专题02 如何构筑故事高潮 - 2024年新高考英语读后续写思维培优

专辑02 如何构筑故事高潮 一、增加外部冲突 增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。 角色之间的冲突 【2017年11月浙江英语高考】 开车找旅馆---徒劳无功---母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院---David和我倍感紧张，心有不悦 （母子的观点不一） On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn't we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. 真题赏析 【2022年新高考I&II卷】 作者是一名特殊教育教师，在大型越野赛跑那天，发现患有大脑疾病的大卫独自站在一旁。作者问其原因，他说准备放弃比赛。从教练口中得知，因为担心同学们会嘲笑大卫，所以教练想让大卫自己去决定是否参加赛跑。作者让大卫追寻自己的内心，不理会别人的看法。 【第一段首句】We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. 我们挨着坐着，但大卫不愿看我一眼。 【第二段首句】I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. 我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。 【大卫准备放弃比赛---作者鼓励大卫继续完成比赛】 I said gently and quietly, “No one can change your mind, except yourself. If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others’ thoughts.” He sat still with a deep breath. “You have a full preparation before this event, which is the most important reason why you show up here”, I added with a sincere tone. Hearing my words, David turned to me with tears spilling out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run. 【2021年浙江6月卷】 作者高中毕业后，参加农场工作，辛辛苦苦挣到的钱，不情愿贡献给家庭，后来在看到父亲的辛劳之后，理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不知奉献，终于想通，并自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲。 【第一段首句】The pay arrived at last. 工资终于到了。 【第二段首句】I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. 我立刻明白了父母的担心。 【辛辛苦苦挣到的钱不情愿贡献给家庭---自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲】 The toil of labor was forgotten for the time being. I thought I should have my own money and planned how to spend it. “How much money have you earned?” Dad asked. I was surprised, reluctant to say my income. The next morning, my dad’s livestock truck started running. I saw my father’s hard-working figure and thought of his words “A job’s a big step to growing up”. 角色与环境之间的冲突 【2017年6月浙江英语高考】 Mac骑车独自行，路遇饿狼，与之搏斗，险象环生。 （人（角色）----狼（环境）大战） Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing