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读后续写微技能十一(体态与情感)
在读后续写的过程中,我们在讲述故事情节时,需要对人物动作、神态进行合化和发展。理描写,进而助力情节的发展,同时还能传达人物的心理与情绪,体现其情感的变
微情景描述
1. ________________(一看到) the toy plane, his face lit up. and his eyes danced with joy and sweetness. Taking it over, he held it tightly. and bounced away.
2.He_________________(怒气冲冲地出去了),slamming the door heavily behind him.
3. She turned pale, tongue-tied,____________ (不敢抬头看).
4.__________________ (听到那个可怕的消息),she fainted away on the spot and fell into unconsciousness.
5. Hearing that, he __________(呆住了),his eyes widened further and his mouth opened.
6. Her hands were shaking,_______________________
她的手在颤抖,眼泪涌入了眼帘。
7. His eyes brightened when____________(注意到) my dog, and he just didn't take his eyes off it.
美文片段欣赏
Standing at the top of the long slope, with the skis pointing downward, I real- ized I was shaking. I glanced at Lindsay and found that she was scared too, for her poles kept tapping rapidly against the sides of her boots.
站在长坡的顶端,雪板指向下方,我意识到自己在发抖。我瞥了一眼琳赛,发现她也很害怕,因为她的杆子不停地快速敲打着她的靴子。
学霸加油站
身体部位助力优美文章“hand”1
1.He walked up and down outside restlessly, twisting his hands together nerv- ously.他不安地在外面踱来踱去,紧张地双手绞在一起。
2. At the sight of the tiger, she froze in horror, her eyes wide open and her hands covering her mouth.一看到老虎,她吓呆了,眼睛睁得大大的,双手捂着嘴。
答案
1. At the sight of
2. Stormed out
3. Not daring to look up
4. Hearing the terrible news
5. Froze to the spot/was rooted to the spot by surprise
6. tears welling up in her eyes
7. noticing
读后续写微技能十二(细节与氛围)
细节可体现氛围和心理,氛围可助力情感和情节。通过细节的刻画,适时添加心理描写、动作描写和场景描写等细节,可以让故事充满画面感。
微情景描述
1. ________________, we could see nothing but dark trees--it was so dark, and we had no idea where we were. Exhausted and hungry as well, we could hardly drag ourselves along.
环顾四周,除了漆黑的树木,我们什么也看不见--非常黑
暗,我们不知道自己身在何处。我们又累又饿,几乎走不动了。
2. At the sight of the approaching tiger, I felt so scared that my throat tightened. my knees felt weak, and my blood froze. I attempted to run away, but________________ -just rooted to the spot.
看到老虎接近,我非常害怕,我感到喉咙哽住了,膝