内容正文:
祝贺信 Congratulation Letter
一、文体概述
祝贺信是指在日常生活中,得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学、结婚、过新年或重大节日等,给对方祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。
二、基本结构:
【首 段】简要说明背景(祝贺事由),说明写信目的;
【中间段】向对方表示祝贺,并肯定对方过去的努力和优点;
【尾 段】再次表达祝贺(或期待)。
三.范文赏析
典例实例:(一)
假定你是李华, 得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲, 并给他写一封祝贺信, 要点如下:
1. 天天练习讲汉语, 从不会到流利, 终于成功;
2. 继续努力, 有机会来中国留学;
3. 希望见面和交流。
注意: 1. 词数80左右。2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: “汉语桥”中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest
【写作步骤】
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
第一人称 (I), 第二人称(you)
时态
一般现在时; 一般过去时
段落布局:
开头点题: 表达祝贺
主体段落: 成功的原因并进行鼓励
结尾: 再次表达祝贺
Dear Peter,
I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest.
I know that you were not good at Chinese at first. However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”. Finally, you succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student. So I’m so surprised that you become champion of this competition. Going on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last, I hope to see you and communicate with you.
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Yours, Li Hua
典例实例:(二)
假如你叫李华。你的朋友Henry今年被北京大学生物系录取为研究生了。请你写封祝贺信给他。内容应包括:
1.你的祝贺和高兴;2.你对此的评论;3.你的期待。
注意:信的格式已经为你写好;词数100-120词。
Dear Henry,
I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your admission into the Biology Department of Beijing University as a postgraduate. As your close friend, I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your admission.
In my view, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligent person. Most importantly, I believe it is the efforts you have made and good study habits that make you success(强调句). So this admission is a reward that you richly deserve. I am sure you will make great progress in your study and obtain a bright future in y