专题06 如何描写十种情绪 - 2024年新高考英语读后续写专项提高培优

专题06 如何描写十种情绪 在高考英语读后续写中，情绪描写可以推动情节的发展，或者说情节发展到一定程度主人公会呈现出不同的情绪。情绪描写在展现人物性格，故事发展，价值引领等方面都有重要作用。 丰富的人物情感状态描写往往能够直抵主人公的心灵，揭示人物的内心世界，表现人物丰富而复杂的思想感情，反衬文章的主题，对情节的发展起到推动的作用。人物的情感有很多，如高兴、愤怒、悲伤、尴尬、焦虑、恐惧、激动、后悔等；人物状态也有很多，如生病、疲惫、口渴等。 情感的表达方式多样，可以通过面部表情、语言声调和身体姿态等方式向他人表达自己的情感特征和情绪变化。 如果你要写快乐，你就不能只写快乐。你要写阳光和清风，写天真烂漫的笑容，写草原里悠闲的牛羊，写青山与绿水，写夜晚淅淅沥沥的小雨，写屋里相拥看一场美好的电影，写一起散步嬉笑，写清澈的眼神，写一切你向往的画面。 一、尴尬羞愧 【单一陈述】 He is embarrassed. 【具体动作】 He was so embarrassed that he even didn't know where to rest his arms. 他很尴尬，以至于都不知道该把手放在哪里了。 【用结果状语从句，具象化尴尬体现出的动作】 He cupped his face with her hands and closed his eyes. 他用手捂着脸，闭上了眼睛。 He breathed and breathed until he felt calmer. 他深深呼吸着，直到自己平静下来。 He lowered his eyes and clenched his lips, trying to avoid our eyes. 他眼睛低垂，紧紧抿着嘴唇，尽力躲避我们的目光。 【把情感描写，通过肢体动作的刻画描写出来，让文章有了色彩和内容】 【添加副词】 Abruptly, He cupped his face with her hands and closed his eyes. He breathed and breathed until he felt calmer. 【“abruptly 突然地”，突显出尴尬感随即涌上心头，恰到好处的把后面所有的动作都进行了一定刻画的延展】 He lowered his eyes and clenched his lips tightly, trying to avoid our eyes. 【“tightly 紧紧地”，则专门刻画了嘴巴紧闭这个动作】 词汇+短语 【词汇】 shame 羞愧 guilt 内疚embarrassment尴尬 ashamed 感到羞愧的 embarrassed尴尬的 shamefaced 羞愧的 guilty 内疚的 embarrassing 令人尴尬;难堪的 shameful 可耻的(行为) awkward使人尴尬的 【短语】 in/with embarrassment尴尬地 be struck dead with shame尴尬得要死 hide one's embarrassment掩饰某人的尴尬 blush with embarrassment难为情得脸红 be increasingly embarrassed about..感到越来越尴尬 feel blood rush/rushing to one's face感到脸阵阵发烫 one’s face flush/bum/blush with embarrassment/shame因尴尬而满脸通红 droop /duck /lower one’s head with embarrassment/shame尴尬/羞愧地低下了头 a deep sense of shame深感羞愧 佳句欣赏 【直接表达】 A surge/ripple/wave/flood of embarrassment/shame rushed through/washed over/overwhelmed/crept upon sb. Guilt/shame/embarrassment was written all over one’s face. Be seized/consumed/enveloped/engulfed with/by shame/embarrassment. 1. He came to my office,shamefaced, to apologize.他一脸愧色,到我办公室来道歉。 2. So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears/ she was on the verge of tears.她羞愧到快哭了