专题08 书面表达15篇(第二期)-备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(广东专用)

备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(广东专用) 第二期 专题08 书面表达15篇 一、建议信 1．（2023上·广东梅州·高三大埔县虎山中学校考开学考试）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Alan要私下存钱购买智能手机，用于打游戏。请你给他写封信，指出他的错误并提出建议。 注意：  1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Alan, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Alan, I heard that you want to save money secretly to buy a phone for gaming. I think it’s important to get your priority right and make wise decisions. In my opinion, spending all your money on gaming may not be beneficial in the long run. Instead, I suggest considering other options. You could save money for something that can contribute to your personal development, such as educational materials or a hobby that can provide valuable skills. Besides, it is beneficial to explore different forms of entertainment which don’t rely solely on technology. Engaging in outdoor activities or joining clubs can provide enjoyment and help you develop new skills, which is also a great way to expand your social circle. I sincerely hope that you take my advice into consideration and stick to studying hard. Yours Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Alan要私下存钱购买智能手机，用于打游戏。请你给他写封信，指出他的错误并提出建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 重要的：important→significant 有益处的：be beneficial →be of benefit 建议：suggest→advise 依靠：rely on→count on 2. 句式拓展 同义句 原句：I heard that you want to save money secretly to buy a phone for gaming. I think it’s important to get your priority right and make wise decisions. 拓展句：Hearing that you want to save money secretly to buy a phone for gaming，I think it’s important to get your priority right and make wise decisions. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides,