专题08 如何写出高分句式-2024年新高考英语读后续写思维培优

专题08 如何写出高分句式 “读后续写”第一要真正读懂原文，第二写出恰当又正确的句子，第三才是写作技巧。读懂原文之后写出恰当而正确的句子很重要，否则你的“读懂”只是在做无用功。只有写出符合故事情节恰当、正确的句子才说明你真正读懂了。作文的高分关键是“规范的书写+整洁的卷面+正确流畅的语言+丰富的句式”，其中读后续写还要注重情节的逻辑性、衔接性、合理性。写作中，有好句，才有亮点，有亮点，就容易拿高分。 一、情绪描写常用句式 1. 表示“感到……情绪与情感”场景 【句式1】a flush of＋表情绪的名词＝a wave/feeling/sense of...一阵…… 【句式2】表情绪的名词＋flooded over sb/swept over sb/seized sb ……涌上心头 【句式3】a burst/wave/surge/rush/ripple/sense/feeling of＋表情感状态的名词＋有灵动词＋sb.表示"某人感到……"或"一阵/一种……向某人袭来"。 【句式4】A wave of joy（happiness/sadness/sorrow/delight/panic/fear/horror/depression/ guilt/embarrassment/hate/regret/panic/jealousy/envy/pride/shame/anxiety/boredom/relief/satisfaction/humiliation/insecurity/irritation/isolation/loneliness/misery/outrage/rage/resentment/torture） washed over（积极 消极）/seized（积极 消极）/enveloped(消极）/struck(消极） him as/when he heard the news/at the sight of........./at the fact that..../at the thought that............ 当他听到消息，他非常开心。 1． A flush of pride swept over him as he watched his children.＝He felt a flush of pride as he watched his children. 当他看着自己孩子的时候， 一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头。 2． (2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. And much sooner than could be expected，Bernard returned with an empty basket. Never before had he earned so much money in his life. A wave of happiness flooded over him. 一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始了他的新生意。伯纳德带着一个空篮子回来，比预期的要快得多。他一生中从未挣过这么多钱。他感到高兴极了。　 3． (2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写) To my surprise, I learned that my essay had ranked first in the contest. A mix of excitement and doubt washed over me. 令我吃惊的是，我得知我的作品在比赛中排名第一。兴奋和怀疑涌上心头。 4． Suffering and despair defeated me, and I fell sobbing on the doorstep. (《简·爱》) 痛苦和绝望击垮了我，我倒在门阶上哭泣。 5． (2021·新高考 I 卷）Mother felt a wave of pride and warmth sweep over her. 妈妈感到一阵自豪和温暖。 6． (2020·浙江卷）The polar bear came near. Horror slowly crept on/flooded over/rushed over/swept over us. 北极熊走近了。恐惧慢慢向我们袭来。 2. 表示“(因为紧张、害怕)心跳”场景 【句式1】sb could feel one's heart pounding wildly in one's chest 感到心在胸中怦怦直跳 【句式2】one's heart thumped/raced/beat wildly/loudly/hard某人心怦怦直跳