08.祝贺信-备战2024年中考英语书面表达类型模版与能力拔尖必备

备战2024年中考英语书面表达类型模版与能力拔尖必备 08 祝贺信 【真题示例】 （2018·北京海淀·统考一模）假如你是李华，在你的帮助下，交换生Tom在中文演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，表达你的真诚祝贺，回忆他比赛时的表现，以及你从他身上学到了什么。 提示词语：win，prize，speech competition，pronounce，practice 提示问题： Why do you congratulate Tom? What made him successful in the competition? What can you learn from him? 【参考范文】 Dear Tom, I am very happy to know that you won the first prize in the Chinese speech competition, so I’m writing to congratulate you on your wonderful performance. You did a good job in the Chinese speech competition. You pronounced really well during your speech and your voice was beautiful. You spoke so fluently that we all felt proud of you. What’s more, we were surprised at your rich and meaningful contents. As your best friend, I know you tried your best for the competition. You kept practicing your speech every day in order to make it better. I know it is important to keep on trying and never to give up. I hope I can be successful like you one day in the future. Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【写作反思】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：try one’s  best; What’s more, feel proud of； in order to； give up ；keep on trying. ； It is important to keep on trying and never to give up等；so ；so···that等连词的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。 【必背句式】 开头常用句式 It was exciting news for me to learn of … Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on … It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on … I was delighted to learn of your success /achievements in … I am really happy to learn that you have been elected… 结尾常用句式 Wish you good luck! We wish to share your honor and joy. I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead. May all go wonderfully in your new post! May every happiness be yours! All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career! May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity. Every good wish to you for much health, hap