专题07 书面表达10篇(第二期)-备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(浙江专用)

备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(浙江专用) 第二期 专题07 书面表达10篇 一、建议信 1．（2023·浙江金华·校联考一模）假定你是李华，近日，你发现同学们参与外教Peter组织的“英语角”活动的兴趣不高，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1.说明问题; 2.提出建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, I’m Li Hua, one of your students. I’m writing to render what I’ve found about students’ interest in our English Corner. Aimed at cultivating students’ interest in English leaning, your English Corner undoubtedly offers us students a great platform to enhance our English proficiency. However, I’ve found students lacking enthusiasm to get involved lately. I think it would be a good idea to showcase the unique charm of English Comer by adding more interactive activities like English Drama Performance. Additionally, why not undertake a survey to know about what really interests students? I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change, in which case, the English Corner will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts. Yours truly, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你发现同学们参与外教Peter组织的“英语角”活动的兴趣不高，要求考生给外教Peter写封信提出建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 提供：render→provide 培养：cultivate→develop 增强：enhance→improve 独特的：unique→particular 2. 句式拓展 同义句替换 原句： However, I’ve found students lacking enthusiasm to get involved lately. 拓展句：However, I’ve found students who lack enthusiasm to get involved lately. 【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing to render what I’ve found about students’ interest in our English Corner.(what引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change, in which case, the English Corner will surely be