专题01 如何设置故事开端 - 2024年新高考英语读后续写专项提高培优

专题01 如何设置故事开端 一、巧用副词 副词有修饰性副词和连接性副词(句子副词)两类，可用于修饰动词、形容词、句子等。修饰性副词可表示程度、方式等，使所要表达的情感更加鲜明、强烈，使句子更具表现力和感染力。连接性副词的运用，能使句间的衔接更紧密，逻辑更清晰，所表达的含义简洁明了。 修饰性副词 Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass. 他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。 Joyfully, he skipped up the street. 他很高兴地跳过了街道。 【这里的carefully和joyfully把后面两个动作“step踩”和“skip跳”描写的更加细致和生动。】 典例赏析 1. Arriving at Scout's home, the old woman eagerly rang the doorbell. 一到达Scout家, 那个年老的女人就急切地按门铃。 2. “My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness,”he said sincerely. 他真诚地说: “我母亲教导我，施以爱心，不图回报。” 3. “If I had listened to my parents, this would never have happened,”I thought silently. 我默默地想：如果我听父母的话, 这就不会发生了。 4. Anxiously lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. 简在黑暗中不安地躺着, 非常想和汤姆还有她的家人在一起。 5. Warmly welcomed by other classmates, she felt relieved. 当被其他同学热烈地欢迎时, 她松了一口气。 6.  Terribly/Quite/Extremely worried, Mary felt like sitting on pins and needles. 玛丽十分担忧，如坐针毡。 7. The other two cyclists saw three men threatened by a fierce wolf, absolutely/ completely/ totally shocked. 另外两个骑行者看到三个男人被一只凶猛的狼威胁着，完全惊呆了。 连接性副词 1. When the people crowded around Arthur,he seemed quite worried. Finally, he realized that he had made a mistake. 当所有人围着亚瑟时，他似乎十分担忧。最终，他意识到自己犯了错误。 【这里用时间副词“immediately衔接+环境描写”，烘托了森林里迷路的紧张气氛。】 2. The nearer the helicopter got, the more Jane flagged the yellow blouse. Luckily, the helicopter didn't miss her this time. 直升机靠得越近，简挥黄色衬衣挥得越起劲。幸运的是，这次她没有错过这部直升机。 【这里用Luckily副词衔接，增强行文连贯性】 高考真题 1.【段首句】But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. 【续写句】Immediately, absolute darkness ruled the forest. 但是没有更多的直升机来了，天又变黑了。立刻，绝对的黑暗统治了森林。 2.【段首句】Stephen and Martine found the carpet in a corner and carried it to the pool. 【续写句】Then they found some rope in the garage and tied one end of the rope to the carpet. 斯蒂芬和马丁在一个角落里找到了地毯，并把它带到了游泳池里。然后，他们在车库里找到了一些绳子，并把绳子的一端绑在了地毯上。 3.【段首句】The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor. 【段首句】Actually, it was a thief who entered ou