专题五 第9讲 “现象与观点”主题写作（Word教参）-【创新方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题辅导与测试（老教材）

第9讲　“现象与观点”主题写作 试一试——查找失分短板 [题目] (2022·全国甲卷)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1．海洋的重要性； 2．保护海洋的倡议。 [自主写作] Our Oceans, Our Responsibility June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.　 　 　 　 　 醒一醒——常见失分探因 1．写作内容与所给首句不衔接 部分考生容易起笔就写“海洋的重要性”，忽略了首句后面要架构一个承上启下的句式，把海洋日和海洋的重要性衔接起来。 2．对海洋重要性的叙述观点化 考生在写作时，常常会忽略通过叙述海洋的客观情况来说明海洋的重要性，而是习惯通过发表自己的观点来列举海洋的重要性，这样文字的说服力就弱化了许多，因此考生要分清事实与观点类语言各自的作用。请区分以下叙述属于事实(F)还是观点(O)： ①The oceans can regulate the climate and make it livable for humans.(F) ②The ocean is to our life like the heart is to us.(O) 3．结尾部分语言缺乏号召力 有些考生在结尾发出倡议时，经常采用空喊口号的方式，缺乏号召力，如：Let's protect oceans now！为避免因此失分，考生可以在简单发出呼吁之后，进而强调行动的意义。请补全以下尾段： It's high time we took action. Only_by_working_together,_can we protect and restore our precious oceans. 记一记——常用写作范式 Dear ________， In recent years, we have to face the problem ________ (社会现象)．As we all know, ________ (现象的危害性). In order to _________， it is high time that ________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 (倡议及倡议的目的)． Firstly, ________________ (倡议措施一). Secondly, ________________ (倡议措施二). What's more, we should ________ (倡议措施三). Last but not least, it is a good idea ____________ (其他注意事项或倡议措施)． ______________ (简要总结倡议措施的好处), so let's ________________ (倡议者的决心和希望). Students' Union 背一背——高分靓点表达 　[开头常用语] ①...was officially named by ...as ... ②It aims to raise people's awareness of ... ③A number of factors account for the phenomenon. ④With the learning task increasing in high school, more and more high school students are beginning to ... ⑤Recently we did a survey about whether ... should ... or not. ⑥Hearing that you are ..., I am more than delighted to share my views. ⑦These days, ... is not uncommon, causing ... ⑧The theme