专题03 如何设置合理结尾 - 2024年新高考英语读后续写思维培优

专题03 如何设置合理结尾 一、首尾呼应法 首尾呼应，形成闭环。文章的开头和结尾在内容上要有着密切的关系，对同一情况做出解释、说明，使文章浑然一体，更有突显文章主旨大意的作用。 2017年高考真题 【与健忘妈妈一块去旅游】 【开头】I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother—loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. 我有一个有趣的童年，充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲——有爱心的、温柔的，但心不在焉且健忘的。 【结尾】Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom. 尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。 【结尾时候回到文章的开头再次重申妈妈的性格，深化主题，首尾呼应。】 2018年高考真题 【爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路】 【开头】It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. 那年夏天，爸爸想带我去一次前所未有的度假。他决定带我去西部荒野之旅。 【结尾】Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind. 我从来没有过这么刺激又危险的假期。这次去西部的特别旅行，深深地印在我的脑海里。 【结尾时候回到文章的开头再次提及这次西部荒野之旅，深化主题，首尾呼应。】 2016年高考真题 【亚瑟的欢乐经历】 【开头】A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. 1天， 亚瑟在上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情。 【结尾】What a funny day. Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious experience. 多么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。 【结尾时候回到文章的开头再次提及这次欢乐经历，深化主题，首尾呼应。】 真题赏析 1.【2023 年新高考I&I 卷】 【开头】When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. 【结尾】I owe my success to my social teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing. 2.【 2020年高考I卷】 【开头】The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline , some people in the town had lost their jobs . Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet . People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. 麦迪斯一家住在一个小社区。由于经济衰退，镇上的许多人都失业了。许多家庭都在艰难维持生计。人们也在努力帮助彼此迎接这次的挑战。 【结尾】Bernard business worked out quite well . The smile on his face was as brilliant as the sun on a spring day . He also decided to do what he could to help those in need. 伯纳德的买卖很顺利。他脸上的笑容就像春日里的阳光那样灿烂。他也决定尽他所能去帮助那些有需要的人。 【结尾呼应开头那句人们