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2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(安徽专用)
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专题08 书面表达14篇(2011-2023年中考真题)
1.(2023·安徽·统考中考真题)假定你是李辉,你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息,用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。
注意:
1.短文须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
3.词数80~100(短文题目与首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: poster(n. 海报); design(v. & n. 设计)
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years. Firstly, I asked my grandparents about their past living conditions. Then, I found some old photos online to compare the past and present of my hometown. Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached.
This experience helps me know better about my hometown. With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved. I am very happy to see these changes. As a member of this town, I will contribute my own efforts to its development.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的各个要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接所给开头,介绍制作海报的目的;
第二步,具体阐述制作海报的过程;
第三步,表达从这次经历中学到的东西以及自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①rapid development快速发展
②living conditions生活条件
③sorted the information把信息分类
④lead a better life过上更好的生活
[高分句型]
①Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached.(that引导的定语从句)
②With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved.(现在完成时的被动语态)
2.(2022·安徽·统考中考真题)假定你是李辉