把实情告诉了老师，心怦怦直跳。 3. Having paced up and down restlessly in front of the the teacher's office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.（她在老师的办公室前不安地踱来踱去，终于鼓起勇气，慢吞吞地走了进去。 【害怕】 I unknowingly avoided interacting (interact) with anyone because I was afraid they’d laugh in my face .(我在不知不觉中避免与任何人互动，因为我害怕他们会当面嘲笑我) 【犯错】 1. Considering there was no way to persuade my mother to let me take the watch, I decided to wait for her to step outside and sl