内容正文:
比别人多一点努力,你就会多一份成绩;比别人多一点志气,你就会多一份出息
应用文写作——日记
I.文体指导
(1)日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情,所以要用_______人称。
(2)日记多是记述当天发生过的事情,因此常使用__________时态,但使用时必须灵活掌握。
(3)日记格式:日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。
日记的书端由日期、星期和天气构成。
左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。
右上角写上当天的天气情况如:Sunny,Fine,Rainy, Windy,Snowy, Cloudy 日记写的是自己的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情,正文一般由三部分构成。
II.写作步骤
第一部分:开门见山,介绍日记中要讲述的主要事情。
1. How time flies! It's already a week________________________(自我上高中的第一天以来).
2. I had______________________(一次难忘的经历) in my new school this week.
3. This afternoon I____________________________(参加了一次有组织的活动) with the theme of “Human Activities and Wildlife Protection”in the science museum.
4.We have just finished our military training. I have to admit that I ______________________ (有那么多要表达)!
5. Today,our science teacher__________________(教我们如何制作) paper lanterns.
第二部分:进一步描述事情发生的过程和人物的心理变化,指出印象深刻的地方。
6. During the training period, I_________________________________(受了很大的苦) due to the hot weather and severe trainers.
7. The foreign visitors were very surprised______________________________________(看到我们说英语说得那么出色) and we talked a lot about the Great Wall’s history.
8. I got up early and___________________________________(帮助我的父母做早饭). Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room.
9. Although we suffered several setbacks,_____________________(我们谁都没有放弃).
10. We watched the teacher attentively and then we started to________________________(亲自尝试).
11. But, at first, I___________________(不敢尝试) because I was afraid that I couldn’t make it.
第三部分:总结人物的感受及收获,或者表达对未来的美好期待。
12. It was______________(不仅) an experience,___________(而且) a helpful class!
13. From the activity, I learn that at present the environment is being destroyed because of people’s harmful activities,_______________________________(这导致了野生生物的减少).
14. All in all, I______________________(从……中受益很多)today’s activities.
15. Now that the training is over, I have learned a lot which can_____________________ (有益于我未来的生活).
16._____________________(虽然我们觉得累), we had a good time in helping others.
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