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写作主题三 申请自荐
试一试——查找失分短板
(2023·天津高考改编)你作为交换生去英国学校,学校要办一个名为Chinese workshop的促进中英文化交流的活动。你需要写一封申请信,内容要点如下:
1.推荐活动为中国美食,手工艺品和书法,并且活动有一项是教别人做中国传统的东西。
2.请描述这项活动的意义,并申请参加此次活动。
3.阐述参加内容及原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
To Whom It May Concern,
___________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
醒一醒——常见失分探因
1.首段信息不充实
本作文信息量大,背景信息较多,考生在首段写作中通常会忽略一些信息,导致隐性要点缺失。如:写信的背景和目的、个人身份和发出申请的动机。
2.尾段与主体段不衔接
部分考生在主体段叙述完所参加的活动内容和想法后,往往会草草收尾,忽略在尾段中应呼应本文主题,再次强调活动的意义。
记一记——常用写作范式
Dear ________,
I'm ________ from ________________ (介绍自己). I'm writing to apply ________ (职务) ________________ (说明职务信息及来源).
I find this position quite appealing to me. I can be equal to it by ______________________ (具体的参与活动). Of course, I possess qualifications accordingly. I think ________________ (优势一). Additionally, I ________________ (优势二).And I think it ________________ (应聘目的).
I do hope my ________________ (资质与能力) will win me a favorable consideration from your side. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
背一背——高分靓点表达
[开头常用语]
①I learned from sb./the newspaper/the website that your company wants to hire ...
②I am writing to inquire an opportunity for ...
③I am writing to apply for the summer camp in your school.
④I am interested in ...and wish to enter this significant program.
⑤Hearing that ..., I'm gladly writing to apply for the job.
⑥I'm ..., a student from ...I'm writing to recommend myself as a(n) ...
[主体常用语]
①I'm good at ...and especially ...is fairly good.
②I think I am qualified for/equal to ...
③I can speak ...fluently as well as ...
④I have a good knowledge of ...and I can ...
⑤I love ...and ...has been an important part of my life.
⑥I am ..., so I can get along well with others easily.
⑦I once learned a lot a