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备战2024年中考英语书面表达类型模版与能力拔尖必备
10 投诉信
【真题示例】
(2020·浙江·九年级期中)假如你是李涛,前天你收到了淘宝(Taobao)网上买的一件T恤,结果打开发现物品和你买的不对称。现在你要向店主写一份投诉信,根据表格内容说明情况,并要求给予调换。你的地址是杭州市解放路118号,电话18945287910,词数:80词左右。
Bought
Received
Size
M
L
Color
Red
Blue
Material
Cotton
Dacron(涤纶)
Dear shopkeeper,
My name is Li Tao.
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Yours,
Li Tao
【参考范文】
Dear shopkeeper,
My name is Li Tao. I bought a T-shirt in your shop the day before yesterday, but I found the T-shirt that I received was not the one I bought. The T-shirt that I wanted was red, but you sent me a blue one. The size of the T-shirt I wanted was M, but the T-shirt I received was L. What’s more, the material of the T-shirt was different, too. I wanted a cotton one but I received a dacron one.
I hope you can exchange the T-shirt. My address is 118 Jiefang Road, Hangzhou, and my telephone number is 18945287910. Thank you.
Yours,
Li Tao
【写作解析】这是一篇书信作文。要求根据和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评:例文采用两段式;时态综合运用一般现在时和一般过去时;将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中。
高分亮点:
短语:send sb sth;the size of;What’s more;the material of等。
句型:I bought a T-shirt in your shop the day before yesterday, but I found the T-shirt that I received was not the one I bought.
I hope you can exchange the T-shirt.
【必背句式】
1.投诉内容。一般放在信的开头。常用的表达法有:
I am writing to you about... which I received/bought ...
I am going to complain about ...
I am sorry to have to return with this letter... which I received/bought...
2.投诉原因。一般讲述对商品质量或售后服务不满意的地方。常用的表达法有:
When we checked..., we noticed...
When I took... out of the bag and examined... closely, I found...
When I unpacked... and tried to use it, it did not work.
3.希望得到的结果。常用的表达法有:
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