专题五 第2讲 “提出建议”主题写作-【创新方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题辅导与测试（老教材）

|专题五书面表达 第2讲 “提出建议”主题写作 试一试 查找失分短板 2.分析问题与提出建议时没有说服力 [题目] 部分考生在分析随机分组带来的问题时，容易 (2023·新富雪I卷)假定你是李华，外教 站在宏观的角度进行宽泛的分析，所以会感到无话 Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课 可说，写出的内容大多为随意性较强的空洞语言。 后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你 写本篇作文时，应多联系自身实际，从微角度 给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 找切入口，如①与不熟悉的同学搭档练习口语会 1.说明问题： 不好意思开口：②英语水平差距大的同学分在一 2.提出建议。 组会造成沟通不协调…找准这些写作微点才能 做到下笔成章、有理有据。 [自主写作] Dear Ryan, 记一记一 常用写作范式 I'm Li Hua from Class 3. Dear I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on (引出建议的主题)，Here are a few suggestions. First of all,it is important to (建议一)，In that way, (采取建议一的好处)，You can also (建议二，根据需要选用不同的句式提出建议).This would allow you to have the opportunity to (建议二所带来的好的结果).In addition, (其他的补充或建议).I'm sure (预测可能的好的结果，给对方以信心和决心). I hope you (表达愿望).I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely. Yours sincerely. Li Hua Li Hua 背一背 —高分靓点表达 醒一醒—常见失分探因 [开头常用语] 1.向老师提建议的方式不恰当 DI'm glad to receive your letter asking for my 有些考生过分关注文章首段的简洁明了，开 advice on .. 门见山，忽略了向老师提出建议时应采用委婉表 2I'm very glad to receive your letter and it's a 达。请从以下两种开头方式中选择较恰当的一个。 pleasure to tell you something about... DI think it's not a good idea to randomly pair up You asked me for my advice on...and I will try students for the spoken English training after class. to make some suggestions. The reasons are as follows. ()Thanks for trusting me.It's my pleasure to give 2We're overwhelmed with excitement at having an you some suggestions/advice. oral English class.But learning that we'll be [主体常用语] randomly paired to do the oral practice,I feel an DIt is important to do .. urge to express my different voice,hoping that It should be a good idea to do... would help. () If I were you.I would do... 铺89 高考专题辅导与测试·英语 Why not...?/Why don't you...? 2.学语法结构 5Only in this way can you... 范文运用了灵活多样的语法结构，如：现在分 (I think it would be more helpful if you could 、 词短语作状语learning that.·/hoping that..: do... if虚拟条件状语从句If the two students paired First,you should do... 8I would like to suggest you (should)do... together...If we kept the fixed grouping mode... [结尾常用语]